【课件】高中英语人教版（2019）必修第一册概要写作课件.pptx

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1、Summary Writing概要写作1.To have a clear idea of Examination Guidance Outline(考纲)of summary writing.2.To master some skills of summary writing and use them flexibly in writing.Glance through the following article and think about the following questions:1.What are the requirements of Examination Guidance

2、 Outline of summary writing?2.How to analyse the reading passage?3.How to get key points?4.How to paraphrase(改述)the key points?5.How to connect all the information points?考纲在线1.提供一简350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。2.要求考生在正确理解文章的基础上，在不改变原文中心思想的前提下，用简明、精炼的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点。概要写作的文章将主要考虑以下内容:(1)对原文要点的理解

3、和呈现情况;(2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性;(3)上下文的连贯性;(4)对各要点表达的独立性情况。要求解读1.:即用尽量少的语言对较长原文的简洁重述;2.自主性:即用自己的话语进行概写，避免对原文进行抄袭照搬;3.理解性:即表现作者对原文本的精准理解。需要注意的是，考生不能对原文进行解释和评论，也不能掺杂任何个人想法，或做出任何评判，因此不能出现“I believeI think等字句;4.忠实性:即概写内容和中心思想必须忠于原文主旨，不可偏离主题、肆意篡改;5.连贯性:概要写作并非简单罗列要点,各个要点之间要有恰当衔接，使概要衔接紧密、脉络清晰。写出的概要读起来要完整连贯、独立成篇。In

4、short,it is a brief,complete and objective restatement(重述)of the main idea and key points of a longer composition.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。“Stop the world,I want to get off!”This popular expression refers to a feeling of panic,or stress,which makes people want to stop whatever they are doing,try to

5、 relax,and become calm again.Stress is one of the most common causes of health problems in modern life.Too much stress results in physical,emotional and mental health problems.There are numerous physical effects of stress.Stress can affect the heart.It can increase the pulse rate,make the heart miss

6、 beats,and can cause high blood pressure.Stress can affect the respiratory(呼吸的)system.It can lead to asthma(哮喘,气喘)and cause a person to breathe too fast,resulting in a loss of important carbon dioxide.Stress can affect the stomach.It can cause stomachaches and problems of digesting food.These are on

7、ly a few examples of the wide range of illnesses and symptoms resulting from stress.Emotions are also easily affected by stress.People suffering from stress often feel anxious.They may have panic attacks and feel tired all the time.When people are under stress,they often overreact to little problems

8、.For example,a normally gentle parent under a lot of stress at work may yell at a child for dropping a glass of juice.Stress can make people angry,moody or anxious.Long-term stress can lead to a variety of serious mental illnesses.Depression,an extreme feeling of sadness and hopelessness,can be the

9、result of continued and increasing stress.Alcoholism and other addictions often develop as a result of overuse of alcohol or drugs to try to relieve stress.If stress is allowed to continue,then ones mental health is put at risk.It is obvious that stress is a serious problem.It attacks the body.It af

10、fects the emotions.Untreated,it may eventually result in mental illness.Stress has a great influence on our health,our feelings and our minds.So,reduce stress:stop the world and rest for a while.“Stop the world,I want to get off!”This popular expression refers to a feeling of panic,or stress,which m

11、akes people want to stop whatever they are doing,try to relax,and become calm again.Stress is one of the most common causes of health problems in modern life.Too much stress results in physical,emotional and mental health problems.There are numerous physical effects of stress.Stress can affect the h

12、eart.It can increase the pulse rate,make the heart miss beats,and can cause high blood pressure.Stress can affect the respiratory(呼吸的)system.It can lead to asthma(哮喘,气喘)and cause a person to breathe too fast,resulting in a loss of important carbon dioxide.Stress can affect the stomach.It can cause s

13、tomachaches and problems of digesting food.These are only a few examples of the wide range of illnesses and symptoms resulting from stress.Emotions are also easily affected by stress.People suffering from stress often feel anxious.They may have panic attacks and feel tired all the time.When people a

14、re under stress,they often overreact to little problems.For example,a normally gentle parent under a lot of stress at work may yell at a child for dropping a glass of juice.Stress can make people angry,moody or anxious.phenomenon Physical impact Emotional impact Long-term stress can lead to a variet

15、y of serious mental illnesses.Depression,an extreme feeling of sadness and hopelessness,can be the result of continued and increasing stress.Alcoholism and other addictions often develop as a result of overuse of alcohol or drugs to try to relieve stress.If stress is allowed to continue,then ones me

16、ntal health is put at risk.It is obvious that stress is a serious problem.It attacks the body.It affects the emotions.Untreated,it may eventually result in mental illness.Stress has a great influence on our health,our feelings and our minds.So,reduce stress:stop the world and rest for a while.Mental

17、 impact Suggestions 体裁：说明文主题：The stress and its impact结构：Para 1Para 3 Para 2 Para 4Para 51.文本内容与结构解读Analyse the style,topic and structurepart 1 topicPart 2 supporting detailsPart3 conclusion写作思路解读Para.1:“Stop the world,I want to get off!”This popular expression refers to a feeling of panic,or stress

18、,which makes people want to stop whatever they are doing,try to relax,and become calm again.Stress is one of the most common causes of health problems in modern life.Too much stress results in physical,emotional and mental health problems.压力是现代生活中健康问题最常见的原因之一。太多的压力会导致身体、情绪和心理健康问题。（要点1）Point 1Read fo

19、r Key Points写作思路解读Para.2:There are numerous physical effects of stress.Stress can affect the heart.It can increase the pulse rate,make the heart miss beats,and can cause high blood pressure.Stress can affect the respiratory(呼吸的)system.It can lead to asthma(哮喘,气喘)and cause a person to breathe too fas

20、t,resulting in a loss of important carbon dioxide.Stress can affect the stomach.It can cause stomachaches and problems of digesting food.These are only a few examples of the wide range of illnesses and symptoms resulting from stress.压力有许多身体上的影响：压力会影响心脏、呼吸系统和胃。（要点2）Point 2写作思路解读Para.3:Emotions are al

21、so easily affected by stress.People suffering from stress often feel anxious.They may have panic attacks and feel tired all the time.When people are under stress,they often overreact to little problems.For example,a normally gentle parent under a lot of stress at work may yell at a child for droppin

22、g a glass of juice.Stress can make people angry,moody or anxious.情绪也很容易受到压力的影响。压力会使人生气、情绪化或焦虑不安。（要点3）Point 3写作思路解读Para.4:Long-term stress can lead to a variety of serious mental illnesses.Depression,an extreme feeling of sadness and hopelessness,can be the result of continued and increasing stress.A

23、lcoholism and other addictions often develop as a result of overuse of alcohol or drugs to try to relieve stress.If stress is allowed to continue,then ones mental health is put at risk.长期压力会导致各种各样的精神疾病，如果压力一直持续，人们的精神健康会有危险。（要点4）概要写作1.7 Stress（课件）-高考英语作文新题型【优质课】概要写作1.7 Stress（课件）-高考英语作文新题型【优质课】Point

24、4写作思路解读Para.5:It is obvious that stress is a serious problem.It attacks the body.It affects the emotions.Untreated,it may eventually result in mental illness.Stress has a great influence on our health,our feelings and our minds.So,reduce stress:stop the world and rest for a while.压力对我们的健康、情绪和思想都有很大的

25、影响。所以，减少压力：停下来，休息一会儿。（要点5）概要写作1.7 Stress（课件）-高考英语作文新题型【优质课】概要写作1.7 Stress（课件）-高考英语作文新题型【优质课】Point 5List the Key PointsPara.Key points1Stress is one of the most common causes of health problems in modern life.Too much stress results in physical,emotional and mental health problems.2There are numerous

26、 physical effects of stress.Stress can affect the heart.Stress can affect the respiratory(呼吸的)system.Stress can affect the stomach.3 Emotions are also easily affected by stress.Stress can make people angry,moody or anxious.4Long-term stress can lead to a variety of serious mental illnesses.If stress

27、 is allowed to continue,then ones mental health is put at risk.5Stress has a great influence on our health,our feelings and our minds.So,reduce stress:stop the world and rest for a while.How to Paraphrase?2.use synonyms(同义)3.summarize examples(概括)bine sentences(并句)4.sometimes change the voice(语态)1.c

28、hange the sentence structure(句型)List the Key PointsPara.Key points1Stress is one of the most common causes of health problems in modern life.Too much stress results in physical,emotional and mental health problems.同义替换Too much stress may lead to peoples physical,emotional and mental health problems.

29、改变词性 Too much stress does harm to people physically,emotionally as well as mentally.合并Stress is a major factor which may lead to peoples physical,emotional and mental health problems.List the Key PointsPara.Key points2There are numerous physical effects of stress.Stress can affect the heart.Stress c

30、an affect the respiratory(呼吸的)system.Stress can affect the stomach.同义替换Stress has a bad effect on the heart,the respiratory system and the stomach.改变句型 Too much stress is harmful to many physical organs,including the heart,the respiratory system and the stomach.List the Key PointsPara.Key points3Emo

31、tions are also easily affected by stress.Stress can make people angry,moody or anxious.改变语态Sress can affect our emotions easily,and it can make us angry,moody and anxious.改变词性 Stress brings about negative feelings,such as anger,sensitivity or anxiety.非谓语动词Sress can affect our emotions easily，making

32、us angry,moody or nervous.List the Key PointsPara.Key points4Long-term stress can lead to a variety of serious mental illnesses.If stress is allowed to continue,then ones mental health is put at risk.定语从句Continual stress may contribute to all kinds of mental illnesses,which will threaten ones mental

33、 health.非谓语动词 Lasting stress may result in many mental diseases,damaging ones mental health.List the Key PointsPara.Key points5Stress has a great influence on our health,our feelings and our minds.So,reduce stress:stop the world and rest for a while.原因状从It is important to take a rest because stress

34、has a great effect on our health,feelings and minds.倒装句 Only by reducing stress can we keep ourselves physically,emotionally and mentally healthy.结果状从Its necessary for us to take a rest to reduce stress so that we can live a healthy life.How to Paraphrase?1.同义替换2.词性转换3.改变语态（主动与被动）4.改变句型(定从、状从、倒装、强调、

35、非谓语动词等）5.概括，合并 How to Connect?but,yet,however,though,.as well as,in addition to,not only.but also,together with,besides,moreover,furthermore,.thus,therefore,as a result,consequently,.meanwhile,on the other hand,on the contrary.firstly/secondly/finally/.because(of),due to,on account of,.for example/i

36、nstance,such as,and so onin short,in conclusion,in a word,all in all.参考范文欣赏1Stress is a major factor which may lead to peoples physical,emotional and mental health problems.First of all,too much stress is harmful to many physical organs,including the heart,the respiratory system and the stomach.Besi

37、des,Stress can affect people emotionally,making us angry,moody or nervous.Whats worse,Continual stress may contribute to various mental illnesses,which will threaten ones mental health.Therefore,Only by reducing stress can we keep ourselves physically,emotionally and mentally healthy.(74 w)概要写作1.7 S

38、tress（课件）-高考英语作文新题型【优质课】概要写作1.7 Stress（课件）-高考英语作文新题型【优质课】How to Write a Good Summary?connect the key points with proper words;1.read and analyse 2.paraphrase 3.connect 4.write read two or three times to find the key points;rewrite the key points;write a draft and correct it.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要

39、。How many times have you heard the expression that most people spend more time planning their vacation than they do planning their lives?I would expand the expression by adding that most people spend more time“thinking about their vacation than they do thinking about whats important in their lives.F

40、or many youngsters,attending college after high school is a must because college life,no doubt,can help further their studies and broaden their horizons.A quality education will sharpen their skills leading to even greater success.完成必刷题 P60页概要写作。Great choice as it seems,a directed thought is quite n

41、ecessary for your option.Preparing for a college needs your practical action from now on.To prepare for success in college,you must think about what you can plan ahead.What is your lifes purpose or your personal mission statement?Is it written down?Do you review it and think about it often?Is your l

42、ife organised around your purpose and a set of goals that support that purpose?All you need to do is direct your thoughts towards accomplishments in both short-and long term future.Without purpose and goalsdefinitely directed thoughtyou are like a ship without a rudder(舵).There is power in your purp

43、ose and in your goals.It is the power that takes you over the difficulties,and the energy that pushes you towards the life you expect.People should spend more time planning a life than planning a vacation.(要点1)For many youngsters,going to college is a good choice but they need to plan ahead.(要点 2)A“

44、directed thought”is very necessary in planning.A list of questions has to be considered.What you need is to direct your thoughts towards achievements in both short-and long-term future.(要点3)Only with a directed thought can one eventually succeed.(要点4)HomeworkFinish writing the summary and polish it.

45、Read the passage on A4 of the newspaper(7)and write a summary,paying attention to the procudures of writing a summary.3.表达微技能之句子花样表达“句子花样表达”：1.Stress is one of the most common causes of health problems in modern life.Too much stress results in physical,emotional and mental health problems.（要点1）同义替换：

46、result in=contribute to/lead to/give rise to/cause/bring about 同义替换:Too much stress may lead to peoples physical,emotional and mental health problems.改变词性:Too much stress does harm to people physically,emotionally as well as mentally.Stress is a major factor which may lead to peoples physical,emotio

47、nal and mental health problems.概要写作1.7 Stress（课件）-高考英语作文新题型【优质课】概要写作1.7 Stress（课件）-高考英语作文新题型【优质课】3.表达微技能之句子花样表达2.There are numerous physical effects of stress.Stress can affect the heart.Stress can affect the respiratory(呼吸的)system.Stress can affect the stomach.（要点2）同义替换：affect=have a bad/negative e

48、ffect on,put.at risk,be harmful to同义转换：Stress has a bad effect on the heart,the respiratory system and the stomach.归纳多种信息还可以使用like,including,such as Too much stress is harmful to many physical organs,including the heart,the respiratory system and the stomach.概要写作1.7 Stress（课件）-高考英语作文新题型【优质课】概要写作1.7

49、Stress（课件）-高考英语作文新题型【优质课】3.表达微技能之句子花样表达3.Emotions are also easily affected by stress.Stress can make people angry,moody or anxious.（要点3）改变语态：1.Sress can affect our emotions easily,and it can make us angry,moody and anxious.改变词性：2.Stress can affect people emotionally,making us angry,moody or nervous.

50、3.Stress brings about negative feelings,such as anger,sensitivity or anxiety.概要写作1.7 Stress（课件）-高考英语作文新题型【优质课】概要写作1.7 Stress（课件）-高考英语作文新题型【优质课】3.表达微技能之句子花样表达4.Long-term stress can lead to a variety of serious mental illnesses.If stress is allowed to continue,then ones mental health is put at risk.（要