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1、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Having held the interschool storytelling championship for the past twoyears, I was the shining star of my school. When it came to choosing the rightcandidate to participate in such competitions, I was always the first choice.Naturally, I was once aga

2、in selected to represent my school in the approachingcontest this year.Upon hearing the fact that I was chosen again, my classmates and friendsacknowledged that I would undoubtedly emerge as the champion again.Consequently, I became conceited. I was so proud that I neglected theimportance of practic

3、ing for the contest.A week before the contest, my teacher Ms. Sara asked, “Selena, would youlike to stand in front of the class to rehearse for the contest?” She hadtutored me in the past two competitions and knew how important practice was.“Just imagine you are on the stage in the presence of the a

4、udience,” she added.“Im sorry, Ms. Sara,” I replied. “I have a bit of a sore throat.”This was usually the lie I would tell whenever my teacher requested me topractice in front of the class. I always found excuses to avoid doing itbecause I believed that I was the best and therefore the practice wasu

5、nnecessary. On one occasion, I even told Ms. Sara not to worry too much as Iwas well prepared for the contest. In fact, I did everything but practice myscript. I only managed to glance briefly through the story the day before thecontest. As the best storyteller among the students of the local second

6、aryschools, I was too vain to practice and expected everything to be fine.The contest was being held in the local community hall. On the day of thecontest, the hall was packed. My school teachers and principal were there alongwith many of my classmates and schoolmates. I was the eighth contestant ou

7、t oftwenty in total. Those who spoke before me did extremely well. On seeing theirfascinating and outstanding performance, I began to lose confidence in myself.My palms sweated heavily and I started to feel nervous.Paragraph1:Soon, it was my turn to talk._Paragraph 2:Finally, results were announced

8、after thecontest._写作思路分析（1）材料分析本文以校际讲故事锦标赛为线索展开，讲述了作者因多次参加这样比赛获奖，是学校里一颗闪亮的明星。那一年，作者又一次被选为学校代表。然而，作者变得自负起来。太骄傲了，以至于忽略了为比赛练习的重要性。比赛前，作者的老师萨拉女士要求作者在全班同学面前练习时，作者通常都会撒谎。到了比赛的那天，作者看到了别人精彩的表演，开始开始感到紧张，手掌大汗淋漓。（2）段落开头语分析由第一段首句内容“很快，轮到我讲故事了。”通过所给文章的最后一个句子（ On seeing their fascinating and outstanding performan

9、ce,I began to lose confidence in myself .My palms sweated heavily and I started to feel nervous .)可知，第一段可描写作者由于赛前没有练习，准备不够充分，表演的时候非常紧张，甚至有几次口吃和忘词。这次表演非常糟糕，评委和支持者们很失望。作者感觉这辈子从来没有这么尴尬过，眼含着泪水走下舞台等待比赛结果。由第二段首句内容“最后，比赛结束后宣布了比赛结果。”通过续写第一段我糟糕的表现，结果可想而知，后面应该接着写，当结果被公布后，我没有获奖，并没有感到惊讶，同时应该感到内疚和自责，愧对对自己寄予厚望的老师

10、同学们，此时坐在观众席中的老师或是同学应该会走上前来给我安慰，毕竟这是一个充满爱和温暖的社会，最后通过此次失败的经历我终于明白了“骄傲自满”和“熟能生巧”这两句话的含义。（其实这个主题，在所给文章里反复出现，所给文章第一段overproud ,所给文章第二段too proud , so proud .这就给学生一个解题策略，如何在所给文章中寻找情感主线的关键词）文章线索：比赛开始表演糟糕尴尬下台羞愧后悔老师同学安慰鼓励-反思得出教训2.词汇激活行为类.面无表情地说话：spoke in an expressionless voice /speak without expression.口吃：st

11、uttered a few times/cannot speak fluently.忘词：forgot parts of the story/ant remember those words anyway.摇头：shook their heads/nobody gives a nod情绪类.尴尬：embarrassed/awkward.后悔：regretted being so arrogant/awake to my arrogance.失望：in disappointment/disappointedParagraph1:Soon, it was my turn to talk._场景一：

12、比赛开始（作者走上舞台，心情紧张，可以描写观众的动作）1.With my sweating hands and pounding heart ,I stepped onto the stage .I heard the supportersapplauding (鼓掌 v.）heavily as if I were the championship .我双手冒汗，心怦怦直跳，走上了舞台。我听到了支持者们鼓掌 ,就好像我是冠军一样。2.Staring at Mrs. Ana as well as my schoolmates ,I felt my heart threatening to bur

13、st out from my chest .看着安娜太太和我的同学们，我感到我的心快要从胸口跳出来了。3.I went on the stage inch by inch with my knees trembling heavily.我一步一步地走上舞台，膝盖剧烈地颤抖。4.Facing the crowd,I found myself suffering from stage fright .面对人群，我发现自己怯场了.场景二：作者表演糟糕1.Whats worse ,I found my mind totally went blank and words might die in my

14、throat.更糟糕的是，我发现我的大脑一片空白，喉咙里讲不出话。2.I spoke in an expressionless voice and even stuttered a few times as I forgotparts of the story .我面无表情的说话，甚至有几次因为忘了故事的一部分而结巴。3.I took a deep breath trying not to let the anxiety get the better of me .Unfortunately ,I finally lost the battle .我深吸一口气，试图不让焦虑压倒我。不幸的是，我

15、最终输掉了这场战斗。4.I was so tongue tied that I cant complete a sentence .My classmates weredumbfounded ,shaking their heads in disbelief .我张口结舌了，一句话也说不完。我的同学们都很紧张目瞪口呆，不相信地摇头。5.Incredibly nkredbli（难以置信地）,words slipped from my memory .难以置信的是，这些话从我的记忆中溜走了。场景三：作者尴尬下台（台下议论纷纷，同学们和老师对我都很失望）1.I certainly couldnt r

16、emember how I went back to my seat , I tried to choke back tears but in vain .It was my pride that messed up everything .我当然不记得我是怎么回到座位上的，我试着忍住眼泪，但没有成功。是我的过度骄傲把一切都搞砸了。2.I walked off the stage with tears in my eyes .我泪流满面地走下舞台。3.Whispers ,laughters and jeers drilled into my head and overwhelmed me .（

17、小丑里的句子）耳语、笑声和嘲笑钻进我的脑海，把我压垮了。4.So ashamed was I that I could feel the blood rush to my face.Surrounded by these complex gossip and laugh ,I even wanted to dig a hole to hide myself .(小丑里的句子）我感到很惭愧，我能感觉到血涌到我的脸上。在这些复杂的闲话和笑声的包围下，我甚至想挖一个洞来隐藏自己。Paragraph 2:Finally, results were announced after thecontest.

18、_场景一：作者的成绩1.I won nothing but sadness and regret ,I dragged my legs to the teachers and classmates ,preparing to be teased at .除了悲伤和遗憾，我什么也没得到，我拖着腿走向老师和同学，准备被嘲笑。2.The result was not out of my expectation -I won nothing .结果不出乎我的意料我什么也没赢。3.Strikingly strakli（惊人的）, it turned out that I was the last one

19、令人惊讶的是，结果证明我是最后一个。场景二：作者的羞愧后悔1.If I had practised before the competition ,I wouldnt be trapped in such an awkward situation !”I thought (小丑里的句子）如果我在比赛前练习过，我就不会陷入这样的尴尬境地了！”我想2.I was seized by a strong sense of guilty and thrown into the sea of desperation .我被一种强烈的负罪感抓住，扔进了绝望的海洋。3. Tears of regret wel

20、ling up in my eyes ,I walked to Mrs.Sara with heavy steps .遗憾的泪水涌上我的眼睛，我迈着沉重的步伐走向萨拉夫人。4.I regret underestimating my opponents and overestimating myself .My vanity vnti（自大，自负）had cost me the championship .I now regretted being so arrogant rnt（傲慢的，自大的）.我后悔低估了对手，高估了自己。我的虚荣心让我失去了冠军。我现在后悔自己如此傲慢。5.How I w

21、ished I had fully prepared myself for the contest .我多么希望我已经为比赛做好了充分的准备。场景三：Mrs.Sara 对我的鼓励1.Ms.Sara looked into my eyes ,placing her hands on my shoulder and said softly “Selena,dont lost heart ,I hope you can make it next time .”Sara女士看着我的眼睛，把手放在我的肩膀上，温柔地说：“Selena，别灰心，我希望你下次能来。”2.Just then ,I felt a

22、 pat on the shoulder .It was Ms. Sara “though you failed , we still had faith in your ability .”就在那时，我感到有人拍了拍我的肩膀。是萨拉女士“尽管你失败了，我们仍然相信你的能力。”场景四：得到的教训1.Practice makes perfect熟能生巧2.Pride goes before a fall骄必败3.The failure in this contest gave me an unforgettable lesson-pride will damage everything you

23、have and practice makes perfect .这次比赛的失败给了我一个难忘的教训骄傲会毁掉你所拥有的一切，熟能生巧。4.I had learned my lesson well and fully understood the meaning of two sayings,“Pride goes before a fall .”and “Practice makes perfect .”5. 我已经很好地吸取了教训，完全理解了两句谚语的含义：“骄傲必败”和“熟能生巧”.范文：Soon ,it was my turn to talk.Facing the crowd ,I f

24、ound myself suffering from stage fright .I spoke in an expressionless voice and even stuttered a few times as I forgot parts of the story .My legs trembled and so did my voice .On seeing my terrible performance ,the judges shook their heads .The supporters from my school looked at me in disappointme

25、nt .I have never been so embarrassed in my life .In the end I walked off the stage ,my eyes filled with tears .Finally ,results were announced after the contest .I did not win any prizes -not even a consolation one.It was not surprising at all,I felt ashamed when I faced my classmates and of course

26、,Ms.Sara.I regretted understanding my opponents and overestimating myself .My vanity had cost me the championship.I now regretted being so arrogant .I had learned my lesson well and finally understood the meaning of the two saying , “pride goes before a fall.”and “practice makes perfect !”学科网（北京）股份有限公司