书面表达之读后续写（解析版）-备战2021高考英语系列之3年高考2年模拟1年原创.pdf

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1、2021版3 年高考2 年模拟1 年原创精品系列专题3 1书面表达之读后续写类考支颗州2021年高考命题预测】预测一话题与考生的生活实际密切相关。书面表达提供的写作情景比较真实，写作的话题与考生的校园生活、成长经历、个人情感、学习活动等内容密切相关，关注考生的情感、态度和价值观，能够充分考查考生的独立思考能力和创新精神。预测二 读后续写仍然以充满正能量的故事为续写的前提，让考生充分发挥想象，构思出一个活灵活现的人物故事。考点定1（2021考纲解读】读后续写是随着我国高考改革由教育部考试中心研制的英语高考新题型，2016年 1 0 月在浙江省首次使用。该题型通过读写结合，检测学生的英语书面语言理

2、解与表达能力。要求学生能够梳理故事文体的结构、分析故事发展的线索、想像故事发展的情节以及续写故事的发展和结局。读后续写考题，“提供一段3 5 0 词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容和所给段落开头语进行续 写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文从试题结构看，读后续写评价的是书面理解能力和书面表达能。因此，在写作之前，首先读懂文本，理清故事情节，然后构思故事的发展和结局。主要按照以下四个步骤来写：第一步：通读文本，提取线索词和信息句，写出每段段落大意。第二步：根据文本每段内容，结合所给续写部分的首句，构思完整的故事情节。第三步：根据续写部分所提供的首句，

3、写出续写部分每段的段落大意，围绕续写部分的段落大意进行合理的细节描写。第四步：润色成篇。三年高考【三年高考】18、19、20年高考试题及其解析2020年高考试题【2020 浙江卷】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。One fall,my wife Elli and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears.We were staying at a research campoutside“the polar bear capital of the world-the town of Churchill in Manit

4、oba,Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous.Polar bears-like all wild animals-should bephotographed from a safe distance.When Im face to face with a polar bear,I like it to be through a camera with atelephoto lens.But sometimes,that is easier said than done.This was one o

5、f those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed,and smelled ourgarlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high wire fence.He pulled and bitthe wire.He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden

6、fence posts.Terrified,Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew.We yelled at the bear,hit pots hard,and firedblank shotgun shells into the air.Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off.Not this polar bear though-hejust kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws（

7、爪子）.I radioed the camp manager for help.He told me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes beforeit arrived.Making the best of this close encounter（相遇），I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment.The camp ma

8、nagersuggested I use pepper spray.The spray burns the bears eyes,but doesnt hurt them.So I approached our uninvitedguest slowly and,through the fence,sprayed him in the face.With an angry roar（吼叫），the bear ran to the lake towash his eyes.注意:L 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已

9、为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。【参考范文】Paragraph I:A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.He exposed his sharp teeth,glaring at us ashe ran forward.And again the bear stood on his back,legs,wanting to snap at the fence like a monster.Il seemedthat his mouth was full of blood and his eyes

10、were red with anger.Seeing such terrible sight,I could feel a coldnessflooding from my back.Ellis was stunned there,with the mouth widely open.I had to take action,so I picked mycourage and tried to frighten him away with the pepper spray,but finally failed.Paragraph 2:At that very moment,the helico

11、pter arrived.It landed near our camp and its loud noises scared thebear.He looked irritated and charged at us again.I cried out,“Watch out!”We instantly stepped away and ran asfast as we could to the helicopter.Thank My God!We succeeded in climbing onto to the helicopter,gasping withrelief.Looking d

12、own at the bear,we found that he was eating the bread we just made.Several hours later,wearrived at home safe and sound,but we realized that we should do something to help the bears.【解析】读后续写作为新题型之一，突出考查了考生根据所获得的综合信息，吸收，内化并转变成自我语言的一种能力，同时通过对文本结构的分析和合理性地推测与想象，用自己的语言接续文本，体现了核心素养中的思维品质和语言能力。读后续写是对原文的阅读，

13、然后进行“狗尾续貂”，在写作时，要注意“三个读”：先读原文，了解文章的大意，主旨，文章逻辑结构，故事的6 要素，情节发展等等；第二读要注意10个关键词，对关键词进行合理地分类，确定哪些是最重要的词，哪些次之，然后构思合理的使用；第三读要注意读给出的两个首句，确定全文结尾的逻辑关系。与此同时，也要注意字数的安排，控制在150+20左右，建议两段的长短均匀为宜。【2020 山东省高考英语试卷（新高考全国I 卷）】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。The Meredith family lived in a small community.As the eco

14、nomy was in decline,some people in the town hadlost their jobs.Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet.People were trying to help each other meetthe challenges.Mrs.Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman.She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor.She knewthey had problem

15、s,and they needed all kinds of help.When she had time,she would bring food and medicine to them.One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before.There was a man sick in bed,hiswife,who took care of him and could not go out to work,and their little boy.The little boy-hi

16、s name was Bernard-hadinterested her very much.“I wish you could see him,“she said to her own children,John,Harry,and Clara.4tHe is such a help to his mother.He wants very much to earn some money,but I don*t see what he can do.”After their mother left the room,the children sat thinking about Bernard

17、.wish we could help him to earnmoney,“said Clara.His family is suffering so much.”“So do I,“said Harry.We really should do something to assist them.For some moments,John said nothing,but,suddenly,he sprang to his feet and cried,have a great idea!I havea solution that we can all help accomplish（完成）Th

18、e other children also jumped up all attention.When John had an idea,it was sure to be a good one.I tell youwhat we can do,“said John.You know that big box of com Uncle John sent us?Well,we can make popcorn（爆米花）,and put it into paper bags,and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”注意：1

19、.续写词数应为150左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。When Mrs.Meredith heard of Johns idea,she thought it was a good one,too.With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.【参考范文1】When Mrs.Meredith heard of John s idea,she thought it was a good one,too.So,they went to the localsupermarket together.They bo

20、ught a bag of corn and some special bags for popcorn.When they got home,they madea lot of popcorn and put it in the special bags.With the popcorn,they went to Bernards home.They told Bernard howto sell the popcorn.Bemard and his parents were very grateful.And the Meredith family also felt very happy

21、 to helpthis family.With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.He took the popcorn around to the houses andsold all his popcorn.He earned a lot of money.Then,he wanted to be self-dependent.Therefore,he asked Mrs.Meredith to teach him how to make popcorn.After that,not only did he

22、sell popcorn,but he also added cream and saltto the popcorn to make it taste better.Bemard grew up to be a remarkable man.He did not forget the help ofMerediths family,and he also did what he could to help those in need.【参考范文2】Paragraph 1 :When Mrs.Meredith heard of Johns idea,she thought it was a g

23、ood one,too.She was so surprised andhappy that her children went much farther than herself.She said,Its much better to teach Bernard to fish than togive him fish,you guys may do whatever you can with the plan to help Bernard and his family.With momsapproval,John got to prepare the oven,Harry went to

24、 check the corn that Uncle John sent them,while Clara madethe best use of her legs to tell Bernard their plan,hoping he would accept their kindness.Having heard the plan,Bernards blue eyes turned watery with happiness and gratitude.Paragraph 2:With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new bus

25、iness.Every afternoon after school,Bernardwent to the Meredith family picking the bagged-popcorn and went to the town theatre,and he would always put asign beside him saying,Home is sweet,mine is bitter with a sick dad and a nursing mom.55 Almost all film-goersbought Bernards popcorn when passing by

26、,Bernard made 8 to 11 dollars each night.With this,Bernard could gohome with medicine for his father.Months later his father could leave his sick-bed and walk around.Bernards signwas rewritten as followed:Home is sweet,mine is too,thank you【解析】本文是根据短文进行续写，使之成为一个完整的故事。1.认真读懂所给提供的材料:善良的Meredith一家住在一个小

27、社区里，他们想帮助一个贫困的家庭。那家的男主人生病卧床，女主人要照顾丈夫、无法外出赚钱，家中的小男孩Bernard也做不了什么事情，生活十分困难。后来，Meredith的孩子想出了一个主意-制作爆米花，让 Bernard去卖爆米花。2.根据所给材料确定文章主题:Meredith如何通过制作和实爆米花帮助Bernard 一家摆脱困境的。3.续写部分和前面的文章衔接得上，并且与原文情节发展和人物性格相一致，故事情节的向后延续发展要合乎情理。4.根据第一段首句 When Mrs.Meredith heard of Johns idea,she thought it was a good one,to

28、o.（当 Meredith 太太听到John的主意时，她也认为这是个好主意）可以针对如何实现制作爆米花这个提议展开构思；根据第二段首句 With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.（一切准备就绪后，Bernard 开始了他的新生意）可以针对Bernard如何通过实爆米花让家庭摆脱困境展开构思。5.续写的语言要尽可能与原文的语言保持风格上的一致。文章时态以一般过去时为主。应使用自己熟悉的句型和短语进行写作，考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。作文要层

29、次清晰，要点全面，表达流畅，切合题干要求，句子结构准确，适当补充信息，使篇章结构连贯。2018年高考题（2018浙江卷）读后续写It was summer,and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He decided to take me on a trip tothe Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque,a big city in the state of New Mexico.We reached Albuquerque in the lateafternoon

30、.Uncle Paul,my dads friend,picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle.My dad and I spent thenight in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river ne

31、arby.Very early inthe morning,Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast,The day starts at dawn on my farm,he said.After breakfast,I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens,while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze（吃草）.I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses.T

32、hey looked really cool.In the afternoon,I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride,and he said yes,as long as my dad went with me.I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway.So,my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats,got on our horses,and headed slowly towards the mountains.Dont be late

33、 for supper,Uncle Paul cried,and keep to the track so thatyou dont get lost!OK!my dad cried back.After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight.It wasso peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks,the deep green pine trees,and the late afternoon sun mixed tocreate a magic sce

34、ne.It looked like a beautiful woven（编织的）blanket spread out upon the ground just fbr us.Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.注意：（1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右；（2）至少使用5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：（3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；（4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of

35、my horse.Paragraph 2:We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.答案】One possible version:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.My horse turned to the left to avoid the little rabbit as I heldon tightly and tried not to fall.Then my dad turned around and shouted,Hold on!”A

36、ll of a sudden the horse began torun.My dad tried to keep up behind us.For a few minutes my horse slowed down to a trot and then stopped beside ariver.I looked around and realized that we were way off the track.We had no idea where we were and it got dark.Luckily the stars came out and gave us a lit

37、tle light when we werelooking for the way to the farm house.After what must have been several hours,we suddenly heard the sound ofsheep in the distance.My dad and I both rode our horses towards the sound of the sheep.As we got closer we sawUncle Paul with a flashlight waving us over.What a night!【解析

38、】读后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息，不仅能读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络。续篇这篇短文时，考生要搞清楚故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置、人物思想情感的变化等。在此基础上，考生要顺着文章的思路，根据线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用语言表达出来。通过阅读所给文章可知，父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。根据第一段所给首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.这一句是故事发展的转折点，可从rabbit出现后带来的反应扩展开，可以写马的反应，也可以

39、写人的反应，但要注意与第二段首句相呼应。第二段首句是 We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.这一句呼应前文 Uncle Paul 的叮嘱-不要误吃晚饭，可从如何寻路返回农场去写。续写时注意要使用5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后要用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。2017年高考题（2017浙江卷）第二节 读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。On a bright,warm July

40、afternoon,Mac Hollan,a primary school teacher,was cycling from his home to Alaskawith his friends.One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair,but they had encouraged Mac to carry on,and they would catch up with him soon.As Mac pedaled（骑行）along alone,he thought fondly of his wife and twoy

41、oung daughters at home.He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him.Man,thafs a big dog!”he thought.But when helooked to the side,he saw instantly that it wasnt a dog at all,but a wolf,quickly catching up with him.Macs heart jumped.He found ou

42、t his can of hear spray.With one hand on the bars,he fired the spray at thewolf.A bright red cloud enveloped the animal,and to Mac*s relief,it fell back,shaking its head.But a minute later,it was by his side again.Then it attacked the back of Macs bike,tearing open his tent bag.He fired at the wolf

43、asecond time,and again,it fell back only to quickly restart the chase（追赶）。Mac was pedaling hard now.He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to show down.He saw asteep uphill climb before him.He knew that zxxk once he hit the hill,hed be easy caught up and the wolfs teethwould be tear

44、ing into his flesh.At this moment,Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska.They didnt think much of itwhen they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road.A bit later,they spotted what they,too,assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike.As they got clo

45、ser,they realized that the dog was a wolf.Mac heard a large vehicle behind him.He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast,just a dozen yardsaway now.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。【答案）The car abruptly stopped in front of him

46、.Paul and Becky got out of the car immediately to give the help.With nothing on the hand,they didnt dare to fight against the wolf.However,they still approached to the wolf bravely.At the same time,the wolf also noticed them and turned its head back,howling angrily towards Paul and Becky.Macthen jum

47、ped off the bicycle and was ready to fight against the wolf.Then came the deadlock.A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived.They found the dangerous situation,where three men circled thewolf.Macs friends also jumped off their bicycles and joined the fight with the wolf.More and more cars s

48、topped.Some drivers took out the sticks from the cars,and some took out the knives,even the guns towards the wolf.In themeanwhile,the wolf might feel the peoples threats around,so it began to step back slowly.Soon,it ran away offthe road and disappeared in the distance.【解析】本文主要讲述了 Mac在骑自行车前往阿拉斯加的途中，

49、被一只狼追赶的故事。时态要考虑以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主。同时要兼顾字数的要求，不要过多，关键词列出5 个以上，需要均匀分布在两段中。考生要注意几个关键信息和情节变化并结合给出的内容提示进行合理构思。两年模拟【两年模拟】2019、2020名校模拟题及其答案解析2020年模拟题1.（2020.山东省高三月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。There was something in the elderly womans grace that caught my eye.Although slow and unsure

50、 of her steps,the woman moved with deliberation（从容），and there was no hesitation in her gestures.It was a lew years ago,and I had taken a part-time holiday-season job in a video store at the local shopping mall.From inside the store,I could see the people outside rushing by.The elderly woman entered