读后续写：电梯里的小误会 讲义-高三英语写作专项.docx

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1、 原文材料On a weekend, a woman won a big bag of coins at a game machine. She took a break for dinner with her husband in the hotel dining room. But first she wanted to put the coins in her room.Ill be right back and well go to eat, she told her husband. Then she carried the bag to the lift .As she was a

2、bout to walk into the lift she noticed two men already aboardBoth were huge, very huge figures. The woman was scared. Her first thought was:These two are going to rob me. Her next thought was: “Dont be afraid. They look like nice gentlemen.But fear seized her. She stood and stared at the two men. Sh

3、e felt anxious and ashamed. She hoped they didnt read her mind. Surely they knew her hesitation about joining them in the lift. Itwas all too obvious. Her face was red. She couldnt just stand there. so with an effort of will she picked up one foot and stepped forward and followed with the other foot

4、 and was on the lift .Avoiding eye contact, she turned around and faced the lift doors as they closed.A second passed, and then another second, and then another. Her fear increased! The lift didnt move. Panic consumed her.“Oh dear, she thought, “Im about to be robbed!”Her heart sank and sweat poured

5、. Then one of the men said,“Hit the floor.Instinct (本能)told her: Do what they tell you. The bag of coins flew upwards as she threw out her arms and collapsed on the lift carpet. A shower of coins rained down on her.“Take my money and spare me, she prayed. More seconds passed.She heard one of the men

6、 say politely, Madam, if youll just tell us what floor youre going to. well push the button. The one who said it had a little trouble getting the words out .H ecouldnt help laughingParagraph 1:She lifted her head and looked up at the two men.Paragraph 2:Then the lift arrived at her floor读 懂 原 文本文是一个

7、幽默好笑的故事。原文讲述的是一位女士拿着赢游戏机的钱做电梯，没想到遇到两个高大威猛的男士。这位女主人公误把他们当成是劫匪，尤其当她听到“hit the floor”后，更是害怕的趴到地上。令人忍俊不禁的是，其中一位男士礼貌的告知只是希望女士按下电梯按钮，一个好玩好笑的故事即将上演。通过第一句提示句可知，女士得知自己误会对方是劫匪后的羞愧和无地自容。主要围绕人物的情感，动作和语言展开即可。第二段提示句女士到达自己所在的楼层，接下来的续写内容应该是紧扣文章开头，女士是把钱放回自己的房间然后与自己的丈夫共享晚餐。本文讲述的是一个幽默的故事，但从中想要告诉我们什么呢？连 句 成 篇Paragraph

8、1:She lifted her head and looked up at the two men.1.With a deep blush on her face , so ashameddid she feel that she couldnt utter a single word.2.After what seemed a century, the woman calmed herself down and stuttered in a trembling voice, “please hitthe 10thfloor.”3.One of the average-figure man

9、stepped forward, pushed the buttonas the woman had told .4.Then , he knelt down , which obviously ,meant he intended to help her gather up the scattered coins.5.At the sight of this unexpected scene, the woman only wished the earth could swallow her!6.After gathering up all the quarters, she struggl

10、ed to her feet, thinking “I should apologize to those two gentlemen!”Paragraph 2:Then, the lift arrived at her floor.1.As the lift doors slid open, the woman plucked up all her courage, “I do apologize for my misunderstanding on you!”2.Two gentlemen replied with bright smiles , and bid a good evenin

11、g to the embarrassed woman.3.With an effort of will she picked up one foot and slipped out of the lift , leaving both of them laughing continuously.4.At the thought that her husband was waiting for dinner with her, She rushed toward her room as fast as she could.5.Casting back what a spectacle she h

12、ad made of herself, she simmered with laughter, “It must be the most embarrassing and funny experience I have owned.”成品 赏 析She lifted her head and looked up at the two men.With a deep blush on her face , so ashameddid she feel that she couldnt utter a single word.After what seemed a century, the wom

13、an calmed herself down and stuttered in a trembling voice, “please hitthe 10thfloor.”One of the average-figure man stepped forward, pushed the buttonas the woman had told .Then , he knelt down , which obviously ,meant he intended to help her gather up the scattered coins.At the sight of this unexpec

14、ted scene, the woman only wished the earth could swallow her!After gathering up all the quarters, she struggled to her feet, thinking “I should apologize to those two gentlemen!”Then, the lift arrived at her floor.As the lift doors slid open, the woman plucked up all her courage, “I do apologize for

15、 my misunderstanding on you!”Two gentlemen replied with bright smiles , and bid a good evening to the embarrassed woman.With an effort of will she picked up one foot and slipped out of the lift , leaving both of them laughing continuously.At the thought that her husband was waiting for dinner with h

16、er,She rushed toward her room as fast as she could.Casting back what a spectacle she had made of herself, she simmered with laughter, “It must be the most embarrassing and funny experience I have owned.”原文结尾：The next morning flowers were delivered to her room-a dozen roses.Attached toEACH rose was a crispone hundred dollar bill. The card said:Thanks for the best laugh weve had in years. It was signed,Eddie Murphy & Michael Jordan.学科网（北京）股份有限公司