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1、The Chase is OnIt was dark outside. just after the dinner hour, when Benny Correa and Amanda Dislerand three of their five kids climbed into their black Cadillac Escalade. As they prepared to exit the parking lot of the restaurant where theyd just eaten. a dark blue Honda Civic with heavily tinted w

2、indows crossed their path.“Yo. babe” Correa hollered.“thats that car Thats that car!Earlier in the day,Disley had mentioned an Amber Alert issued for a missing11-year-old girl in Brimfield, Massachusetts, less than 30 miles from the familys home in Springfield. The car that passed them was the same

3、make and model as the one that had been used in her abduction.Correa took a hard right out of the parking lot and tailed the Honda in an effort to view the license plate. The driver immediately sped up and blew through a stop sign. Correa shocked his family by following suit. He wasnt about to lose

4、the Honda.“Being a father,had to do what I had to do” he told ABC News.The Honda pulled around the back of a liquor store.“Theyre trying to ditch me, Correayelled. When the Honda came around to the front, Correa caught up and pulled ahead,trying to cut it off. The Honda hit the brakes and then jumpe

5、d a curb. The Cadillacs high beams flashed on the driver-a young man with black hair, pulling a hooded sweatshirt up over his face. They could see him forcing a girls head down in the back, as if trying to hide her.Disley, who by then had called 911, was frantically relaying their situation to the d

6、ispatcher.“lts him!”she yelled into the phone.“The kidnapper!”Confused,the dispatcher asked,“The blue Honda?Yes, its him!Correa stayed close behind the Honda, cutting off cars to do so. They were now barreling down the road at 100 mph.“Hes going through red lights! Disley yelled to the police.Correa

7、 slammed on the brakes to avoid an oncoming car and then hit the gas to catch up.“Get him, Dad!”his son shouted excitedly from the back.Keeping on the Hondas tail, Correa discovered another problem: The low gas light was blinking on the Cadillacs dashboard. In fact, it had been blinking for much of

8、the15-minute chase, and the beat-up Caddy-theyd find out later that the suspension had been damaged during the chase-was running on fumes The car soon sputtered to a halt.The Honda disappeared onto the Massachusetts Turnpike. But thanks to Disleys chatter and directions, the cops had plotted the pat

9、h the kidnapper was taking and set up a roadblock on the turnpike, trapping the car soon after.The driver was 24-year-old Miguel Rodriguez. Hed pulled a knife on Charlotte Mocciaas she walked home from school and forced her into his car. If she screamed, hed warned, he would kill her. Moccia was fou

10、nd huddled in the back seat, terrified but unharmed. which might not have been the case had it not been for Correa and Disley.“lt felt like we won the lottery Disley says.“The feeling of knowing shes safe and back with her family because of us is just unexplainable.para1:TheCadillacsoon came to a st

11、op._para2;The kidnapper was 24-year-oldnamedMiguel._写作思路分析：（1）文本内容本文主要讲了Correa 一家晚饭后，在停车场发现了新闻中提及的绑匪，因此一家人驾车追踪，却因车没油了，且抛锚了而受阻。庆幸的是，妻子Disley 一直在给警方提供信息，因此绑匪最后被成功抓住，8岁小女孩也获救的故事。文章的故事性和情节性较强，体现的主旨是社会主义。（2）文本基本信息Writing style:narrationWhen -justafterthedinner hourWhere-parkinglot;roadWho-Correa; Disley;

12、Correas threekids;Miguel(the kidnapper;the 8-year-old girl(the missing girl )What-Correadrovehiscarto chase the Honda,trying to catchthekidnapper.Meanwhilehis wife,Disney,reportedthe situationtothe police.(3)人物性格分析-Correa andDisleyPara2 (Correa)Yo,babe,Correayelled,thatis thatcar.That is that car!-

13、carefuland sensitivePara4 (Correa)Correatook a hardright out ofthe parkinglot and closelyfollowedtha Hondain an effortto se the car number.-active andquick-reactedPara 4 (Correa)He wasntabout to losethe Honda-responsibleand enthusiasticPara5 (Correa)Correacaughtup andpulledahead,tryingto cut it off.

14、-brave; fearless;determinedPara 6(Disley )Disley,who by thenhad called911,was reporting theirsituationto the police.-careful ;thoughtfulThe familyis united,sharingthe same belief.The repetitionof thewordyellpresents usthat the familyare anxious,eageringto catch the kidnapper.（3）写作难点分析写这篇文章就如同在拍电影一样，

15、由第一个提示句可知，主人公的车出了问题，那接下来就是要描写如何化解这个问题抓到绑匪。第二段根据提示语可知，已知抓到罪犯，所以写的是故事的结局，并点出主旨即可。注意在续写的时候对动作，语言和情感及场景的描写。二、语言学习（languagelearning）1、Understanding the storyCorreaand his familyhad dinnerat a restaurantand were about to leave_they spotteda Honda withheavily _(color)windows,which was_(report)involvedin a

16、case ,wherean8-year-oldgirl was kidnapped.Immediately,Correa_(加速），closely followingthe Honda inan_to see the car number.Andhiswife,Disleycalled the policestation to report the situation.The kidnapper,well _ of what was happening,he tried every meanspossibleto_the carfollowing him .UnfortunatelyforCo

17、rrea,his gaswas soonrunning_andwhat made the situationeven worsewas that thesuspensionhad beendamagedduring thechase.Hehad to_ his car .2、词组积累1、停车场 parking lot2、偶遇某人 cross sbs path ; come across;bump into 3、涂了很重的颜色的玻璃the heavilycolored windows4、提到、谈及、查阅 refer to5、为了，试图（介短） in an attempt/effort to do

18、6、加速 speed up;accerlerate7、学样，模仿 follow suit 8、甩掉，除掉 get rid of9、截止那辆车 cut off the car10、把衬衫拉上来遮住脸 pullup the shirt over hisface11、朝电话里大喊 yell into the phone12、猛踩刹车 salmon the brakes13、更糟糕的是 whatwas worse ;worse still14、停了下来 come to a stop/halt三、段落开头语分析Para1:TheCadillacsoon came to a stop._第一段眼看绑匪驾车

19、消失的懊恼以及妻子提供给警方的信息，铺垫了绑匪落网的结局.The kidnapper was 24-year-oldnamedMiguel._1、What would happen to the Honda ?2、What wasCorreas feeling?3、HowwouldCorreareact to the unexpectedsituation ?4、Wasthereanyonecan offerhelp?5、How about the police?思路：Correa 停下车，Honda 消失在远方-Correa 无可奈何，生气失望-在Disley 继续打电话告诉警察罪犯的行踪-

20、Correa 一家焦急的等待-罪犯被抓住场景一：本田消失了（What would happen to the Honda ？）1.TheHonda began to pull the distancegradually,disappearingin our eyesights quickly .本田开始逐渐拉开距离，很快消失在我们的视线中。2.ThedarkblueHondasped up,onlyto leave ash and dirtdancing in the air.(寻找货拉拉中的句子）深蓝色的本田加速，只留下灰尘和泥土在空中飞舞。3.Thoughthe Hondawas just

21、 a crossroads away,he failedto catch him .虽然本田车离他只有一个十字路口，但他没能赶上他。4.Before he coulddo something ,the Hondawasalreadynowhere to be seen.他还没来得及做点什么，本田就已经不见踪影了.5. At that very moment,the darkblue Hondawith heavilycoloredwindowssped up,disappearingin the distance.就在那一刻，深蓝色的本田（Honda）加速行驶，车窗颜色浓重，消失在远处。场景二

22、: Correa 的心情（失望；生气）1.Correa stamped his feet ,annoyed that the Honda should disappear out of sight at such a disadvantage .科雷亚跺脚，对本田在如此不利的情况下消失在视线之外感到恼火。2.Staringat the Honda zooming past him,Correatrembled with rage .盯着从他身边飞过的本田车，科雷亚气得发抖。3.Correahad a strong sense of loss and stampedhis footin ange

23、r,staring at the Honda zooming ahead of them.科雷亚有一种强烈的失落感，愤怒地跺着脚，盯着在他们前面疾驰的本田车。4.Asense of mounting anxietygradually filled the Correas mind.科雷亚的脑海里渐渐充满了一种日益增加的焦虑感。5.Never could he have imagined thatthe kidnappershould have escapedthisway!他怎么也想不到绑匪竟然这样逃走了！6.TheHondadisppeared ,watchingthekidnappersc

24、ar vanished,thekids could donothingbut keepingstamping theirfeet wildly.本田车突然停了下来，看着绑匪的车消失了，孩子们只能继续疯狂地跺脚。7.Itsawfullyterrible.Wehave lost the kidnapper!Correa shoutedwhile hittingthe steering wheel hard.太可怕了，我们失去了绑匪！科雷亚一边大声喊道，一边使劲打方向盘。场景三:如何抓到绑匪1.Meanwhile,Disleykept on informingthe police where the

25、y were and in what dirctionthe kidnapperwas going.Basedon the given information,the policesoon locatedthe Honda and lay in waitfor himwhere the kidnapperwas to pass.与此同时，迪斯利不停地通知警方他们在哪里，绑匪要往哪个方向走。根据所提供的信息，警方很快找到了本田，并在绑匪要经过的地方埋伏等待他。2.Fortunately ,thanks toDisleys continuousdirections,the policehad bl

26、ockedthe paththe kidnapper wastakingand set upa roadblockon the way,trapping the car soon.幸运的是，多亏了迪斯利不断的指点，警方封锁了绑架者的道路，并在路上设置了路障，很快就把车困住了。3.Fortunately , with theaccurateinformationoffered by Disley,the copssuccessfullyfollowed the traces of the kidnapper,plottedthe pathhe was taking and set upa roa

27、dblockon the road,trappingthe carsoon after.幸运的是，在迪斯利提供的准确信息下，警察成功地追踪了绑架者的踪迹，规划了他要走的道路，并在路上设置了路障，不久就把车困住了。场景四：Correa 一家焦急的等待警察抓捕的结果1.They werewaiting anxiouslyin the car ,hopingthe policewouldcatch thekidnapper and rescue thelittle girl.他们在车里焦急地等待着，希望警察能抓住绑架者并营救小女孩。2.Watchingthe criminalwith his car

28、out of sight,the wholefamily could do nothingbut stay in their own car,waitinganxiouslyfor the police.看着罪犯的车消失在视线之外，全家只能呆在自己的车里，焦急地等待警察。场景五：衔接下一句1.Andit was not long before thatthe man was in the polices net.不久，该男子就落入了警方的网中2.And the kidnapperwas arrested .绑架者被逮捕了。3.Itwas not longbeforethe policecall

29、ed backto say thatthe girlwas savedand the kidnapped wascaught.不久，警察打电话回来说，女孩得救了，被绑架的人被抓住了。第二段绑匪被抓住后的神情，被救女孩的状态以及其家人的感激.1、Was the kidnappercaught successfully ?2、Wasthe 8-year-oldgirl savedsuccessfully?Andshe hurt or not ?3、Whatwouldthe familydo ?What wouldthey say?4、WhatwouldCorreaor his wife say?思

30、路：Miguel 绑架小女孩的原因-小女孩被救出时的场景-女孩一家对Correa 一家的感激之情-主题升华场景一：绑架者绑小女孩的原因1. Havingbeen out ofwork for quite a long time ,he had no moneyin his pocket.他失业很长时间了，口袋里没有钱。2.Seeingthe girlwanderingalone on thestreet,hetook her away ,wanting to get some moneyfrom his parents.看到那个女孩独自一人在街上徘徊，他就把她带走了，想从父母那里弄点钱。3.H

31、e flankly confessed knfes坦白(错误或罪行)to the copsthat hedpulleda knife onan 8-year-oldgirl inBrimfield,Massachusettsasshe walkedhome fromschooland forcedher intohis car .他坦率地向警方供认，他在马萨诸塞州布里姆菲尔德的一名8岁女孩放学回家时拔出一把刀，将她逼上了他的车。场景二：女孩被救出的场景1.Themissing girlwas foundhuddledhdl(缩成一团) in the backseat,terrified but

32、unharmed.失踪的女孩被发现蜷缩在后座，惊恐万分，但安然无恙。2.When they opened the door,huddlingat theback seatwas the missing girl.当他们开门时，蜷缩在后座的是失踪的女孩。3.The missing girl wastakento the police station where her eagerparents werewaitingfor her .失踪的女孩被带到警察局,她热切的父母在那里等她。4.Thepoor girlran into her mothersarms,streaksstriksof tea

33、rs streaming downher cheeks.这个可怜的女孩跑进了她母亲的怀里，眼泪顺着脸颊流了下来5.The poor girlwas foundhuddled in theback seat,trembling with fear as well aschokingwith sobs .人们发现这个可怜的女孩蜷缩在后座上，吓得浑身发抖，还哽咽着场景三：女孩父母对Correa 一家的感激之情1.The girls parents arrived.They were so gratefulto the familys braveryand wisdom .女孩的父母来了,他们非常感谢

34、家人的勇敢和智慧。2.They constantlyexpressedtheir gratitude,sayingthatbut fortheCorreas,the girlwould havesufferedbadly.他们不断地表达他们的感激之情，说如果没有科雷亚，这个女孩会遭受严重的痛苦。3.On the scene,the girlsparentsexpressed great gratitudeto Correa andDisley,Had not beenyourkiind help,ourdaughterwerenot safeand sound.在现场，女孩的父母对科雷亚和迪斯

35、利表示了极大的感谢，“没有你的帮助，我们的女儿并不安全。”场景四：主题生华1.Undoubtedly,it was Correa andDisleysbravery and kindness that rescuedan innocent little girl.毫无疑问，是科雷亚和迪斯利的勇敢和善良救了一个无辜的小女孩。2. ToCorrea ,the sweetet momentwas whenhis son pressed a kiss on his forehead,callinghim a hero.对科里亚来说，最甜蜜的时刻是他的儿子亲吻他的额头，称他为英雄。3.Whenevert

36、hey mentionedthis specialexperience,Disley alwayssaid,Itis an extraordinaryfeeling to savesomeone in danger ,which isjust unexplainable!每当他们提到这一特殊经历时，迪斯利总是说：“拯救处于危险中的人是一种非凡的感觉，这是无法解释的！”3.In aworldwherepeoplecan beso focused onwhat they are doing,a random act ofkindnesscan make all difference .在一个人们可以如此专注于他们正在做的事情的世界里，一个随意的善举可以让一切变得不同。学科网（北京）股份有限公司