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1、MainsectionsCoverletterFollow-upCorrespondence（催稿信）RevisedManuscript(稿件退修)1第1页/共25页1.Howtowriteacoverletterkeepitsimpleandprofessional.Yourcoverlettershouldbepreparedinastandardbusinessformat(blockormodifiedblock).2第2页/共25页2.TheinformationsinaCoverLetter(1)Thecorrespondenceinformationofthecorrespond

2、ent;(2)Thetitleofthemanuscript,thenumbersoftables,figures,charts,platesandsoon;(3)Thestatementthatthismanucripthasneverbeenpartlyorwholelypublishedinorsubmittedtoanyotherjournals;(4)Thestatementthatallauthorsinthemanuscripthaveagreedtosubmitittothisjournalanditsbettertohaveeachonessignature;3第3页/共25

3、页(5)Thestatementthattheresearchinthemanuscripthasbeenconductedundertheguidanceofinternationalethicalstandardsiftheresearchusesanimalsasexperimentalmaterials;(6)Thestatementthatyourmanuscriptsatisfiestherequirementsofthejournal.(6)Suggestedreviewersyouthinkthatareappropriateforthismanuscript;(7)Thest

4、atementontheinappropriatereviewersforthismanuscript,anditsbettertostatethereasonsinconcisewords;(8)Somejournalsrequiretheauthorstobrieflyintroducehisresearchpurposes,methodsandresults.Conciseandclear,lessthanonepage.4第4页/共25页Dr.ShengliRenDepartmentofPhysics,QinghuaUniversity83ShuangqingRoad,HaidianD

5、istrictBeijing100083,PRChinaEmail:Tel:Fax:July18,2015DearEditor:Thisisamanuscriptentitled“InternationalvisibilityofChinesescientificjournals”byShengliRenandRonaldRousseau.Itissubmittedtobeconsideredforpublicationasan“Article”inyourjournal.Allauthorshavereadandapprovedthisversionofthearticle,anddueca

6、rehasbeentakentoensuretheintegrityofthework.Neithertheentirepapernoranypartofitscontenthasbeenpublishedorhasbeenacceptedelsewhere.Itisnotbeingsubmittedtoanyotherjournal.5第5页/共25页Webelievethepapermaybeofparticularinteresttothereadersofyourjournalasit.CorrespondenceshouldbeaddressedtoShengliRenatthefo

7、llowingaddress,phoneandfaxnumber,andemailaddress:Thankyouverymuchforyourattentiontoourpaper.Sincerelyyours,ShengliRen(签名)RonaldRousseau(签名)6第6页/共25页DearEditor,WewouldliketosubmittheenclosedmanuscriptentitledGDNFAcutelyModulatesNeuronalExcitabilityandA-typePotassiumChannelsinMidbrainDopaminergicNeuro

8、ns,whichwewishtobeconsideredforpublicationinNatureNeuroscience.GDNFhaslongbeenthoughttobeapotentneurotrophicfactorforthesurvivalofmidbraindopaminergicneurons,whicharedegeneratedinParkinsonsdisease.Inthispaper,wereportanunexpected,acuteeffectofGDNFonA-typepotassiumchannels,leadingtoapotentiationofneu

9、ronalexcitability,inthedopaminergicneuronsincultureaswellasinadultbrainslices.Further,weshowthatGDNFregulatestheK+channelsthroughamechanismthatinvolvesactivationofMAPkinase.Thus,thisstudyhasrevealed,forthefirsttime,anacutemodulationofionchannelsbyGDNF.OurfindingschallengetheclassicviewofGDNFasalong-

10、termsurvivalfactorformidbraindopaminergicneurons,andsuggestthatthenormalfunctionofGDNFistoregulateneuronalexcitability,andconsequentlydopaminerelease.TheseresultsmayalsohaveimplicationsinthetreatmentofParkinsonsdisease.Duetoadirectcompetitionandconflictofinterest,werequestthatDrs.XXXofHarvardUniv.,a

11、ndYYofYaleUniv.notbeconsideredasreviewers.Withthanksforyourconsideration,IamSincerelyyours,7第7页/共25页3.ThingsYouShouldNeverMentionIrrelevantpersonalinformation.Announcementsofyourunprofessionalstatus.Hype（夸张）.Apologiesaboutyourarticle(oryourself).Adescriptionofthearticlesflaws.Explanationsofwhyyouare

12、sendingmaterialthatdoesntmatchthepublicationsguidelines.8第8页/共25页Demandsorexpectations.Opinionsofyourfamily,friends,orwritingteachers.Alistofpriorrejections.Dontforgettocheckgrammarandspelling.9第9页/共25页ExamplesI am currently a substitute teacher with a lifelong penchant for daydreaming with my thoug

13、hts and emotions.“JACS returned this manuscript.I was advised to submit it to PCCP.Enjoy!“This whole article is,of course,just a thought.Please publish the enclosed character study.10第10页/共25页MainsectionCoverletterFollow-upCorrespondence（催稿信）RevisedManuscript(稿件退修)11第11页/共25页Follow-upCorrespondence（

14、催稿信）Ifyoudonotreceiveacknowledgmentwithin2weeks,callorwritetotheeditorialofficetoverifythatyourmanuscriptwasindeedreceived.12第12页/共25页Deareditor,AfterthesubmissionofourmanuscriptentitledCancerclassificationbyexpressionprofiles:microRNAversusmRNA(trackingnumber:2007-10-11332)toNature,sixweekshavepass

15、ed.SoIwouldliketoinquirethestatusofourmanuscript.WethinkthatourcommentsontheoriginalpaperofNaturewillcausewidespreadinteresttobothexpertsandnon-experts.ThisisbecausemicroRNAisahotspotinlifescience;theauthoroftheoriginalpaperisaVIPincancerresearchbasedongeneexpressionprofiles,withaSCIHindexof45,total

16、citationsmorethan15,000times,andthispapercitied365times;andthealgorithmweproposedoutperformstherecentstate-of-the-artalgorithm.Moreover,byusingotherstate-of-the-artalgorithms,wecanalsoprovethattheoriginalauthorsmainconclusionsarewrong.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Thanksalot.13第13页/共25页MainsectionCov

17、erletterFollow-upCorrespondence（催稿信）RevisedManuscript(稿件退修)14第14页/共25页RevisedManuscript(稿件退修)Ifyoureceiveadecisionletterthatcallsforrevision,examineitandtheaccompanyingreviewerscommentscarefully.Ifthereviewersareright,youshouldfollowtheirdirectionsandrewritethemanuscriptaccordingly.Ifthereviewersand

18、theeditorseriouslymisreadormisunderstoodyourmanuscript,youmayexplainitreasonablyandlogically.15第15页/共25页16lIncludeapointbypointresponsetothereviewerscommentsandhighlightthechangesyouhavemade.lTrytomakeyourargumentconvictivebycitingimportantreferences.第16页/共25页17Responsetothereviewerscommentsonmanusc

19、ript#TA-ART-04-2015-002817We are grateful to the referees for examining our paper.Aftercarefullyconsideringtherefereescommentswehaverevisedthepaper.Thefollowingdetailsourresponsetotherefereescomments.Referee1Recommendation:Idonotunderstandtheideasbehindthecalculations.Fig1aindicatesaprotonwhichmustc

20、omefromtheelectrolyte,andalsoanelectron,whichmustcomefromtheexternalcircuit.Response:WefindthattheoriginalFig.1(a)failstodepicttheVolmerreactionprocessproperly.Electronsactuallymigratewithinthematerial,ratherthanfromtheelectrolytetothematerialsurface.Wethereforerevisethefiguresoastoexplicitlyshowthe

21、processofelectrontransportationtoasurfaceSsitefollowedbyaprotonadsorption.第17页/共25页18InFig.1bandthediscussiononp.2electronandprotontransferaretreatedasseparatesteps.Infact,theyoccursimultaneouslyorconcerted.ThereforeatleastsurfaceIIinFig.1bmakesnosense.Also,Ihavenoideawhatismeantbythecoordinateinthi

22、splot.Response:Wedontthinkelectronandprotontransferoccursimultaneously.Infact,protonsaremorelikelytoadsorbonanionsornegativelychargedsystems,because they have larger proton affinities and can release more heat uponadsorption.Incontrast,protonadsorptiononneutralsystemsismoredifficultdue to their smal

23、ler proton affinities(see Jolly,William L.“Modern InorganicChemistry”,for the proton affinities of both neutral and charged molecule).Inaddition,reactive dynamic studies also show that the adsorption barrier ofprotonsishigherforneutralsystems,indicatingthatelectrontransfershouldbeprior to proton ads

24、orption(J.Am.Chem.Soc.,2015,137(20),66926698).Nevertheless,weaddasentence“Therefore,theoverallVolmerreactioncanbeseparated into a prior electron addition process and a subsequent protonadsorption process,which is energetically more favorable than the oppositeorder.37”inthefirstparagraphofSec.IItomak

25、ethediscussionmoreconvictive.The abscissa label coordinate in Fig.1(b)refers to the ionic nuclearconfiguration,i.e.the geometries of the catalyst.The potential energy curvesschematically depict the energy change of a material with varying nuclearcoordinate.Similarpotentialsurfaceplotscanbefoundinman

26、yotherliteratures(e.g.BiochimicaetBiophysicaActa811(1985)265-322).Forthepurposeofmoreunderstandable,asentence“Theabscissalabelcoordinatereferstotheionicnuclearconfiguration.”hasbeenaddedinthecaptionofFig.1(b).第18页/共25页19第19页/共25页20Onethingthatcomestomindissupportinteractions.Theauthorscalculateforfr

27、eestandingmonolayer,butanyrealHERcatalystwouldhavetobesupported.Recently,DFTcalculations(e.g.,NanoLett.2014,14,13811387)haveshownthatsupportinteractionscanhaveaprofoundeffectonthehydrogenadsorptionfreeenergy.Hence,foranycorrelationwithexperimentalresultssupportinteractionswouldlikelybeimportanttoinc

28、lude.Couldtheauthorscommentonthat?Aretheconclusionslikelytochangeifsupportinteractions,includingstrain,areincluded?Response:We include a paragraph of discussion on the influence of supportinteractionsattheendofSec.IIIsincewefeelthatitisindeedanimportantissuetobeconsidered.Wesuggestthatsupportinterac

29、tionsmayaffectthebasal-planecatalyticactivitybecauseofthepossibleelectrontransferbetweenasupportandthecatalystonit.Foradonor-typesupport,suchasAu(111),electronstransferfromthesupporttothecatalyst,diminishingtheelectronaffinityofthecatalystand weakening the hydrogen binding.Different from the case of

30、 MoS2-edgecatalysis(Ref.51),where edge reconstruction can be induced,supportinteractionsarenotexpectedtochangetheatomicconfigurationonthebasalplanes,as observed by many experiments.Accordingly,the adiabatic protonaffinitywillnotchangetoomuch.Themajorinfluenceofsupportinteractionsonthebasal-planecata

31、lyticactivityisthereforebychangingtheadiabaticelectronaffinityofthecatalyst,whichissimilartothecasewithoutsupportsandcanalsobedescribedbytheproposedcomputationalmodel.Inthissense,existenceofasupportwillnotaffecttheuseofthemethodtodrawthesameconclusions,andalsocannotchangethefactthattheHERactivityisr

32、elativelybetterfor1H-NbS2,1T-MoS2and1T-NbS2thanfor1H-MoS2,asisconfirmedexperimentally(Ref.27).第20页/共25页21Thisresultissignificantforthefuturepredictionofcatalystactivityforseriesofchalcogenidesofrelatedmaterials.Providedthatthistrendcanbeextendedtoothermaterialsitmaybeusedgenerallytoguidetheselection

33、ofevenmorepotentHERcatalysts.Theauthorspresenttheyfindingsinaclearandsuccinctmanner,althoughthecomparisontoliteratureactivitiesshouldpreferentiallybequantifiedifpossibleratherthanleftasaqualitativecomparison.Response:Wearepleasedthattheimportanceofthisworkisappreciatedbythe referee.In the last parag

34、raph of Page 3,we compared our calculatedactivity of1T-NbS2tothat calculated byPan,and then the difference wasdiscussedaccordingly.Thecalculatedactivityof1T-MoS2isonlyqualitativelycompared with the experiments because the experimental situations aremore complicated.For example,there are coexistence

35、of 1T and 1Hpolymorphsintheexperimental1T-MoS2and1T-WS2samples,andpossibleresidueoflithiumionsonthebasalplanes,andalsoexistenceofmulti-layersinananosheet,etc,allofwhichcanmaketheexperimentalresultsdifferentfrom the calculated one.Nevertheless,we reproduce the experimentalobservation that proton bind

36、ing on the basal planes of 1T-MoS2 is muchenhanced relative to the case of 1H-MoS2,and in particular that theoverpotentialislessthan200mV.Thisisthecentralsubjectwearedevotedto address in this work,and therefore,the small difference between thecalculatedGandtheexperimentallymeasuredonewillnotchangeth

37、efinalconclusion.第21页/共25页22ThepredicatedelectronaffinitiesarepoorbythePBEfunctionalintheDFTcalculation,IsuggestthatitshouldbeincludedalargefractionofHFexchange.We think that hybrid functionals including the Hartree-Fock exchange are notnecessarily appropriate for describing interfacial chemical rea

38、ctions such asmolecularadsorptiononsolids.Forexample,thepopularHSEhybridfunctionalhasbeen demonstrated to considerably overestimates the adsorption energies(New J.Phys.10,063020(2008).Indeed,we get a G of ca.0.05 eV for 1T-MoS2 of 1/8 Hcoverage using HSE,which is much different from the experimental

39、 onsetoverpotentialof0.187V.UsingB3LYP,anotherpopularhybridfunctional,wegetaGof ca.0.15 eV,much closer to the experimental result.However,the structuralparameterpredictionusingB3LYPisnotgood(NewJ.Phys.10,063020(2008).ThismeansthatincludingtheHartree-Fockexchangecanonlyimprovesomepropertiesbut worsen

40、s others.Interestingly,the calculated B3LYP electron affinity of theunstrained1T-MoS2(1.325eV)agreesalsowellwiththePBEresult(1.321eV,asshowninFig.3),indicatingthatthePBEelectronaffinitiesarereliable.In overall,the GGA-level PBE functional gives quite reasonable thermodynamicpropertiesandthecorrecttr

41、endofthermodynamicchangeinducedbyouterfactors,whichhasalsobeenwellconfirmedbyalargenumberofpreviousliteratures(e.g.Nat.Chem.1,37(2009),JACS 127,5308(2005).Including the HF exchange can hardlyimprove the results anymore,but instead,the high computational cost renders thecatalytic calculations using l

42、arge supercell an untouchable task.Indeed,we takenearlyonemonthtocalculatethedataofHSEandB3LYPforonlytheunstrained1T-MoS2.Itisunimaginableandunwisetotakeahybridfunctional,whichisincapableofdescribing all aspects properly,to recalculate all the thermodynamic data of thepresentwork.Afterall,themechani

43、smsbehindthestrainengineeringofactivityhavebeencorrectlyrevealed,whichisthecentralsubjectofourwork.第22页/共25页Deareditor:Thanksalotforhavingreviewedourmanuscript.Nowwehaverevisedthemanuscriptaccordingtothereviewerscomments.Mostoftherevisionsareinthemanuscript.Someexplanationsregardingtherevisionsofour

44、manuscriptareasfollows.DearProf.XXXX,ThankyouverymuchforyourletterandthecommentsfromtherefereesaboutourpapersubmittedtoXXXX(MSNumberXXXX).Wehavecheckedthemanuscriptandreviseditaccordingtothecomments.Wesubmitheretherevisedmanuscriptaswellasalistofchanges.Ifyouhaveanyquestionaboutthispaper,pleasedonthesitatetoletmeknow.Sincerelyyours,23第23页/共25页Thank you!24第24页/共25页感谢您的观看！第25页/共25页