高考英语写作训练 2021年广州二模续写 讲义.docx

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1、高考英语写作训练2021年广州二模续写Aram and Rossis BakeryWalking along the narrow brick sidewalk, Aram took a deep breath. The air smelled of lemons and baked bread and coffee, coming from Rossis Italian Bakery. He was almost there.Aram still couldnt believe his luck. All his friends were working boring summer jobs

2、waiting tables and babysitting. And here he was, about to start as an actual bakers assistant, doing what he loved. It was all thanks to his Aunt Rita. She knew Mrs. Rossi and had arranged everything. It was the perfect experience for his future career. Rossis Bakery, he was sure, would one day be k

3、nown as the place where he got his start.Ah, here he wasthe bakery. A faded wooden sign over the door read “Rossis Bakery.” Aram straightened his shoulders and entered. Mrs. Rossi was sitting at the counter, looking old and wise. Aram greeted her and stuck out his hand. Mrs. Rossi looked at it for a

4、 second before turning around and waving him inside. “Im ready to learn everything,” Aram said.“Great. Lets start with the cash register,” Mrs. Rossi said, “because thats what youll be doing.” She showed him how to use the cash register. It wasnt hard. The pastry trays were all marked by price, and

5、there werent that many choices anyway. “Thats it?” Aram said, his heart sinking. “But when do we bake?”“Bake? I order wholesale now. No more baking. Im too old.” Then Mrs. Rossi silently held up her hands. Aram took in her knotted, swollen fingers, and he understood. A wave of disappointment struck

6、him. Sadness overwhelmed him so suddenly that he couldnt think of a word to say.He sighed, and Mrs. Rossi sighed, too. “I used to bake it all. Bread and cakes. And no one did it better than me. But that was when these things worked,” said Mrs. Rossi holding up her hands once more and glancing across

7、 the shelves filled with empty bottles labelled with names of the various ingredients (配料) she once used. Suddenly she came alive, waving her arthritic (关节炎的) hands. “People used to line up around the corner. Everyone wanted my baked bread.”Aram 来实习的年轻人 未来职业 憧憬 失望Mrs. Rossi 店主老女人 高超烘焙技巧 被迫放弃Then a t

8、hought occurred to Aram that he could ask Mrs. Rossi to teach him. Aram请求教“Dear Mrs. Rossi,” his eyes shone like the stars in the night sky, “I love bakery from my childhood and its my dream to provide delicious bread and cakes for others. When people are in a bad mood, I believe tasty food can brin

9、g them happiness, and I want to become that person who spread joy through my own efforts! Please teach me!” 过去梦想现在观点未来期许 ：提出要求Mrs. Rossi raised her eyebrows and carefully measured the young man, who stood nervously waiting for her answer.过程说服提出教同意？（不合理）不同意？ 反复请求 心理变化（对话、原因、复杂）沉默Mrs. Rossi finally sa

10、id, “Lets buy the ingredients first.” Rossi同意教 配料买齐 开始烘焙 学习提升 焕发生机 顾客归来For Aram, it was a weight off his mind. 心理 回应In the following days, Aram ordered all the necessary ingredients online and the empty bottles on the shelves were refilled. 具体动作+结果With Mrs. Rossis guidance, Arams baking skills impro

11、ved day by day. 情节发展 动作Old customers started to come back, and the faded bakery seemed to regain its life. 结果Sometimes Mrs. Rossi would sit in an armchair outside and greeted people under the new wooden sign, which now read “Aram and Rossis Bakery”. 平凡结尾 日常 扣题全文呈现Then a thought occurred to Aram that

12、 he could ask Mrs. Rossi to teach him. “Dear Mrs. Rossi,” his eyes shone like the stars in the night sky, “I love bakery from my childhood and its my dream to provide delicious bread and cakes for others. When people are in a bad mood, I believe tasty food can bring them happiness, and I want to bec

13、ome that person who spread joy through my own efforts! Please teach me!” Mrs. Rossi raised her eyebrows and carefully measured the young man, who stood nervously waiting for her answer.Mrs. Rossi finally said, “Lets buy the ingredients first.” For Aram, it was a weight off his mind. In the following

14、 days, Aram ordered all the necessary ingredients online and the empty bottles on the shelves were refilled. With Mrs. Rossis guidance, Arams baking skills improved day by day. Old customers started to come back, and the faded bakery seemed to regain its life. Sometimes Mrs. Rossi would sit in an armchair outside and greeted people under the new wooden sign, which now read “Aram and Rossis Bakery”. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司