读后续写：个人成长类+我的爆米花球 讲义 高三英语二轮复习写作专项.docx

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1、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。My name is Maeli. I am so lucky because I have Lizzy Jo. She is my cousin and my friend！Yesterday our teacher brought out a big box just before the last bell rang.“I have a little gift for each of you,” she said. Then she gave each of us a perfect popcorn ball. E

2、ach Popcorn ball was in a transparent bag thatwas tied with a ribbon（丝带）.Just that little ribbon made the gift look so fancy! Sometimes, its the tiny details that make things special.I happen to have a great appreciation forpopcorn balls,so I was pleased. Lizzy Jo and I rode the bus home. The moment

3、 I was offthe bus, I untied the ribbon and placed it into my pocket. Then I took the popcorn ballout of the plastic bag. I didnt even stop walking. Unfortunately, my feet were in a big hurry to get home,and sometimes when feet are in a hurry,they trip.My feet tripped. I fell. And my perfectpopcorn b

4、all dropped right into a yucky, murky puddle（水坑）.I was okay，but mypopcorn ball wasnt. Have you ever seen a perfect popcorn ball in a yucky, murky puddle? It isnt something that you want to take a photo of and frame and keep forever.I looked at my popcorn ball. That moment definitely was not the time

5、 to use the two-second rule,which I used at my grandmas house last week. I accidentally dropped my cookie on her floor. I picked it up really fast, and I admitted that I ate that cookie. But this was a very different situation. This involved a puddle.I wanted to cry. I knew that its silly to cry ove

6、r a popcorn ball, but that popcorn ball was a gift！I was highly disappointed.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Lizzy turned to give me a hug.Later that night,looking at the“new”ball,I had an idea.文章大意：我和Lizzy是表姊妹，也是好朋友。一天，老师给我们一人一个爆米花球，它还被系上了飘带，看起来精美极了，我一下子救喜欢上了它。放学回家，下了校车，我不小心绊倒了，爆米花球也滚到了水坑里。顿时伤

7、心极了，无法面对这个事实。情节走向：Para1:Lizzy拥抱我-想到了一个好主意-拿出新的塑料袋-包裹掉到水坑里湿漉漉的爆米花-重新榜上飘带-我拥有了一个新的礼物Para2:我有了一个主意-像老师那样包裹爆米花球-做成礼物送给感谢的人-我和Lizzy做了起来-升华主题情感走向：Disappointed- Curious- happy- encouraged -excited- full of achieved语言积累：描写物品精美Each Popcorn ball was in a transparent bag thatwas tied with a ribbon（丝带）.Just tha

8、t little ribbon made the gift look so fancy! Sometimes, its the tiny details that make things special.摔倒Unfortunately, my feet were in a big hurry to get home,and sometimes when feet are in a hurry,they trip.My feet tripped. I fell.伤心失望I wanted to cry. I knew that its silly to cry over a popcorn bal

9、l, but that popcorn ball was a gift！I was highly disappointed.制作爆米花球的过程She took out a plastic bag from her backpack, then picked up my popcorn ball from the puddle carefully. She tugged off the soggy wrapper, and molded the popcorn into a perfect ball. Then she put it into the plastic bag and tied i

10、t with the ribbon I had saved. 升华主题：A disappointing moment turned into an opportunity to spread joy with a simple but thoughtful gift.参考范文：Lizzy turned to give me a hug. “Dont worry, Maeli,” she said. “I have an idea.” Lizzy is always full of surprises and ideas, so I was curious about what she had

11、in mind. She took out a plastic bag from her backpack, then picked up my popcorn ball from the puddle carefully. She tugged off the soggy wrapper, and molded the popcorn into a perfect ball. Then she put it into the plastic bag and tied it with the ribbon I had saved. “Now you have a new popcorn bal

12、l,” said Lizzy with a grin. “But dont eat it!” We both laughed, feeling happy that my gift was saved.Later that night, looking at the “new” ball, I had an idea. What if I made popcorn balls for my friends and family? I could decorate the bags like our teacher did, then tie them with pretty ribbons t

13、oo. It would be a fun project and a way to show appreciation to the people I care about. I told Lizzy my plan, and she loved it too. We brainstormed ideas, like adding food coloring and different types of candy to the popcorn. We decided to start our project tomorrow, and we went to bed with a feeling of excitement. A disappointing moment turned into an opportunity to spread joy with a simple but thoughtful gift.学科网（北京）股份有限公司