读后续写：撒谎的小男孩 讲义-高三英语写作专项.docx

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1、2021年3月广州一模英语读后续写再研究【原题再现】 It took place in a teachers family. One day, Ben was playing basketball in the living room after school, when he accidentally threw the ball at a vase sitting on the shelf. The vase dropped to the floor and a large piece broke off. What made Ben more upset was that the vas

2、e was not a common decoration but an antique, which was handed down through generations from the 18th century. It was also his mothers favourite possession. To cover his terrible action, the terrified boy glued the pieces together hastily and put the vase back to its place. As the mother herself dus

3、ted the vase every day, she naturally noticed the cracks(裂纹) that evening. To her surprise, the repair work was actually very good. At dinner time, she asked her boy if he broke the vase. Fearing punishment, the suddenly inspired boy said that a neighbours cat jumped in from the window and he couldn

4、t drive it away no matter how hard he tried. It raced around the living room and finally knocked the vase off its shelf. His mother was quite clear that her son was lying, for all the windows were closed before she left for work each morning and opened after she returned. However, in the face of her

5、 sons nervous eyes and the suspicious looks of the other family members. Bens mother remained calm. She realized she shouldnt just simply blame and punish her son for lying. She came up with another idea. Before going to bed, the boy found a note from his mother in his room, asking him to go tothe s

6、tudy at once. The boy thought he would now be punished but, as he had already lied, he was determined to deny everything to the end, no matter how angry his mum became. In the study, calmly bathed in the light, his mothers face showed no sign of anger. On seeing her son push open the door and cautio

7、usly enter, she took a chocolate box out of a drawer and gave him one.1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。The mother said, This chocolate is a reward for your imagination: a window-opening cat! _Now with some chocolates in hand, the boys bad attitude disappeared._【再研究及写作指导】一、提炼文中主要线索1. in a teachers

8、 family（indicating unique ways of educating children）2. not a common decoration but an antique(the vase is valuable)3. his mothers favourite possession(the vase is all the more valuable)4. Fear punishment (the significance of the vase mentioned above made him more fearful of punishment, possibly sev

9、ere punishment)provides a reason/background for telling a lie5. tell a lie -a neighbours cat broke the vase6. His mother was quite clearHowever, she realized she shouldnt just simply blame and punish her son for lying. She came up with another idea.(so the plot in the continuation writing should be

10、designed accordingly ,another idea should also be presented)7. he was determined to deny everything to the end, no matter how angry his mum became.(this detail can be included in the 1st paragraph for coherence)a chocolate box out of a drawer(a chocolate box acts as a media between the mother and he

11、r son, as a bonus or punishment)二、续写内容构思Para 1：The given sentence implies that mother is quite suspicious of her sons explanation . The following should cover the boys astonishment at being suspected , insistence of his lies as well as his bad attitude in coherence with the first sentence in paragra

12、ph 2.Meanwhile mum should think of a brilliant idea to guide her son to confess his mistake. Finally, some chocolates should be laid in the sons hand to fit in with “Now with some chocolates in hand, the boys bad attitude disappeared”.Para 2：Tortured by his conscience and moved by what his mum did,

13、the boy confessed his mistake and learned the importance of honesty.三、参考答案 The mother said, This chocolate is a reward for your imagination: a window-opening cat!Alarmed, he quivered a bit. He realized perhaps in all haste and terror what he made up didnt hold much water.” Believe it or not”, he yel

14、led , holding his head high, and insisted that he was telling the truth. Glancing at the chocolate out of the corner of his eyes, he felt himself being tortured by his burning desire for it. Abruptly, his mother approached him and pressed another 2 chocolates into his sweaty hands. “These are reward

15、s for your presence in the study and the restoration respectively.”(87words) Now with some chocolates in hand, the boys bad attitude disappeared.His heart was pounding wildly and no longer could he hold out. “Mom, The cat was wronged and I lied. his voice was choked. In a serious tone Mum stated” I

16、certainly know the truth. But I was waiting for you to spit it out yourself.” Ben felt a heavy load taken off his mind.” Then the box went to his hand. “these for your final admission of your mistake.” Mum gathered him to her chest affectionately saying honesty far outweighs anything else-whether an antique or her favourite.(90words)学科网（北京）股份有限公司