高中英语作文：活动安排类.ppt

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1、活活动计划安排划安排（2011天津卷）书面表达（满分25分）假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于6月26日接待来自于美国某中学的学生访问团。你受学校委托，负责安排在津的一日活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队Smith 先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最后征求对方意见。上午与我校学生座谈（话题如校园生活、文化差异等）；中午与我校学生共同进餐（午餐包括饺子、面条等）；下午与我校学生游览海河。注意：1.次数不少于100；2.可是当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；3.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数。参考词汇：海河 the Haihe River Dear Mr.Smit

2、h,I am Li Hua,chairman of the Student Union,from Chenguang High School.I am more than glad to know that you will pay a visit to our school on June 26 and I am writing to tell you what we have arranged for you.In the morning,we will have a discussion which may cover such topics as school life,cultura

3、l differences and so on.At noon,youll be invited to our schools dining hall where you can know more about our traditional customs and culture as well as taste various Chinese food,such as dumplings and noodles.In the afternoon,we will show you around the Haihe River where you can enjoy yourselves.Af

4、ter that,you will end your visit to our school.What do you think of my plan?Do you have any better advice on how to make your visit more interesting and impressive?I look forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua 1.I was appointed to take charge of arranging all the activities on that day.M

5、y plan about these activities is as follows.2.In the morning,we will show you around our school and introduce our most advanced science lab to you.3.Well organize various activities which you will take part in and Im sure you can have a wonderful time there.4.I ll show you around the places of great

6、 interest in our city where you can not only enjoy beautiful scenery but also know more about our culture there.5.A discussion will be held in the teaching hall at 10:30 am.this Monday,aiming to know more about each others cultures.句子必背句子必背句子必背句子必背相关短相关短相关短相关短语语1.sign up 报名名 2.save our energy 节约能源能源

7、3.increase our knowledge about 增加增加对的了解的了解4.improve our spoken English 提高我提高我们的口的口语5.will be held 将被将被举行行6.participate in the contest 参加比参加比赛7.are supposed to 应该;理理应8.you are warmly welcome to 热烈烈欢迎你迎你9.thanks for your participation 谢谢你你的参与的参与10.organize an English-speaking contest 组织一次英一次英语演演讲比比赛11

8、.promote the campus culture 弘弘扬校园文校园文化化12.hold an English writing activity called.举行叫作行叫作的英的英语写作活写作活动13.aim to 目的是；旨在目的是；旨在14.arouse our interest 激激发兴趣趣15.develop our ability in 培养培养的能力的能力16.You are advised to do sth.建建议你你们 You will be encouraged to do sth.你你们将受到鼓励做某事将受到鼓励做某事17.enter for 报名参加名参加18.k

9、now more details 了解更多了解更多细节19.dont miss the deadline 别错过截止日期截止日期20.witness the development of 见证的的发展展21.show you around some places of great interest 带你参你参观名名胜22.organize various activities 组织各种活各种活动相关句式相关句式1.Its a pity that you have to go back soon,so a farewell party for you will be held in Room 3

10、02 in the Sun Club at 6:00 pm this Saturday evening.你很快就要回去你很快就要回去,所以我所以我们将于本周六晚上六点在阳光俱将于本周六晚上六点在阳光俱乐部部302房房举行行欢送会。送会。2.Im writing to(do sth)我写信的目的是我写信的目的是3.If you are interested in.,please take part in .contest.如果你如果你对感感兴趣趣,请参加参加比比赛4.In the morning you can first visit.After that,you can go to.In th

11、e afternoon,I suggest you visit.where not only you can enjoy.but also you can.上午上午,你可以先参你可以先参观然后然后,你可以去你可以去下午下午,我建我建议你参你参观在那里你不但可以欣在那里你不但可以欣赏而且你而且你还可以可以5.Our outdoor activity will last 3 hours,and well be back at about 11：00.我我们的的户外活外活动将持将持续3个小个小时,大大约11点返回。点返回。6.If you are interested,please sign up

12、at the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday so that we will make necessary arrangements.如果你有如果你有兴趣趣,请在下周在下周四下午五点前到四下午五点前到办公室公室报名名,以便我以便我们作必要的安作必要的安排。排。7.All are welcome.欢迎大家参加。迎大家参加。8.Wish you a happy tour!/holiday/weekend!祝你祝你们旅行旅行/假期假期/周末愉快！周末愉快！技巧点技巧点技巧点技巧点拨拨1.活活动安排的写作一般使用将来安排的写作一般使用将来时,文章文章结构以构以总

13、分分为主主,第一句往往要清楚第一句往往要清楚说明活明活动举办的感的感受、意受、意义和内容。和内容。2.活活动安排的写作基本都涉及到地点和安排的写作基本都涉及到地点和时间的安的安排排,考生考生应该注意表达注意表达时间和地点的介和地点的介词使用。使用。3.活活动安排的安排的应用文多属于通知用文多属于通知类,其其给出的中出的中文提示往往文提示往往隐藏主藏主语,考生可以考考生可以考虑使用祈使句使用祈使句或者被或者被动语态。典型例典型例典型例典型例题题(2009年深圳二模年深圳二模)为迎接迎接6月月5日日“世界世界环境日境日”，学校学生会准，学校学生会准备举行一次以行一次以环保保为主主题的英的英语演演讲

14、比比赛。请你根据以下内容写一个你根据以下内容写一个书面通面通知知,欢迎大家迎大家积极参与。极参与。写作内容写作内容目的目的增长环保知识；提高英语口语增长环保知识；提高英语口语内容内容“保护环境，节约能源保护环境，节约能源”地点地点教学楼五楼演讲大厅教学楼五楼演讲大厅报名时间报名时间5月月25日前日前报名方式报名方式studentcenter163com比赛时间比赛时间6月月5日星期五下午日星期五下午4：00-5：30评奖评奖一等奖一等奖3名，二等奖名，二等奖6名，三等奖名，三等奖12名名例例题导写写 认真真审题。活活动安排属于安排属于应用文范畴用文范畴,写作的写作的时候一般使用将来候一般使用将

15、来时或者祈使句。或者祈使句。这一一类应用文最重要的是把活用文最重要的是把活动的目的、的目的、时间、地点、地点、报名方式等信息清楚地名方式等信息清楚地传达达给大家大家,并且最后呼吁大家参加活并且最后呼吁大家参加活动。信息重组。信息重组。第一个句子表述活动的背景、目第一个句子表述活动的背景、目的和内容。第二句是交待清楚活动举办的时的和内容。第二句是交待清楚活动举办的时间和地点。第三句是出发时间间和地点。第三句是出发时间,出发地点和出发地点和路程。第四句是报名的方式和报名的截止日路程。第四句是报名的方式和报名的截止日期。最后一句则是号召大家参加活动。期。最后一句则是号召大家参加活动。1.1.学生会将

16、要举办一次演讲比赛学生会将要举办一次演讲比赛,主题为主题为“保护环境保护环境,节约能源节约能源”,目的是增长环保知识目的是增长环保知识和提高英语口语。和提高英语口语。2.演演讲比比赛将在将在6月月5日星期五下午日星期五下午4:00-5：30,教教学楼五楼演学楼五楼演讲大大厅举办。3.参参赛者需要在者需要在5月月25日前在日前在studentcenter 上上报名。名。4.比比赛将将评选出一等出一等奖3名名,二等二等奖6名名,三等三等奖12名。名。5.希望大家希望大家积极参与比极参与比赛。翻翻译句子。将分好的五句子。将分好的五组信息翻信息翻译成英成英语,并并各自用一句各自用一句话来表达。来表达。

17、词语翻翻译 翻翻译或完成下例短或完成下例短语。句句1：(1)增增长环保知保知识：gain/enrich/increase our knowledge about the environment(2)保保护环境：境：_(3)节约能源：能源：_(4)表示目的的短表示目的的短语：_ protect our environmentsave energythe purpose of./with the aim of.in order to./with句句2：(5)在在6月月5日星期五下午日星期五下午4:00-5:30：_ 4:00 p.m._5:30 p.m.,_ Friday June 5th(6)教

18、学楼：教学楼：_ onfromteaching/classroom buildingto(7)在五楼：在五楼：_ the 5th floor(8)演演讲大大厅：_ 句句3：(9)参加比参加比赛的人：的人：_ on the lecture hallthose who want toparticipate in the contest(10)在在5月月25日前：日前：_ May 25th(11)在上：在上：(12)报名：名：_ sign up for/enter forbeforeat句句4：(13)三个一等三个一等奖：_ 句句5：(14)欢迎参加：迎参加：_ three first prizes

19、You are welcome to be there./Welcome to join us./Welcome to attend.难句翻句翻译 翻翻译下列每下列每组句子并合并成一句。句子并合并成一句。句句1：(1)为了增了增长我我们的的环保知保知识,提高英提高英语口口语,学生会将要学生会将要举办一个演一个演讲比比赛；(1)The Students Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and improve our spok

20、en English.(2)演演讲的主的主题是是“保保护环境境,节约能源能源”。(2)The theme of the contest is:“Protect our environment and save our energy”.合并：合并：The Students Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest,the theme of which/whose theme is:“Protect our environment and save our energy”to increase our knowledge abou

21、t the environment and improve our spoken English.(定定语从句从句)句句4：(1)大大赛将将评出多个出多个奖项。(1)Lots of prizes will be delivered for the contest.(2)将会有将会有3个一等个一等奖,6个二等个二等奖和和12个三等个三等奖。(2)There are three first prizes,six second and twelve third ones.合并：合并：Lots of prizes will be delivered for the contest,including

22、three first prizes,six second and twelve third ones.(介介词)Notice World Environment Day is approaching,so the Students Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest,the theme of which/whose theme is:“Protect our environment and save our energy”to increase our knowledge about the environment a

23、nd improve our spoken English.The contest will be held in the Lecture Hall on the 5th floor in the classroom building from 4:00 p.m.to 5:30 p.m.,on Friday June 5th.Those who want to participate in the contest are supposed to sign up at studentcenter before May 25th.Lots of prizes will be delivered f

24、or the contest,including three first prizes,six second and twelve third ones.Dear fellow schoolmates,you are warmly welcome to be there and thanks for your participation.The students Union能力提高能力提高 高高级句子提句子提炼：1.为了提高我了提高我们的的环保意保意识,我我们将会邀将会邀请中山大中山大学的李教授学的李教授给我我们开展一个关于开展一个关于环境境问题的的讲座座,他将会他将会给我我们讲述近年来广州的

25、述近年来广州的环境境污染染问题。In order to arouse our awareness of environmental protection/With the purpose of arousing our awareness of environmental protection,we will invite Dr.Li from Sun Yat-sen University to give us a wonderful lecture about the environment problem and/where he will also tell us about the p

26、ollution of environment in recent years in Guangzhou.2.我我们很荣幸很荣幸请来了何教授在本周五下午来了何教授在本周五下午4:00-5:00给我我们讲述关于中西方文化差异的述关于中西方文化差异的讲座座,讲座将会在学校体育座将会在学校体育馆开展。开展。2.We have the great honor to have invited Professor He to give us a wonderful lecture about the differences between eastern and western cultures this

27、 Friday afternoon,which will be held in the school stadium between 4:00 p.m.and 5:00 p.m.3.请大家做好笔大家做好笔记,这次次讲座将会帮助我座将会帮助我们为下周的演下周的演讲比比赛做好充分的准做好充分的准备。Everyone should make full notes,because this lecture can help us make good preparations for the coming speech competition next week./Everyone should mak

28、e full notes in this lecture,which can fully prepare us for the coming speech competition next week./Everyone should make full notes in this lecture so that he can be fully prepared for the coming speech competition next week.4.所有的学生将要在本周六早上所有的学生将要在本周六早上8：30在学校在学校门口集合。口集合。4.All the students should g

29、ather at the gate of our school at 8:30 a.m.课课堂堂堂堂练习练习 你你们学校正在开展学校正在开展读书月活月活动,英英语科科组举办了一个名了一个名为“青春校园青春校园”的英的英语写作大写作大赛。假。假设你你是是这个活个活动的的组织者者,请你根据以下内容写一个你根据以下内容写一个书面通知面通知,欢迎大家迎大家积极参与。极参与。参考范文参考范文 In order to promote the campus culture,our school is going to hold an English writing activity called“Youth

30、 Campus”,which also aims to arouse our interest in learning English and develop our ability in English writing.Anyone who is interested in it can attend the lecture given by Mr.He at 3:00 p.m.on Nov.2nd in the school auditorium hall,where students can learn a lot of writing skills and ask Mr.he ques

31、tions about writing.Students are encouraged to enter for the writing competition.The participants should send their own compositions to before Nov.20th and they can also know more details at student are welcome to join us,and dont miss the deadline.精精华点点评 这篇通知的内容比篇通知的内容比较多多,考生在写作的考生在写作的过程中要先思考信息点的划分

32、和句子的程中要先思考信息点的划分和句子的连接。如活接。如活动的目的有三点的目的有三点,如果考生用如果考生用in order to把三点都囊括了把三点都囊括了,这个句子就会个句子就会头重脚重脚轻,显得累得累赘,因此范文用了一个定因此范文用了一个定语从句从句which aims to do.来解决来解决这个个问题,使句子使句子显得更灵活。得更灵活。为了避免句型了避免句型结构的重复构的重复,考生可以考考生可以考虑句子的不同表达法。在鼓励学生参加活句子的不同表达法。在鼓励学生参加活动的三的三个句子中个句子中,本范文用的句型都是不一本范文用的句型都是不一样的的,如第如第二句的二句的“Anyone who

33、 is interested in it can.”(定定语从句从句)和第三句的和第三句的“Students are encouraged to.”(被被动语态)。课课外作外作外作外作业业你你们学校将要学校将要组织所有高三学生在本周末参加一次郊游所有高三学生在本周末参加一次郊游活活动。假。假设你是你是这个活个活动的的组织者者,请你根据以下内容写你根据以下内容写一个一个书面通知。面通知。活动地址活动地址黄埔古港黄埔古港活动目的活动目的(1)放松心情放松心情 (2)了解广州的历史和文化了解广州的历史和文化活动计划活动计划(1)本周六本周六4月月2日上午日上午8点在学校正门集中点在学校正门集中,乘车

34、前往乘车前往黄埔古港黄埔古港(2)到达后到达后,游览古港游览古港,参观博物馆参观博物馆,感受广州的变迁感受广州的变迁(4)午餐后，参观黄埔军校午餐后，参观黄埔军校(5)下午下午5点返程回校点返程回校温馨提示温馨提示天气预测下雨天气预测下雨,带雨伞以防万一带雨伞以防万一参考参考词汇：黄埔古港：黄埔古港 Ancient port Whampoa黄埔黄埔军校校 Whampoa Military Academy参考范文参考范文 To help us get relaxed as well as knowing more about the history and culture of Guangzho

35、u,our school is going to organize a trip for all the senior three students.We should gather at the school gate at 8:00 a.m.this Saturday,April 2nd,and then take a bus to Ancient port Whampoa.We will have a visit to the ancient port and the museum,which have witnessed the development of Guangzhou.Lat

36、er,we will pay a visit to Whampoa Military Academy after lunch and then go back to school at 5:00 p.m.It is forecasted in the weather report that it is going to rain that day,so please take umbrellas with you in case.精精华点点评 这篇通知的重点在于把活篇通知的重点在于把活动的流程的流程讲述清楚述清楚,所以考生在写作所以考生在写作过程中注意程中注意时间的用法的用法,以及以及时间过渡

37、的一些渡的一些连词,如如and then.,later.,after lunch.等。等。考生在翻考生在翻译的的过程中程中,要避免完全按要避免完全按照字面翻照字面翻译,如表达如表达“放松心情放松心情”时,考生若考生若按照字面翻按照字面翻译为relax our mood就是中式就是中式英英语,因此可以用因此可以用get relaxed来表达。来表达。另外另外“感受广州的感受广州的变迁迁”也比也比较难翻翻译,考生可以采考生可以采取迂回方法，把取迂回方法，把这个意思改个意思改为“黄埔古港和博物黄埔古港和博物馆见证了广州的了广州的发展展”,那就可以用那就可以用witness the development of Guangzhou这个短个短语清楚地把意清楚地把意思表达出来。思表达出来。名名师提示：考生要意提示：考生要意识到一个事到一个事实,并不是每并不是每个中文或短个中文或短语都能直接翻都能直接翻译成英文成英文,也不是每个也不是每个英文或短英文或短语都能直接翻都能直接翻译成中文。因此成中文。因此,在翻在翻译的的过程中程中,一定要注意灵活性一定要注意灵活性。Thank you!