高考短文改错满分宝典.ppt

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1、How to correct a How to correct a compositioncomposition 短文改错短文改错主讲人：安居育才中学主讲人：安居育才中学 1.We all had a good time yesterday.2.Ill return back to school now.3.I like playing piano.4.I majored at English in college.theWrongword MissingwordinUnnecessarywordright lineback高考短文改错的短文通常只有高考短文改错的短文通常只有120120个词个

2、词左右，分成左右，分成1010行，短文的难度也与考生行，短文的难度也与考生的习作相当，的习作相当，9 9行中都存在错误。各种行中都存在错误。各种错误所占比例为错误所占比例为 2：1：6或者或者 1：1：7：多多 缺缺 错错短文改错应注意的问题短文改错应注意的问题 1.1.在有错行改动一词。在有错行改动一词。2.2.改变实词形式，不能将一个实词换改变实词形式，不能将一个实词换成另一个实词成另一个实词.3.3.最小限度地改变单词形式最小限度地改变单词形式 .4.4.添加或删除虚词添加或删除虚词(如冠词，介词等如冠词，介词等).).5.5.多改正，少添加或删除多改正，少添加或删除.6.6.最大限度地

3、保持句子和短文原意最大限度地保持句子和短文原意.Four points that you should not corret:标点符号不改标点符号不改.大小写不改大小写不改.词序错误不改词序错误不改.在纲外生词不改在纲外生词不改 (带汉语注释的词带汉语注释的词).).得法者，事半功倍得法者，事半功倍 四川四川 重重庆庆四四川川10重重庆庆10川川09全全国国2全全国国1辽辽宁宁陕陕西西浙浙江江名词名词1111111111冠词冠词11111111 1连词和逻辑连词和逻辑1121121 1 2介词介词11121112 1 1副词和形容词副词和形容词211111 2 2代词代词1111111 1 1

4、时时/语态语态12121121固定搭配固定搭配1111132 1谓语与非谓语谓语与非谓语211131引导词引导词111主谓一致主谓一致111 动词形动词形，名词数名词数还要注意形和副还要注意形和副代词代词格格，细领悟细领悟介词短语介词短语常常考常常考，固定搭配固定搭配要记住要记住从句非谓从句非谓细辨别细辨别冠词连词冠词连词常光顾常光顾 A Limerick冗词的多用冗词的多用1.Last summer,I went to Beijing,my first time trip to the city.2.Two years later,he returned back home.3.It is

5、about 200 miles far away from London.3 steps（改错三部曲）（改错三部曲）1.Gothroughthewholepassagetogetageneralidea.(浏览全文，掌握大意，同时改正哪些显而同时改正哪些显而易见的错误，例如：名词，形副，固搭，时易见的错误，例如：名词，形副，固搭，时态态）2.Readthepassagesentencebysentenceandfindthemistakes.（分句阅读，逐行找错，也可翻译找逻辑（分句阅读，逐行找错，也可翻译找逻辑错误）错误）3.Readthepassageforthethirdtime,che

6、cktheanswersandcorrectthedifficultones.（检查核对，攻克难点：分析句子结（检查核对，攻克难点：分析句子结构，找谓语，非谓，引导词等错误）构，找谓语，非谓，引导词等错误）AtChristmasEve,Jimwentwithhis1._fathertochooseaChristmastree.Theychoose2._abigone.Itwasalmostastallerastheroom!3._Theyputtheminthecornerofthesitting4._On_chose_tall_it动词形动词形介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住介词短语常常考，习

7、惯用法要记住还要注意形和副还要注意形和副逻辑错误须关注逻辑错误须关注2012高考英语短文改错模拟训练高考英语短文改错模拟训练room.Katewascovereditwithalotof5._Christmaslight.Thesittingroomlooked6._reallybeautifullyatthemoment.Therewas7._afireburninthefireplace,andtheChristmas8._treelightswereshiningbrightly.Jimorhis9._parentssinginganddancinghappily.10._was_lig

8、hts_beautifulwere动词形动词形还要注意形和副还要注意形和副动词形动词形名词数名词数2012高考英语短文改错模拟训练高考英语短文改错模拟训练冠词连词常光顾冠词连词常光顾and非谓语，细辨别非谓语，细辨别burningDont make the same mistake twice.不要重复犯同样的错误。不要重复犯同样的错误。Proverb名词数名词数名词爱考单复数，名词爱考单复数，也要分清可不可也要分清可不可2010全国全国：Christiewasoneofmybestfriendathighschool.2011全国全国II：Mybrotherwassomuchfondofth

9、emuseumstherethathebeggedmyparentstostayanotheracoupleofday.friends days2011四川卷四川卷：Tom was having much troubles getting up in the morning.2010四川卷：四川卷：In fact,Ive nearly killed three peoples.troublepeople 2011全国卷全国卷2：If youd like to make trip to our city some day,I will be more than happy to be your

10、guide.2011浙江浙江 It was very nice to get your invitation to spend weekend with you.冠词连词冠词连词常光顾常光顾a.冠词冠词a,an和和the的用法错误的用法错误 连词连词but，and，or,so和和although等逻辑错误，等逻辑错误，以及搭配错误以及搭配错误 the 20112011四川四川 His boss wanted to fire him if he didnt start coming on time,but he went to the doctor for a help.20102010课程标准

11、卷：课程标准卷：my neighbor picked up the box but announced 20112011全国全国2 2Its been a week after we left your family and we are now back home.andasosince2010辽宁卷：辽宁卷：Her hair was black and purple,and she wore black sports shoes and a black sweater,although in the summer.2010全国全国：All I had to do was to write

12、a story or present it.2007四川卷：四川卷：He thought the poor animal was injured,but the kind farmer took off his jacket and put on the animal.evenandso 动词形动词形 主要包括两类错误：动词的主要包括两类错误：动词的时态时态和和语态语态错误，以及错误，以及主、谓不一致主、谓不一致的错误。的错误。2010四川卷四川卷：Andaftermanyattempts,shepastherdrivingtestandtoldherhusbandthat2010四川卷四川卷

13、：AnEnglishladywasfinallydecidedthatshereallyshouldlearntodrive.passedwas2011全国卷全国卷1However,myfatherhadtoreturntoworkonMondaysoweflybacklastSaturdayafternoon.flew2011辽辽宁宁InearlyJanuarythisyear,therateofUFOreportsweresteady.was2010重庆重庆.Afterhearingyoursadstories,hewillsaysomewordsthatisniceandwarm.are

14、2010浙江浙江I noticed Mother looking at the nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple.2011陕西 I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actors.2010重庆重庆He had time for a proper breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.making从句非谓要记住从句非谓要记住从句引导词从句引导词误用误用，多用多用或或遗

15、漏遗漏 三种非谓语的三种非谓语的混淆混淆，不定式，不定式toto的的遗漏遗漏或或多用多用，非，非谓语与谓语动词的谓语与谓语动词的混淆混淆 occupiedto2011重庆：重庆：Katia will introduce me to some of her friends,one of who has been to China several times.2010重庆：重庆：Here is my idea about how a friend is like.2010全国全国：So if they had said was true,I would have a chance of winni

16、ng the prize.whatwhom what还要注意形和副还要注意形和副2010辽宁：辽宁：she was,in fact,rather attractively.2010重庆：重庆：Still,your happiness makeshim happily too.attractivehappy修饰修饰名词，名词，bebe，系动词，系动词后后，以及宾补，以及宾补用用形容词。形容词。修饰修饰动词，形容词，整个句子动词，形容词，整个句子用用副词副词比较级比较级和和最高级最高级的使用的使用2011四川：四川：Im pleasing to hear it,”said his boss,”bu

17、t where were you yesterday?”2009陕西：陕西：The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected fasterpleased 代词格代词格2011全国全国2：Thank you very much for showing them around your city and providing us with the wonderful meals.us 代代词词的的错错误误常常见见的的是是代代词词的的性性别别、单单复复数数及代词的及代词的格格与文章的逻辑意义不一致。与文章的逻辑意义不一致。2011重庆重庆With

18、thehelpofKatia,aroommateofme,Ivesoongotusedtolivingwithoutmyparents.mineJustatthattimeIwokeupandfoundmestillinbed!myself主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭多词、少词和搭配错误。配错误。lose my heart in hurry in Sunday afternoon such many people in a shortaon so介词短语常常考，固定搭配要记住介词短语常常考，固定搭配要记住1.Dont approach to a work of art in such a spirit.2.The boy was absorbed building a dam in the brook.3.I was impressed at the zeal（热情）（热情）with which he spoke of the plan.4.The gentleman insisted at my receiving the money.5.At last we reached to the village at the foot of the hill.inwithon