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1、“点线面”读后续写复习：小说要素Time:Place:Character1+Action:Character2+Action:Character3+Action:Character4+Action:ImportantobjectOnabright,warmJulyafternoonOnaroadMacrodeabicycleandmetawolfTwofriends(bicyclists)repairedthebicycle.PaulandBeckyweredrivingtheircar.TheystoppedinfrontofMac.PlotThewolfwerecatchingupwith

2、Macandwantedtoattack.SprayPara.1:Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Step3：紧接着每段的承接动作（每段第二句）Step4：最后就是补充完整(每段中间)Step2:再写两段之间衔接句（第一段的最后一句）Para.2:Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.Step3：紧接着每段的承接动作（每段第二句）Step4：最后就是补充完整(每段中间)Step1:先写结局和主题句（最后一句）复习：四步定框架P1:Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.1.延续动作

3、2.转折3.转折的解决办法4.次要角色参与复习：定框架后补细节第一段Hewantedtogetintothecar.Thewolfcameagain.Hefiredthesprayatthewolf,again.PaulandBeckyhelpedMacgetintothecar.Thewolfleft.字 数词汇句式连接紧密点到链Hewantedtogetintothecar.下自行车 跑向车 要上车gotoffthebicyclerantothecar 跑 跳 走 描写 start 开始 continue 继续 jump 跳 climb 向上爬 run 跑 rush 冲 dash 猛冲 c

4、rawl、creep 缓慢爬 studge 吃力走 stagger 摇摇晃晃 stumble 跌跌撞撞 sneak 偷偷溜走 slide 悄悄溜到.slip 悄悄疾行 tiptoe 蹑手蹑脚 hobble 蹒跚Hewantedtogetintothecar.下自行车 跑向车 要上车gotoffthebicyclerantothecarjumpedoffhisbicycledashedtothedoorofthecar点到链Hewantedtogetintothecar.Hejumpedoffhisbicycleanddashedtothedoorofthecar.点到链 渴望，紧张,害怕类情绪

5、withbutterfliesinonesstomachbreathedeeplytakeadeepbreathwithanxietybefrightenedtodosthgetintoapanicinpanicwithfrighgtinmyeagernesstodosthgetpanicked,frightenedandnervousHewantedtogetintothecar.Hejumpedoffhisbicycleanddashedtothedoorofthecar.点到链Hewantedtogetintothecar.Hejumpedoffhisbicycleanddashedto

6、thedoorofthecar.Hejumpedoffhisbicycleanddashedtothedoorofthecar,inhiseagernesstogetawayfromthewolf.点到链到面延续动作-转折-应对转折的解决办法-次要角色参与P1:Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Hejumpedoffhisbicycleanddashedtothedoorofthecar,inhiseagernesstogetawayfromthewolf._?_Thewolfcameagain.Hefiredthesprayatthewolf,again.P

7、aulandBeckyhelpedMacgetintothecar.Thewolfleft.点到链到面8)soonafter=shortlyafter=afewmuniteslater=abitlater=inawhile=过一会shortlyafterwards不久后onabrightwarmJulyafternoonfromthenon从那时起 时间状语延续动作-转折-应对转折的解决办法-次要角色参与P1:Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Hejumpedoffhisbicycleanddashedtothedoorofthecar,inhiseagern

8、esstogetawayfromthewolf.Atthattime/inaflash,Thewolfcameagain.Hefiredthesprayatthewolf,again.PaulandBeckyhelpedMacgetintothecar.Thewolfleft.点到链到面wasabouttodowhen正要.这时thefirst/lasttimewhenever 无论什么时候when 当as 随着whiledoing 当beforehecould 还没能.afterdoing 在.后wasdoing.when正在.这时候.hadjustdone.when刚做完.这时候.时间状语

9、句子assoonas 一.就.themoment 一.就.each/everytime 每次itsthefirst/lasttimewhenever 无论什么时候notuntilthendidhe直到那时他才innotimedidhe马上他就延续动作-转折-应对转折的解决办法-次要角色参与P1:Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Hejumpedoffhisbicycleanddashedtothedoorofthecar,inhiseagernesstogetawayfromthewolf.Atthattime,Thewolfcameagain.Butbefo

10、reMaccouldopenthedoor,thewolfcameagain.Hefiredthesprayatthewolf,again.PaulandBeckyhelpedMacgetintothecar.Thewolfleft.点到链到面延续动作-转折-应对转折的解决办法-次要角色参与P1:Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Hejumpedoffhisbicycleanddashedtothedoorofthecar,inhiseagernesstogetawayfromthewolf.Atthattime,Thewolfcameagain.Butbef

11、oreMaccouldopenthedoor,thewolfcameagain.ButbeforeMaccouldopenthedoor,thewolfhadcaughtupandjumpedtoattack.Hefiredthesprayatthewolf,again.PaulandBeckyhelpedMacgetintothecar.Thewolfleft.点到链到面延续动作-转折-应对转折的解决办法-次要角色参与P1:Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Hejumpedoffhisbicycleanddashedtothedoorofthecar,inh

12、iseagernesstogetawayfromthewolf.ButbeforeMaccouldopenthedoor,thewolfhadcaughtupandjumpedtoattack._?_Hefiredthesprayatthewolf,again.PaulandBeckyhelpedMacgetintothecar.Thewolfleft.点到链到面 连接副词 instantly 立刻immeditely 马上 suddenly 突然 gradually 渐渐地eventually 最后recently 最近actually 事实上obviously 显然undoubtedly

13、毫无疑问Lukily 真幸运 amazingly 令人惊喜 fortunately 真幸运 sadly 真遗憾toonessurprise surpringly 令人吃惊 abruptly 突然延续动作-转折-应对转折的解决办法-次要角色参与P1:Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Hejumpedoffhisbicycleanddashedtothedoorofthecar,inhiseagernesstogetawayfromthewolf.ButbeforeMaccouldopenthedoor,thewolfhadcaughtupandjumpedtoa

14、ttack.Instantly/Immediately/Luckily,Hefiredthesprayatthewolf,again.PaulandBeckyhelpedMacgetintothecar.Thewolfleft.点到链到面延续动作-转折-应对转折的解决办法-次要角色参与P1:Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Hejumpedoffhisbicycleanddashedtothedoorofthecar,inhiseagernesstogetawayfromthewolf.ButbeforeMaccouldopenthedoor,thewolfh

15、adcaughtupandjumpedtoattack.Instantly/Immediately,Hefiredthesprayatthewolf,again.Luckily,themagicspraysavedMacathirdtime.PaulandBeckyhelpedMacgetintothecar.Thewolfleft.点到链到面延续动作-转折-应对转折的解决办法-次要角色参与P1:Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Hejumpedoffhisbicycleanddashedtothedoorofthecar,inhiseagernesstoge

16、tawayfromthewolf.ButbeforeMaccouldopenthedoor,thewolfhadcaughtupandjumpedtoattack.Luckily,themagicspraysavedMacathirdtime.Seeingthewolfbackoff,Paulquicklyunlockedthedoor,andthefrightenedmanclimbedintothecarinnotime,shuttingthedoorbehindhimheavily.soonafter,thewolfranoff.点到链到面Hewantedtogetintothecar.

17、He jumped off his bicycle and dashed to the door of the car,in his eagerness to get away from the wolf.Thewolfcameagain.Hefiredthesprayatthewolf,again.But before Mac could open the door,the wolf had caught up and jumped to attack.Luckily,the magic spray saved Mac a third time.PaulandBeckyhelpedMacge

18、tintothecar.Thewolfleft.Seeing the wolf back off,Paul quickly unlocked the door,and the frightened man climbed into the car in no time,shutting the door behind him heavily.soon after,the wolf ran off.点到链到面Hejumpedoffhisbicycleanddashedtothedoorofthecar,inhiseagernesstogetawayfromthewolf.ButbeforeMac

19、couldopenthedoor,thewolfhadcaughtupandjumpedtoattack.Luckily,themagicspraysavedMacathirdtime.Seeingthewolfbackoff,Paulquicklyunlockedthedoor,andthefrightenedmanclimbedintothecarinnotime,shuttingthedoorbehindhimheavily.soonafter,thewolfranoff.点到链到面延续动作对话次要角色参与结局和主题句Para.2:Afewminuteslater,theothertwo

20、cyclistsarrived.Macandthetwomenmetagain.MacsaidImetawolf.Thetwomansaidyouwerelucky.TheythankedandsaidgoodbytoPaulandBecky.Peoplehelpedoneanother.复习：定框架后补细节：第二段动作链可以和情感，环境，心理，语言等结合，形成动作面。Burning with anger,heglaredat me with his big frightening eyes,yelling,“Youre such an idiot.”Shaking my head awkwa

21、rdly,I said,“I can get lunch somewhere on my way back,”not wanting to bother the warmed-hearted family any more.点到链到面点到链到面动作链可以和情感，环境，心理，语言等结合，形成动作面。Burning with anger,heglaredat me with his big frightening eyes,yelling,“Youre such an idiot.”此处的burning with anger是情感描写，glare和yell是动作链，A+Bing形式，介词with短

22、语与动词glare 搭配具体生动，同时将动作和语言描写结合在了一起，形成了饱满的动作面，属于高分表达。点到链到面动作链可以和情感，环境，心理，语言等结合，形成动作面。Shaking my head awkwardly,I said,“I can get lunch somewhere on my way back,”not wanting to bother the warmed-hearted family any more.此处的shake和said 是动作链，Bing+A 形式，said 后是语言描写，语言描写后是心理描写not wanting to bother，同时将动作链和语言和心

23、理描写结合在了一起，形成了饱满的动作面，属于高分表达。点到链到面动作链可以和情感，环境，心理，语言等结合，形成动作面。When I was about to say goodbye,the girl asked if Id had lunch.Not until then did I hear my stomach rumbling.Shaking my head awkwardly,I said,“I can get lunch somewhere on my way back,”not wanting to bother the warmed-hearted family any more

24、.“Wait a minute,sir,”the girl stammered in broken English,sensing my embarrassment.In a few seconds,the girl turned up,with a paper bag held tightly in her hand.点到链到面延续动作对话次要角色参与结局和主题句Para.2:Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.Macandthetwomenmetagain.MacsaidImetawolf.Thetwomansaidyouwereluck

25、y.TheythankedandsaidgoodbytoPaulandBecky.Peoplehelpedoneanother.点到链到面延续动作-对话-次要角色参与-结局和主题句Para.2:Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived.Mac got out of the car and hugged his friends.“It was really a nightmare and I thought I was going to die,”s

26、aid Mac in a shaky voice,tears gathering in his eyes.For him,life could never be more beautiful.After saying goodbye to Paul and Becky with gratitude,the three men continued their trip,agreeing never to separate again.Thank You!读后续写第一课2017年6月浙江卷Onabright,warmJulyafternoon,MacHollan,aprimaryschooltea

27、cher,wascyclingfromhishometoAlaskawithhisfriends.Oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair,buttheyhadencouragedMactocarryon,andtheywouldcatchupwithhimsoon.AsMacpedaled(骑行)alongalone,hethoughtfondlyofhiswifeandtwoyoungdaughtersathome.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday.ThenMacheardquickand

28、loudbreathingbehindhim.“Man,thatsabigdog!”hethought.Butwhenhelookedtotheside,hesawinstantlythatitwasntadogatall,butawolf,quicklycatchingupwithhim.Macsheartjumped.Hefoundouthiscanofbearspray.Withonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMacsrelief,itfellback,sha

29、kingitshead.Butaminutelater,itwasbyhissideagain.ThenitattackedthebackofMacsbike,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,itfellbackonlytoquicklyrestartthechase(追赶).Macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcarsbutwascarefulnottoslowdown.Hesawasteepuphillclimbbeforehim.Heknewth

30、atoncehehitthehill,hedbeeasycaughtupandthewolfsteethwouldbetearingintohisflesh.Atthismoment,PaulandBeckyweredrivingtheircarontheirwaytoAlaska.Theydidntthinkmuchofitwhentheysawtwocyclistsrepairingtheirbikeonthesideoftheroad.Abitlater,theyspottedwhatthey,too,assumedwasadogrunningalongsideamanonabike.A

31、stheygotcloser,theyrealizedthatthedogwasawolf.Macheardalargevehiclebehindhim.Hepulledinfrontofitasthewolfwascatchingupfast,justadozenyardsawaynow.Macheardalargevehiclebehindhim.Hepulledinfrontofitasthewolfwascatchingupfast,justadozenyardsawaynow.Paragraph1:Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Paragraph

32、2:Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.复习：小说要素Time:Place:Character1+Action:Character2+Action:Character3+Action:Character4+Action:ImportantobjectOnabright,warmJulyafternoonOnaroadMacrodeabicycleandmetawolfTwofriends(bicyclists)repairedthebicycle.PaulandBeckyweredrivingtheircar.Theystoppedinfro

33、ntofMac.PlotThewolfwerecatchingupwithMacandwantedtoattack.Spray结构：四步定框架Step1:先写结局和主题句（最后一句）Step2:再写两段之间衔接句（第一段的最后一句）Step3：紧接着每段的承接动作（每段第二句）Step4：最后就是补充完整(每段中间)Para.1:Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.step3:step2:Para.2:Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.step3:step1:结构：定框架后补细节：第一段延续动作转折转折的解决

34、办法次要角色参与Para.1:Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.step3:step2:结构：定框架后补细节：第二段延续动作对话次要角色参与结局和主题句Para.2:Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.step3:step1:2017 年6 月浙江卷骑行遇狼On a bright,warm July afternoon,Mac Hollan,a primary school teacher,was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends.One of

35、his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair,but they had encouraged Mac to carry on,and they would catch up with him soon.As Mac pedaled(骑行)along alone,he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home.He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.Then Mac heard quick and loud

36、breathing behind him.“Man,thats a big dog!”he thought.But when he looked to the side,he saw instantly that it wasnt a dog at all,but a wolf,quickly catching up with him.Macs heart jumped.He found out his can of bear spray.With one hand on the bars,he fired the spray at the wolf.A bright red cloud en

37、veloped the animal,and to Macs relief,it fell back,shaking its head.But a minute later,it was by his side again.Then it attacked the back of Macs bike,tearing open his tent bag.He fired at the wolf a second time,and again,it fell back only to quickly restart the chase(追赶).Mac was pedaling hard now.H

38、e waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down.He saw a steep uphill climb before him.He knew that once he hit the hill,hed be easy caught up and the wolfs teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment,Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska.They didn

39、t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road.A bit later,they spotted what they,too,assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike.As they got closer,they realized that the dog was a wolf.Mac heard a large vehicle behind him.He pulled in front of it

40、 as the wolf was catching up fast,just a dozen yards away now.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；2.应使用5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:The car abruptly stopped in front of him.Paragraph 2:A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived.参考范文1The car abruptly stoppe

41、d in front of him.Mac jumped off his bicycle and rushed to the door of the car.But before Mac could open the door,the wolf had caught up and jumped to attack.Luckily,the magic spray saved Mac a third time.Seeing the wolf back off,Paul quickly unlocked the door,and the frightened man climbed into the

42、 car in no time,shutting the door behind him heavily.Becky looked out of the back window and saw the wolf standing over Macs bicycle as if it were a kill.Soon after,the animal ran off.A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived.Mac got out of the car and hugged his friends.“It was really a ni

43、ghtmare and I thought I was going to die,”said Mac in a shaky voice,tears gathering in his eyes.For him,life could never be more beautiful.After saying goodbye to Paul and Becky with gratitude,the three men continued their trip,agreeing never to separate again.参考范文2The car abruptly stopped in front

44、of him.Mac crashed into the car with a loud bang.As a result,he fell off the bicycle and had his left ankle twisted.Hardly had Mac stood up when the wolf arrived and was about to launch another attack.Mac was going to die when suddenly the wolf was hit right on the head by a piece of rock.The wolf f

45、ell back,howling with pain.It was Paul who did this.Becky helped Mac climb into the car,while Paul kept shouting and throwing stones at the wolf.A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived.They were shocked at what they saw and joined Paul.One of Macs friends picked out some raw meat and thre

46、w it to the wolf.Satisfied with what he got,the wolf ran into the woods.Mac thanked Paul and Becky,“How grateful I am that you stopped to save me and I owe it to you that Im still alive.”As Mac got injured,the three men had to give up the rest of their journey and returned home.延续动作-转折-解决转折的办法-次要角色参

47、与When I was about to say goodbye,the girl asked if Id had lunch.Not until then did I hear my stomach rumbling.Shaking my head awkwardly,I said,“I can get lunch somewhere on my way back,”not wanting to bother the warmed-hearted family any more.“Wait a minute,sir,”the girl stammered in broken English,

48、sensing my embarrassment.In a few seconds,the girl turned up,with a paper bag held tightly in her hand.“Here you are,some snacks and fruits”she handed it to me.I thanked the family,and apologized for the broken tire iron.Then we waved goodbye with best wishes for each other.After they left,I got int

49、o my Jeep and opened the paper bag.Inside were some Mexican family-made food and some fruits,likely to be picked from the farm where the girls parents worked.Besides,what amazed me was that the$20 bill was also inside.I sat in my car eating the food,and tears welled up in my eyes.The despair before

50、had completely vanished.It was the first time I had not been sick of my car trouble and felt lucky to have seen a beautiful heart.From then on,I alway took a jack with me and whenever meeting people in need,I have spared no effort to help them like that Mexican family.1.amaze2.annoy3.astonish4.confu