高中英语高考读后续写素材（心理描写+动作描写）.doc

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1、高考英语读后续写素材一、心理描写1.素材1.与“喜悦和满意”相关的词块a bright/shining smile灿烂的微笑a mixture of excitement and happiness既兴奋又开心burst into laughter/burst out laughing突然大笑起来be wild with joy/delight欣喜若狂be joyful about/at/over对很高兴be in high spirits情绪高涨be pleased beyond description快乐难以言表light up喜逐颜开be content/satisfied with对满

2、意be delighted at对很高兴with pleasure非常乐意2.与“悲伤和烦恼”相关的词块be sad at heart心里悲伤be down in spirits情绪低落an ocean of sadness悲伤的海洋burst into tears/burst out crying大哭起来sob啜泣be clouded with grief阴沉的悲伤be in low spirits情绪低落fall into despair陷入绝望feel depressed/discouraged感到沮丧/泄气have a worried look愁眉苦脸3.与“生气和怨怒”相关的词块be

3、 very angry at对很生气feel angry/annoyed感到恼怒/生气be seized by anger充满愤怒be fuming with rage大发雷霆tremble with anger愤怒得颤抖a look of burning anger愤怒的一眼glare at sb.怒视flare up勃然大怒be in a rage一怒之下be mad at对生气2.原则1.落实“细微处”描写在描写人物心理活动时,一定要突出细节,所有的感情都体现在“细微处”,所以尽量不用笼统的词,如smile,cry等,而用相关的细节性词汇或词组,例如:Lily smiled happil

4、y.Lily wore a shining smile on her face.分析:句中“smile”是一个笼统的描述微笑的词汇,而句中使用了wore a shining smile,用词组的形式更加突出细节,展示了细微和精致的“微笑”。2.体现“多样性”结构在进行人物心理描写时,尽量避免平铺直叙,可以多采用如非谓语动词的形式,作为谓语动作的伴随状态,从而使得描写到位,并体现语法结构的多样性。如:Her eyes were filled with tears,and sheoffered her sincere thanks to the man.Tears filling her eyes

5、,she offered hersincere thanks to the man.分析:句在描写心理活动“哭泣”时,用到了Her eyes were filled with tears。而句则把这句改成了独立主格结构,运用了Tears filling her eyes,更显得描写的细致,同时也体现了句式的多样化,展示了高超的语言运用能力。3.展示“丰富化”修辞除了选择细致的心理描写词汇和多样化的句式表达外,提升语言层次的另外一种方式是多使用修辞方法,例如:The smile on her face shone like a diamond.I feel like I am floating

6、in an ocean of sadness.分析:句中,把“微笑”比喻成“像钻石一样闪闪发光”;而句中,把“悲伤”比喻成“漂浮在悲伤的海洋里”,展示了用修辞来体现细节描写的丰富。二、动作描写1.脚上动作1. In no time Mack jump into the car.麦克飞快地跳进车里。2.She paused suddenly and stared at me.他突然停下来盯着我看。3.He sprang to his feet and rushed to give me a bear hug.他突然跳起来，冲过来给了我一个熊抱。4.The cat shot across the

7、garden.猫飞快地穿过花园。5.Stevekeeps jogging around the garden on a regular basis.史蒂夫经常在花园里慢跑。6.My sister bought some ice-cream and strolled to home.我妹妹买了些冰淇淋，然后慢悠悠地走回家。7.Jane alwaysgot home at midnight and crept back to her room.简总是到深夜才回家，然后悄摸摸地回到房间。8.We leaped over the stream.我们从小溪跳过去。9.She managed to cli

8、mb onto it and waited pationtly.她尽力爬上去并且耐心地等待着。10.A man in black is following behind bill.一个穿黑衣男子正在尾随比尔。11.Wandering around the Central Park is not a bad way to relax us from heavy homework.在中央公园逛一逛也不失为一个帮助我们从繁忙课业重放松一下的好方法。12.We were stumbling around in the dark looking for a candle.我在黑暗中跌跌撞撞，四处寻找蜡烛

9、。13.She jumped to her feet when she heard this amazing news.当她听到这个惊人的消息，她突然跳起来。14.She dragged her feet as she reluctantly followed her parents.她缓慢地移动着他的脚步，当他不情愿地跟着他父母。15.Myfeet slipped as I was about to shoot and I missed the ball.我正要投篮时滑倒了，然后没投中。2.哭的动作1.tears n.眼泪be in tears哭了burst into tears 放声大哭h

10、ave tears in ones eyes 热泪盈眶；哭唧唧be filled with tears泪流满面be wet with tears泪流满面be in floods of tears 大哭；泪如泉涌move sb. to tears使某人感动至流泪mist n.薄雾; 水汽 vi.&vt. 泪水模糊His eyes(were) misted with tears.(mist作动词是既可以及物也可以不及物，所以加不加be动词都算对)be dimmed by tears眼睛因泪水而模糊leave sb to ones tears 让某人独自流泪sb. melt into tears 某

11、人开始泪流满面tears rolldown ones cheeks 眼泪从脸颊滑落bring tears to somebodys eyes 哭了be on the verge of tears 快要哭了2.water v.眼含泪水make sb. water 让某人哭起来His eyes watered fromthick smoke.它的双眼因浓烟而充满泪水3.cry v.&n.哭泣have a good cry 好好哭一场4.weep v.&n.无声地流泪(通常因悲伤)began / start to weep uncontrollably 不由自主地哭起来have a weep 痛哭一

12、场laugh and weep all at once 哭笑不得5.sob v.呜咽；啜泣；呜呜地哭sob ones heart out 痛彻心扉地哭The room was silent except for her sobbing.房间里静悄悄的，只有她的啜泣声。6.snivel /snvl/ v.(令人厌烦的)哭诉；一把鼻涕一把泪的哭Billy started tosnivel. His mother smacked his hand. 比利抽抽搭搭地哭了起来。妈妈在他的手上打了一下。7.squall /skwl/ v.嚎啕大哭；大声啼哭There was an infantsquall

13、ing in the back of the church. 有个婴儿在教堂后部大声啼哭。3.笑的动作1.smile v.&n.笑give a soft smile莞尔一笑（等上）give a charming smile迷人（醉人）的微笑smile at sb. / sth.对.笑smile with relief 宽慰地笑smile sweetly 嫣然一笑smile faintly微微一笑smile broadly咧嘴一笑2.Laugh v.&n. 大笑laugh a hearty laugh 开怀大笑laugh oneself to death笑得要死laugh oneselfs he

14、ad off笑掉大牙give a horse laugh 一阵狂笑burst into laughter突然大笑起来burst into gales of laughter 突然狂笑起来explode with laughter 哄堂大笑roars of laughter 大笑laugh it off 一笑而过3.Grin 露齿而笑；咧着嘴笑grin amiably 亲切地微笑grin with delight高兴的咧嘴而笑grinfrom ear to ear 笑得合不拢嘴grin a welcom 咧嘴一笑以表欢迎sheepish/ip/ adj.尴尬的，难为情的He repliedwith a wry smile.他苦笑着回答道。4.roar v.放声大笑；喧哗set the table in a roar 使哄堂大笑roarwith laughter 哄然大笑5.beam v.笑容满面beam at sb. 对某人笑beam from ear to ear 开怀大笑；笑容满面beam with joy 笑逐颜开beam with satisfaction 满意地微笑6.嘲笑laugh at 嘲笑sneer at 嘲笑；讥笑；嗤笑jeer at 嘲笑；奚落make fun of sb. 嘲笑某人4