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1、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Miraculous（神奇的）StrengthOne chilly, December evening, I was preparing dinner. Suddenly, while setting the table, I heard a tremendous crash from the second floor. It was the kind of rare, heart-stopping noise that instantly struck fear into a mothers heart. Even t

2、he dishes in. the kitchen cupboard rattled（发出咔嗒声）！My seven-year-old son began screaming for help, and I raced up the stairs without even stopping to put down the dinner fork I held in my hand.Entering my sons room, I found my frightened toddler（学步的儿童）trapped under a five-drawer wooden dresser（衣橱）. I

3、t had been torn from its wall anchor. I could hear crying as I ran toward him. As I leaned over, I saw his small, bloody face and the terror in his eyes.I pulled the large dresser off him. At that moment, I felt I could move mountains. I was fearful to look but quickly tried to assess how badly he w

4、as hurt. Begging him to stay still, I dialed 911 and began to pray. I prayed for the mercy that spared him and the healing he would need, given that I wasnt sure of the extent of his injuries. In those minutes before the ambulance arrived, although I was in a chaotic situation with both my sons in t

5、ears, an inner calm kept me focused and controlled. I felt a strong presence keeping me steady.After the ambulance workers conducted a brief assessment, it was agreed that he should have a more extensive examination since this was a possible chest or head injury. A moment of pause forced me to proce

6、ss what had just happened. I recalled dashing up the stairs with a sense of fear as towhat Iwould find. In only a few seconds, a lifetime of tender memories replayed in my mind. I had asked myself, “Is he still breathing?” “Are bones broken?” One moment,I was simply preparing dinner; the next,I was

7、tearfully praying for my sons life.注意：1续写词数应为150左右；2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 On the way to the emergency room, I tried to keep him calm._ Back at the house, I found the miraculous strength that protected my sons lifea small hand-carved elephant. _试题分析1.时间：one chilly, December evening2. 地点：home-hospital-ho

8、me3. 人物（角色）：I：was preparing dinner / while setting the table, I heard a tremendous crash from the second floormy seven-year-old son: trapped under a five-drawer wooden dresserthe ambulance workers: conducted a brief assessment, it was agreed that he should have a more extensive examination4.主题：人与社会（

9、自我）一个寒冷的十二月的傍晚，我正准备做晚饭，突然听到二楼巨响，跑过去一看是儿子被一个五层的衣柜压住了。儿子很惊恐，脸上都是血。我用尽全身的力气把柜子移开，但不知道儿子伤势如何。急救人员来了以后进行了初步的检查。虽然面上无大碍，但还是建议我们去医院做深入的检查。.5.续写情节安排： 第一段：On the way to the emergency room, I tried to keep him calm.（与开头句衔接）怎么安慰？儿子的情况如何？（与下文开头句衔接）检查结果如何？第二段：Back at the house, I found the miraculous strength th

10、at protected my sons lifea small hand-carved elephant.（与开头句衔接）手工木雕象来源？手工木雕象如何救了儿子？对此事的反思下水作文 On the way to the emergency room, I tried to keep him calm. He was still crying now and then because of pain on his back. I comforted him and gave my gentle touch, encouraging him to be brave as a man. Meanw

11、hile, I felt a bit guilty that I shouldnt have left him on the second floor, playing alone. But it was no use regretting. Fortunately, after a further examination, nothing terrible occurred to my son, no injuries in his head or chest! Even the doctors said that it was really a miracle that nothing w

12、as seriously wrong with my son. A heavy load was off my mind! (96 words) Back at the house, I found the miraculous strength that protected my sons lifea small hand-carved elephant. It was a special gift from our friends in Africa when we visited them. Despite it only had a height of fifty centimeter

13、s and a delicate shape, it surely had a large loading capacity, for the wood was strong enough to bear certain weight. It was apparent that the hand-carved elephant stood up to the crash from the wooden dresser, which brought marvelous protection to my son. Thanks to the miraculous strength from the

14、 hand-carved elephant, which gave us the good fortune, I would cherish such strength and raise the awareness of safety. (93 words)参考范文 On the way to the emergency room, I tried to keep him calm. His nose was still bleeding, and he was complaining about the bump on the back of his head.（儿子情况）I contin

15、ued to pray for his recovery and the miracle that he survived the impact of that heavy dresser.（我的反应）After testing, it was determined that he could return home.（事件结果）Thats a load off my mind and I was finally relieved！（我的情绪）The doctor said，“Wow, it was a miracle!”（他人评价）I responded tearfully, “It sur

16、e was.”（我的感受） Back at the house, I found the miraculous strength that protected my sons life-a small, hand-carved elephant. Earlier that year, we bought it as a special souvenir when we went on a family trip to Africa.（物品背景信息）It seemed that the elephant had undertaken the main impact of the dresser when it crashed. The carved animal was only inches wide, but those few precious inches gave my son the space he needed to avoid terrible injury.（物品与本次事件的关联）I will be grateful all my life for the miraculous strength that sent the elephant to be my sons life protector.（升华：感恩神奇的力量）学科网（北京）股份有限公司