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1、高考英语复习备考：“读后续写类”写作思路点拨及优秀范文示例真题链接2022年全国新高考I卷第四部分 写作；第二节读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。It was the day of the big cross-country run. Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were warming up and walking the route (

2、路线) through thick evergreen forest.I looked around and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence. He was small for ten years old. His usual big toothy smile was absent today. I walked over and asked him why he wasnt with the other children. He hesitated and then s

3、aid he had decided not to run.What was wrong? He had worked so hard for this event!I quickly searched the crowd for the schools coach and asked him what had happened. “I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him,” he explained uncomfortably. “I gave him the choice to run or not, and

4、 let him decide.”I bit back my frustration (懊恼). I knew the coach meant wellhe thought he was doing the right thing. After making sure that David could run if he wanted, I turned to find him coming towards me, his small body rocking from side to side as he swung his feet forward.David had a brain di

5、sease which prevented him from walking or running like other children, but at school his classmates thought of him as a regular kid. He always participated to the best of his ability in whatever they were doing. That was why none of the children thought it unusual that David had decided to join the

6、cross-country team. It just took him longerthats all. David had not missed a single practice, and although he always finished his run long after the other children, he did always finish. As a special education teacher at theschool,I was familiar with the challenges David faced and was proud of his s

7、trong determination.Paragraph 1:We sat down next to each other, but David wouldnt look at me. Paragraph 2:I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. 【题目解读】本文讲述了作者鼓励自己因患有脑部疾病而行动不便的学生参加跑步比赛的故事。要求考生根据所给故事情节以及续写的两段开头语写一篇150词左右的读后续写。选材上，文章题材为老师鼓励残疾学生参加越野跑步比赛，贴近学生生活，主题积极向上；体裁

8、为记叙文，已给出的文段为308词，共有6个段落，故事发展脉络清晰，逻辑通畅，便于考生进行续写。【文本意图】读后续写选文的主题语境依然是人与自我，2021年主题为家庭生活，2022年主题为患脑部疾病的学生在老师的鼓励下坚持参加越野跑步比赛，贴近学生校园生活，立意积极向上，体现了对考生社会主义核心价值观、语言表达能力、创造性思维能力的考查。【解题步骤】Step 1:快速阅读获取文章已知情节Step 2:有逻辑地推断故事的发展【参考范文】Paragraph 1:We sat down next to each other, but David wouldnt look at me.I quietly

9、 said, “If youre not running just because youre afraid you willbe laughed at, thats not a good reason. The real question is whether you are going to let those few people stop you from doing something you really want to do. Are you going to let them get in your way?” I held my breath as David took th

10、is in. Then he looked at the field and said with a determination, “Im going to run.”Paragraph 2:I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners.He looked back at me and I signaled to him with a thumb-up, feeling proud of him. He smiled, took a deep breath and got ready for th

11、e race. When the running began, he ran with all his strength, in spite of his abnormal steps. Eventually, he finished the running. Nearly out of breath, he walked to me and then gave me a hug. “Thank you!” he uttered, “Without you, I would never taste such sense of achievement of challenging myself.

12、”实战演练阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为 150 左右。On a perfect summer afternoon, I took a bike ride with my family to our local park. I was riding my pretty pink bicycle in a line of family members, just like ducks.Finally, we arrived at our destination. After parking our bikes, my younger si

13、ster and brother rushed away to slide across, climb upon, and ride on their beloved playground equipment. I silently missed the innocence of being a young child. The world was just one big playground and the challenges of high school were not anything to be concerned about yet. I walked over to the

14、swings set in the center of the big park. Seated on one of them, I pushed myself and moved gently back and forward, enjoying the wonderful time of peace and relaxation. Suddenly, I glanced to my left and saw a small child on the swing beside me. However, I couldnt see any parents around her. She loo

15、ked up at me with her eyes shining in the bright sun.“Can you push me?”she asked innocently. I followed her obvious stare and saw my mother pushing my sister up in the sky. There were families off in the distance, and I wondered which was hers. Didnt she have a loving mother to push her on the swing

16、? And I didnt want this girls parents to think I was trying to do something that would hurt her. But how could I refuse her sweet smile, showing two tidy rows of baby teeth?“Sure,”I replied with a smile. I tried to match her smiles own sweetness, but my metal-mouth smile most likely fell short. I ju

17、mped off my swing and began to push her. “Whats your name?”she asked gently as she flew backward. “Mary,”I replied, pushing her forward.“My name is Chloe,” she informed me as her golden hair danced in the warm air.I nodded and continued to push her forward, looking down at the pink dress she was wea

18、ring.Paragraph 1:“I like your dress, Chloe,”I said.Paragraph 2:“Chloe,”I asked,“where are your parents?” 【文本结构】本文属于故事类体裁，通过开端-发展-高潮-结局的顺序讲述了作者与Chloe在公园的一次偶遇经历。开端：作者与家人一起骑自行车来到了 。在看着自己的弟弟妹妹 的过程中，作者怀念起自己小时候的情景。然后，作者坐到秋千上，慢慢地享受那份宁静和悠闲。发展：这时，作者注意到了Chloe。Chloe问作者是否可以 ，作者想答应，但又担心 。然而，当看到Chloe甜甜的微笑时，作者感觉自己

19、无法拒绝。于是笨应了Chloe的请求，然后帮着 。这时，Chloe主动问 。为此，作者和Chloe展开了简单的交流。高潮：作者因为好奇问起了Chloe的父母，那么这两个人会聊些什么呢?结局：得知Chloe父母的故事后。作者会有什么感触?【参考范文】Paragraph 1:“I like your dress, Chloe,” I said. “Thank you,” she answered considerately. A smile began to cross her face. Chloe began to ask me questions I would normally not a

20、nswer with a stranger questions about my family and friends, where I lived and some other things. I became amazed at the pleasant conversation I was having with her. After pushing Chloe on the swing for a long while, I glanced around the park. There were still no parents around her.Paragraph 2:“Chlo

21、e,” I asked, “where are your parents?” Chloe was looking at me seriously. It was a strange way for a small child, who shouldnt have a care in the world. “Theyre in the army, serving as guards in a faraway place. They can rarely stay by my side,” she whispered. My eyes were suddenly wet. I was sorry for her, with appreciation and respect for her parents. Just then, I found an old woman was looking at us all the time with a smile. She was Chloes grandmother.学科网（北京）股份有限公司