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1、Week 9感谢信M o n d a y满分范文晨诵满分优范本感悟作文并背诵Dear Anne,（说明写信目的）I am writing to convey my gratitude for your kind help and care during my stay inDenmark,without which I wouldnt have enjoyed it so much.（感谢的事由）Diy;派&碗州情戊帆）期 城ble room,delicious meals and especially your friendlyfamily all made me feel at home.

2、Moreover,guided by nou,I had a chance to visit some places of interest andbe exposed to such a unique分 词 作 状 赳 Iture as well as beautiful scenery.Thanks t。your generous help,I do believe that I will have abetter understandingf youptry and culture.（再次表达感谢，提出邀请）Thanks again for your kind help and I am

3、 sincerely looking_forwardo showing you around China inthe near future.All the to you.Yours,Li Hua假如你是李华，在丹麦访问学习的一周里你住在Anne家里。在即将回国之际，请你给她写一封感谢信。要卢如下：L简述你的丹麦之行：2.感谢她为你所做的一切；3.向她发出邀请。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：丹 麦Denmark仿写再借鉴仿照范本中的句式补充范文并背诵Dear Mr.and Mrs.Smith,_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

4、_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ （我写信向你们表达我对你们真诚的谢意）for your kind help and care during my stay in A m erica,（没有你们的帮助和关心我不会玩得那么开心）.During the winter holiday,you took care of m e.（你们的爱让我舒适自在）.Besides,you showed me around New York and the visit to Times Square w

5、as great,which leftme a good memory and helped me learn more about American culture.（多亏你们慷慨的帮助，我相信我更了解你们的国家和文化）._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _（再次感谢你们友好的帮助，我真诚盼望在不久的将来带你们游览

6、北京）.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua假设你是红星中学高三年级学生李华。今年寒假你参加了学校组织的赴美游学活动。请给接待你的史密斯夫妇写一封感谢信，内容包括：1.感谢对你的照顾；2.感谢带你体验西方文化;3.邀请他们来中国游玩。注意：词数不少于100。T uesday题型素材积累素材9感恩与道谢覃满分词,express/convey v t.表达；appreciate v t.感谢；accept v t.接受；appreciation n.感单词 谢；gratitude n.感激；grateful ad j.感激的；assistance 帮

7、助；selfless/unselfish_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 的无私的；generous。步慷慨的雷、五 take the opportunity 利用这次机会；be grateful/thankful to s b.感激某人；thanks_ 20 to 多亏了.；beyond words/description 难以描述背满分句型夺人眼球开头句1.Pm extremely grateful/thankful to you for your unselfish assistance during.感谢你在期间给予我无私的帮助。2.I wish to thank you from

8、the bottom of my heart for.我从心底感谢你，因为3.I*m writing to convey/express my gratitude for your kind/generous help during.我写信感谢您在期间对我友好/慷慨的帮助。4.I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help andassistance我向，借此机会表达对您给予我们及时的帮助和支持的感谢。5.I would like to convey in t

9、his letter my heartfelt thanks to you for your selfless help.在信中我为你无私的帮助向您表达我诚挚的谢意。6.On behalf of,I would like to extend my sincere gratitude for your help.我谨代表对你的帮助表示真诚的感谢。亮点出彩篇中句1.You reallv added greatly to my convenience and pleasure of the whole trip.您真的给我整个行程带来了极大的方便与快乐。2.I appreciate it more

10、than I can say./I can never thank you enough.感激之情，无以言表。3.Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping us to.非常感谢您为帮助我们所做的一切。4.Thanks to your generous/selfless/kind help,without which I wouldnt have made so great progress.多亏你慷慨的/无私的/友好的帮助，没有你的帮助，我就不会取得这么大的进步。韵味无穷结尾句1.It was kind and genero

11、us of you to do this for me,and I appreciate it more than I can say.你对我如此慷慨，我真是感激不尽。2.I wish there were a better word than“thanks“to express mv appreciation for your generous help.任何语言都不能表达我的真挚谢意。3.Thanks again for your kind help./Again,I would like to express our sincere thanks to you.对你的好意相助再次表示感谢

12、。/再次向你表示我们衷心的感谢。4.I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repav your kindness by.如果我有机会通过报答你的好意，我会非常高兴。5.My true gratitude/appreciation is beyond any words/description.任何语言都不能表达我诚挚的谢意。学写满分句1.感谢你在我逗留北京期间给予我的及时帮助。2.多亏了你慷慨的帮助，否则我就不能按时完成工作。_ Wednesd a y满分模板巧用题型微攻略考情分析题型解读写作步骤感谢信贴近学生生活和学

13、习，虽近几年高考未涉及，但应在学习中注意其写作方法感谢信是对收信人的某一行为表示感谢的信件，通常用于收到别人的邀请、受到别人的帮助或鼓励时第一步：表明写作意图，诚挚地表达谢意第二步：写明感谢原因，可以写具体事例第三步:再次向对方表示感谢并表达回报的愿望满分巧模板Dear,I am writing to convey/express my sincere gratitude for（感谢的原因）.If it had not been for your kindness and help in（对方给予的具体的帮助），I wouldnt have（没有对方帮助时的后果）.During the tr

14、ip/week I（感受）.I shall never f or get （事件）in my life.It was you who（给出细节）.Many thanks for all thethings you have done in helping us（细节事件）.Thanks again for your kind help.I will be more tlian pleased i I have the印portunity to repay your kindness by（所做的回报）.Yours sincerely,Li HuaA诚挚地表明谢意，利用虚拟语气句式增强文章气势，

15、具体写明获得对方帮助的几个事例最后一句点出谢意。A再次表达诚挚的谢意，用repay 一词表达回报的愿望:模板示范文Dear Mr.Smith,I am writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your generous help.If it had not been for yourencouragement and valuable advice,I wouldnt have made so great progress in my English learning.During your teaching in China,yo

16、u were always willing to help me patiently with my English.It was youwho encouraged me to be confident to express myself in English.Also many thanks for your lectures aboutwestern cultures,from which I benefited a lot.Thanks again for your kind help.I will be more than pleased if I have the opportun

17、ity to repay yourkindness by showing you around China.Yours sincerely,Li Hua亲爱的史密斯先生：我写信向您表达您对我慷慨帮助的谢意。要不是您的鼓励和宝贵的建议，我的英语学习就不会有这么大的进步。在中国教学期间，您总是耐心地帮我学习英语，是您鼓励我用英语自信地表达自己。同样感谢您的西方文化课程，从中我受益很多。对您的好意相助再次表示感激。如果我有机会通过带您游览中国报答您的好意，我会非常高兴。李华Thursday考场作文研析试考场好题假定你是李华，你所在的“中国剪纸文化的传承(inheritance)和发展”课题研究小组刚

18、刚获得今年的“中国大智慧创新研究挑战赛(China Thinks Big)”二等奖。请你写信给你的外籍教师史密斯先生，感谢他一直以来对你们的支持与帮助。要点如下：1.比赛时间：4 月 182 0 日；2.比赛地点：哈佛(Harvard)上海中心；3.课题与收获；4.感谢与祝愿。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.信的开头与结尾已为你写好。，Dear Mr.Smith,I am Li Hua,a student of yours_Yours,Li Hua(请参考素材9“感恩与道谢”，素 材 15“文化与风俗”，素 材 11“重要性、方便、可能性”)练考场审题第 一 步

19、 认 真 审 题 组 织 要 点体裁话题人称时态要点书信感谢第一人称一般现在时分享获奖消息,表达感激之情介绍活动的益处并希望得到老师的指导再次表示感谢第 二 步 遣 词 造 句 设 计 亮 点1.我写信与你分享我们研究小组获得中国大智慧创新研究挑战赛二等奖的好消息。锤炼词汇：Im writing to with you the good news.Our research group has just won the secondprize in China Thinks Big.高级句式（同位语从句）：Im writing to with you the good news our rese

20、arch grouphas just won the second prize in China Thinks Big.2.它让我们更了解中国传统文化，也增加了我们想做更多事情以促进传承和发展的自豪感。锤炼词汇：It us to know more about our traditional cultures.It also increases our sense of prideto do more to its inheritance and development.高级句式（用 not only.but also连句）：_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

21、_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _（用 not only.but also 倒装句）：_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _第 三 步 美 化 成 文 誉 写 清 晰Handwriting also counts!手写满分句满分句 1:Without your continuous help and encouragement,I

22、 think we wouldnt have achieved so much.学写句1：没有你的鼓励，我就不会有这么大的进步。满分句 2：We do hope you can give us further instructions.学写句2：我真希望你能接受我真诚的谢意。F rid a y新鲜作文集训Writing 1感谢师恩 2017九江十校联考假定你是李华，上个月Professor Smith曾推荐你去芝加哥大学(Chicago University)深造学习，现在你已被该大学录取。请你给Professor Smith写一封em ail,表达对他的感激之情。主要内容：1.表达感激；2.

23、描述Professor Smith提供的帮助；3.表示会努力学习以回报老师的帮助。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Professor Smith,Yours truly,Li Hua（请参考素材9“感恩与道谢”）Writing 2感谢英语老师假定你叫李华，就读于北京大学。请根据以下提示，用英文给曾教过你的英语老师王老师写一封感谢信，表达你对他的思念与感激之情。内容应包括：1.感谢老师曾经的关心和帮助；2.中肯评价老师的教学方法；3.对老师表达祝福。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.信的开头

24、和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Mr.Wang,How are you recently?Im glad to write to you_Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Hua（请参考素材9“感恩与道谢”，素 材 11“重要性、方便、可能性”）W eekend循序写作训练灵活好用的名词性从句（一）记写作公式|写作公式1 3 引导词+主语从句+谓语/It（形式主语）+谓语+引导词+主语从句 What impresses/surprises sb.most is that最令某人印象深刻/吃惊的是.It is important/necessary that.重

25、要的/必要的是.What impresses me most is that he runs very f a s t.最让我们印象深刻的是他跑得很快。It is important that we never lose h e a rt.重要的是我们从未失去信心。|写作公式1 4 主语+及物动词/系动词+形容词+宾语从句 I wonder whether/if.我想知道是否.主语+1 ike/prefer/appreciate/disiike it+从句.主语+find/feel/considei7believe/make it+that 从句（重庆卷作文）1 wonder if you c

26、ould offer me more about the activity.我想知道你是否能提供给我更多有关活动的信息。I feel it a pity that I havent been to the party.我没去聚会，感到非常遗憾。练写作技能I.以往考生典型病句诊断1.That you said was wrong.2.It is a pity you missed such a good party.3.I think that necessary we take regular exercise.4.He asked how I was getting along well w

27、ith my studies.5.Tom said he came up with the plan and it was practical.6.From that I know of him I should say that he is honest.II.根据上面句子的正确表达进行一对一再练习1 .他所说的话合情合理。2.很遗憾我没能参加会议。3.我认为保持自信很重要。4.他问我和别人相处如何。5.他说他喜欢读书而且对音乐感兴趣。6.从我对此事的了解我可以说他是对的。in.用宾语从句或主语从句补充下面的感谢信，并背诵成文Dear John,This is Li Hua,one of t

28、he students you taught during the last summer holidays.Im writing to thank you foryour kindness.（我们知道你来自美国，宾语从句）,and this is the first time that youhave come to China.（我想告诉你我们都非常喜欢你的教学,宾语从句）.Not only have we learned how to speak English through a variety ofactivities,weve also learned a lot about We

29、stern cultures,which benefits us a lot.It is because your classes wereso lively and interesting that we began to love learning English.Thanks to your hard work,we spent a meaningfulsummer holiday._（所有的学生和他们的家长都感激你为我们所做的一切，宾语从句）,and（我们希望你将来能来看我们，主语从句）.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua补充练一点纠正下面感而淄中的错误（共 有 10处错

30、误）Dear Mr.Mike,This is the last class that you will give us and I would like to,on the behalf of the whole class,express ourthanks to you for teaching us so good in the past two years.None of our students here will forget your humour and diligently prepared classes,that are always interesting.You sh

31、ows respect for us.No matter what poor we may be in English,you are always patient.You are alwaysfriendly with us very much.Apart from teach,your great enthusiasm for Chinese culture has always impressed us.Your interest inlearning Chinese and cooking Chinese food has brought you real pleasure and much happy.We strongly feel sorry to see you go,but we wish you the best of luck.We hope that you come back to visit us some day in the future!Yours sincerely,Li Hua