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1、专题1 7书面表达序号内容训 练 1Writing 1 8 5 年真题过关训练2Writing 9-24 一模拟能力提升（天津各区模拟试题）训 练1 5年真题过关Writing 1 （2021年天津第一次）假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了 最美中华栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括：（1）该地方的基本情况（如名称、地理位置等）；（2）该地方的特色（如文化、景点等）；（3）你对该地方的印象和感受。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。A Beautiful Place in ChinaMarch

2、 19,2021By Li Jin 答案A Beautiful Place in ChinaMarch 19,2021By Li JinSichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China.It enjoys many world-famous places of interest,such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Provi

3、nce.What is the most impressive isits many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes.Whafs more,walking in the nature reserve,you have a chanceto see rare animals like giant pandas,golden monkeys.There are also many species of rare plants protected here.Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrig

4、ation Project.It dates from over 2,000 years ago.However,it is stillplaying an important part in irrigation today.Im sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigou as well as the constructionDujiangyan Irrigation Project.【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求给英文网站 最美中华栏目投稿，介绍介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。【详解

5、】第一步：审题体裁：说明文时态：一般现在时结构：总分法第一段是文章的总起段，说明四川省有很多著名的景点；第二段介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程，第三部分说明你对该地方的印象和感受。要求：1.说明四川省有很多著名的景点四川的地理位置：中国西南部著名景点：九寨沟、都江堰灌溉工程2.介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程九寨沟是自然保护区给人印象最深的层层叠叠的瀑布和五颜六色的湖泊，有很多珍稀动植物都江堰灌溉工程始于2000多年前，现在仍然起着灌溉的作用3.你对该地方的印象和感受：九寨沟的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造会让你惊叹第二步:列提纲(重点词组)be located in；world-famous；pla

6、ces of interest；a nature reserve；impressive；multi-level waterfalls；havea chance to do.；rare animals；scenic spot；date from；play an important part in；be amazed by第三步：连词成句(1)Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China.(2)It enjoys many world-famous places of interest,such as Jiuzhaigou an

7、d Dujiangyan Irrigation project.(3)Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province.(4)What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes.(5)Walking in the nature reserve,you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas,golden mon

8、keys.(6)There are many species of rare plants protected here.(7)Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.(8)It dates from over 2,000 years ago.(9)It is still playing an important part in irrigation today.(10)Tm sure the visitors will be amazed by its constniction.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句

9、，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇1.表递进关系:what is more2.表转折关系：however3.表示列举：such as,likeWriting 2(2021年天津第二次)假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：(1)表示感谢并问候；(2)计划与家人一起做的事情；(3)你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。注意：(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear N

10、ancy,Yours,Li Jin【答案】Dear Nancy,I am very glad to receive your E-mail.I am very grateful to you and your family for taking care of me duringmy study tour in the UK.And wish you all the best.Now that I have finished my high school studies,my parents and 1 are going to travel to Beijing.Im going toTia

11、nanmen to see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall.In addition,I want to go to Qinghua Garden to enjoy theelegant demeanor of famous universities.I have decided to register for the computer major.With the rapiddevelopment of the Internet industry,the high-paying employment in IT industry attrac

12、ts more and more people tojoin the Internet tide.Before choosing,consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions forconsultation.Only with a clear goal,we will have targeted learning in the future,which will be more efficient.Yours,Li Jin【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国

13、学生Chris家，他母 亲 Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：表示感谢并问候；计划与家人一起做的事情；你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。【详解】1.词汇积累照顾：take care oflook after另 夕 卜，此 夕 卜：in additiombesides-whats more雇佣：employ-hire既然：now that since2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：With the rapid development of the Internet industry,the high-paying

14、employment in IT industry attracts moreand more people to join the Internet tide.拓展句：As the Internet industry develops rapidly,the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more andmore people to join the Internet tide.Writing 3（2020年天津第一次）假设你是晨光中学的李津。下周你校将与英国友好校举办一场在线会议，探讨如何利用网络学习英语，请你根据以下提示撰写

15、一篇发言稿：（1）介绍你是如何利用网络学习英语的（至少写出两点）（2）简单谈谈你对利用网络学习英语的看法（3）请友好校的学生分享他们的经验。注意:(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Good morning,dear friends.My name is Li Jin.Id like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learnEnglish on the Internet.Thank you.【答案】Good morning,dear friends.My name

16、is Li Jin.Id like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learnEnglish on the Internet.First,there are a lot of free resources related to English on the Internet,so I learn English by reading books ornews,listening to postcodes and by watching streaming videos of TV and film.Besides,the Interne

17、t gives me thechance to communicate in real-time with native speakers using instant messaging,video calling and online forums,which improves my spoken and written English.Based on my own experience,learning English online is really a great way for English learners.But I have toremind that not everyt

18、hing on the Internet is right and we should learn to identify the wrong infonnation.In the end,I sincerely hope that you can share your experience of learning English on the Internet.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇关于如何利用网络学习英语的发言稿。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所

19、写内容。要求：(1)介绍你是如何利用网络学习英语的(至少写出两点)(2)简单谈谈你对利用网络学习英语的看法(3)请友好校的学生分享他们的经验。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）resource;be related to;in real-time;native speaker;instance messaging;video calling;online forum;a great way;identify;wrong information;shareo第三步：连词成句There are a lot of free resources related to English on the Intern

20、et,so 1 learn English by reading books or news,listening to postcodes and by watching streaming videos of TV and film.The Internet gives me the chance to communicate in real-time with native speakers using instant messaging,videocalling and online forums,which improves my spoken and written English.

21、Based on my own experience,learning English online is really a great way for English learners.I have to remind that not everything on the Internet is right and we should learn to identify the wrong information.I sincerely hope that you can share your experience of learning English on the Internet.根据

22、提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second.And then,Finally,In the end,At last2.表并列补充关系：What is more,Besides,Moreover,Furthennore,In addition As well as,not only.but（also）,including,3.表转折对比关系：However,On the contrary,but,Although+clause（从句）,In spite o

23、f+n/doing,On the onehand.,On the other hand.Some.,while others.,as for,so.that.4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,As a result连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改Writing 4（2020年天津第二次）假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6 月 8 日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍有关情况，内容包括：（1）成人礼活动内容（成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫

24、事边录像）；（2）对活动的感受；（3）对自己未来的展望。注意：（1）词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行方连贯;(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：成人礼 the coming-of age ceremony新冠脑炎COVID-F9Dear Chris,Im so glad to hear from you.Yours,Li Jin【答案】Dear Chris,I am so glad to hear from you.The coming-of-age ceremony was held in our school on June 8dl this month.Dur

25、ing the coming-of-age ceremony,the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult,reviewing thegrowth period that we had experienced.After that,we all watched the video of alumnus fighting against theepidemic.Through the activity,what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility a

26、nd make us stronger and moredetermined.When faced with the difficulties and failures,I must overcome them.In the future,I will be a gooddoctor to heal the wounded and rescue the dying,devoting myself to my work.Best wishes!Yours,Li Jin【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假

27、如你是晨光中学的李津。你校于6 月 8 号举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友C hris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给 C hris回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)2.对活动的感受。3.对自己未来的展望。第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。第二步:布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段:成人礼活动内容（成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等）。第二段:对活动的感受；对自己未来的展望。第三段，表达期望。第三步:确定关键词汇和短语:congratulate sb on s

28、th.,be faced with,heal the wounded and rescue the dying,devote oneself to doing sth.；第四步:确定较为高级的句子:lhal引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语During the coming-of-age ceremony,theheadmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult,reviewing the growth period that we had experienced,that弓 I 导的表语从句 Through the activity,wh

29、at I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make usstronger and more determined.时间状语从句的省略句 When faced with the difficulties and failures,I mustovercome them.第五步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:After that,besides,however.第六步:注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。Writing 5（2019年天津第一次）假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的“读书月”活动，

30、你校英语社团的微信公众号开展以“Lets Read”为题的征文活动。要求同学们根据个人的阅读体会，从所读过的书籍中选定一种类型，推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿，文章内容应包括：（1）推荐书籍的类型及特点；（2）推荐的理由。参考词汇：科幻小说science fiction侦探小说detective novel魔幻小说fantasy传记文学biography科普读物popular science注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）所选书籍类型不限于参考词汇给出的范围；（3）内容充实、行文连贯；（4）题目已给出，不计入总词数。March 22,2019By Li Jin【答案】March 22,2019

31、Today Id like to introduce a book to you which 1 like much-The Five Thousand Years History,whichbelongs to history books.The author selects important and famous figures and events in the history of China,which he organizes andcuts them according to historical materials,and writes in modern language

32、to make them easy to understand.This book opens a history gate to me and I feel more confident about my own country.I am proud that I am aChinese and I will make more effort to build a more powerful country and let Chinese history more brilliant.I think everyone should read it and get this wonderful

33、 experience.I do hope you*ll like it!Enjoy reading!By Li Jin【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇英语征文。【详解】第 1 步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇英语征文；假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的“读书月”活动，你校英语社团的微信公众号开展以“Lets Read”为题的征文活动。要求同学们根据个人的阅读体会，从所读过的书籍中选定一种类型，推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿，文章内容应包括：（1）推荐书籍的类型及特点；（2）推荐的理由。人称应使用第一、三人称，时态应为一般现在时。第 2 步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：introd

34、uce a book to you（给你推荐一本书），belong to（属于），author（作者）等。第 3 步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第 4 步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。Writing 6（2019年天津第二次）假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师 C hris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学

35、生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件：你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容;希望从中有何收获。注意：词数不少于100；可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。Dear Chris,Im Li Jim,a student at Chenguang High School.Thank you for your time.Yours,Li Jin【答案】Dear Chris,Im Li Jim,a student at Chenguang High School.It?s our great plea

36、sure to have you visit our school and givea lecture on western art during the coming summer vacation.When it comes to my suggestions,I am quite interested in western music,and expect that you could deliverthe lecture on this topic.Served as a bridge,western music provides us teenagers with the oppor

37、tunity to broadenour horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities.It also gives us strength and hope when we areovercoming difficulties.I would appreciate it if you could take my advice,and I hope that I can gain more knowledge through thelecture.Looking forward to your early repl

38、y.Thank you for your time.Yours,Li Jin【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英方教师Chris写信，就一个有关西方艺术的讲座内容给出意见。【详解】1.词汇积累做演讲：give a lecture+make a speech提供：provide sb.with sth.refer sb.sth.机会：opportunitychance采纳建议:take ones advice follow ones advice2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Served as a bridge,western music provides us teenagers w

39、ith the opportunity to broaden our horizons andhave a better understanding on culture diversities.拓展句：Western music,which is served as a bridge,provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden ourhorizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities.Writing 7（2018年天津第一次）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。

40、你在某网站的论坛上读到一位名为C hris的外国学生发的帖子，得知他有意来中国的大学学习。请根据以下提示给C hris留言：（1）鼓励他来中国留学；（2）说明来华留学的好处（如：加深对中国的了解，对个人发展的益处等）；（3）表示愿意进一步提供帮助。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。Any suggestions?Posted on Mar.22d,20189:00 PMChrisAustraliaIts time to make a decision.Pm wonderingif I should go to China

41、for college.【答案】Hi Chris,RepK to ChrisPosted on Mar.23?201810:00 AMLi JinChinaHi：Chris.I am happy to learn that you are considering coming to China for college education.I encourage you to cometo China for further education for the following reasons.First,not only can you leam Chinese language but a

42、lso you can know more about Chinese culture,which willbenefit you a lot in your future career.In addition to this,you can appreciate the fascinating scenery of China inyour holidays,which will leave an unforgettable impression on you.Should you need any more help,please donthesitate to contact me.I

43、am looking forward to seeing you in China as soon as possible.YoursWang Jin【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写给C hris留言。【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你在某网站的论坛上读到一位名为C hris的外国学生发的帖子，得知他有意来中国的大学学习。请根据以下提示给C hris留言：（1）鼓励他来中国留学；（2）说明来华留学的好处（如：加深对中国的了解，对个人发展的益处等）；（3）表示愿意进一步提供帮助。第二，人称为第一人称和第二人称。第三，

44、时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，鼓励他来中国留学。第二段，说明来华留学的好处（如：加深对中国的了解，对个人发展的益处等）：表示愿意进一步提供帮助。第三段，表达期望。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语：benefit,unforgettable impression,encourage sb to do sth,appreciate thefascinating scenery of China,hesitate to do sth.第四步：确定较为高级的句子:which引导的非限制性定语从句First,not only

45、can you learn Chinese languagebut also you can know more about Chinese culture,which will benefit you a lot in your future career,that 弓 I 导的宾语从句 I am happy to learn that you are considering coming to China for college education.第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接：First,In addition to,Finally.第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，

46、避免划线，乱擦。Writing 8（2018年天津第二次）假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7 月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。（1）比赛的时间、地点；（2）邀请他的原因；（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics Com

47、petitionDear Chris,I have good news to tell you._Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin【答案】略【详解】试题分析：本篇书面要求写一封邀请信。写作的时候要注意以下几点：一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：I.代表兴趣小组发出邀请；2.介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排；3.说明邀请他的原因，包括Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖：4.告诉他训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。二、写作时注意准确运用时态，对于本文来说，以一般将来时为主，上下文意思连贯

48、，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。点睛：书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。考生写完之后要检查是否有语法错误，看能否运用所学的知识将简单句变为复杂句，当然，没有把握的句子不要写。训练2模拟能力提升(天津各区模拟试题)Passage 9(2022天津红桥二模)假设你是晨光中学的李津，你的英国笔友M汰 e 发邮件祝贺2022年北京冬奥会成功举行，并且告诉你说，很多英国人通过奥运

49、更多地了解了中国，希望到中国来看一看；他也计划寒假时到北京旅游。请你写邮件回复M汰 e,并给他提些建议。要点如下：(1)注意气候：(2)注意交通安全：(3)有关风俗习惯的建议。注意：(1)词数不少于100;(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Mike,Looking forward to seeing you.Yours,Li Jin【答案】Dear Mike,Hardly could I contain my excitement when I was informed that many English people wanted to l

50、earn moreabout China after the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics.You said in your letter that you would come to Beijing totravel.Since your customs are quite different from ours,Id like to give you some advice to make your stay heresafe and comfortable.First,it is quite cold here in winter,so youd better