高考英语作文之WRITING.ppt

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1、高考复习专题讲座写作 How to get high marks How to get high marks in writing in limited time in writing in limited time?背一些动宾词组和常用句型背一些精美原文或是写作范文。文章宜短小精悍，语言地道。坚持每日大声朗读和背诵。头脑中储存了十几篇或几十篇文章，写作时就不会因头脑空空而发愁了，背诵不仅能提高考生的写作能力，也能帮助考生形成语感。对单项填空和完型填空都有很大的带动作用。所以在最后的一个月里切不可不读不背，只做题。扫除阅读障碍是关键教师的建议Commonverbalphrasesforhard

2、workandperseverance:Sparenoefforts;makeeveryeffort;takegreatpains;goallout;skipmealsandneglectsleep;devoteoneselfto;plungeoneselfinto;getover;keeppacewith;heldback;makeupfor;giveup;stickto;persistin;putupwith;makeanattempttodo;loseheart;putonesheartinto;bearinmind;Someadvsofdegreeforemphasis:(加强语气的程

3、加强语气的程度副词度副词)definitely;absolutely;highly;impressively;undoubtedly;increasingly;strongly;amazingly;perfectly;fabulously;magnificently;remarkably;terrifically;terribly,simply;quite;mainly;partly;largely;awfully;etcIrecommendthisfilmtoyou.Ihighlyrecommendthisfilmtoyou.Itsimpossible.Itssimply/absolutel

4、yimpossible.Thatsaninstructiveexhibition.Thatsanimpressivelyinstructiveexhibition.Theexaminationisdifficult.Theexaminationisawfullydifficult.Hewillbearrivingsoon.Hewillbearrivingprettysoon.Theypouredthewastewaterintotheriver.Theypouredthewastewaterdirectlyintotheriver.Someadjectivescanaddabrightcolo

5、urtoanessayHecameupwithagoodidea.Hecameupwithabrilliantidea.GreatchangeshavetakenplaceinShanghaiinthepast20years.Remarkablechangeshavetakenplaceoverthelast20years._contrast;_friend;_competition;_argument;_discussion;_cold;_wind;_rain;_lecture;story;Astriking/sharpcontrast;asincere/devoted/loyal/fait

6、hful/truefriend;fiercecompetition;forcefulargument;heateddiscussion;abadcold;strongwind;heavyrain;informative;entertaininglecture;atouching/vividstory;SomecompoundedadjsAdj+noun+ed白发苍苍的老者白发苍苍的老者White-hairedoldman热心肠的人热心肠的人Warm-heartedperson意志坚定的人意志坚定的人strong-willed man举止优雅举止优雅/不雅不雅的的ill/good-mannere

7、dill/good-mannered心不在焉的心不在焉的absent-mindedAdvs+done灯火通明的教室灯火通明的教室abrightly-litclassroom形状奇特的山峰形状奇特的山峰oddly-shapedhills全球公认的全球公认的Universally-acknowledged词性的活用词性的活用House the guest;broaden my horizon;narrow the gap;shoulder the responsibility ;inch forward/backward;sharpen ones memory;refresh the energy

8、;treasure the friendship;pave the road;slowthegrowth表递进：表递进：表转折表转折:表目的表目的:and,besides,too,also,moreover,additionally,as well as,in addition,including,together with,not only but also,furthermorewhats more,whats worse,to make things worse but,yet,still,while,however,on the other hand,in spite of,inste

9、ad,on the contrary,strangely enough to,for,in order to,in order that,so as to,so that,for the reason,with the purpose of,for the purpose of,in hope of,in hopes of,倒装句倒装句 ,强调句强调句,感叹句感叹句 主从复合句主从复合句 复合宾语形式复合宾语形式非谓语形式非谓语形式用用 so that 用用 with+O.+O.C.用比较级形式代替最高级用比较级形式代替最高级用虚拟语气表达真实意思用虚拟语气表达真实意思用用 at the ne

10、ws 代替代替 when he heard the news用用 on her arrival 代替代替 when she arrived 用用 the moment 代替代替 as soon asOn no account can weIt is time that sb did sthWe cannot emphasize the importance of too much.Nothing is more important than.How important it isWhat an important thing it is to do.2001年考题：假设你是李华,你的澳大利亚朋

11、友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担,来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一封回信，谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。周末活动减负前周末活动：（减负后）白天：上课，做作业参观博物馆，学习电脑，绘画晚上：做作业看新闻，读书，看报就寝时间：11:3010：00tooto句型：I was too busy having classes and doing I was too busy having classes and doing homework at weekends to go to bed before homework at weekends to go to b

12、ed before 11:3011:30.Used to do;spend.doing,whichIusedtospendwholeweekendsattendingclassesanddoinghomework,whichoftenkeptmeupuntil11:30atnight.Notuntil11:30PMcouldIgotobedbecauseIhadtofinishmyhomeworkafterhavinglessonsbyday.倒装句型倒装句型:So busy was I attending classes and doing homework that I could not

13、 go to sleep before 11:30 at night.强调句型:It was not until 11:30 at night that I could go to bed.拟人手法：Weekendsusedtofindmeattendingschoolanddoinghomework.以下饼图是关于高三学生填报高考志愿不同依以下饼图是关于高三学生填报高考志愿不同依据的人数比例。据的人数比例。请简要描述该图，请简要描述该图，选择其中选择其中你填报志愿的依据，并简述理由。你填报志愿的依据，并简述理由。Wecanseefromthegraphthatabout35%ofthestu

14、dentsbelievethechoiceshouldbebasedontheirowninterest.Morestudents(around45%),however,insistthatmainconsiderationshouldbegiventotheneedsofthesociety.Interestingly,thereareabout20%whofindittoodifficulttomakeachoiceandwouldratherdependontheirparentsorteacherstomakeadecision.Personally,Iwouldliketochoos

15、emycoursesanduniversityaccordingtomyowninterest.What else makes up a good essay?英语作文的基本框架1主题句.（topicsentence）是表达段落主题的句子。它用以概括段落大意，要求全段其他文字都围绕它展开。请看下例：Mymotherhaspassedalongtomecertainrulescertainrulesforgettingalongwithothers.DontargueDontarguewithparents;theywillthinkyoudontlovethem.DontargueDontar

16、guewithchildren;theywillthinkthemselvesvictimized.DontargueDontarguewithspouses;theywillthinkyouareatiresomemate.DontargueDontarguewithstrangers;theywillthinkyouarenotfriendly.Mymothersrules,infact,canbesummedupintwowords:DontargueDontargue.主题句中提出的“certainrules”指的是什么？展开句中通过四个“Dontargue-”逐一加以交代。从结构来看

17、，这是一个比较典型的主题段落，它包括了主题句，推展句和结论句（即本段中的末句）。2.推展句推展句(supportingstatement)的主要特点是：围绕段落主题句展开的每一个推展句本身都不要求作进一步的说明或证明，句与句之间的关系是相互独立又是互相连接的。例1：(主题句)Thereareseveralfactorsaffectingclimate.(推展句1)Onefactoristhemountofsunlightreceived.(推展句2)Altitude,ortheheightabovesealevel,alsodeterminesclimate.(推展句3)Theoceansha

18、veaneffectontheclimateofadjacentland.(推展句4)Inaddition,climateisinfluencedbythegeneralcirculationoftheatmosphere.主题句指出影响气候的几个因素。然后用四个扩展句说明四种因素。第一种是太阳光的接收量，第二种是海拔高度，第三句和第四句分别是海洋和大气环流因素。写好推展句的方法主题句及关键词确定后，开始选择和主题有关的信息和素材。实质上，针对关键词测试每一个所选择的素材就是一个分类的过程。有一种常用的方法就是句子展开前加以设问，然后解答，即设问解答(why-because)的方法。下面我们通

19、过举例来看一看这种分类过程是如何完成的。例：假设(suppose)Topicsentence:Englishisaninternationallanguage?设问(why)WhycanwesayEnglishisaninternationallanguage?解答(because)Because:Englishisspokenbypilotsandairportcontroloperatorsonalltheairwaysoftheworld.Because:Over70percentoftheworldsmailiswritteninEnglish.Because:Morethan60pe

20、rcentoftheworldsradioprogramsareinEnglish.Because:PakistanwasonceoneoftheBritishcolonies.Because:ManymembersoftheInternationalLanguageSocietyareselectedfromEnglish-spokencountries.从上面可以看出，最初的三个推展句是和关键词aninternationallanguage一致的。第四句和主题句不统一，尽管第四句会成为另一主题句(ManyPakistanisspeakEnglish)很好的推展句。第五句说服力不强。当然，在

21、写成段落时，没有必要在每个句子开头写上because，但是，在动笔展开句子时，头脑里要想着这个词，这种检验方法能帮助你把注意力集中在某个重心，围绕主题思想层层展开。PracticeHow to be a successful language language learner?A successful language is an active learnerA successful learner is an independent learnerA successful language learner is one with a purposeTherefore,successful l

22、earners do not wait for a chance to use the language;they look for such a chance.They find people who speak the language and they ask these people to correct them when they make a mistake.They will try anything to communicate.They are not afraid to repeat what they hear or say strange things;they ar

23、e willing to make mistakes and try again.When communication is difficult,they can accept information that is inexact or incomplete.It is more important for them to learn to think in the language than to know the meaning of every word.They do not depend on the book or the teacher;they discover their

24、own way to learn the language.Instead of waiting for the teacher to explain,they try to find the patterns and the rules for themselves.They are good guessers who look for clues and form their own conclusions.When they guess wrong,they guess again.They try to learn from their mistakes.Finally,success

25、ful language learners are learners with a purpose.They want to learn the language because they are interested in the language and the people who speak it.It is necessary for them to learn the language in order to communicate with these people and to learn from them.They find it easy to practice usin

26、g the language regularly because they want to learn with it.How to write an introductionattractiveRight to the pointAfterreadingtheinformationofferedintheabovetwo advertisements,I will definitely choose tostudy in International House of English ratherthan Modern English Center.(other possiblephrases

27、:wouldratherdothan;preferA.toB;加加 强强 语语 气气 的的 副副 词词 或或 介介 词词 短短 语语：absolutely;undoubtedly;without any hesitation;withoutsecond thoughts;The reasons are mainly asfollows:Nowadays,English plays so important a role that people cant live without it.A question Have you ever attended any courses in tutori

28、al centers?There is no doubt that most of us will answer“yes”.Huge amounts of information,easy access to native speakers and new teaching styles brought by well-trained and experienced teachers made it an essential part of our s u m m e r v a c a t i o n.A comparison Ten years ago,we might ask“Have

29、you finished your homework yet?”when we met in the street,but now we ask“Have you entered for/enrolled yourself in any tutorial centers yet?”What a great change!Its obvious that English is playing an important part in our study lives.1.Neverinhistoryhasthechangeof.beenasevidentas.Nowhereintheworld/C

30、hinahastheissue/ideaof.beenmorevisible/popularthan.2.Nowpeopleingrowing/significantnumbersarebeginning/comingtorealize/accept/(beaware)that.1-1对立法对立法:先引出其他人的不同看法先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法,适用于有争议性的主题适用于有争议性的主题.(1)Whenaskedabout.,thevast/overwhelmingmajorityofpeoplesaythat.ButIth

31、ink/viewabitdifferently.2.Whenitcomesto.,somepeoplebelievethat.Othersargue/claimthattheopposite/reverseistrue.Thereisprobablysometruthinbotharguments/statements,but(Itendtotheprefer/latter.)3.Now,itiscommonly/generally/widelybelievedheld/acknowledgedthat.Theyclaim/believe/arguethat.ButIwonder/doubtw

32、hether.A surprising fact or statistic It is reported that the number of the Internet users in China has reached 100 million,the third largest number in the world,after t h e U S a n d J a p a n.比较法比较法-通过对过去通过对过去,现在现在两种不同的倾向两种不同的倾向,观点的比较观点的比较,引出文章要讨论的观点引出文章要讨论的观点.1.For years,.had been viewed as.But p

33、eople are taking a fresh look now.With the growing.,people.2.2.People used to think that.(In the past,People used to think that.(In the past,.)But people now share this new.)But people now share this new.3.Nowthereisagrowingawareness/recognitionofthenecessityNowpeoplebecomeincreasinglyaware/consciou

34、softheimportanceof.4.Perhapsitistimetohaveafreshlookattheattitude/ideathat.Onceuponatime,therelivedamanwho.Thisstorymaybe(unbelievable),butitstillhasarealisticsignificancenow.Story-telling-toarousetheinterestofthereadersOncein(anewspaper),Ireadof/learnt.Thephenomenonof.hasarousedpublicconcern.Ihavea

35、friendwho.Shouldhe.?Suchadilemmaweareoftenconfrontwithinourdailylife.Knowledgeispower.suchistheremarkmadebyBacon.Thisremarkhasbeensharedbymoreandmorepeople.Educationisnotcompletewithgraduation.SuchistheopinionofagreatAmericanphilosopher.Nowmoreandmorepeoplesharehisopinion.Howoftenwehearsuchstatement

36、s/wordsliketheses/this.引用法引用法-先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法法,来引出文章要展开论述的观点来引出文章要展开论述的观点!文章中间主体内容句型文章中间主体内容句型原因结果分析原因结果分析Why.?Foronething.Foranother.Theanswertothisprobleminvolvesmanyfactors.Foronething.Foranother.Stillanother.Anumberoffactors,bothphysicalandpsychologicalaffect./bothindividualandso

37、cialcontributeto.另一原因另一原因-在分析了基本原因之后在分析了基本原因之后,再补再补充一个次要的或者更重要时用充一个次要的或者更重要时用!Anotherimportantfactoris.isalsoresponsibleforthechange/problem.Certainly,the.isnotthesolereasonfor.后果影响后果影响-分析某事物可能造成的后果或分析某事物可能造成的后果或者带来的影响者带来的影响.Itwillproduceaprofound/far-reachingeffect/impacton.Itinvolvessomeseriouscon

38、sequencefor.比较对照句型比较对照句型两者比较两者比较-比较两事物比较两事物,要说出其一超过另一要说出其一超过另一个个,或肯定一事物的优点或肯定一事物的优点,也肯定其缺点的时候用也肯定其缺点的时候用!TheadvantagesgainedfromAaremuchgreaterthantheadvantageswegainfromB.Indeed,AcarriesmuchweightwhencomparedwithB.Thereisnodoubtthatithasitsnegativeeffectsaswellaspositiveeffects.3.结尾(Conclusion)我们知道

39、文章的开头很重要，因为好的开头可以吸引读者、抓住读者的注意力。同样，文章的结尾也很重要，好的结尾会使读者对全文的中心思想留下深刻的印象，可以增添文章的效果和说服力，让人深思，回味无穷。确切地说，结尾的作用就是概括全文内容，进一步强调或肯定文章的中心思想，使读者加深印象；有时也用于展望未来，提出今后方向或令人深思的问题给读者留下回味和思考的余地。1重复中心思想:回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上，达到再次肯定和强调的效果。(例1)Asenseofhumorisreallyoneofthekeystohappiness.Itgiveszesttolifetomakeitworthliving.(

40、例2)Withallthesebenefits,itisnowonderthatsportsandgameshavenowbecomemorepopularwithpeoplethanever.Restate the introduction in a fresh way In conclusion,the Internet is undoubtedly a great friend and an efficient helper in our everyday life.If it were not for the Internet,the world would not be socolo

41、rful.Make a suggestion To conclude,the Internet itself is neither good or bad.We should use it in a proper and healthy way.Remember that being addicted to it is just like taking drugs.结论性结论性-通过对文章前面的讨论通过对文章前面的讨论,引出引出或重申文章的中心思想及观点或重申文章的中心思想及观点.1.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelydrawtheconclus

42、ionthat.2.Insummary/Inaword,itismorevaluable.2-2后果性后果性-揭示所讨论的问题若不解决揭示所讨论的问题若不解决,将将产生的严重后果产生的严重后果.1.Wemustcallforanimmediatemethod,becausethecurrentphenomenonof.,ifallowedtoproceed,willsurelyleadtotheheavycostof.2.Obviously,ifweignore/areblindtotheproblem,thereiseverychancethat.willbeputindanger.2.3号

43、召性号召性-呼吁读者行动起来呼吁读者行动起来,采取行动采取行动或提请注意或提请注意.1.Itistimethatweurgedanimmediateendtotheundesirabletendencyof.2.Itisessentialthateffectivemeasuresshouldbetakentocorrectthetendency.3应用引语:用格言、谚语或习语总结全文，既言简意赅又有更强的说服力。(例1)Ifyouhaveanythingtodo,trytodoityourself,forthatisthesafestwaytopermanentsuccess.Remember

44、thefamoussaying.Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.(例2)Ifwesticktostudiesdayafterday,thereisnothingthatcantbeachieved.Asanoldsayinggoes:Constantdroppingofwaterwearsawayastone.4用反问结尾:虽然形式是问句，但意义却是肯定的，具有明显的强调作用，引起读者思考。(例1)Therefore,listeningskillsmustbeconsciouslyimproved.Sinceitissuchanimportantmeansofle

45、arningandcommunication,whyshouldwenotdevelopthisabilityasfaraspossible?(例2)So，whatcanwebenefitfromwealthifwedonothavehealth?5提出展望或期望:表示对将来的展望或期待读者投入行动。(例1)IamsurethatChinesewillbecomeoneofthemostimportantlanguagesintheworldinthenextcentury.AsChinawillopenfurthertotheoutsideworldthelanguageissuretobe

46、spreadworldwidely.(例2)Ifeveryonehasdevelopedgoodmanners,peoplewillformamoreharmoniousrelation.Ifeveryonebehavesconsideratelytowardsothersandsocialethicspeoplewillliveinabetterworld.Withthegeneralmoodofsocietyimproved,therewillbeaprogressofcivilization.透视五年上海高考英语透视五年上海高考英语作文试题作文试题DearHaiqin,Jun,8th,2

47、003Imwritingtoyoutosharemyopiniononfashionwithyou,forIhavejustheardthatyouwereunhappybecauseyoucouldntbuysomethingoffamousbrands.Ithinkthatitisnaturalforeveryonetopaymuchemphasisonhisownimageanditistruethatfashionableclothes,shoesorsomethinglikethatwillmakeyoumorefashionableandeye-catching.However,e

48、veryonehasownfamilybackground,andit isreallyextravagantforyoutobuythese.Besides,itwillalsoaddtotheburdenofyourparents.Whatsmore,beautyisjustskindeep,andtherearemanythingswhichcanmakeyoupopularwithothersexceptfashion.Agreatamountofknowledge,noblecharacterandawarmheartwillsurelywinyouothersrespectanda

49、dmiration.Goodqualitiesisthetreasureinyourlifewhichismorevaluablethananythingyouwear.Neverjudgeabookbyitscover.Ihopethatyouwillrememberthesayingandbecomeashappyasyouusedtobe.Yours,HuangPing看图作文的写作看图作文的写作Write an English composition in over 120 words on the picture and instructions given(2002上海高考题）简要

50、描述图片的内容,结合生活实际,就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想.看图写作要素看图写作要素1.认真审图，抓住寓意立论，列出要点认真审图，抓住寓意立论，列出要点看图作文的关键，在于看懂图画内容，理解画看图作文的关键，在于看懂图画内容，理解画面意思，准确理解作者通过画面所传达的信面意思，准确理解作者通过画面所传达的信息，展开议论。息，展开议论。2.首段要直截了当，开门见山首段要直截了当，开门见山开门见山就是文章写什么，开头就说什么，直截了开门见山就是文章写什么，开头就说什么，直截了当，尽快入题，不要拐弯抹角，拖泥带水当，尽快入题，不要拐弯抹角，拖泥带水3.既有对图片的描述，又点出作者要表达的既有对图片的描