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1、The Last Sentence Has the Final SayTeaching objectives1.根据正面、积极、和谐原则明确文章主题；2.运用三种策略和常见句式，写好第二段最后一句；3.运用ACT 原则，确定第一段最后一句 At home,my dad said,“A jobs a big step to growing up.Im glad you will be contributing to the household.”My dads words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with

2、as I wished.My labors lasted about two weeks,and the farmer said there might be more work,but I wasnt interested.I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money.The pay day arrived at last._I understood immediately what my parents were worried about._ My dad,George,only had an eighth gra

3、de education.A quiet man,he didnt understand my world of school activities.From age 14,he worked.And his dad,Albert,took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.I didnt really understand his world either:He was a livestock(牲 畜)trucker,and I thought that I would surpass(超过)anything

4、 he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduation.Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets,hitting a baseball,or throwing a football,preparing for my future as a quarterback(四 分 卫)on a football team.In poor weather,I read about sports or practiced

5、 my trombone(长号).The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field.He explained our basic task,the tractor(拖 拉 机)fired up and we were off,riding down the field looking for weeds to spray(喷 洒)with chemicals.After a short way,the farmer

6、 stopped and pointed at a weed which we missed.Then we began again.This happened over and over,but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs,lambs-quarters,foxtails,and the king of weeds,the pretty purple thistle.It was tiring work,but I looked forward to the pay,even though I wa

7、snt sure how much it would amount to.readexplorewritecharactersplotthe logicthemecharactersplottheme Three steps of continuation writingHow to explore the theme正面、和谐、积极总原则成功脱险了战胜困难了和好如初了自信勇敢了How to write the last sentence of the first paragraphAnalyze the first sentence of the 2nd paragraphCircle th

8、e key wordsThink about the cohesion(衔接)and take the sentence downACTTip1 衔接 主题升华Paragraph 1 The pay day arrived at last._Paragraph 2 I understood immediately what my parents were worried about._Paragraph 1 The pay day arrived at last._Paragraph 2 I understood immediately what my parents were worried

9、 about._understoodanalyze circle Think and takeA what my parents were worried aboutB what caused me to understandC what I understoodD how my money would be spentYour version_Framework of the continuation writing倒着写1:先把最后一句写好，即：主题句;2:再把衔接句写好，即第一段的最后一句;3:根据两段的提示语铺设合理的情节；4:添加合理的细节，注意角色的动作和情感.Thepaydaya

10、rrivedfinally.WhenIbroughtmypaybackhome,whichwas$119,Iconceivedmanyplansabouthowtodisposeofit.Ineededanewfootballbecausetheoldonewehadplayedhadalreadywornout.IintendedtopurchasemyfavoritechocolatesforithadbeenyearssinceIlastatethem.IalsowantedapairofnewbaseballbatswiththecolorofmyneighbourJacks.Howe

11、ver,uponapproachingthehouse,Inoticedmyparentsstandingbesidetheoldtruck,lookingsadly.Itseemedasifsomethingunpleasanthappened.“Howmuchmoneydidyouearn?”askeddad,lookingintomyeyes,butwithnoreplyfromme.“A jobs a big step to growing up.But now Im a little worried when you have the ability to contribute to

12、 the household.”结尾写法句式:1、对比强调：It is not.that count/matter.Its.2、倒装句，引出结尾句：NeverhadDorareceivedsuchagift.Speechless,she.3、what 主语从句表强调：What matters/counts most is.4、呼应首段(回忆体)：When looking back on the story,sb still feel.5、悟道理：From this,sb learned what true+主旨名词 was:道理句子6、写景：Feeling+the adj.+wind/air/

13、sunlight+固定动词ing,sb do sthI understood immediately what my parents were worried about.They were worried that I was too selfish to give.It was not until then did I realize that my labour was hard,but my growth and our whole family had been depending on the hard work of my parents!Dad never complained

14、 about unfairness,instead,he seemed to think it was fair to shoulder on the responsibilities of taking care of the whole family.I had just worked for two weeks,but how many years my father had worked!Without much struggle,I took out the 119 dollars,handed it to Dad and said,“Dad,Im glad that I have

15、grown up and can contribute to the household now.”1、对比强调：句式：句首V-ing，并列结构；下句点明前者(the former)/后者(the latter)更重要Doing sth is not only about doing sth but also doing sth.And actually,what really/truly matters is the latter.e.g.学习英语不仅仅是学习英语的语法结构而且是掌握英语的实际运用。事实上，真正重要的是后者。StudyingEnglishisnotonlyaboutlearn

16、ingitsgrammarandstructures,butalsoaboutmasteringtheabilitytoputwhatwelearnintopracticaluse.And actually,what really/truly matters is the latter.练一练长大不仅仅是赚到我们需要的钱，而且是承当起各种责任。事实上，真正重要的是后者。Growingupisnotonlyaboutmakingthemoneyweneed,butalsoabouttakingontheresposibilitieswearesupposedto.And actually,wha

17、t really/truly matters is the latter.句式:It is not.that count/matter/make a significant difference.Its.e.g.到头来,你活了多少岁不算什么,重要的是,你是如何度过这些岁月的。“In the end,its not the years in your life that count.Its the life in your yearsthatmakeasignificantdifference.”句式:Dont/Neverdosth.butdosth.e.g.Dontjudgeeachdayby

18、theharvestyoureapbutbytheseedsthatyouplant.(收获/播种)Neverbeafraidtodogood,butalwaysfeartodoevil.(永远不要害怕做好事，而要害怕做坏事)练一练不要害怕为别人付出太多，而要害怕你没有能力为他人付出，因为只有付出才能收获爱和温暖。Neverbeafraidtogivetoomuch,butalwaysfeartohavelittletocontributeto,becausewecanhardlygetwarmthandlovewithoutgivingfirst.练一练重要的不是你赚了多少钱，而是你愿意花多

19、少钱给你的家庭。In the end,its not howmuchyouhaveearned that counts.Its howmuchyouwouldliketospendonyourhouseholdthatmakeasignificantdifference.句式:强调句：Itis+名词+that+谓语(宾语)Itisloveandcarethatmatterthemostinafamilyrelationship.e.g.直到此时我才明白，在家庭关系中，理解才是最重要的。ItwasnotuntilthenthatIrealizedwhatmatteredmostinafamily

20、relationshipwasmutualunderstanding.2、倒装句，引出结尾句：倒装句，否定前置：Neverhadsbdonesth+(下句)人物动作定格-最终结尾句：“并列形容词，sbdosth,独立主格(感官神态)”1.NeverhadDorareceivedsuchagift.Speechlessandhappy,sheheldhersontightlyintoherarms,withtearswellingupinhereyes.2.Neverhadwefallenintosuchadangerousdilemma.Delightedandrelieved,wehelde

21、achothertightlyinarms,withtearsofwellingupinoureyes.练一练我从来没有赚过这么多钱。既高兴又兴奋，我忍不住想了许多处理这笔钱的方案，丝毫没有考虑过我家里的实际情况。NeverhadIearnedsomuchmoneybefore.Delightedandexcited,Iconceivedmanyplansofhowtodisposeofthemoney,withoutconsideringtherealsituationofmyfamily.3、what主语从句表强调：What matters/counts most is.,(instead

22、 of.)What it takes to conquer your fear are actions,determination and optimism.是一个人走向成熟的不是他的年龄或身高，而是他对自己对家人的责任感。Whatmakesamanmatureisnothisageorheight,buthisrespibilityforhimselfandhisfamily.Whatcontributestoyourmaturityisnotyourageorheight,butyourrespibilityforyourselfandyourfamily.4、悟道理：句式：“From t

23、hen on,+非谓语表目的/单独的倒装句”From then on,sb always do sth,hoping to.From then on,sb always do sth.Only in that way,could sb do sth.e.g.从那以后，我总是想怎样才能未加多做贡献，希望或多或少减轻父亲的负担。Fromthenon,iamalways thinkingabouthowtocontributemorethehousehold,hopingtorelievedadofsomepressure.4、悟道理：句式：“From this,sb learned what tr

24、ue+主旨名词 was:道理句子”From this,Robert learned what true courage was:never be afraid to do good,but always fear to do evil.(从这件事中，罗伯特懂得了什么是真正的勇气：永远不要害怕做好事，而要害怕做坏事)练一练：从这件事中，我懂得了，shi一个人走向成熟的不是他赚了多少钱，而是他愿意为家人承担起责任。Fromthis,Ilearnedthatwhatmadeamanmaturewasnothowmuchmoneyheearned,butthathewaswillingtobearth

25、eresponsibilityoftakingcareofhisfamilies.4、悟道理：句式：“强调句,which was deeply engraved in ones mind”(深深地刻在脑海中”)或：“It is sth that.,which sb felt deep in sbs heart”It is love and care that make the world go around,which was deeply engraved in my mind.延伸至其他主题：It was procrastination that made my paper a failure,which reminded me to set priorities.练一练爱和理解才能使房子变成家，我应该时刻记在心里。It was love and understanding that make ahouseahome,which was deeply engraved in my mind.是父亲的奉献才使得我们家顺利运转，这也提醒了我要向父亲学习，为家做贡献。Itwasdadsdevotionthatmadeourfamilyrunsmoothly,whichremindedmetolearnfromdadtocontributetothehousehold.