九年级写作-生动性.ppt

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1、记叙文记叙文根据中文内容和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的英文周记。所给英文提示词语供选用。上周，你在你家小区(neighborhood)里看见了一只走失的狗(a stray dog)。请你写写你是怎么帮助它的，有何感受。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。提示词语：come across,food and drinks,miss his owner,a Dog-Found-Notice,be happy东城期末考题东城期末考题:Sample 1：Last week,when I was walking on the street in my neighborhood,I saw a

2、 stray dog.It seemed so dirty and skinny that I felt sorry.I gave it some food and drinks,and it finished them immediately.And then I wrote a“Dog-Found-Notice”and handed them out.One hour later,a lady called me!She thanked me a lot and took the dog away.如何实现语言的如何实现语言的生动性生动性Fortunately,his owner saw

3、my notice and.Ultimately,the owner called me.Apparently,the stray dog was in desperate need of drinks and food.Seeing the deep sadness and loneliness in his eyes,I speculated that he was a stray dog.Seeing the back view of the dog and its owner,I felt really happy.Then I put up a on the wall,hoping

4、his owner would be able to see it.The dog followed his owner,wagging his short tail happily.形容词，副词的准形容词，副词的准确使用确使用现在分词和过去分现在分词和过去分词的使用词的使用To help him find its owner,I decided to It was from this experience that I realize the importance of helping others.Something moving in the corner caught my sight

5、.She thanked me a lot,which made me feel really pleasant.“Youre welcome!”I returned her a smile.This experience prove the truth of a saying,“Happiness lies in rendering help to others.”强调句型的使用强调句型的使用非限定性定语从句非限定性定语从句的使用的使用摘抄积累句型的使用摘抄积累句型的使用动词不定式的使用动词不定式的使用Good sample：Although this winter was extremel

6、y cold,I felt very warm in my heart for I had given a helping hand to a little dog.Last Sunday,it was snowing heavily.Though covered with many clothes,I still couldnt help shivering walking in the neighborhood.Suddenly,I came across a little stray dog.He looked weak with his eyes closed.And I was af

7、raid it would die in the bad condition.In order to save it,Good sample：I held the dog gently,and then ran home as fast as I could and gave him some food and drinks.By chance,I noticed a ring on his neck,which showed he had his own home.In order to help him find it,I put up a“Dog-Found-Notice”and rec

8、eived a call full of gratitude from his owner three days later.Before leaving with his owner,he stopped and waved his tail.It seemed that he was very appreciative of my help.Happiness and warmth crowded me at that moment.I would never forget that day because it was on that day that I found the meaning and importance of helping others.