高三英语提高句子的档次.ppt

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1、如何提高书面表达句子的档次如何提高书面表达句子的档次Welcome to our school 你你你你的的的的英英英英国国国国朋朋朋朋友友友友正正正正在在在在做做做做一一一一个个个个课课课课题题题题；世世世世界界界界各各各各地地地地的的的的生生生生日日日日庆庆庆庆祝祝祝祝方方方方式式式式。他他他他请请请请你你你你介介介介绍绍绍绍中中中中国国国国学学学学生生生生过过过过生生生生日日日日的的的的方方方方式式式式。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文：请你根据以下要点写一篇短文：请你根据以下要点写一篇短文：请你根据以下要点写一篇短文：一、通常方式一、通常方式一、通常方式一、通常方式1 1 1 1生日聚会生日

2、聚会生日聚会生日聚会2 2 2 2生日礼物生日礼物生日礼物生日礼物3 3 3 3生日祝福生日祝福生日祝福生日祝福二、我认为更有意义的庆祝方式和理由二、我认为更有意义的庆祝方式和理由二、我认为更有意义的庆祝方式和理由二、我认为更有意义的庆祝方式和理由 *词数词数词数词数100-120 100-120 100-120 100-120 （2005 2005 2005 2005 浙江卷）浙江卷）浙江卷）浙江卷）NowstudentsinChinacelebratetheirbirthdaysinmanyways.Usually,apartyisheld.Bestfriendsandrelativesw

3、illcometotheparty.Theyusuallybuyagift.Theyshowtheirbestwishes.Sometimes,peoplesendshortmessagestooanditisbecomingverypopular.ButIthinkthatitsbettertohelpotherpeople.Weknowthatitsimportanttolearntohelpotherpeople.Helpingotherpeoplecandousalotofgood.Peoplewillhelpyoubecauseyouvehelpedthemandyoullbehap

4、py学生作品（学生作品（1 1）NowadaysstudentsinChinacelebratetheirNowadaysstudentsinChinacelebratetheirbirthdaysinvariousways.birthdaysinvariousways.Usually,apartyisheldsothatpeoplecangetUsually,apartyisheldsothatpeoplecangettogether.Bestfriends,aswellasrelatives,aregoingtotogether.Bestfriends,aswellasrelatives,

5、aregoingtobeinvited.Itspolitetobuyasmallgiftwhichstandsbeinvited.Itspolitetobuyasmallgiftwhichstandsforonesbestwishes.Whatsmore,sendingshortforonesbestwishes.Whatsmore,sendingshortmessagesononesbirthdayisbecomingmoreandmessagesononesbirthdayisbecomingmoreandmorepopular,asaresultofitsconvenience.more

6、popular,asaresultofitsconvenience.However,asfarasImconcerned,itsmoreHowever,asfarasImconcerned,itsmoremeaningfultocareaboutothersthanaboutoneself.Asmeaningfultocareaboutothersthanaboutoneself.Asisknowntoall,togiveisbetterthantoreceive.isknowntoall,togiveisbetterthantoreceive.Birthdaysmeannotonlybein

7、golderbutmorehelpfulBirthdaysmeannotonlybeingolderbutmorehelpfulandusefultotheworld.Therefore,itsofimportanceandusefultotheworld.Therefore,itsofimportancetolearntohelpothers.Helpingothersononestolearntohelpothers.Helpingothersononesbirthdaycandoyoualotofgood.Foronething,birthdaycandoyoualotofgood.Fo

8、ronething,peoplewillhelpyouinreturninthefuture;forpeoplewillhelpyouinreturninthefuture;foranother,youllbehappy.another,youllbehappy.Asaresult,IthinkitbettertohelpotherstospendAsaresult,Ithinkitbettertohelpotherstospendonesbirthday.onesbirthday.学生作品（学生作品（2 2）NowadaysstudentsinChinacelebratetheirNowad

9、aysstudentsinChinacelebratetheirbirthdaysinvariousways.birthdaysinvariousways.Usually,apartyisheldsothatpeoplecangetUsually,apartyisheldsothatpeoplecangettogether.Bestfriends,aswellasrelatives,aregoingtotogether.Bestfriends,aswellasrelatives,aregoingtobeinvited.Itspolitetobuyasmallgiftwhichstandsbei

10、nvited.Itspolitetobuyasmallgiftwhichstandsforonesbestwishes.Whatsmore,sendingshortforonesbestwishes.Whatsmore,sendingshortmessagesononesbirthdayisbecomingmoreandmessagesononesbirthdayisbecomingmoreandmorepopular,asaresultofitsconvenience.morepopular,asaresultofitsconvenience.However,asfarasImconcern

11、ed,itsmoreHowever,asfarasImconcerned,itsmoremeaningfultocareaboutothersthanaboutoneself.Asmeaningfultocareaboutothersthanaboutoneself.Asisknowntoall,togiveisbetterthantoreceive.isknowntoall,togiveisbetterthantoreceive.BirthdaysmeannotonlybeingolderbutmorehelpfulBirthdaysmeannotonlybeingolderbutmoreh

12、elpfulandusefultotheworld.Therefore,itsofimportanceandusefultotheworld.Therefore,itsofimportancetolearntohelpothers.Helpingothersononestolearntohelpothers.Helpingothersononesbirthdaycandoyoualotofgood.Foronething,birthdaycandoyoualotofgood.Foronething,peoplewillhelpyouinreturninthefuture;forpeoplewi

13、llhelpyouinreturninthefuture;foranother,youllbehappy.another,youllbehappy.Asaresult,IthinkitbettertohelpotherstospendAsaresult,Ithinkitbettertohelpotherstospendonesbirthday.onesbirthday.学生作品（学生作品（2 2）1.1.要点齐全要点齐全2.2.较多的语法结构和较多的语法结构和高级高级词汇词汇 3.3.全文结构紧凑全文结构紧凑 高档书面表达的要求：高档书面表达的要求：1.1.1.1.时间：昨天下午放学后时间：昨

14、天下午放学后时间：昨天下午放学后时间：昨天下午放学后 请根据下述情况写一篇请根据下述情况写一篇请根据下述情况写一篇请根据下述情况写一篇80-12080-12080-12080-120个单词的英语新闻个单词的英语新闻个单词的英语新闻个单词的英语新闻 广播稿，准备在你校广播台播出。广播稿，准备在你校广播台播出。广播稿，准备在你校广播台播出。广播稿，准备在你校广播台播出。2.2.2.2.地点：回家路上地点：回家路上地点：回家路上地点：回家路上3.3.3.3.人物：高一（人物：高一（人物：高一（人物：高一（2 2 2 2）班两名男生田力和段凯）班两名男生田力和段凯）班两名男生田力和段凯）班两名男生田力

15、和段凯4.4.4.4.事件：边骑车边谈笑，后追逐一辆公交车，觉得好事件：边骑车边谈笑，后追逐一辆公交车，觉得好事件：边骑车边谈笑，后追逐一辆公交车，觉得好事件：边骑车边谈笑，后追逐一辆公交车，觉得好 玩。公交车遇红灯停下，两人来不及刹车，摔倒在玩。公交车遇红灯停下，两人来不及刹车，摔倒在玩。公交车遇红灯停下，两人来不及刹车，摔倒在玩。公交车遇红灯停下，两人来不及刹车，摔倒在 地。一人左手臂摔断，一人腿部受伤。地。一人左手臂摔断，一人腿部受伤。地。一人左手臂摔断，一人腿部受伤。地。一人左手臂摔断，一人腿部受伤。5.5.5.5.警示：严格遵守交通规则，切忌在马路上嬉笑玩耍。警示：严格遵守交通规则，

16、切忌在马路上嬉笑玩耍。警示：严格遵守交通规则，切忌在马路上嬉笑玩耍。警示：严格遵守交通规则，切忌在马路上嬉笑玩耍。1.Therewasanaccidenthappenedtotwostudents2.inourschoolyesterdayafternoon.(典型病句）典型病句）Therewasanaccidentthathappenedtotwostudentsinourschoolyesterdayafternoon.(定语从句）定语从句）Anaccidentoccurredtotwostudentsinourschoolyesterdayafternoon.（高级词汇）（高级词汇）An

17、accidenthappenedtotwostudentsinourschoolyesterdayafternoon.2.TianLiandDuanKaiwereridingbikessideby3.sideonthewayhomeafterschool.Theywere4.talkingandlaughingloudly.(陈蝉陈蝉)TianLiandDuanKaiwereridingbikessidebysideonthewayhomeafterschool,talkingandlaughingloudly.（用分词合并）（用分词合并）3.Thetrafficlightsturnedred

18、.Theyfoundit4.wastoolatetostopthebikes.Thelightsturnedred,buttheyfounditwastoolatetostoptheirbikes.(黄颖黄颖)（用连接词连接）（用连接词连接）Seeingtheredtrafficlights,theytriedtostopbutitwastoolate.（用分词合并）（用分词合并）4.Onesleftarmwashurtandtheotherslegwashurttoo.(戴靓戴靓)Onesleftarmwasbrokenwhiletheothersleggothurt.(边昶边昶)(避免用相

19、同结构和词汇）（高级连词）避免用相同结构和词汇）（高级连词）Onehadhisleftarmbrokenwhiletheothergothisleghurt./theotherwasbadlyhurtintheleg.)(高级结构）高级结构）Theywereknockedofftheirbikes,onewiththeleftarmbroken,andtheotherwithoneleghurt.(高级介词短语高级介词短语/独立主格结构）独立主格结构）(昭昭昭昭)5.Ifwedontobeytrafficrules,wemightdie.a.Ifwegoagainsttrafficrules,

20、wemightloseourlives.b.Ifwegoagainsttrafficrules,wemightendupinhospital.c.Goingagainsttrafficrulesmightcostusourlives.d.Dontriskourlivesgoingagainsttrafficrules.(多种表达）多种表达）6.Hegotupat7oclock.（使用多种句式使用多种句式使用多种句式使用多种句式）Itwasnotuntil7oclockthathegotup.Notuntil7oclockdidhegetup.(强调句）强调句）（倒装句）（倒装句）Hedidnt

21、getupuntil7oclock.1.Ihadagoodidea.a.Agoodideaoccurredtome.b.Icameupwithagoodidea.2.Dontworry.Welltrytohelpyou.makeeveryeffortto,makegreateffortstosparenoeffortsto,tryeverymeanstodoallwecanto,dowhatwecanto多种表达多种表达&高级词汇高级词汇Practice:1.Thereare80%ofthepopulationliveonfarming.2.At8thismorning,therewereab

22、out50Americanstudentscametovisitourschool.80%ofthepopulationliveonfarming.At8thismorning,about50Americanstudentscametovisitourschool.Practice:（用分词合并）（用分词合并）1.Hehadfinishedhishomework.2.Hewentouttoplayfootball.3.2.Iwasmovedbyhiswords.Idecidedtolend3.himahand.Movedbyhiswords,Idecidedtolendhimahand.Hav

23、ingfinishedhishomework,hewentouttoplayfootball.Practice:（用连接词连接）（用连接词连接）1.Thepolicesearchedeverywhere.Themissing2.boycouldnotbefound.Thepolicesearchedeverywhere,butthemissingboycouldnotbefound.Thoughthepolicesearchedeverywhere,themissingboycouldnotbefound.Practice:(避免用相同结构和词汇）避免用相同结构和词汇）1.Ilikesport

24、s.Ilikemusic,too.a.Ilikesportsandmusicaswell.b.Ilikesportsaswellasmusic.2.MyfavoritesubjectisEnglishwhilemysistersfavoritesubjectishistory.a.MyfavoritesubjectisEnglishwhilemyb.sistersishistory.b.MyfavoritesubjectisEnglishwhilemysisterlikeshistorybest.Myoldgrandfatherfellasleepinthesofa.Hehadabookonh

25、isknees.Practice:（用介词短语）（用介词短语）Myoldgrandfatherfellasleepinthesofawithabookonhisknees.提高句子档次的小结：提高句子档次的小结：1.1.用分词短语合并句子用分词短语合并句子 用介词短语合并句子用介词短语合并句子 用独立主格结构合并句子用独立主格结构合并句子 用连接词连接句子用连接词连接句子2.2.用高级结构和词汇用高级结构和词汇3.3.用定语从句、主语从句、强调句、倒装句用定语从句、主语从句、强调句、倒装句4.4.用不同结构和词汇用不同结构和词汇An accident happened to two stude

26、nts in ourschoolyesterdayafternoon.Schoolwasover.TianliandDunkaifromGrade1weregoinghomebybike.Theyweretalkingandlaughinghappily.Whentheysawacarwhichwaspassingby,theystartedtorunafter it.They thought it was very interesting.Thebusstoppedwhenthetrafficlightturnedred.Thetwo students were very close to

27、the bus and theycouldnt stop theirbikes in time.Theyfelloff thebikes.TianlibrokehisleftarmandDunkaihurthisleg.(学生作文）学生作文）An accident happened to two students in ourschool yesterday afternoon.School was over.TianliandDunkaifromGrade1weregoinghomebybike.They were talking and laughing happily.When they

28、 saw a bus which was passing by,theystarted to run after it.They thought it was veryinteresting.Thebusstoppedwhenthetrafficlightturnedred.Thetwostudentswereveryclosetothebusand theycouldntstoptheirbikesintime.Theyfelloffthebikes.TianlisbrokehishisleftarmandDunkaihurthisleg.Anaccidenthappenedtotwostu

29、dentsinourschoolyesterdayafternoon.Schoolwasover.TianliandDunkaifromGrade1weregoinghomebybike.Theyweretalkingandlaughinghappily.Anaccidentoccurredtotwostudentsinourschoolyesterdayafternoon.Afterschoolwasover,TianliandDunkaifromGrade1wereontheirwayhomebybike,talkingandlaughinghappily.Whentheyseeabusw

30、hichwaspassingby,theystartedtorunafterit.Theythoughtitwasveryinteresting.Thebusstoppedwhenthetrafficlightturnedred.Seeingapassingcar,theystartedtochaseit,thinkingitgreatfun.Unfortunately,thebusstoppedthemomentthetrafficlightturnedred.Thetwostudentswereveryclosetothebusandtheycouldntstoptheirbikesint

31、ime.Theyfelloffthebikes.TianlisbrokehishisleftarmandDunkaihurthisleg.Thetwostudentsweresoclosetothebusthattheywerenotabletostoptheirbikesintime.Asaresult,theywereknockedoffthebikes,onewithhisleftarmbrokenandtheotherwithhisleghurt.Anaccidentoccurredtotwostudentsinourschoolyesterday afternoon.After sc

32、hool was over,TianliandDunkaifromGrade1wereheadinghomebybike,talkingandlaughinghappily.Seeingapassingbus,theystartedtochaseit,thinkingitwasgreatfun.Unfortunately,thebusstoppedthemomentthetrafficlightturnedred.Thetwostudentsweresoclosetothebusthattheywerenotabletostoptheirbikesintime.Asaresult,theywe

33、reknockedoffthebikes,onewithhisleftarmbrokenandtheotherwithhisleghurt.(95words)NowstudentsinChinacelebratetheirbirthdaysinmanyways.Usually,apartyisheld.Bestfriendsandrelativeswillcometotheparty.Theyusuallybuyagift.Theyshowtheirbestwishes.Sometimes,peoplesendshortmessagestooanditisbecomingverypopular

34、.ButIthinkthatitsbettertohelpotherpeople.Weknowthatitsimportanttolearntohelpotherpeople.Helpingotherpeoplecandousalotofgood.PeoplewillhelpyoubecauseyouvehelpedthemandyoullbehappyImprove this composition,try!Improve this composition,try!(1)NowstudentsinChinacelebratetheirbirthdaysinmanyways.(2)Usuall

35、y,apartyisheld.Bestfriendsandrelativeswillcometotheparty.（用（用where定语从句）定语从句）(3)Theyusuallybuyagift.Theyshowtheirbestwishes.（和并句子）（和并句子）(4)Sometimes,peoplesendshortmessagestooanditisbecomingverypopular（用（用which定语从句）定语从句）.(5)But(替换）替换）Ithink（替换）（替换）thatitsbettertohelpotherpeople.(6)Weknowthatitsimport

36、anttolearntohelpothers.Helpingotherpeoplecandousalotofgood.(7)Peoplewillhelpyouinreturnandyoullbehappy（用（用Foronething,Foranother替换）替换）.NowadaysstudentsinChinacelebratetheirbirthdaysinvariousways.Usually,apartyisheldwherebestfriendsaswellasrelativescangettogetherandhavefun.Theyusuallybuyasmallgiftwit

37、hwhichtoexpresstheirbestwishes.Sometimes,peoplesendshortmessagestoo,whichisbecomingverypopular.However,asfarasImconcerned,itsbettertodosomethingforothers.Asisknowntoall,itsofimportancetohelpothers.Helpingothersononesbirthdaycanbenotonlymeaningfulbutalsodoyoualotofgood.Foronethingpeoplewillhelpyouinr

38、eturn;foranother,youllgethappinessoutofthat.NowadaysstudentsinChinacelebratetheirbirthdaysinvariousways.Usually,apartyisheldwherebestfriendsaswellasrelativescangettogetherandhavefun.Theyusuallybuyasmallgiftwithwhichtoexpresstheirbestwishes.Sometimes,peoplesendshortmessagestoo,whichisbecomingverypopu

39、lar.However,asfarasImconcerned,itsbettertodosomethingforothers.Asisknowntoall,itsofimportancetohelpothers.Helpingothersononesbirthdaycanbenotonlymeaningfulbutalsodoyoualotofgood.Foronethingpeoplewillhelpyouinreturn;foranother,youllgethappinessoutofthat.Inshort,thebestwaytocelebrateourbirthdaysistohelpothers.Thank you!