读后续写：圣诞节的神秘礼物 讲义-高三英语写作专项.docx

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1、【原题重现】高三期中考试读后续写-圣诞节的神秘礼物阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。I was a single mother in my 30s who lived down and out with my daughter Peggy in a small apartment, struggling hard to make our needs meet.One day, I headed to the downtown for an interview. I sat down in the streetcar, and there against

2、the seat was a beautiful silk umbrella with a silver handle decorated with gold scrolls, among which there was a name carved.On impulse(冲动) I determined to find the owner myself. I got off the streetcar in the heavy rain and thankfully opened the umbrella to protect myself. Then I searched a telepho

3、ne book for the name, I found it immediately and called it, waiting patiently, and then a lady answered.“Yes,” she said in surprise, with extreme excitement. “It was my umbrella which had been stolen a year ago.”So appealing was her pleasure that I forgot I was looking for a job and went directly to

4、 her small house. She took the umbrella, with teary eyes, explaining withchokingvoice that the umbrella was given by her parents, now dead. Her happiness at retrieving (找回) this special possession was such that to have accepted her reward would havespoiledsomething, so I refused her offer and left.T

5、he following months were hard. I can only obtain temporary employment, for a small salary. What was worse, I had just lost my last job before Christmas,with only fifteen dollars left.Unless a miracle happened, I would be homeless in January, foodless and jobless. I had prayed steadily for weeks, and

6、 there had been no answer but this coldness and darkness.The air was full of Christmas merriment, with the bells ringing and children shouting in the bitter dusk of the evening. But there should be no Christmas for me, I knew, no gifts, no remembrance whatsoever.Thinking of this, I couldnt control m

7、y tears on my way home, but I managed a smile so could greet my little daughter. She opened the door for me and threw herself in my arms, screaming joyously and demanding desirably for her Christmas gift. There I stood, frozen, overwhelmed by misery.Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy rushed to an

8、swer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus.Suddenly, a note attached to one package caught my eyes.【菲常视角】好词好句1.struggle hard to make our needs meet努力使收支平衡2.lived down and out with sb和某人一起过着穷困潦倒的生活3.with a silver handle decorated with gold scrolls伞把上装饰着金色的画卷4. On impulse冲动5. in surprise, with extre

9、me excitement很惊讶又极度兴奋6. explain withchokedvoice用沙哑的声音解释着7. Her happiness at retrieving (找回) this special possession wassuch thatto have accepted her reward would havespoiledsomething她如此高兴找回这个特殊的物品以至于她认为给她奖品会破坏掉一些东西8. pray steadily不断地持续地祈祷9. The air was full of Christmas merriment, with the bells rin

10、ging and children shouting in the bitter dusk of the evening.空气中充满圣诞节的快乐，铃铛响着，孩子们在这个寒冷的傍晚尖叫着10. manage a smile强颜欢笑11. She opened the door for me and threw herself in my arms, screaming joyously and demanding desirably for her Christmas gift. There I stood, frozen, overwhelmed by misery.她为我打开门，投入我的怀抱

11、，高兴地叫起来，急切地想要圣诞礼物。我僵在那里，充满了悲伤。梳理原文(参考答案）Q1What did I see when I sat in the streetcar?There against the seat was a beautiful silk umbrella with a silver handle decorated with gold scrolls, among which there was a name carved.Q2 What did I deal with the umbrella?I returned it to the owner.Q3 How did t

12、he owner respond to her?She was surprised and happy.Q4 What was my life like?I was suffering poverty and would be homeless in January, foodless and jobless.Q5 What did my daughter need badly now?Christmas gifts which I could not afford.分析续写（参考答案）Para 1 Q1Who would be at the door?Santa Claus;The deli

13、ver man;nobody but a pile of packagesQ2 What were the packages like?They looked attractive and colorful in different sizes and were wrapped in beautiful paper in a very delicate and cautious way.Q3 How did I feel when seeing the package in front of me?I felt amazed and strange whose packages they we

14、re and was wondering whether they were sent to me by mistake.Q4 How did Peggy feel?She felt very excited and happy to open the gifts.Q5 What would I do next?I wanted to double check where the gift came from.Para 2Q1What was on the note?A line of nice writing on the note said: “Merry Christmas!These

15、are for your returning my special umbrella!”Q2 How did I feel at that time?I choked with happiness and astonishment, realizing these gift were not sent by mistake but given to me specifically.Q3What may be included in the gift packages?Some Christmas gifts such as Christmas tree, turkey, puddings,ca

16、kes, toys and son on.Q4 What was Piggy doing and what was the family atmosphere?The bell ringing and the whole family taking on a cheerful atmosphere, Peggy was busy on her new gift.Q5 How did it make a difference to my life?My life began to make a change:I received a call from certain company which

17、 offered me a fine salary and helped me outQ6 What was the real purpose/theme of writing the essay?To speak highly of a good deed and tell us a lesson that “ one good turn deserves another.”【线索构思】Para 1【打开门所见-Peggy反应-尖叫，惊喜】Peggysastonishedyellrangfrom the door,leaving me curious aboutwho was coming.

18、【包裹是来自SantaClaus？或快递员送包裹？或无人，很多包裹放在门口】？At the doorstooda Santa Clauswho held several boxes of gifts,waving to Peggy and me and sending his best wishes to us.At the door stood a kind and young postman who warmly expressed his best wishes to us and handed boxes of delicate gifts to me. The young postm

19、an had left before I asked him who sent the gifts.Hardly had I reached the door when I saw a mountain of packages piling up in front of the door, with no one being there.【孩子的反应（动作，神态等：喜出望外）】Jumping with joy and excitement/Her eyestwinkling withgreat excitement, Peggy helped me take these gifts to th

20、e living room andwas eager toopen them instantly.【包裹的状态和内容-各色各样，大大小小，精心包装好的.】With the gifts wrapped in the beautiful paper and ribbons all around the living room,【我的反应（好奇想要知道是谁送的,或者疑惑是不是送错了等,让女儿暂时不要打开包裹）】Iwas seized with a total confusion aboutwhere the gifts came from and evenconcernedwhether they

21、were sentby mistake, I asked Peggy not to open them at once and helped me look for any clues on the gift boxes.Para 2【纸条上内容】？A line of nice writing on the notesaid: “Merry Christmas!These are for your returning my special umbrella!”【我的反应-感动流泪，示意孩子可以打开礼物】Looking at those gifts and my daughter, with t

22、earsblurringmy eyes, Ichoked with unexpected joyandsignalledPeggy to open these gifts.I felt veryappreciative ofher kindness andgenerosityfrom the lady with whom ever I shared my kindness.【礼物的内容，？家庭的氛围】A Christmas tree，its decorations, turkey, puddings and some toys for Peggyrose before my eyes, whi

23、chadded tothe whole familyfestival atmosphere.My daughters thrilling voice andlaughterlingered around room.【孩子和我的状态，动作】Peggy dove into decorating the Christmas tree while I was busy in preparing for the Christmas big dinner. That Christmas eve would remain in my mind and hearts forever.【我生活状态的改变】Aft

24、er the Christmas, I received a call from a big company which offered me a fine salary and helped me out. It seemed that myfatebegan tomake a big changesince that day.【我的所思所想】Every Christmasreminds me of the ladys generosity and my own kindness,telling methe essenceof the saying “ One good turn deser

25、ves another.”【菲写不可】Miss Tang 读后续写Para 1Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy rushed to answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus.Peggysastonishedyell rang from the door,leaving me curiousaboutwho was coming.Hardly had I reached the door when I saw a mountain of packagespiling upin front of the

26、door, with no one being there.Her eyestwinklingwith great excitement, Peggy helped me take these gifts to the living room andwas eager toopen them instantly. With the gifts wrapped in the beautiful paper and ribbons all overthe living room, Iwas seized with a total confusion aboutwhere the gifts cam

27、e from and evenconcernedwhether they were sentby mistake. So I asked Peggy not to open them at once and helped me look for any clues on the gift boxes. (122)Para 2Suddenly, a note attached to one package caught my eyes.A line of nice writing on the notesaid: “Merry Christmas!These are for your retur

28、ning my special umbrella!” Looking at those gifts and my daughter,with tearsblurringmy eyes, Ichokedwith unexpected joyandsignalledPeggy to open these gifts. A Christmas tree，its decorations, turkey, puddings and some toys for Peggyrose before my eyes,whichadded tothe whole familyfestival atmosphere

29、. Ifelt veryappreciativeofher kindness andgenerosityfrom the ladywith whom ever I shared my kindness. (Peggydove intodecoratingthe Christmas tree while I was busy in preparing for the Christmas big dinner). That Christmas eve wouldremain in my mind and heartsforever. (117)(After the Christmas, I rec

30、eived a call from a big company which offered me a fine salary and helped me out. It seemed that myfatebegan tomake a big changesince that day). Every Christmasreminds me of the ladys generosity and my own kindness, telling methe essenceof the saying “One good turn deserves another.”第一段，突然，门铃响了，Pegg

31、y急忙去开门，说一定是圣诞老人。Peggy惊讶的叫喊声从门口传来，让我好奇谁来了。我刚到门口，就看到门前堆积如山的包裹，没有人在那里。Peggy兴奋地眨着眼睛，她帮我把这些礼物拿到客厅，并急切地想马上打开。客厅里到处都是用漂亮的纸和缎带包着的礼物，我完全搞不清这些礼物是从哪里来的，甚至担心它们是否是错寄的。所以我叫Peggy不要马上打开它们，并帮我寻找礼品盒上的任何线索。(122)第二段，突然，一个包裹上的便条吸引了我的目光。便条上写着一行漂亮的字：“圣诞快乐！这些礼物是因为你曾经还给我一把特别的伞！”看着那些礼物和我的女儿，泪水模糊了我的眼睛，因为这个意外的喜悦而哽咽起来，示意Peggy打开

32、这些礼物。一棵圣诞树、圣诞树上的装饰品、火鸡、布丁和一些给Peggy的玩具出现在我眼前，这给整个家庭增添了节日的气氛。我非常感激这位女士的仁慈和慷慨以及我对她的善意。（当我正忙着准备圣诞大餐时，Peggy潜心装饰圣诞树。）。那个平安夜将永远留在我的脑海和心中。（圣诞节过后，我接到一家大公司的电话，该公司给我提供了一份优厚的薪水并帮助我度过了难关。从那天起，我的命运似乎开始发生重大变化）。每个圣诞节都让我想起这位女士的慷慨和我自己的善良，告诉我“善有善报”这句话的精髓。【官方范文】Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy rushed to answer it,

33、 calling that it must be Santa Claus.My heart started thumpingviolently as Peggy opened the door, screaming with excitement.Lying on the groud were a pile of delicate packages,with a Christmas hat on top of it.Shocked and Surprised, I rushed out of the door in a hurry. However, no one was in my sigh

34、t as I looked around. I turned around, justin time to meet Peggys sparkling eyes. She ran to me in joy and threw her arms around me. The next five minutes saw us busy uncovering the packages, as I wondered if Santa answered a prayer I hadnt even said.Suddenly, a note attached to one package caught m

35、y eyes. It said, “To a kind lady who found my umbrella.” After reading the note,everything dawned on me. It was the appreciation of the lady who I helped a few months ago.A stream of warmth surged through my body, and I thanked her for the presents in my heart. As I opened the package, I saw a special note. It read, “No matter how hard the life is, face it bravely as long as there is love in our hearts.”学科网（北京）股份有限公司