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1、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。His father said,“All set, boy?”and Jeremy nodded, picking up hisgunwith awkward gloved hands. His father pushed open the door and they went out into the freezing dawn together. Ordinarily Jeremy would take out hiscamerato record the scenery, but not this morning. This w

2、as the morning, particularly sacred, when 14-year-old Jeremy would goduckhunting for the first time.However, hehatedit, and had hated the whole idea since his father bought him a gun. But he was determined to go through with it. He loved his father, and wanted hisapprovalmore than anything in the wo

3、rld.They came to a narrow and hidden place facing the bay. Jeremy sat down nervously andwaited. To reduce fear, he took apictureof his father against the clean water. Then he put the camera hurriedly on the grass and picked up his gun.Jeremy got his gun ready. “Ill let youshootfirst, ” his father sa

4、id, loading his own gun. “You know, Ive been waiting for a long time for this day. Just the two of us.” He broke off, bending forward, eyes narrowed. “Theres a small flight heading this way now. Keep your head down. Ill give you the word.” The sun came out. Jeremy could see everything clearly: his f

5、athers face,tenseand eager; the white frost on the gun. His heart was beating wildly. He prayed, “Dont let them come, please! ”But they kept coming. Four black,” his father said. “One mallard(绿头鸭). ”High above, Jeremy heard the pulsing whistle of wings as the flight began to circle. The mallard was

6、leading, his feet dropping down, reaching for the silver-colored water. Closer, closer.“Get set, ” his father whispered.“Now! ”cried Jeremys father. Take them! ”Jeremy felt his body obey. He stood up, holding the gun. In the same instant, the wild ducks saw the gunners andflew. “Shoot!” said somethi

7、ng sharply in Jeremys brain. But up went the mallard higher still, until suddenly he caught the full force of the wind and flew away, out of range.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:His father asked in a controlled voice, “Why didnt

8、 you shoot?”_Paragraph2:To Jeremys surprise, his father was handing the camera to him._主要人物：Jeremy喜欢摄影、讨厌打猎 、爱父亲、渴望得到父亲的认可Father喜欢打猎、期待跟儿子一起打猎（以为儿子也喜欢打猎）时间地点：时间：at dawn 描述：freezing; sacred; the sun come out; the white frost on the gun.地点：near the clean water帮助：户外情景运用环境描写，呼应时间地点相关描述细节shoot的双重含义：shoot

9、一语双关含义1: 射击；含义2: 拍摄文章主要矛盾/问题表面上的矛盾：Jeremy 是否该开枪打猎深层次的矛盾：1) Jeremy 该坚持自己的兴趣(拍照)还是为了获得爸爸的认可而选择打猎2) 父亲和儿子的相处之道：父亲喜欢的东西，儿子是否一定要听从和喜欢有第二段开头可推出第一段的内容：第二段开头To Jeremys surprise可知，第一段结尾可以写Jeremy讲完自己的为什么不开枪的原因后的心理描写，他以为父亲会生气。词语积累：请找出以下中文对应的英文表达。续写题目：1. 推开门：push open the door2. 极冷的：freezing3. 第一次：for the first

10、 time4. 完成（或做完）艰难（或令人不快）的事：go through with5. (给武器) 装弹药：load6.他停止说话，向前弯下腰，眯起眼睛：He broke off, bending forward, eyes narrowed.7. 紧张的：tense8. 翅膀搏动的呼啸声：pulsing whistle of wings9. (声音)突然而响亮地：sharply参考范文：1. 从中判断：judge from2. 勃然(大怒)：explode3. 一想到某人就有一种感觉：At the thought of, sb was overcome with a sense of .4

11、. 眼里闪着光，嘴角露出微笑：Eyes glint and lips curve into a big smile5. 把某人揽入怀中：gather sb into ones arms6. 溜达、散步：stroll 7. 模糊的双眼：misty eyes8. 沐浴在灿烂的阳光下：be bathed in the radiant glow of sun9. 鸟鸣声：the chirps of the birdsPossible version1:Paragraph 1:His father asked in a controlled voice, “Why didnt you shoot?”“B

12、ecause they were so alive”,Jeremy explained, with his lips shaking. He sat on the grass, buried his face in his hands and burst into tears. All hope of pleasing his father was gone. For a long moment, his father was silent. Then Jeremy felt him kneel down beside him and pat him on the shoulder gentl

13、y. Suddenly, his father shouted,“Get ready!”Feeling cold metal touching his hand,Jeremy looked up.Paragraph 2:To Jeremys surprise, his father was handing the camera to him.“Here comes another duck .”A beautiful wild duck flew closer, its white breast shining in the sunshine. Jeremy held up his camer

14、a immediately.”I got him!”A broad smile lit up his face. His father gave him a thumbs-up. Jeremy discovered there was no disappointment in his eyes, only pride and love.“Its okay,son. I love shooting,but that doesnt mean you have to.”He paused and said,“Could you teach me how to use that camera?”Pos

15、sible version 2:His father asked in a controlled voice, “Why didnt you shoot?”“I, Im sorry.”Jeremy murmured with his head low, being totally at a loss （独立主格结构，非谓语动词）. He did want to shoot theduckand get his fathers approval. （强调句，回扣原文） However, when he held his gun and aimed at theflyingmallard(学以致用

16、，新概念3L9), his mind went blank-he knew he couldnt kill the beautiful creature in such a cruel way. He struggled for a long time. Finally, he gathered all his bravery and looked up into his fathers cross eyes.“Dad,”he said,“Ihategunsand killings. Can I quit hunting?” （反映主题：人与动物和谐相处)His father went sil

17、ent and turned around.To Jeremys surprise, his father was handing the camera to him.He took over hiscameraunbelievably with his mouth opened wide.（独立主格结构）Amused by his action,非谓语动词his father looked at himaffectionately(学以致用，新概念3L9) and explained,“I know you love photography, however, I want you to take over my career as a hunter. Today is just an attempt, actually. Now I know you are not fit for the job. Do whatever you like, my son. Im sure you can do it.”At the end of the day, Jeremy took a picture with his father, which was carefully preserved in the rest of his life.学科网（北京）股份有限公司