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1、会计学1partvwriting问题解决型作文写法问题解决型作文写法问题解决型问题解决型（problem solution）一、英语作文语言的形成过程二、问题解决型作文写作方法和特点总结二、问题解决型作文写作方法和特点总结三、习作实例讲解和句式总结三、习作实例讲解和句式总结第1页/共47页一、英语作文语言的形一、英语作文语言的形成过程成过程Simple ChineseSimple English Compound and complex English第2页/共47页n n写作实例写作实例n n如果我们每个人都减少一次性塑料袋的使用，这对环境保护非常重要。If each of us can r

2、educe the usage of disposal plastic bags,it is very important to environmental protection.第3页/共47页第一步优化第一步优化：句子结构优化（使用：句子结构优化（使用主语从句合成句子）主语从句合成句子）It is very important to environmental It is very important to environmental protection protection that each of us reduce the that each of us reduce the us

3、age of disposal plastic bags in our daily usage of disposal plastic bags in our daily life.life.第4页/共47页第二步：对词汇进行优第二步：对词汇进行优化（四级词汇在写作中化（四级词汇在写作中的应用）的应用）It isIt is very importantvery important to environmental to environmental protection thatprotection that each of us reduce the usage of each of us r

4、educe the usage of disposal plastic bags in our daily life.disposal plastic bags in our daily life.significantessentialof vital importance mean a lot第5页/共47页 It means a lot to environmental protection It means a lot to environmental protection thatthat each of useach of us reducereduce the usage of

5、disposal the usage of disposal plastic bags in our daily life.plastic bags in our daily life.minimize第6页/共47页二、问题解决型作文写作方法和特点总结二、问题解决型作文写作方法和特点总结 The Writing Method of the Passage The Writing Method of the Passage 1:1:A Problem Response Evaluation Structure This is very commonly used structure in En

6、glish.Normally,some part of a situation is introduced before the problem.Then,solutions are taken to solve the problem.Afterwards,some evaluationmight occur in the actions taken.第7页/共47页Jimmy,was born with brain damage due to a lack of oxygen at his birth.My mother taught Jimmy practical things.My l

7、ife revolved around Jimmys.My father held the family together with his patience and understanding.I protected Jimmy when the kids picked on him.My father and Jimmy were inseparable and did everything together.ProblemResponseEvaluationWritingStructure Writing Sample 1Part 1 of the Sample 1Part 1 of t

8、he TextText第8页/共47页N H C EWriting PatternBack预习预习课文课文导入导入小结小结写作实践写作实践 随随 笔笔 Example 2 from the TextProblem:Jimmy was a wreck when my father died of a heart attack in 1991.He was simply in disbelief.He now quit speaking all together.No matter how hard I tried,Jimmy could not accept the hard fact.(Par

9、a.4)My mother died of lung cancer six months later and I alone was left to look after Jimmy.(Para.5)第9页/共47页问题解决型作文写作思路问题解决型作文写作思路 亦可称为：解决问题型作文。一般在首段现象描述，之后进行问题分析（原因或危害），最后提出建议措施,第10页/共47页问题解决型试题回顾问题解决型试题回顾0808年年1212月英语四级作文真题月英语四级作文真题Limiting The Use of Disposable Plastic BagsLimiting The Use of Dis

10、posable Plastic Bags n n1.1.一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用 n n2.2.造成的问题造成的问题 n n3.3.限制使用的意义限制使用的意义 第11页/共47页2010年年6月月 Topic：Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling.1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写2.出现这种情况的原因3.为了改变这种状况，我认为第12页/共47页现象描述段（正反）现象描述段（正反）2008-06：娱乐活动多种多样 2011-06：现在网上购物已成为一种时尚 引出话题具体描述总结第13页/共47页20002000年

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12、tions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topicwrite a composition on the topic Global Shortage of Fresh WaterGlobal Shortage of Fresh Water on the outline(given in Chinese)belowon the outline(given in Chinese)bel

13、ow:n n1 1、人们以为淡水是取之不尽的、人们以为淡水是取之不尽的 n n2 2、实际上淡水是非常紧缺的、实际上淡水是非常紧缺的 n n3 3、我们应该怎么办、我们应该怎么办 第16页/共47页 STEP ONE:STEP ONE:Content Analysis（内容扩展）（内容扩展）n n1、人们以为淡水是取之不尽的freshwaterVarious kinds of freshwaterrainriverwelllake第17页/共47页2、实际上淡水是非常紧缺的 Short of freshwaterindustrypopulationpollutiondrought？原因原因？第

14、18页/共47页3、我们应该怎么办 We/studentsscientistsgovernmentSave Save technologytechnologyinstituteinstitute laws laws第19页/共47页STEP TWO:STEP TWO:Writing Process AnalysisWriting Process Analysis（写作分（写作分（写作分（写作分析）析）析）析）n nGeneral Requirement for Every Paragraph:General Requirement for Every Paragraph:Topic sente

15、nceSupport sentence 1Support sentence 2Support sentence 3第20页/共47页n n1、人们以为淡水是取之不尽的FreshwaterVarious kindsrainriverwelllakeThere are many individuals who hold the opinion that the worlds supply of freshwater is never used up.topic sentenceAccording to them,there are so many kinds of sources as the r

16、ain,rive and lake,that it is always sufficient for use,which contributes to a shocking waste of water.Support sentence第21页/共47页2、实际上淡水是非常紧缺的 Short of freshwaterindustrypopulationpollutiondroughtAs a matter of fact,human beings are confronted with the crisis of insufficient fresh water,which can be a

17、ttributed to the following reasons.topic sentence第22页/共47页Short of freshwaterpopulationpollutionIt is known that the world population is growing rapidly day by day.So enough fresh water is needed to feed such a big population.support sentence 1Whats more,with the development of industry,factories an

18、d vehicles produce poisonous gases or wastes,which consequently results in the pollution of water.support sentence 2第23页/共47页3、我们应该怎么办 We/studentsscientistsgovernmentsave save technologytechnologyinstituteinstitute laws lawsAs far as I am concerned,it is an urgenturgent task for us students to do ou

19、r part to save water in our daily life.第24页/共47页3、我们应该怎么办、我们应该怎么办scientiststechnologytechnologySecond,scientists are expected to work even harder to purify sea water and polluted water,and try to find substitutes to reduce the use of fresh water.第25页/共47页3、我们应该怎么办、我们应该怎么办governmentinstituteinstitute

20、 laws lawsThirdly,governments are expected to launch campaigns against water pollution第26页/共47页问题解决型写作句式总结 首句引出现象 1.Nobody/No one could have failed to notice the fact that kids lack of independence has become a grave problem in many families.负面：a grave problem 练习：一次性塑料袋、水资源第27页/共47页 2008-12 2008-12：

21、一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用：一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用：一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用：一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用 Nobody/No one could have failed to notice the fact that white pollution has become a grave problem in the contemporary society.current第28页/共47页2023/4/25 正面正面n na common/popular phenomenon/practice第29页/共47页首句首句2.In the contemporary society,there is

22、no denying the fact that+客观事实（提纲1）.练习：住房需求紧张问题第30页/共47页首句首句3.On many campuses/In the contemporary society/In the present-day society/In recent decades,the shortage of housing is one of the most serious problems with which people are confronted.第31页/共47页首句首句4(正反均可正反均可)Nowadays/In the present-day soci

23、ety/In recent decades,it can be noticed that children depend more on their parents than ever before.(比较级引出问题)第32页/共47页练习练习：用：用比较级比较级引出问题引出问题 网上购物 Nowadays/In the present-day society/In recent decades,it can be noticed that more people purchase items online than ever before.第33页/共47页首句首句5(正反均可正反均可)：I

24、n the present-day society/In recent years,it has become a prevalent/prevailing tendency/trend/practice for _人_ to _动作_.第34页/共47页首句首句6:（正面）（正面）In recent decades,_ has/have gained great popularity among _.popularity public attention/publicity(负面)第35页/共47页首句首句7 The past years/decades have seen/witnesse

25、d the huge/speedy advancement/development of _.第36页/共47页2023/4/25现象描述写作范例现象描述写作范例现象描述写作范例现象描述写作范例1 1：Unhealthy Living HabitsUnhealthy Living Habitsn n1.现在很多大学生有不健康的生活习惯n n2.这些习惯的危害n n3.我的建议第37页/共47页2023/4/25第38页/共47页2023/4/25第39页/共47页你在写下篇作文时，将如何运用上面你在写下篇作文时，将如何运用上面的方法写出多样的句型？的方法写出多样的句型？Directions:F

26、or this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic:Dating Is Popular with College Students.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:大学生对校园恋爱并不陌生；大学生对校园恋爱并不陌生；对此方方面面态度不一；对此方方面面态度不一；谈谈你的观点。谈谈你的观点。第40页/共47页Dating Is Popular with Colleg

27、e Students Dating is a concept not far away from college students.On campus some lovers walk hand in hand,and some kiss or hug in public.When the majority of ones close friends are in committed(有密切关系的)relationships,to get rid of loneliness,some will date fellow classmates,while others are in long-di

28、stance relationships.第41页/共47页 Different people show different attitudes.Young lovers say they have right and freedom to fall in love.Some parents think college students mature a litter faster,but its not good to start dating too early,and they should tell dating from marriage.Some teachers are worr

29、ied that dating might be a great distraction(分散)from their schoolwork.School authorities(官方)neither encourage nor discourage it.第42页/共47页 In my opinion,striking a balance between learning and dating is science as well as art.Students may benefit from these relationships.To balance work and play,they

30、 encourage each other to work hard.They can work more efficiently(有效率地)this way.So they get high grades while keeping a happy relationship.However,there are also some concerns:its a big deal for students to have a boyfriend or a girlfriend,and they should take their relationships seriously.When they

31、 love at first sight,they should love on second thought.第43页/共47页I.TOEFL作文题目作文题目1 Directions:You will have thirty minutes to plan and write an essay on the topic given below.Use the first few minutes to read the topic carefully and think about what kind of essay you will write.You may use the space

32、immediately below the essay topic to make notes.Write your essay on the lined pages that follow.You will have enough space if you write on every line and keep your handwriting to a reasonable size.People should be realistic rather than romantic in order to live a better life.Do you agree or disagree

33、 with the statement?Use specific reasons to support your answer.第44页/共47页II.TOEFL作文题目作文题目2 Directions:You will have thirty minutes to plan and write an essay on the topic given below.Use the first few minutes to read the topic carefully and think about what kind of essay you will write.You may use t

34、he space immediately below the essay topic to make notes.Write your essay on the lined pages that follow.You will have enough space if you write on every line and keep your handwriting to a reasonable size.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Boys and girls should attend separate schools.第45页/共47页第46页/共47页