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1、深夜动物园智斗盗贼Late night at the zoo.A zoo keeper had been working at a zoo for 15 years and never experienced any problems. He always worked the evening shifts because he was trusted to properly lock up the zoo. On a summer night in late June, the zoo keeper turned off the lights and wished all of his an

2、imals a goodnight. He left the zoo and walked to his car in the parking lot. As he reached in his back pocket he realized that his keys had gone missing. He rapidly turned around and realized he had left them inside the zoo. He quickly walked back towards the Zoos entrance hoping he would see them a

3、long the way.When he arrived at the door, to his surprise, the door was unlocked. In fear of setting off the alarm that he had just set, he did not turn on the lights. The zoo keeper turned on the flashlight on his phone and began to make his way to the office. He looked around at all the animals in

4、 their cages and thought to himself how different the zoo becomes at night. When he walked by the lions cages, he could see the young cubs playing together. He liked the zoo better at this hour because night was when the animals come to life.At last, he made it back to the office. Unfortunately this

5、 time, he was not so lucky. The office door was locked and he knew that if he were to break the window, he would set off the alarm.Knowing there was no way inside, the zoo keeper began to weigh his options. He knew he could not get into his home without his keys, so he decided it would be best to sp

6、end the night inside the zoo.The zoo keeper walked towards the bird cages because he knew he could sleep comfortably on the benches near the stage. A few hours later, the zoo keeper heard a door slam that woke him up. .“Quiet! a voice whispered.What? Theres no one here another voice said, “The old m

7、an left hours ago.”Alright lets just grab the animals and get out of here.”The zoo keeper didnt know what to do. “What if they were armed? the zoo keeper thought to himself. He listened closely and realized there was a group of burglars in the zoo.Para1The zoo keeper quietly got up and decided to in

8、vestigate what was going on at the zoo_Para2 The zoo keeper saw two people in front of a bird cage trying to break the lock ._主要内容：故事里面有交代主人公的特性，一个十五年工作兢兢业业受人信任的动物园守卫。故事发生的时间和地点是六月夏夜在动物园里，起始事件是钥匙忘记在了园内，发展为发现动物园门开着，办公室门锁着，高潮是后半夜听到了窃贼的讲话声。一般故事的情节推动以时间转移为主，但这篇全文按照空间转移的顺序推进情节的发展，从动物园停车场动物园门口动物园内办公室门口鸟笼边

9、上，故事开始守卫离开动物园时，turn off the lights and wished all of his animals a good night; 到了停车场he realized his keys had gone missing；从停车场到动物园的动作rapidly turn around,quickly walk back hoping he wouldfind keys along the way；到动物园门口to his surprise, the door unlocked；在从门口去往办公室的路上，he turn on the flashlight，make his w

10、ay to office, look around at all animals in their cages, he liked the zoo better at night；到了办公室门口he was unlucky to find the door locked；最后没办法，他只能选择在动物园过一夜。人物性格：The zoo keeperWhat kind of person is the zoo keeper?1.A zoo keeper had been working at a zoo for 15 years and never experienced any problems

11、 .He always worked the evening shifts because he was trusted to properly lock up the zoo.- reliable2.wished all of his animals a good night .When he walked by the panthers cages and could see the young cubs playing together .He liked the zoo better a this hour because at night was when the animals c

12、ome to life .-with a great affection for animals3.In fear of setting off the alarm that he had just set , he did not turn on the lights .The zoo keeper turned on the flashlight on his phone .”What if they were armed ?”the zoo keeper thought to himself .-cautiousBurglars1.Whats the intention of the b

13、urglars ?“Alright ,lets just grab the animals and get out of here “-They wanted to steal some animals from the zoo .To their surprise ,the door was unlocked .”What ?There is no one here “another voice said ,”The old man left hours ago .”-It could be someone familiar with the zoo.文章线索：文章放出的一条线索，由空间的转

14、移展现主人公的心情和动作，这个过程中有惊讶有担忧，有恬静有无奈，但最终不得不停留在动物园内过夜为后续的故事发展做好了合理铺垫。除此以外，读者还需要关注的是主人公的品行，he was trusted，由此看出他是一个负责任的受人信任的人，之所以能在动物园工作十五年想必除了忠诚还有就是能力，这也能说明他后续一定可以冷静机智地处理突发情况。还有无论是开灯还是翻窗，文章多次强调了会触发警报器，这个警报器最后有没有想，要不要用也是一个伏笔。文中还有一句令人印象深刻的话：He liked the zoo betterat this hour becausenight was when the animal

15、s come to life.动物园的夜晚总是让人迷恋，因为它比白天更安静，但是动物们却在此刻活了过来。这是否也说明了在处理完突发情况后，守卫的心情由此而变得更加美好。Para1 The zoo keeper quietly got up and decided to investigate what was going on at the zoo_第一段的续写首句讲到守卫静悄悄地起身去查探究竟。第一段可以写到的是守卫的举动和心情，他起身查看究竟，他发现了什么？他发现了窃贼。窃贼们在干嘛？在商量什么？守卫决定采取什么措施？这些措施主要包括了前文提到的报警器，因为这是人的本能反应，可是报警器拉响

16、会不会将自己置于危险的境地，最后又该如何收场？这些疑问和选择会将守卫置于比较矛盾的选择之中，因而，第一段守卫的情绪应该包括看到窃贼的恐惧和担忧，以及是否该拉响警报的犹豫不决。场景一:The zoo keeper的动作和环境描写1.Everything enveloped by deep darkness,he prickedup his ears（竖起耳朵）,only to hear thepanting（喘息）of animals .黑暗笼罩着一切，他竖起耳朵，只听到动物的喘息声。2.He knew he had to be careful because he was unsure of

17、what these people were doing .他知道他必须小心，因为他不确定这些人在做什么。3.Prudently（谨慎地）,the zoo keepertiptoed（踮起脚尖）, following the burglars .动物园管理员小心翼翼地蹑手蹑脚地跟着窃贼。4.He crept（蹑手蹑脚的行动）behind the burglarson the quiet (秘密地）so as not to make any noise .他悄悄地蹑手蹑脚地跟在窃贼后面，以免发出任何噪音。5.Realizing the fierce burglars would hide in

18、somewhere , he didnt turn on the flashlight and sneaked quietly .意识到凶猛的窃贼会躲在某个地方，他没有打开手电筒，悄悄地溜走了。6.Whereas（然而）, without a light, he couldnt see anything. . On sucha silent night, he couldnt hear anything but his trembling heart.然而，没有灯光，他什么也看不见.在这样一个寂静的夜晚，他除了颤抖的心什么也听不见。场景二：The zoo keeper的心情（恐惧担忧）1.Se

19、veral minutes later,a gust of wind wafted(飘荡）through his hair ,he couldnt help trembling while the burglarsfootstep was closer and a sense of alarm flooded in the zoo keeper.几分钟后，一阵风吹过他的头发，当窃贼的脚步声越来越近时，他禁不住颤抖起来，动物园管理员感到一阵恐慌.2.A flood of fearwelled upin the zoo keeper.He shook all over,feeling like s

20、itting on pins and needles.动物园管理员心中涌起一阵恐惧他浑身发抖，感觉坐立不安。3.At the sight of the well- armed burglars, the zoo keeper felt a sense of fear caught him because it was the first time that he had faced the dilemma .一看到装备精良的窃贼，动物园管理员感到很害怕，因为这是他第一次面对困境。3.His heart thumping and his palms sweating, he raised his

21、 head up and was scared to find that the two burglars were armed.他的心砰砰直跳，手心冒汗，他抬起头，害怕地发现两个窃贼都有武器。4.Hepeeped（偷窥）at severalferocious (凶猛的）men armed with knives. Theylooked so aggressive that the zoo keeper felt seized by a strongsense of horror with sweating palms. Scratching his head, he began to wei

22、gh his options tensely.他偷看了几名手持刀的凶猛男子。它们看起来如此咄咄逼人，以至于动物园管理员手心出汗，感到一种强烈的恐怖感。他搔搔头开始紧张地权衡自己的选择。场景三：The zoo keeper权衡是否要拉响警报1.The zoo keeper began to weigh his options ,he could set off the alarm but that would alert the burglars ,or he couldconfront（面对）them but that could potentially put him in danger .

23、Para2 The zoo keeper saw two people in front of a bird cage trying to break the lock ._第二段的首句讲到守卫看到两个窃贼正欲破锁抢鸟。这一段中我们应该理解为在千钧一发之际了，和以前续写中出现的二段遇险类似，守卫不得不出手了，这是一个忠于职守了十五年的精神体现，他不可能袖手旁观的。但如何处理？怎么收场？又是学生需要考虑。他直面窃贼与之搏斗，也许他武艺高强以一打二不在话下，但更多的还是双拳难敌四手，更何况描写打斗的场面似乎也不好写；他打开电灯拉响警报喝止窃贼，并且与之周旋，这样几双眼睛互相盯着彼此貌似也有点尴尬；

24、他选择智取等几个窃贼入了鸟笼去抓鸟的时候反手又将鸟笼关上，将几个窃贼活生生变成鸟人，然后拉响警报等警察来收拾无论何种措施，只要言之有理我想都是没有问题的。最后的结尾，可以是警察逮捕了窃贼，留下守卫一个人静静地守着他的动物们，他发现此时的动物园比以往更好了，因为他的尽忠职守，让这一切看上去似乎更加完美。场景一：描写burglars的动作1.They took out the tools quietly and began to unlock the lock .One held the door tightly and the other tried to break the lock care

25、fully with their tool .After trying many times ,they broke the door successfully .他们悄悄地拿出工具，开始开锁。一个紧紧地握住门，另一个试图用工具小心地撬开锁。经过多次尝试，他们成功地撬开了门。2.Finally ,one of them got the door opened and tried to grab the bird .最后，其中一人把门打开，试图抓住那只鸟。场景二：The zoo keeper的心情1.Seeing what the two men did ,the zoo keeper felt

26、 very worried ,but didnt know what to do .看到这两个人做了什么，动物园管理员感到很担心，但不知道该怎么办。2.A sense ofmounting anxiety(不断增加的焦虑）gradually filled the zoo keepers mind .His mind began to race ,trying to think of a good method to protect the bird .Fortunately , a brilliant idea crossed his mind in time .动物园管理员的脑子里充满了越来

27、越焦虑的感觉。他的头脑开始紧张起来，试图想出一个保护这只鸟的好方法。3.Boiled up with rage ,he held back the urge to bang the disgusting thieves and brainstormed millions of ways to save his adorable birds .尽管他怒不可遏，但他还是抑制住了想揍那些恶心的小偷的冲动，并想出了数百万种拯救他可爱的小鸟的方法。场景三：The zoo keeper想出好的办法对付burglars1.Suddenly ,a good idea struck the zoo keeper

28、 that he rushed forward to the door of the bird cage and locked the door.Hearing the noise,the two men turned ,scared . To their surprise, they found the zoo keeper had locked the door.They bent down instantly behind a pole to escape the zoo keepers flashlight .突然，动物园管理员想到了一个好主意，他冲到鸟笼门前，锁上了鸟笼门。听到声音,

29、两个人吓得转过身来。令他们惊讶的是，他们发现动物园管理员已经锁上了门。他们立即在一根杆子后面弯下腰来躲避动物园管理员的手电筒。2.The bird tried to get away and bit one of the burglars .The zoo keepertriggered（触发）the alarm which turned on all of the lights in the zoo .The zoo keeper recognized the burglars to be two of the new interns（实习生）.这只鸟试图逃走，咬了一个窃贼。动物园管理员触发

30、了警报，打开了动物园所有的灯。动物园管理员认出窃贼是两个新来的实习生。3.He scurried (急步跑）to the door of the zoo as fast as he could and set off the alarm with all his might （力量）.他以最快的速度跑到动物园门口，用尽全力拉响了警报。4.The zoo keeper stood leaning against the wall, sending his position to the police near the zoo. He plucked up his courageand const

31、antly convinced himself that he would make it.动物园管理员靠墙站着，把他的位置告诉了动物园附近的警察。他鼓起勇气，不断地使自己相信他会成功的。场景四：故事结局(成功制服了burglars，保护了小鸟）1.After a while ,they begged him not to call for the police in a low voice before the zoo keeper recognized them.Then the zoo keeper unlocked the door and let them out .Consider

32、ing there was no damage ,the zoo keeper taught them a good lesson .The thieves promised the zoo keeper that they would not do anything wrong and try their best to protect animals in their life .过了一会儿，他们恳求他不要在动物园管理员认出他们之前小声叫警察。然后动物园管理员打开门让他们出去。考虑到没有损坏，动物园管理员给了他们一个教训。小偷向动物园管理员保证他们不会做错任何事，并尽最大努力保护动物。2.

33、When the police arrived ,the zoo keeper explained what had happened during the night .The burglar who had been bit by the bird was badly injured and required medical treatment and the other was arrested for breaking into the zoo .当警察赶到时，动物园管理员解释了晚上发生的事情。被鸟咬伤的窃贼伤势严重，需要治疗，另一个因闯入动物园而被捕。3.After a while ,the police hurried to the zoo and arrested the burglars successfully.The zoo keeper squealed and let out a sigh of relief ,“What an adventurous night at the zoo ?”过了一会儿，警察赶往动物园，成功地逮捕了窃贼。动物园管理员尖叫着松了一口气，“动物园里多么冒险的夜晚啊!”学科网（北京）股份有限公司