中考英语二轮复习 书面表达课件.pptx

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1、书面表达写书面表达写作作 技巧指导技巧指导第一档（第一档（13-15分）分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档（第二档（10-12分）分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。达。第三档（第三档（7-9分）分）能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。第四档（第四档（4-6分）分）只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言

2、错误多，只有少量句子可读。第五档（第五档（1-3分）分）只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。中考作文评分标准中考作文评分标准We should do sports a week once.Save the environment is our duty.There is going to have a meeting today.I hope I can come true my dream.once a weekSavingbeachieve改正以下错句改正以下错句书面表达写作技巧书面表达写作技巧审审列列加加连连美美写作第一步写作第

3、一步审审认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。审题审题体裁人称时态要点健康很重要。在学习和健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告调查报告,并提倡大家并提倡大家进行假日休闲。进行假日休闲。审审travelstay at homevisit friends o

4、r parentswork 如何度假如何度假调查报告调查报告倡议假日休闲倡议假日休闲根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点子列出文章的要点stay at homeworkvisit friends or parentstravel自古以来“友善”是中华民族的传统美德。英才国际学校广播台正在进行“我友好，我善良”系列人物介绍。请你根据下列表格提示和要求，写一篇介绍讲明同学的文字稿。基本情况姓名：江明班级：九（3）日常表现1.文明礼貌，主动热情问候他人；2.团结友好，能与他人和睦相处；3.富有爱心，力所能及帮助他人。具体事例任选日常表现之一，举例介绍。愿望做一

5、个善良、有爱心的人。参考词汇：say hello to;make friends;kindness;get on well with;care about写作要求：1.次数不少于80（短文的开始语已给出，不计人总词数）；2.内容完整，语言流畅，不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。文字稿演讲稿审题审题体裁人称时态要点写人记述文第三人称一般现在时为主一般过去、一般将来5小点三大点1 1 1 12 2 2 23 3 3 34 4 4 45 5 5 51+2=1+2=1+2=1+2=人物介绍人物介绍人物介绍人物介绍3+4=3+4=3+4=3+4=具体表现具体表现具体表现具体表

6、现+例子例子例子例子5=5=5=5=愿望愿望愿望愿望写作第二步写作第二步列列用简单的句子或短语用简单的句子或短语列出列出文章要点。文章要点。A lot of people travel.A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some people stay at home.Some people visit friends or Some people visit friends or parents.parents.A few people work.A few people work.Enjoy your vacation.Enjo

7、y your vacation.列列加加写作第三步：写作第三步：简单句加副词、连接词、时间、地点、原因、结果、条件加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。健康很重要。在学习和健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的健康组织写一篇完整的

8、调查报告调查报告,并提倡大家并提倡大家进行假日休闲。进行假日休闲。travelstay at homevisit friends or parentsworka nice head How do people spend their How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey vacation?We made a survey and here is our survey report.and here is our survey report.a nice tailCome and enjoy your vacation.Come

9、and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.People who relax well work well.a nice bodyA lot of people travel.A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some people stay at home.Some people visit friends or parents.Some people visit friends or parents.A few people work.A few people

10、work.How do people spend their vacation?How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our We made a survey and here is our survey report.survey report.A lot of people travel.Some people A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf stay at home.They watch TV

11、 or surf the internet.Some other people visit the internet.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people friends or parents.A few people work.work.Come and enjoy your vacation.The Come and enjoy your vacation.The people who relax well work well.people who relax well work well.连连写作第四步：写作第四步

12、：恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进:and,as well as,bothand,not onlybut also,neithernor;2.表示选择表示选择:or,eitheror;3.表示转折表示转折:but,however,although,though,after all,4.表示因果表示因果:because,so,therefore5.表示条件表示条件:if,unless6.表示解释表示解释:for example,for instance,such as,that is to say,in other words;7.表示顺序表

13、示顺序:begin with,first,second,next,later,finally,in the end;8.表示强调表示强调:also,besides,whats more,in fact,9.表示结论表示结论:in a word,in short,generally speaking,关联词关联词 How do people spend their vacation?We made a How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our survey report.survey and here

14、is our survey report.most people travel.most people travel.some some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.parents.only a few people work.only a few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well Come and

15、 enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.work well.连连According to it,AndHowever,美美写作第五步：写作第五步：选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。The teenagersThe teenagers like like the computers.the computers.The teenagers The teenagers are fond of are fond of the computers.the computers.We should learn Engli

16、sh grammar.We should learn English grammar.Its important for us to learn English grammar.Its important for us to learn English grammar.I find English is difficult to learn,but I never give it up.I find English is difficult to learn,but I never give it up.Though I have difficulty learning English,I b

17、elieve in Though I have difficulty learning English,I believe in myself,as the saying goes:myself,as the saying goes:“Nothing is difficult if you Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it.put your heart into it.”美化句子美化句子 We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation We intervie

18、wed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report.and here is our survey report.According to it,most people According to it,most people choose to travel during the choose to travel during the holidays.holidays.Then some people like to stay at home Then some people like to

19、 stay at home in order to have in order to have a good resta good rest,such as,such as watching TV or surfing the Internet.watching TV or surfing the Internet.And And some other people visit friends or parents some other people visit friends or parents also makes them also makes them relaxedrelaxed.

20、However,However,a few people have to work.a few people have to work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.美美书面表达书面表达 现在，越来越多的人开始认识到英语的重要性。作为现在，越来越多的人开始认识到英语的重要性。作为中学生的我们更应该充分认识英语的重要性，并学好英语。中学生的我们更应该充分认识英语的重要性，并学好英语。请

21、根据所给提示写一篇请根据所给提示写一篇80字左右的英语短文，谈谈你的看字左右的英语短文，谈谈你的看法。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。法。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。提示：提示：1、英语是我们所学学科之一。、英语是我们所学学科之一。2、学好英语可以交更多的外国朋友。、学好英语可以交更多的外国朋友。3、学好英语可以分享不同的文化和技术。、学好英语可以分享不同的文化和技术。English plays an important part in our lives.So we students must learn English well.The importance of EnglishBe on

22、e of our Be one of our subjects at school.subjects at school.Be the most Be the most widely used.widely used.Learn English well Learn English well.Make friends Make friends withwith foreigners.foreigners.Share different kinds Share different kinds of cultureof cultureand technology and technology wi

23、th others.with others.English plays an important part in our lives.So we students must English plays an important part in our lives.So we students must learn English well.There are more than 3000 languages in the world.learn English well.There are more than 3000 languages in the world.Of all these l

24、anguages,English is the most widely used in the world.Of all these languages,English is the most widely used in the world.English is useful in many fields of life.English is useful in many fields of life.First,English is one of our subjects at school.Second,with First,English is one of our subjects

25、at school.Second,with English we can make friends with foreigners.Third,we can share English we can make friends with foreigners.Third,we can share different kinds of culture and technology with others if we learn it different kinds of culture and technology with others if we learn it well.well.In a word,English is becoming more and more important.So we In a word,English is becoming more and more important.So we must learn it well.must learn it well.感感谢观看看