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1、第1页/共12页第2页/共12页写作步骤审题：速读阅读材料和写作要求，明确写作任务。读文：细读阅读材料，确定文章体裁和题材(话题)。注意文中的关键词，也就是故事中的时间、地点、人物和事件，特别要标记能描述事件发展过程的词和短语。谋段：先仔细阅读续写部分所给出的两段段首文字，再构思这两段要写的段落大意。根据确定好的段落大意，选出每一段可能要用到的原文中带下划线的关键词。结合这些关键词，确定每一段的写作要点。这两段加起来要能写出10到15个句子，以满足续写词数要求。初写：按照第三步谋段时确定好的写作要点进行初写。写作时要注意所用的人称和时态要与原材料一致.另外，还要注意尽可能地减少表达上的语法错误

2、。如果遇到语言上的表述困难，可多参考原阅读材料中的有关语句。定稿：写好初稿后，考生要结合原材料中故事线索读一读自己续写的内容。既要确保不出现与原材料相矛盾的地方，又要做到内容上前后连贯，语句通顺。最后规范誊写并标出使用过的原材料中下划线的关键词语。第3页/共12页Onepossibleversion：As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”Andalsoatthemoment,Arthursuddenlyrealizedthattheyoungmanmightbethebankrobber

3、.SoArthurdidntstop,butcontinuedtorununtilhesawataxi.Hestoppedit,jumpedinwiththesuitcaseandsaidtothedriver,“Gotothepolicestation,please.Themanshoutingbehindisthebankthief!Thetaxiracedawaylikethewind.The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthurtoldthepolicewhathadhappened.Obviously,thepo

4、licehadalreadylearnedabouttherobbery.Theyopenedthesuitcaseandtherewasalargesumofmoneyinside,asArthurhadexpected.ThenthepoliceaskedArthurtodescribetheyoungmanandtheothersuitcase.Later,withtheinformation,thepolicecaughttherobber.ThepoliceandthebankboththankedArthuralot.(Words153)第4页/共12页Anotherpossibl

5、eversion：As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”Thinkingofthewaytheyoungmanhadbehaved,herealizedtheyoungmanmightbethebankrobber.SoArthurranfasterandstoppedataxi.Themomenthegotintothetaxi,hetoldthedriverthemanshoutingbehindwasthebankthiefandaskedhimtodrivetotheneares

6、tpolicestation.ThedriverfollowedwhatArthursaidanddroveaway.The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthurthankedthedriveranddirectlywentin.JustasArthurwasdescribingwhathadhappenednearthebankontheParkAvenueandreportedtheyoungmantothepolice,heheardavoiceoutside,“Help!Help!”TothesurpriseofA

7、rthur,itwastheyoungman.HehadfollowedArthurinanothertaxi.Itturnedoutthattheyoungmanwasinnocentandinsidethesuitcaseswerejustsomeclothes.Arthurfeltembarrassedbutthepolicementhankedhimanyway.(Words:158)第5页/共12页Paragraph1As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”Sofrightene

8、dwasArthurthatheranfasterwiththatsuitcase.WhenherushedtotheParkAvenue,hestoppedataxiandjumpedintoit.Nervously,hetoldthedrivertospeedupanddroppedhimoffatthepolicestation.Withthedriverdrivingfast,leavingtheyoungmansshoutsandtheloudnoiseofthealarmfarbehind,Arthurfeltalittleatease.(68)Paragraph2 The tax

9、i stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthurjumpedoffwiththesuitcase,runningtothepoliceoffice.Hehandedittoapolicemanandreportedwhathadhappened.Arthurinsistedthatthesuitcasebeopenedtomakesurethemoneyinitwasnotlost.MuchtoArthurssurprise,therewasnomoneyexceptsomeclothesandmanybooks.Immediately,A

10、rthurrealizedthathemistooktheyoungmanforthebankthief.Asaresult,hehadtoreturnthesuitcasetotheyoungmanandapologizetohim.WhatafunnythingitwasforArthur!(90)第6页/共12页2016年10月浙江高考英语作文解读第一节应用文写作1.真题回顾假定你是李华。下学期你将作为交换生(exchangestudent)去加拿大一所高中学习，住在Lynn家里。请给Lynn写一封邮件，内容包括：1.介绍自己；2.告知到达时间；3.询问应做何准备。注意：1.词数80左右

11、；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。2.内容分析第7页/共12页3.参考范文DearLynn,ImLiHua,anexchangestudentfromChina.ImhappytoknowthatIllbestayingwithyourfamilyinthenextfewmonthswhileImstudyingatthelocalhighschool.Thankyouforhavingme!IwillarriveinTorontoonAugust20thandgettoyourplacelatethatafternoon.Iwonderifyoucouldgivemesomeadvices

12、othatIcangetmyselfbetterpreparedformystayinCanada.Lookingforwardtoseeingyou!Bestwishes,LiHua第8页/共12页第二节读后续写真题回顾题型解读和以往的高考英语命题作文不同，读后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息，不仅能读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络和关系。续写这篇短文时，考生需要明白故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置变化、人物特征和情感等。在此基础上，考生顺着文章的思路，根据线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用英语表达出来。同时，在组织语言时，切记使用5个以上给出的提示词。故事主线已知线索：吵架出走

13、迷路失联自救思念寻路直升机飞离拂晓可续写线索：失望？坚信？曲折？直升机？Tom？自救？获救？参考范文第9页/共12页OnepossibleversionParagraph1:But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.Jane hadtostayaloneintheforestforanothercoldnight.Althoughshefeltalittlesad,shedidntgetfearful.ShethoughtaboutTom.“Hemusthavecalledforthosehelicopters.May

14、behewasinoneofthemandwillcomebackagain!Ihavetoguidehimtomorrow.”ShefellasleepanddreamedofseeingTom.Paragraph2:It was daybreak when Jane woke up.Sheatesomeberriesandthenwalkedalongthestream,hopingtofindasuitableplacetoguidethehelicopter.Fortunately,shesawahugeflatrockinanopenareaatadistance.Sherushed

15、totherock,climbedontoitandwaited.Tohergreatjoy,thehelicopterappearedagain.Theneareritgot,themoresheflaggedtheyellowblouse.Luckily,thehelicopterdidntmissJanethistimeanditlandednearthebigrockslowly.TomjumpedoffthehelicopterandrantowardsJane.Shebrokedownandburstintotears.(续写词数：154)第10页/共12页Anotherpossi

16、bleversion：Paragraph1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Janetriedtofindshelterfromthenightcold.Butunfortunately,sheslippedoverandbrokeherleg.Withtheextremepain,Janemanagedtomakeherwaytoarockforshelter.Undertherock,Janestayedwideawake,knowingshemightnotbeabletogettothelakewithabrokenle

17、g.“Dontbeafraid.Tommustbesearchingforme.Andthehelicopterwillcomebacktomorrow,”shethoughttoherself.Afterquiteawhile,Janefellasleep.Paragraph2:ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Shestruggledtoherfeetandheadedforthestream.Afterhavingsomeberriesandstreamwater,Janewalkedslowlytoanopenareatowaitforherrescue.Tohergreatjoy,shesoonheardthehelicopter.Janemadlywavedheryellowblousewhenitcameintosight.Sadly,thehelicopterfliedawayagain.However,sooncametherescueteam,togetherwithTom,whohadfoundJaneslocationfromthehelicopter.Janewassaved.(续写词数：163)第11页/共12页感谢您的观看。第12页/共12页