2023年4月嘉兴市二模读后续写课件-高三英语二轮复习写作专项.pptx

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1、嘉兴市二模读后续写Im not going to say storms are good,because I know what theyve stolen from people.But my story is of a storm that gave me more than Id thought to ask for.The tornado(龙卷风)blew through on a Sunday.We were visiting grandparents in Raleigh then,unaware that seventy miles away the big tree in ou

2、r front yard was tearing through our roof and destroying the kitchen.When we returned,we saw Rosicas father and brothers in our yard,gathering debris(碎片)and using a chainsaw to cut the thickest branches of the fallen tree,though we barely knew them then.They were covered in sweat and dirt.My mom did

3、nt seem to notice how happy they were to help us because the first thing she said was“Oh,you dont need to be doing all that work!”Mr.Flores laughed.“Claro!Of course,we dont.But more importantly,you cannot sleep in that house tonight.Come and speak to my wife.Shell help you figure out what to do.”My

4、mom doesnt usually let people tell her what to do,but she sighed deeply as she took in the sight of our home in the failing light,reached for my hand,and followed our neighbor to their house.The Flores family lived across the street.Their home was the same size as ours but housed three generations R

5、osica was my age.I knew her name and face,but since she was new to our school,and had a different teacher than I did,we had never spoken.It was she who answered the door.“Mama is changing the sheets on the bed for you,and theres some lemon cheesecake on the table.”“Please dont trouble yourself,I thi

6、nk Id call a hotel and see about a room,my mom said,more uneasy than usual,Mrs.Flores came down the stairs and smiled at us warmly,“Your room is ready.I know its more encouraged to give than receive,but allow yourself to receive a place to stay,and allow us the chance to give you something you need.

7、”Paragraph 1:Our two-week stay at Floress home started.Paragraph 2:Following our stay in their home,a beautiful tradition began.ThemeA near neighbor is better than a distant cousin.Kindness and generosity can bridge the gap between strangers.What the tornado“give and take”to usPara.1 Our two-week st

8、ay at Floress home started.1.My moms feeling at the stay2.What mom did during the stay?3.The change in our relationships4.What happened after the renovation was donePara.2 Following our stay in their home,a beautiful tradition began.1.What the“beautiful tradition“was2.What they did during the tradit

9、ion3.What“give&take”meant in the tradition+themePredict the plots1.My moms feeling at the stay第一个晚上见证了妈妈在The Flores家的辗转反侧，她在早餐的时候再次提出了住酒店，却最终还是让步于Mrs.Flores的真诚话语.（无灵主语）见证：witness辗转反侧：toss and turn让步：give way to真诚的话语：earnest wordsThe first night witnessed my mom tossing and turning in the Flores,and

10、she initiated again the plan to live in the hotel,but once again gave way to Mrs.Flores earnest words.2.What did mom do during the stay?让妈妈宽慰的是，妈妈终于被允许可以和Mrs.Flores一起做早餐给Rosica的爸爸和哥哥，他们帮我们清理院子。（主从/表从/定从)让妈妈宽慰的是：what comforted mom was that.清理：clean up被允许做某事：be allowed to do sthWhat comforted mom was

11、that she was allowed to give a hand to Mrs.Flores in preparing breakfast for Rosicas father and brother,who helped us clean up our yard.3.The change in our relationships随着日子的推移，我们的关系越来越亲密。每天一大早醒来，我都会在诱人的食物香气中醒来，听到妈妈和Mrs.Flores轻柔的笑声在厨房回响，然后和Rosica一起手牵手上学，路上无话不谈，有说有笑。(with/非谓语)With the days progressin

12、g,we shared a close bond day by day.Every morning,I woke up in the fragrant scent/aroma,listening to mom and Mrs.Flores tender giggles lingering in the kitchen.Then after breakfast,Rosica would go to school hand in hand with me,chatting and laughing all the way.4.What happened after the renovation w

13、as done悄无声息地，两周如白驹过隙一肉眼可见的是，我们的院子、屋顶修缮一新。在Flores一家的帮助下，我们搬回了家。台风带来的伤痛悄悄愈合，我们的心也和房子一样回复如初了。（感叹句)悄无声息地:unknowingly白驹过隙：How time flied!回复如初：be as refreshed as before 悄悄愈合：be healed unnoticeably修缮一新：take on a new look after renovationUnknowingly,how two weeks flied!Our yard and roof took on a new look a

14、fter renovation.With the help/assistance of the Flores,we moved back and our sufferings brought by the tornado were healed unnoticeably and our hearts were as refreshed as before.1.What was the“beautiful tradition在接下来每年的“台风纪念日”这一天，妈妈会邀请Flores一家来我们家，让我们一尽“房主之谊”以表示对他们衷心的感谢。（不定式表目的)一尽“房主之谊：show the hon

15、ors as a host“对.表示衷心的感谢：convey ones heartfelt gratitude to sb On the exact Tornado Anniversary”every year,my mom would invite the Flores to our house to show the honors as a host and convey our heartfelt gratitude to them.2.What they did during the tradition妈妈会提前做好准备，而Mrs.Flores总是提前帮忙。她们又和以前一样轻柔说笑，又

16、开心又轻松。而我和Rosica则会和我一起说悄悄话，温馨的气氛充盈整个房间。（非谓语/adj做状语/独立主格)提前做好准备：got.prepared in advance轻柔说笑：talking and laughing gently温馨气氛充盈.the pleasant atmosphere brimming.敞开心扉：open the heart to.Mom would get everything prepared in advance while Mrs.Flores was always willing to lend a hand earlier,talking and laug

17、hing gently,feeling joyful and relaxed.Rosica would stay with me opening our heart mutually,the pleasant atmosphere brimming the whole room.3.What“give&take”meant in the tradition时光仿佛又回到了从前。感谢Flores一家的慷慨相助，在我们被台风袭击后失去家园的日子里，他们伸出了最热情无私的手。而在这个每年“台风纪念日”里，妈妈和我也总会给他们一个最热情的款待。这是我们“给予”的方式，也是Flores一家“接受”的机会

18、。（定从)Time seemed to flash back.Thanks to the Flores generosity,when we were in trouble,they selflessly extended their helping hand.On every Tornado anniversary,mom and I would offer a heart-warming treat to them,which was the way we showed our give“as well as an optimal opportunity for the Flores to

19、 take4.文章主旨：台风的得与失（人生一课文章主旨：台风的得与失（人生一课)一场台风，毁坏了我们的家，却架起了两家心的桥梁。每当我透过窗户看马路对面的Flores的房子，我内心涌动着感恩与幸福：感谢你们不仅帮助我们走出台风的阴影，而且还走进我们的生活，让我顿悟什么是真正的“给予“和“接受”。（状从）The tornado ruined our house,but bridged our hearts between two families.Every time I gazed at the Flores house across the street through the window

20、,my heart was overflowing with gratitude and happiness.My thanks should go to the Flores not only for their help us out of trouble,but also for enlightening(开导，启发)me on the true meaning of give and take.Paragraph 1:Our two-week stay at Floress home started.After the first night,my mom offered again

21、to move out on the breakfast table,but then gave way to Mrs.Floress earnest eyes.Whats more,she accepted Mrs.Floress invitation of preparing dinner for Rosicas father and brothers,who would help us clear our yard.Every day that went by put us closer.My mom and Mrs.Flores made a good team in the kitc

22、hen:every morning they would put two pieces of cake in our schoolbags before Rosica and I went to school and every evening we would crowd together beside the table enjoying the meal and the heart-warming moments.My mom and Rosicas parents talked about tomorrows life while we kids just chatted about

23、tomorrows cake.In the laughing and talking,our messy yard was made clear,the damage the tornado had brought us was covered gently and kindly and our hearts seemed as refreshed as the house.Paragraph 2:Following our stay in their home,a beautiful tradition began.On the exact day of this“Tornado Anniv

24、ersary,my mom would invite the Flores to come to our house as a chance for us to“give”rather than“receive”as our gift for their generous help.Of course,Mrs.Flores would come a few hours earlier to help my mom in the kitchen,just like the old tine.The diner time was always hear warming since it broug

25、ht us together again and again across time.We kept this tradition year after year like a special Christmas”just for our two families.Gradually.Rosica and I began to talk about tomorrows life while our parents chatted about tomorrows sunshine.No matter how distant it was,as I faced the house across t

26、he street.I was to remember that tornado and the two-week line that bridged people hearts together.Para1:Our two-week stay at Flores s home started.Inevitably,we appeared to be a bit uneasy and inhibited(拘束的)at first.But under the considerate care of the Flores family,we soon settled in and relished

27、(享受)a lot from this special experience.Mornings were a delight as Rosica and I eagerly descended(下来)the stairs to savor(enjoy)the delectable(delicious)breakfast prepared by Mrs.Flores.Then we helped do some housework including sweeping and washing.Meanwhile,our parents indulged in delightful convers

28、ations with Rosicas amiable(和蔼可亲的)and kind-hearted grandparents.When the night curtain fell,there was no place Id rather be than nestled on the sofa,watching TV all together with the Flores family.How I wish I could stay there longer!After our house was well-repaired,I reluctantly bid farewell to th

29、e cozy family.Para2:Following our stay in their home,a beautiful tradition began.We sincerely invited the Flores family to observe festivals,or just for a supper from time to time,and so did they.With each visit,our bond grew stronger,and our interactions became more frequent.Laughter filled the air

30、 as we chatted,and everyone wore bright smiles on their faces.Despite the modest size of our home,it seemed to expand to accommodate the warmth and closeness of our hearts and souls.The storm that initially brought us together had taught us a valuable lesson:Giving and receiving are two sides of the same coin.They literally enhance peoples sense of purpose and convey love to everyone.