读后续写小丑导学案 高三英语二轮专题+.docx

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1、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。“My first year living in Los Angeles, I was a birthday-party clown (/ n ) .struggled a lot with my identity because, though I viewed myself as a filmmaker everyone in my life viewed me as this ridiculous day job. To make matters more confusing, being a clown is itself a

2、n identity-masking job. You wear makeup to cover your features. Sometimes Id have to wear a mask and completely cover my face.For certain parties, Id have to go as a specific character. The way that would work is someone from the company would drop off costumes for me the night before a party at an

3、appointed spot. It was like a shameful deal.One night, they handed me my trash bag and said, “Tomorrow you are going to be Batman” Now, keep in mind that at the time I had a giant moustache. I know: a clown with a moustache thats a huge red flag for parents. But I hadnt wanted to change my physical

4、appearance for that job.because that would have been me subconsciously (下意识地) admitting I was more of a clown than an artist So for the party,I chose not to shave.The next day, I went to the party. It was at this huge public park, and I had to leave my car parked far enough away so that the kids cou

5、ldnt see me getting off my car. So I was all the way on the edge of the park, and the only way for me to get to the party was to walk to it. Normally at these parties, all you have going for you is the element of surprise. You pop in through the front door.Surprise! Batmans here! All the kids go cra

6、zy. Without the element of surprise these visits are meaningless. So I thought, “Should I try to make an entrance (入场)for them?” Reflecting what to do next, I heard a scream, “Look, a Batman with-a moustache!” Suddenly, the entire party broke out in laughter.Para1:I was so embarrassed and wanted to

7、run back.Para2:I stared at the cake with a clown wearing a moustache in disbelief.写作思路分析：（1）材料分析该文本为第一人称回忆类故事，虽然文本语言真实，故事简单易懂，但极大可能是作者的真实回忆或名人传记（未体现普适性原则，因此写作难度较高）。主要讲诉了主人公作为一个职业小丑，他的工作就是在不同的聚会上穿上不同的衣服，扮演不同的角色。有一次，主人公要在小孩子家的party上扮演Batman的角色，但是作者潜意识认为自己是个艺术家，并不想改变自己的外形，因此也就发生了这个故事-Batman 留着大胡子。根据Clo

8、wn一词（给出了中文）和核心词birthday party, batman，cake，绝大部分考生能解码文章大意。第一段提出作者最大的失落：Though I viewed myself as a filmmaker, everyone in my life viewed me as this ridiculous day job.即作者对小丑这一工作的自我认知和公众认知之间有不一致。除此以外，小丑需要戴上面具，化上妆，继而cover ones feature and face。这样不能以真面目示人的工作让他非常反感。第二段，作者认为扮演自由的缺失（角色和地点均由公司指定）是一种耻辱。因此，前两

9、段属于负面情绪的陈述，即：失落+苦恼+羞耻。第三段提到公司指派作者去指定聚会扮演蝙蝠侠，作者明知蝙蝠侠不留胡子，依然选择不剃须。该段向读者暗示了作者的独立精神和把自己当艺术家的尊严。第四段描写第二天，他来到派对举办地点，一个公园。为了保留孩子内心的新鲜感，他将车停到很远的地方然后步行前往。就在他犹豫是否该从正门进入的时候，孩子们率先发现了他并且发出尖叫：“看啊，有胡子的蝙蝠侠！”一瞬间，现场所有的人都狂笑起来。此时的小丑不知道该何去何从，他知道因为留着胡子扮演蝙蝠侠势必会引发动静，可他没想到动静居然会这么大，这让他羞悔难当（2）段落开头语分析：Para1I was so embarrassed

10、 and wanted to run back._第一段中，作者看到人们大笑时候的情绪应该是又羞又悔的，恨不得找个地洞钻进去，但根据第二段的开头语作者想要跑回去而最后没有跑回去。后面因为要为蛋糕的出现做好铺垫，所以当作者看到蛋糕时候又要表现出一种惊讶，在这种情绪的转变之间穿插周围人群尤其是孩子的动作反应。抓住所给提示句的关键词，理出合理的构思线索。1、Why did the authorfeel embarrassed?2、Howdid he react to the situation?3、How did the cake appear? From who? For who?场景一：作者没有

11、往回跑（ Something stopped him running back )1.Batmannever run away!a laughterdrilled intomyhead andmore followed.Then and there,whispers,gigglesand jeersoverwhelmedme.“蝙蝠侠永远不会逃跑！”一阵笑声钻进我的脑海，接着是更多的笑声。然后，在那里，耳语着,笑声和嘲笑淹没了我。2.Nevertheless，it seemed that I had no alternativebut to staythere,becausethe birth

12、day-party was just my job.然而，似乎我别无选择，只能呆在那里，因为生日派对只是我的工作。场景二：作者尴尬的心理活动1.I started to regretmy choice to not shave,my faceflushedasif I were sitting on pins and needles.我开始后悔不刮胡子，脸涨得通红，好像坐立不安。2.How I wishedI couldfinda hole to hide in it.我多么希望能找到一个洞藏在里面。3.If I hadshavedmy moustache,Iwouldnt betrapped

13、 in such an awkwardsituation!I thoughtwith a deepbrushto my face .如果我剃了胡子，我就不会陷入如此尴尬的境地了！“我用颜色深的刷子刷着脸想。4.So ashamedwas I thatI couldfeel thebloodrush tomy face.Surroundedby thesecomplex gossip andlaugh,I evenwanted todig a hole to hide myself .我感到很惭愧，我能感觉到血涌到我的脸上。在这些复杂的闲话和笑声的包围下，我甚至想挖一个洞来隐藏自己。5.A de

14、ep shamemixedwith angerfrom nowherenearlytore my mask .不知从哪里来的深深的羞愧和愤怒几乎撕破了我的面具。场景三：生日舞会开始(衔接到下一段首句生日蛋糕的出现）第二段首句这个蛋糕的出现读者就会觉得很奇怪，谁会做一个有胡子的小丑蛋糕呢？这一定是刻意为之的，这个蛋糕一定是送给作者的，也许今天是他的生日，他自己都忘了。也许是人们喜欢他扮演的小丑，所以给他一个surprise表示感谢。也有可能是他工作的company特意安排，体现同事之间的一种温暖。总而言之，这应该是一个事先安排好的局。1.Suddenly,someone tuggled the

15、tip ofmy stupidcostume ,I turned around ,only to find a kid with uneven teeth.Are you the batman ?I nodded as a response ,confusion seizing me tightly.Then she led me to the party ,pointing at a cake .有人拽了拽我那愚蠢的服装的尖端，我转过身，却发现一个牙齿参差不齐的孩子。“你是蝙蝠侠吗？”我点头回应，困惑地紧紧抓住我。然后她带我到聚会上，指着一块蛋糕。2.Suddenly ,a Happy bi

16、rthday to you ,happy birthday to our clown ,surprisingly ,started with clapping and hailing .Rubbing my bleary eyes ,I saw them-John Smith ,my boss,Julia Zhang ,my partner and Old Tim and Tom ,the guys who retiredrecently.They helda birthday party for me!突然，令人惊讶的是，“祝你生日快乐，祝我们的小丑生日快乐”开始了鼓掌和欢呼。揉着我朦胧的眼

17、睛，我看到了他们约翰史密斯，我的老板，朱莉娅张，我的搭档，还有最近退休的老蒂姆和汤姆他们为我举办了一个生日派对!3.But thenthelaughterkind ofmerged and changed into cheerinf and applause.Feeling kind of puzzled, I lookedin the dirction ofthe laughter,The birthdayboycame towards me ,pushinga dinningcart with a hugebirthday cake on it.但是笑声融合在一起，变成了欢呼和掌声。我感到

18、有点困惑，看着笑声的方向，生日男孩朝我走来，推着一辆餐车，车上有一个巨大的生日蛋糕。para2 I stared at the cake with a clown wearing a moustache in disbelief._第二段首句中的in disbelief，表述的是作者的难以置信。在惊讶过后应该是一种喜悦和感动，这些年的屈辱有可能在这一刻全部化为乌有，文章最后进行主题的提炼：本文主人公一直在identity 自己的定位-小丑还是艺术家，最终也领悟出，无论是哪种身份，他的意义是给孩子们带来欢乐。场景一：描写作者的反应（惊讶、喜悦)1、Surprise deprived my pow

19、er of speech ,ridiculous！”I whispered and gawped at it .惊讶剥夺了我的说话能力，“可笑！”我低声说，目瞪口呆地看着它。2、I feltthe warmthsurgingthroughmy body.我感到温暖涌上全身。3.A sense ofdelightreplacedthe moountinganxiety and depressionin my mind.一种喜悦感取代了我心中日益增加的焦虑和沮丧。4.With tears streaming dowmnmy face ,words failed me,my heartwas pou

20、ndingwith excitement .我泪流满面，说不出话来，我的心激动得怦怦直跳。场景二：同事们，家人们或是家长孩子们对我生日的祝福1、All of a sudden, the lights were on and a band started to play romantic songs。Immersed in the music ,I swayed in the breeze and forgot the embarrassment .突然，灯亮了，乐队开始演奏浪漫的歌曲。沉浸在音乐中，我在微风中摇摆，忘记了尴尬.2、The crowdssurrounded me and some

21、 familiarfacesemerged in frontof me.Hard to believe they wer my friends and colleagues.They exclaimedHappy birthday!The greatest artist!人群包围着我，一些熟悉的面孔出现在我面前。很难相信他们是我的朋友和同事。他们高呼“生日快乐！最伟大的艺术家！”3、“Happy birthday,young man!Once again,laughter,blessingand singingmingled in the air,I expressedmy sincereth

22、anks to the dad,leavingthe house with a satisfying smile.“生日快乐，年轻人！”笑声、祝福和歌声再次在空气中交织，我向父亲表达了我诚挚的感谢，带着满意的微笑离开了家。场景三：我的改变1、That year,I struggleda lot with my identity:Was I a film makeror a clown?But that day,at least,there wasno doubtin my mindwhat I was-a heroas a clown!那一年，我为自己的身份挣扎了很多：我是电影制作人还是小丑？但那一天，至少在我的脑海里，我是一个毫无疑问的小丑英雄！2、And now ,I dont strugglemy identityanymore-no matterI was a filmmaker or crown,at least,I am thehero that can bringhappiness to kids.现在，我不再为自己的身份而挣扎不管我是电影制片人还是王冠，至少，我是能给孩子们带来快乐的英雄。学科网（北京）股份有限公司