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1、There Are No Vans感恩是一种心态，更是一种生活态度，一种处世哲学，一种智慧品德。英国作家萨克雷斯说：“生活就是一面镜子，你笑，他也笑；你哭，它也哭。”送人玫瑰，手留余香。无论生活还是生命都需要感恩。To me, whatThanksgivingreally means is giving good thanks, not eating turkey.By the time I was 18 I had created my Thanksgiving ritual (惯例).I would go out shopping andbuyenoughfoodfor one or tw

2、o families.Then I would dress like a delivery boy, go to the poorest neighborhood and justknockon a door, and would always include a note saying “All that I ask in return is that you take good enough care of yourself so that someday you can do the same thing for someone else.” I have received more f

3、rom this annual ritual than I have from any amount of money Ive ever earned, especially one suchexperiencein New York City.Several years ago I was in New York City with my newly marriedwifeduring Thanksgiving.She was sad because we were not with our family. Normally she would be home decorating the

4、house for Christmas, but we were stuck here in a hotel room. I said, “Honey, look, why dont we decorate some lives today instead of some trees?” When I told her what I always do on Thanksgiving, she got excited. I said, “Lets go someplace where we can really appreciate who we are, what we are able t

5、o do and what we can really give. Lets go to the poor neighborhoodHarlemand feed some people therein need. Well go buy enough food for six or seven families for 30 days.Weve got enough.Lets go do it!” We started by getting avan(货车), but there seemed no vans in all of New York City. The rent-a-car pl

6、aces were all out of vans. My wife wasdisappointed,and I said, “Look, the bottom line is that if we want something, we can make it happen! All we have to do is take action. There are plenty of vans here in New York City. Look down at the street. Do you see all those vans? Lets go get one!” My wife a

7、greed and we took action.Paragraph 1:We tried stopping vans as they were drivingdown the street. _Paragraph 2:Eventually a van drove up and the driver saidyes._文本特点（1）本文有别于遇险和脱险的故事，是一篇比较好的感人的美文，文本较好的把握续写命题的特点，文章的文体，内容，语言，情感都给学生续写较大的发挥余地。（2）文本给出了读后续写的标题“There are no vans ,标题是文章的灵魂所在，整个故事围绕着标题展开，本文核心在

8、于Vans上，作者在感恩节带着新婚的妻子满城寻找货车，为的就是能够献上自己的一片爱心。（3）文本采用了倒叙手法，这种倒叙手法与2020年7月高考读后续写的是非常接近。这种倒叙手法是为了表现中心思想的需要，把最能表现中心思想的部分提到了最前面，突出了作者行善事使善心的中心思想。同时这种倒叙方式也可以让文章更加曲折，造成悬念，引人入胜。文本内容作者自18岁开始就一直将感恩节送爱心的惯例坚守至今，几年前的一个圣诞节和新婚妻子被困纽约，于是两人约定一起前往美国的贫困区哈勒姆捐赠食物做善事，但恰逢节日，整个纽约城可出租的货车都全被租出去了，于是夫妻两人只能另想它法寻求一辆货车载物，接着他们想到了拦货车.

9、具体描写Paragraph 1：We tried stopping vans as they were driving down the street.第一段的续写一定要在读懂前文的基础上，关键在于结合原因进行后文续写。文本的第三段为后面的两段续写引出了问题，因为当时是感恩节的缘故，所以全城都紧缺货车，因此寻找货拉拉成了她们行善途中最大的障碍，第三段中的这个句子是承上启下的一个关键句子”the bottom line is that if we want something ,we can make it happen ! All we have to do is take action .这

10、里的take action要联系到下面的两段续写-寻找货拉拉。根据原文和第二段的首句的主要内容可以推测第一段的续写内容夫妻二人尝试多次拦车，无果。这段续写动作上需要用到一些拦车的动作，发出请求和遭到拒绝的句子，情绪上要体现夫妻的焦急、期待及被拒绝后的灰心丧气但没有放弃的不屈不挠的精神。环境上也可以通过描写环境的恶劣来突出拦车的艰辛。场景一路上货车司机对我们拦车的反应场景二环境描写凸现拦车的艰辛场景三我和妻子的情绪（充满希望到失望）场景四尽管受到挫折，但没有放弃场景一路上货车司机对我们拦车的反应(不理不睬） 1.To our disappointment,the driverspretended

11、 to ignore us and passed us directly,only to leave ash and dirt dancing in the air.令我们失望的是司机假装不理我们，直接从我们身边走过，只留下灰烬和泥土在空中飞舞。2.Yet the drives either turned a blind eye to our waving hands or sped past us, drowning our hope in the deafening roar of engines .然而，司机要么对我们挥舞的手视而不见，要么从我们身边疾驰而过，把我们的希望淹没在震耳欲聋的

12、引擎轰鸣声中。3.As if we we were totally transparent,all van drivers turned a blind eye to our hands-waving and passed by mercilessly,leaving us standing on the street alone.好像我们是完全透明的，所有的货车司机都对我们的挥舞视而不见，无情地走过，只留下我们站在街上。4.After what seemed to bea long time ,however,no one stopped and turned a blind eye to

13、us,just speeding up.然而，似乎过了很长一段时间，没有人停下来并且对我们视而不见，只是超速行驶.5.Every time ,the drivers looked away quickly, furiously rolled up the window or pulled away without saying anything.每一次，司机们都迅速地把目光移开，怒气冲冲地卷起车窗，或者一声不吭地驶走。场景二环境描写凸显拦车的艰辛1.Fingers numbed by the chilly wind,throat choked by dusty air,we felt ever

14、 alone on the crowded streets of New York.手指被寒风吹得麻木，喉咙被尘土飞扬的空气呛得喘不过气来，在纽约拥挤的街道上，我们感到孤独。2.The icy wind started howling, cutting ourface like a sharp knife.寒风开始呼啸，像一把锋利的刀划破了我们的脸。场景三我和妻子的情绪（充满希望到失望）1.After several fruitless attempts,my wife let out a long sigh.几次尝试都没有成功，我妻子长长地叹了口气。2.Staring at the vans

15、zooming past us,my wife trembled with rage.看着从我们身边飞驰而过的货车，我妻子气得发抖。3.Tears of grievance came into her eyes when she saw them leave.当她看到他们离开时，眼里涌出了委屈的泪水4.The unsuccessful attempts cast a cloud of gloom over our face.失败的尝试给我们的脸蒙上了一层阴影。5.A sense of disappointment flooded in my heart ,and hopelessness fr

16、equently echoed my brain.一种失望感涌上心头，毫无希望常常在我的脑海里回荡。6.Disappointmentswallowed my wife. She sat on the ground and did not uttera single word.失望吞噬了我的妻子。她坐在地上一句话也没说。7.Disappointmentmingled with frustration growing inside me.失望夹杂着我内心的沮丧。8.Whocan we turn to?my wife murmured with a fierce frown.we found our

17、selves on the verge of giving up.“我们能向谁求助？”我妻子皱着眉头低声说我们发现自己快要放弃了。场景四受到挫折但是没有放弃1.My wife was ready to give up,but I said in an optimistic voiceItis the law of averages,somebody is going to say yes.我妻子准备放弃，但我乐观地说：“这是平均法则，有人会答应的。2.My wife was disappointed butI patted onthe shoulderand comforted her Ibe

18、lieve someone will say yes to us.我妻子很失望，但我拍了拍她的肩膀，安慰她“我相信有人会答应我们。”3.Having been refused many times,we decided to try one last time.尽管多次被拒绝，我们决定再试一次。4.We plucked up /gathered upour courage and yelled at the top of our voice for fear that we would miss a van.我们鼓起勇气，大声喊叫，生怕错过一辆面包车。5.We constantly convi

19、nced ourselves that the more efforts we put in, the luckier we would be.我们不断地说服自己，我们付出的努力越多，我们就越幸运。6.Our heart sank at the thought of our failure to get a van,but we told ourselves that never do anything by halves.一想到没能弄到一辆面包车，我们的心就沉了下来，但我们告诉自己，任何事都不能半途而废.7.In spite of countless failures,we still be

20、lieve in miracles.尽管有无数次的失败，但我么仍然相信奇迹的出现。8.We told ourselves repeatedly however painstaking the task was,we would not give in to setbacks.我们反复告诫自己，无论任务多么艰苦，我们都不会向挫折屈服。9.Staring into my wifes redrimmed eyes ,we found ourselves on the verge of giving up ,until it suddenly dawned on me-hope always fell

21、 at the last minute and patience was the touchstone .凝视着我妻子红红的眼睛，我们发现自己快要放弃了，直到我突然意识到希望总是在最后一刻降临，耐心是试金石。Paragraph2:Eventually a van drove up and the driver said yes .作者从18岁开始就已经将感恩节做善事当成了一种习惯。全段大部分都在描写他做善事的具体过程，并且在尾句运用明显的过渡句引出后面的故事，使文章自然衔接。尾句中需要注意的是标黄的one such experience有所特指，指的是前面的I have received mo

22、re from this annual ritual than I have from any amount of money Ive ever earned.后续的故事一定要对应这个句子，也就是作者最后一定做成功了这件善事，精神上得到了巨大的收获，这种收获是物质无法比拟的。因此第二段中应该描写的场景有夫妻拦到车后的欣喜，在做善事时候的激动，以及帮助完别人后收获的满足和快乐。最后还需有点明主题思想.场景一夫妻俩很兴奋场景二到Harlem去做善事，人们对他们的感激场景三主题升华场景一夫妻俩很兴奋1.With the extraordinary happiness rising up inside

23、 us, every fiber of disappointment instantly vanished.当我们内心涌起非凡的幸福时，失望的每一根纤维都瞬间消失了。2.Hearing the simple yes,we jumped with joy.听到简单的“是”，我们高兴得跳了起来。3.We were delighted beyond description.我们欣喜若狂。4.Hearing these words,my wife shriekedwith excitement.听到这些话，我妻子兴奋地尖叫起来。5.With a shriek of delight ,she hugge

24、d me .她高兴地尖叫着，拥抱着我。6.At this moment ,we breathed a sigh of relief .这时，我们松了一口气。7. The nearly -extinguished sparks of hope were instantly rekindled .几乎熄灭的希望之火立即重新燃起。场景二到Harlem去做善事1.Sooff we went ,collecting food and loading the packages onto the van ,Then we headed for Harlem and gave out all we could

25、 offer -warm meals and warm heart.于是我们出发了，收集食物，把包裹装上货车，然后我们去了哈林区，分发了我们能提供的一切温暖的饭菜和温暖的心。2. The driver led us to a store where we bought lots of food and some baskets .Together we packed them,carried them onto the van and went to buildings where there were even people living without electricity.司机把我们带

26、到一家商店，在那里我们买了很多食物和一些篮子，我们一起打包，抬上货车，去了一些甚至有人住的没有电大楼。3.Upon the arrival of our destination ,we three downloaded our adequate food from the van ,knocked on the door ,delivered the food to those poor people ,door by door ,family by family .到达目的地后，我们三人从货车上下载足够的食物，敲门，挨家挨户地把食物送到那些穷人手里。4.Showering him in a

27、string of thanks ,we immediately set out to purchase ,and then headed for Harlem.我们对他连珠炮般地表示感谢，立即着手购买，然后前往哈林区。场景三主题升华1. The sun was setting and the night was falling, but the smiles of people who received our help lit up our day and decorated our Thanksgiving, which were the best gifts for us.夕阳西下，夜

28、幕降临，但接受我们帮助的人们的微笑照亮了我们的一天，装饰了我们的感恩节，这是给我们最好的礼物。2.In a world where people can be so focused on what theyre doing, a random act of kindness can make all the difference.在一个人们可以如此专注于他们正在做的事情的世界里，一个随意的善举可以让一切变得不同。3.The room light leaked through the curtains, casting lengthy shadows behind us, silently sh

29、owing what the true meaning of Thanksgiving was.房间的光线透过窗帘漏出，在我们身后投下长长的阴影，无声地显示出感恩节的真谛。4.Until now, every time I recall this unforgettable experience, my heart flutters with a current of warmth not only for the kindness we gave but also for the belief, companionship and satisfaction we received.直到现在，

30、每当我回忆起这段难忘的经历，我的心都会涌动着一股暖流不仅因为我们给予的善良，也因为我们得到的信念、友谊和满足。5.It was a truly fulfilling experience to make even a small difference .You see, you can make anything happen if you commit to it and take action .Miracles like this happen everyday-even in a city where there are no vans.哪怕是小小的改变，都是一次真正令人满足的经历。你

31、看，只要你承诺并付诸行动，你就能让任何事情发生。像这样的奇迹每天都会发生即使是在一个“没有货车”的城市里.6.Itwas not the vans but peoples kindness that delivered joy and hope to the needy.不是面包车，而是人们的善良，给穷人带来了欢乐和希望。7.On that no vansnight,I better understood the old saying -The roses in her hand ,the fragrance in mine.在那个“无车之夜”，我更好地理解了那句老话“赠人玫瑰，手留余香。”8

32、.It was the worst of times ,but it was also the best of times .We cannot change this unfair world that made the rich and poor divide ,but at least we can offer our kindness,for the helpless souls ,-even in a city where there are no vans.这是最糟糕的时代，也是最好的时代。我们不能改变这个使贫富分化的不公平的世界，但至少我们可以为无助的灵魂献上我们的仁慈，即使在一个“没有面包车”的城市里。学科网（北京）股份有限公司