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1、 图表题图表题 写作写作WWSkills RITING 温故知新温故知新第1页/共38页图表5种类型表格 Table线图(直线/曲线)Line graph柱状图(条形图)Bar chart饼图 Pie chart流程图 Process diagram Learn the new while reviewing the old 第2页/共38页如何写图表作文开首段怎么写？加、删、替、改加、删、替、改主体段怎么写?主题句主题句-支持句（支持句（1+1+x x)结尾段如何写？total-total-结论结论-比较比较 I have questions for you!第3页/共38页描述图表动词描述

2、图表描述图表1.1.用曲线和表格说明事用曲线和表格说明事实时实时,用用showshow2.2.对表格中的数字做出对表格中的数字做出结论时结论时,用用indicateindicate3.3.当列举证据证明某事当列举证据证明某事时时,用用illustrateillustrate转述原题替换词转述原题替换词 showshow-describe-describe illustrate illustrate demonstrate demonstrate outline outline indicate indicate注注:不用不用display display(显现显现)或或 tell tell(口

3、头说明口头说明)来描述来描述表表格。格。第4页/共38页描述图表动词（复习）描述图表描述图表1.1.用曲线和表格说明事实时用曲线和表格说明事实时,用用 showshow2.2.对表格中数字做出结论时对表格中数字做出结论时,用用indicateindicate3.3.当列举证据来证明某事时当列举证据来证明某事时,用用illustrateillustrate转述原题替换词转述原题替换词Show(Show(显示显示/说明说明)Describe(Describe(描述描述/描绘描绘)Illustrate(Illustrate(举例举例/图解图解)Demonstrate(Demonstrate(展示展示

4、/演演示示 )Outline(Outline(概述概述/略述略述)Indicate(Indicate(表明表明/指出指出)第5页/共38页饼图饼图 写作写作WWSkills RITING第第 四四 讲讲第6页/共38页饼图主体段饼图主体段写作要点写作要点 分析扇量分析扇量,找出规律找出规律;归纳整理归纳整理,同类相比同类相比;如有多图如有多图,分清关系分清关系。P235 P235 例例1414 原则原则：比例构成比例构成-饼图写作的重点。饼图写作的重点。介绍各个扇面介绍各个扇面之间的关系之间的关系及与及与总体关系总体关系。重点描写特征重点描写特征最明显最明显扇面：最大扇面：最大-最小最小-成倍

5、。成倍。不简单说明，应不简单说明，应归纳，归纳，有有条理条理。某些分扇面某些分扇面没要求没要求分析，不描写。分析，不描写。第7页/共38页P P235235饼图主体段另外写法：另外写法：The pie chartThe pie chart reflects reflects an average an average（平均值）household use of electricity in household use of electricity in England.(England.(第一句综括，下面细说第一句综括，下面细说。)Heating for both room and water

6、Heating for both room and water accounts foraccounts for the biggest the biggest shareshare of more of more than half.The other half of than half.The other half of electricity electricity is almostis almost evenlyevenly（平等的）usedused for three for three sectionssections:ovens,:ovens,kettles,washing m

7、achineskettles,washing machines;lighting,lighting,TV,radioTV,radio;and vacuum cleaners,food and vacuum cleaners,food mixers,electric tools.The first mixers,electric tools.The first sectionsection consumes consumes a little bit higher a little bit higher of 17.5%of 17.5%whilewhile the rest two have a

8、n the rest two have an equalequal share of 15%.share of 15%.From the From the twotwo charts,it is clear that charts,it is clear that electricity electricity is in higher demandis in higher demand in in winter in England.winter in England.第8页/共38页饼图主体段饼图主体段常用词常用词1 1）名词）名词 percentage(percentage(百分比)pr

9、oportion(proportion(比例)Portion(Portion(部分)share(share(份额)2 2）动词）动词 分分（几部分）（几部分）be divided intobe divided intopartsparts be made up of be made up ofsectionssections 占多少占多少（比例）（比例）occupy,represent,constituteoccupy,represent,constitute(单词单词)account for/take up(account for/take up(词组词组)占最大占最大/小份额小份额 acc

10、ount for the largest/smallest account for the largest/smallest shareshare第9页/共38页饼图主体段饼图主体段常用套句常用套句套句套句-1(-1(总括总括 主题句主题句 )The graph,The graph,presented in the pie chartpresented in the pie chart,shows the general trend inshows the general trend in套句套句-2(-2(细节细节 -1-1句话句话 )The biggest difference betwe

11、en the two The biggest difference between the two groups(A+B)is in groups(A+B)is in,wherewhere A A makes up makes up 5%5%whilewhile B B constitutes 60%.constitutes 60%.套句套句-3(-3(细节细节 -2-2句话句话 )The percentage of The percentage of A A in in is is more than more than twice thattwice that of of B B.The

12、ratio.The ratio isis$%$%to to#%.#%.第10页/共38页你知道吗？你知道吗？WWSkills riting图图表表主主体体段段写写作作，第第一一句句话话是是主主题题句句，其他是其他是支持句支持句，介绍数据要尽量，介绍数据要尽量详尽详尽。请看例句：请看例句：第11页/共38页P P235235饼图主体段：The pie chartThe pie chart reflects an averagereflects an average（平均值）household use of electricity in England.household use of elect

13、ricity in England.(第一句综括，是主题句，下面详细介绍数据第一句综括，是主题句，下面详细介绍数据。)Heating for both room and water Heating for both room and water accounts accounts forfor the biggest share of the biggest share of more than half more than half.（也可用也可用52.5%52.5%，但语言稍显，但语言稍显“板板”，有时数据放在括号内，有时数据放在括号内表达更简洁。表达更简洁。）The other half

14、 of electricity isThe other half of electricity is almost almost evenlyevenly（平等的）(不写具体数字，语言更灵活哦。不写具体数字，语言更灵活哦。)used for three sectionsused for three sections:ovens,kettles,ovens,kettles,washing machineswashing machines;lighting,TV,radio lighting,TV,radio;and vacuum cleaners,food mixers,and vacuum c

15、leaners,food mixers,electric tools.electric tools.The first sectionThe first section consumes a little bit consumes a little bit higher of higher of 17.5%17.5%whilewhile the rest two have the rest two have an an equalequal share of share of 15%.15%.(比较第比较第2 2、3 3句的数据介绍句的数据介绍。复合句。复合句。)第12页/共38页你知道吗？你

16、知道吗？WWSkills riting一般来说一般来说支持句支持句介绍数据，含以下要素：介绍数据，含以下要素：对象对象 时间时间 数值数值 主要主要趋势动词（作谓语）趋势动词（作谓语）极值极值趋势动词（非谓语）趋势动词（非谓语）请看例句：请看例句：第13页/共38页 图表引用数据句型：1.1.The numberThe number（对象）（对象）picked uppicked up （主要（主要趋势）趋势）in Junein June（时间）（时间）,rocketingrocketing（极值（极值趋势）趋势）by almost 500%by almost 500%（数值）（数值）.2.2.

17、There wasThere was a marked improvement a marked improvement（主（主要趋势）要趋势）in July in July（时间）（时间）with the with the number ofnumber of visitors visitors（对象）（对象）surgingsurging(冲击冲击）（极值趋势）（极值趋势）4000 per day.4000 per day.（数值）（数值）第14页/共38页 图表引用数据句型：3.3.The periodThe period between May and September between

18、 May and September（时（时间）间）saw a steady growthsaw a steady growth （主要趋势）（主要趋势）in the in the number ofnumber of visitors visitors（对象）（对象）from 70,000 to from 70,000 to 140,000 140,000（数值）（数值）.4.4.The gradual riseThe gradual rise （主要趋势）（主要趋势）in in visitor numbersvisitor numbers （对象）（对象）from 30,000 to fr

19、om 30,000 to approximately 45,000 approximately 45,000（数值）（数值）in the in the first four months first four months（时间）（时间）was followed was followed byby a sharper increase a sharper increase（极值趋势）（极值趋势）in in May May（时间）（时间）.第15页/共38页 图表引用数据句型：但有时并不是所有要素都有(饼图）：Heating for both room and water Heating for

20、 both room and water（对象）（对象）accounts foraccounts for （主要趋势）（主要趋势）the biggest share the biggest share（极值趋势）（极值趋势）of of more than halfmore than half （数值）（数值）.有时采取复合句对比更好：The first sectionThe first section （对象（对象-1-1）consumes a consumes a little bit higherlittle bit higher （主要趋势（主要趋势-1-1）of 17.5%of 17.

21、5%（数值（数值-1-1）whilewhile the rest twothe rest two （对象（对象-2-2）have an have an equalequal share share（主要趋势（主要趋势-2-2）of 15%of 15%（数值（数值-1-1）.第16页/共38页统计数据统计数据句型句型WWSkills ritingOther reasonsOther reasons hadhad the the smallest number smallest number in in the the four reasons.four reasons.表达表达-1：其他的原因在

22、这四个原因中数字是最小的。第17页/共38页统计数据统计数据句型句型WWSkills ritingThe profit The profit doubleddoubled from from March to May.March to May.The profit The profit increased three increased three timestimes(three-fold three-fold)from)from March to May.March to May.表达表达-2：5 5月的利润是3 3月的两倍/三倍。第18页/共38页统计数据统计数据句型句型WWSkills

23、 ritingThe other colors,The other colors,which which constitute 3.12%,constitute 3.12%,are are considerably less considerably less popular thanpopular than blue(blue(12.72%12.72%)表达表达-3：其他颜色占3.12%3.12%，极不如蓝色受到欢迎，蓝色占12.72%12.72%。第19页/共38页统计数据统计数据句型句型WWSkills ritingFor A Company,the For A Company,the

24、income from salesincome from sales is$23 is$23 million,million,makingmaking the the companycompany the lowest onethe lowest one in sales.in sales.表达表达-4：A A公司的销售收入23002300万美元，销售排行最低。第20页/共38页统计数据统计数据句型句型WWSkills ritingB B Company Company tops the tops the listlist,with a sales figure with a sales fi

25、gure aboutabout$70 million.$70 million.表达表达-5：B B公司的销售收入排行第一,约70007000万美元。第21页/共38页统计数据统计数据句型句型WWSkills ritingChina has 1.3 billion China has 1.3 billion people,people,accounting foraccounting for one fifth ofone fifth of the the worlds population.worlds population.表达表达-6：中国有1313亿人口，占世界总人口的五分之一。第22页

26、/共38页统计数据统计数据句型句型WWSkills ritingThere are 12 staff There are 12 staff members with members with masters degree,masters degree,making upmaking up nearly nearly a a quarter ofquarter of the the workforce.workforce.表达表达-7：十二人有硕士学位，占职工总数的四分之一。第23页/共38页统计数据统计数据句型句型WWSkills ritingThe number The number inc

27、reased increased by by 70%70%during the last during the last decade.(decade.(动词动词 )There was There was an increase an increase of of 70%70%during the last during the last decade.(decade.(名词名词 )表达表达-8：在过去的十年里数字增长了70%70%。第24页/共38页 饼图饼图写作练手写作练手 教材教材 P217P217 现在做！（只描述饼图。）现在做！（只描述饼图。）Now,workNow,work！(10

28、 minutes)(10 minutes)WWSkills RITING 实战练习实战练习第25页/共38页P P217217饼图主体段写作示范1 1As can be seen from the pie chartAs can be seen from the pie chart,it is,it is thought that the costs of adult education thought that the costs of adult education should be shared by three sections:taxpayer,should be shared b

29、y three sections:taxpayer,individual and employer.individual and employer.(第一句话综括组成部第一句话综括组成部分，下面细说分，下面细说。)To be more specific,To be more specific,individualindividual (对象对象-1-1)should pay should pay(主要趋势主要趋势)the largest portion,the largest portion,making upmaking up (极值趋势极值趋势)40%40%(极值极值-最大最大)of th

30、e whole costs.of the whole costs.Compared with individual,Compared with individual,the proportion of the proportion of taxpayertaxpayer (对象对象-2-2)is less,is less,(极值极值-最小最小)accounting for accounting for(极值趋势极值趋势)25%25%(数值数值).Then,.Then,the percentage of employer the percentage of employer(对象对象-3-3)s

31、tands atstands at (主要趋势主要趋势)the middle of the list,which the middle of the list,which constitutes constitutes(极值极值-中中)35%35%(数值数值).第26页/共38页P P217217饼图主体段写作示范2 2The given The given pie chartpie chart outlines people outlines peoples s opinion about the opinion about the cost sharecost share for each

32、 for each coursecourse.As a wholeAs a whole,it is thought that,it is thought that the the expenditure of adult education should be dividedshould be divided among three among three categoriescategories:taxpayers,individuals and:taxpayers,individuals and employers.(employers.(第第1-21-2句话综括，下面详细介绍数句话综括，

33、下面详细介绍数据据。)SpecificallySpecifically,the taxpayer(,the taxpayer(对象对象-1-1)accounts foraccounts for（主要趋势主要趋势）thethe minimum minimum shareshare(25%)(25%)whilewhile the individual(the individual(对象对象-2-2)takes uptakes up 40%,40%,the maximum partthe maximum part.(.(极极值值)The other 35%()The other 35%(数值数值)o

34、f the)of the school expense goes forgoes for the employer(the employer(对象对象-3-3),),which is much which is much higher higher(极值极值)thanthan that of that of the the formerformer(10%10%)but a but a slight lowerslight lower(5%5%)than that of the )than that of the latterlatter.It It is clearly seen fromi

35、s clearly seen from the chart that the chart that the costthe cost should be borne should be borne accordingly.accordingly.第27页/共38页Pie chart Pie chart 主体段主体段模版模版:The pie chart The pie chart depictsdepicts the the proportionproportion of_.of_.It It consists of consists of _ segments,with the _ segme

36、nts,with the largestlargest (smallestsmallest)oneone representing representing _ of the total._ of the total._takes uptakes up _,_,becoming the second largestbecoming the second largest (smallestsmallest)_._.All the restAll the rest_,_,go togo to_ and_,_ and_,constituting constituting *%and$%,*%and$

37、%,respectivelyrespectively.It can be seen from the chart that _.It can be seen from the chart that _.第28页/共38页 图表题图表题 饼图饼图WWSkills RITING 巩固练习巩固练习第29页/共38页Writing Task-1WWSkills ritingYou should spend about 20 minutes on You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.this task.The pie chart below sh

38、ows the main The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive.The table shows these less productive.The table shows these causes affected three regions of the world causes affected three regions of the world during the 199

39、0s.during the 1990s.Summarise the information by selecting Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where parisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.Write at least 150 words.第30页/共38页参考答案参考答案The pie cha

40、rt shows that there are four The pie chart shows that there are four main causes of farmland becoming main causes of farmland becoming degraded in the world today.(degraded in the world today.(主题句，以主题句，以下介绍具体数据，为支持句。下介绍具体数据，为支持句。）GloballyGlobally,65%of degradation is caused by too much 65%of degrada

41、tion is caused by too much animal grazing and tree clearance,animal grazing and tree clearance,constituting 35%and 30%constituting 35%and 30%respectivelyrespectively.（支持句支持句-1-1，写两个最大值。，写两个最大值。）A further 28%A further 28%of global degradation is due to over-of global degradation is due to over-cultiv

42、ation of crops.cultivation of crops.（支持句支持句-2-2，提中间，提中间值。值。）Other causes account for only 7%Other causes account for only 7%collectivelycollectively.（支持句支持句-3-3，写最小值。，写最小值。）技巧提示：三个副词体现饼图分扇之于整体的关系。三个副词体现饼图分扇之于整体的关系。第31页/共38页课后练习课后练习 20 minutes 20 minutes第32页/共38页You should spend about 20 minutes on t

43、his task.You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The two pie charts show the types of The two pie charts show the types of communication used in 1962 and in munication used in 1962 and in 1982.Write a report to describe the information Write a report to describe the information shown in the g

44、raph.shown in the graph.Write at least 150 words.Write at least 150 words.P35%L50%C15%C30%P60%L10%19621982P:phone C:computer L:letter第33页/共38页keykey开首段The two pie chartsThe two pie charts compare compare different methodsdifferent methods of communication of communication used in 1962 and(used in 19

45、62 and(inin)1982.)1982.主体段主体段-1-1 We can see from theWe can see from the first first pie pie chart that in 1962,letter had chart that in 1962,letter had the the highest percentagehighest percentage in the three in the three types of communication,types of communication,taking uptaking up 50%.50%.(极值

46、：大极值：大)At that time,the At that time,the percentage of telephone(percentage of telephone(35%35%)was much higher than that ofwas much higher than that of computer(15%).computer(15%).(比较大小比较大小)第34页/共38页主体段主体段-2-2According to the According to the second second pie chart pie chart in 1982,the telephone,

47、in 1982,the telephone,which was which was 60%,60%,was was the most popular formthe most popular form of of munication.(极值：大极值：大)30%30%of of people used computers to people used computers to communicate with municate with others.(中值中值)However,However,writing letters had writing letters had the the lo

48、west percentagelowest percentage in the three in the three forms of communication,forms of communication,which was which was only 10%.only 10%.(极值：小极值：小)第35页/共38页结尾段结尾段It is clear from the two charts,It is clear from the two charts,from 1962 to 1982,from 1962 to 1982,there was a there was a sharp in

49、creasesharp increase (大幅增加大幅增加)in the in the percentage of phone from percentage of phone from 35%35%in in 19621962 to to 60%60%in in 19821982.SimilarlySimilarly,the use of computer the use of computer doubleddoubled (两倍增两倍增加加)from from 15%15%to to 30%.30%.On the On the contrarycontrary,the 20 years,the 20 years witnessedwitnessed a a dramatic decreasedramatic decrease in the in the percentage of letter.percentage of letter.(大幅下降大幅下降)第36页/共38页 练习中出现的错误：练习中出现的错误：1 1、最多的错误、最多的错误 大小写大小写 标点符号标点符号 第三人称单数第三人称单数 2 2、比较严重的错误、比较严重的错误 串句串句 时态时态 句型用错句型用错 用词欠准用词欠准 字数不够字数不够第37页/共38页感谢您的观看！第38页/共38页