读后续写微技能训练——修辞手法(Simile明喻)ppt课件.pptx

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1、读后续写微技能训练读后续写微技能训练修辞手法修辞手法明喻明喻(Simile)Figure of speech(修辞手法)修辞手法(figure of speech)是根据表达需要，运用有效的语言手段来提高语言的表达效果，使语言表达具有准确性、鲜明性和生动性的语言运用方式。恰当地使用修辞手段，可以使文章更加生动，更具有表现力，蕴意丰富，引人入胜。常用的修辞手法有：夸张(Exaggeration)、明喻(Simile)、暗喻(Metaphor)、拟人(Personification)、平行法(Parallelism)、头韵(Alliteration)、对比(Contrast)、矛盾修辞法(Oxym

2、oron)、双关(Pun)、移情(Empathy)等。Her smile is as bright as the sun.Her smile is bright like the sun.Simile a figure of speech comparing two unlike things,often introduced with the words“like”or“as”.Simile(明喻)My momma always said,“Life is like a box of chocolaes.You never know what youre gonna get.”Forrest

3、 Gump 阿甘正传 A room without books is like a body without a soul.没有书的房间，如同没有灵魂的躯体。Were like two peas in a pod.我们就像豆荚里的两颗豌豆。Examples of simile from the textbooks1.It seemed as if the world was at an end.(M1U4）2.Our legs were so heavy and cold that they felt like blocks of ice.(M1U3)3.The lakes shone lik

4、e glass in the setting sun and looked wonderful.(M1U3)4.Bricks covered the ground like red autumn leaves.(M1U4)5.The country,covered with cherry tree flowers,looks as though it is covered with pink snow.(M3U1)6.Why,look at him.He eats like a wolf.(M3U3)7.Long ago Dr Yuan had a dream about rice plant

5、s as tall as sorghum.Each ear of rice was as big as an ear of corn and each grain of rice was as huge as a peanut.(M4U2)Comparison微风吹来，树叶摇动，灯光闪烁。The wind blew,the leaves shook and the lights flashed.A light breeze blew,swaying the tree branches and making the rays of light glimmer and dance as if th

6、ere was a fairtale world hidden deep within.清清的泉水潺潺地流着。The clear spring is flowing.Ripping crystals streams stretched away into the distance from the towering bluffs(悬崖)like the beautiful streamers(飘带)of a fairy maid.The appilication of simile基本构成：本体+比喻词+喻体1.My love is like a red rose.2.My love is a

7、s beautiful as his love.3.The baby is like his father.4.The pen is to a writer what the gun is to a fighter.5.The man is as tall as a giraffe.6.He appears as if he had known the truth.7.He ran as fast as possible.8.Every time you feel like smoking,dont reach for a cigarret.9.I couldnt move my legs.I

8、t was as if they were stuck to the floor.similesimilesimilesimile常见的比喻词：like,as,as if(though),A is to B what C is to DSome patterns of simile“as”patternlShe is as timid as a mouse.她胆小如鼠。lHe treats his kid as the apple of the eye.他把他的孩子当掌上明珠。lThe snow was as thick as a blanket.雪厚得像毯子。lA father rushed

9、 to his sons school,only to discover the building was as flat as a pancake.一位父亲冲进他儿子的学校，却发现那幢楼像一个薄饼一样平。Some patterns of simile“what”patternlReading is to the mind what food is to the body.读书与思想的关系就好比食物与健康的关系。lHonesty is to businessman what water is to fish.诚实对商人就像水对鱼一样重要。lDreams are to people what w

10、ings are to birds.梦之于人，犹如翅膀之于鸟。lRailwayistotransportationwhatbloodisto mansbody.铁路对交通的重要性就如血液对人的重要性。Some patterns of simile“as if”patternlHe picks out the lace of the shoe and eats it as if it were spaghetti.他挑出鞋带，像吃意大利面一样吃。lHe tries cutting and chewing the bottom of the shoe as if it were teh fines

11、t steak.他试着割咬鞋底，好像这是最好的牛排。lThe woman made him fetch and carry just as if he was a great Newfoundland dog.这个女人叫他做这做那，简直把他当作一条纽芬兰的大狗。Some patterns of simile“like”patternlMy mind goes round and round like the earth.我的心像地球一样转来转去lHe was like a cat on hot bricks before his driving test.他在驾照考试前就像热锅上的蚂蚁。lJe

12、nny and I were like peas and carrots.我和珍妮形影不离。lLove is like the wind,which you cant see but can feel.爱就像风，你看不见却能感觉到。lShe hung her head like a dying flower.她垂下头来，像一朵垂死的花。“like”patternlLiving without an aim is like _.lThe stars in the night sky sparkled like _.lThe wind howled like _.lHe lay under the

13、 quilt in a long shape like _,turning on his side to face the door.lSearching for one man in this big city is like _.sailing without a compassdiamondsan angry liona beanlooking for a needle in a haystack请用明喻改写下列句子1.月亮一会钻进云里，一会儿又从云里钻出来。The moon got into the clouds for a while,and then got out of the

14、clouds.The moon was like a naughty child,now into the clouds,and then out of the clouds.2.比赛马上就要开始了，小力的心情非常紧张。The game was about to start.Xiaoli was very nervous.As the game was about to start,Xiao lis heart was like a bow on a string.3.微风吹过阳光照耀的湖面，又反射出点点金光。The breeze was blowing on the sunny lake and reflecting a little golden light.When the breeze was blowing over the lake,it reflected a little golden light,just like the stars shining all over the sky.