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1、高考英语高考英语基础写作基础写作基础写作常见问题基础写作常见问题1、句子结构句子结构的错误的错误 The heavy rain was not come for giving relief from drought（钰霞）（钰霞）people noticed that they cut plenty of trees for money is wrong and known the importance of trees.(梦辉）梦辉）They were ever to cut down larges number of trees,which they felt regretted now,

2、and determined to plant more trees,green the mountain,stop from the people let it happen again（詹子婉）（詹子婉）People there decided to plant trees and make a forest,beautified the smooth hills,preventing the same kind disaster happening again.(钥）钥）2、实义词的形式变化（时态、语态、非谓语）、实义词的形式变化（时态、语态、非谓语）Recently western a

3、rea was raining heavily after the long dry weather（蔡茵）Recently it has a heavy rain in the west(梦辉）3、意义表达错误、意义表达错误 People didnt realize that the heavy rain give relief from drought rather than floods.4、不合英语习惯、不合英语习惯 They were hard to stop the flood.There has a heavy rain.5、题意理解错误。用条文式(1.2.3.)1.There

4、is but one China and Taiwan is a part of China.2.Taiwan,the biggest island,with a population of 22,000,000,lies to the southeast of Fujian Province.3.It is a very beautiful island.4.Riyuetan Pool and Mount Ali are very famous places of interest.5.Now,many Taiwanese come to the mainland,they visit th

5、eir relatives and friends,and many of them build factories and run shops.5、用词不当：、用词不当：they regarded what they have done the water disaster(flood)拼写错误或笔误拼写错误或笔误,which destroied the farmland trees were importance for their living environment They regreted cutting down a lot of trees made up their mind

6、 to planted more trees and to Stop the flood happen again.a heavy rain came to the western of Chinaso they cutted down the trees 拼写错误，卷面很花7、信息点组织不符合逻辑8、卷面不整洁优点：经过一段时间的实践，已经有了5句话作文的意识，卷面更整洁，笔误越来越少，句子结构的准确性有了明显提高，速度更快。假设你最近参加了由某电视台举办的中学生英语演讲比赛并获奖，该台准备组织获假设你最近参加了由某电视台举办的中学生英语演讲比赛并获奖，该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加一次英语夏

7、令营活动，下表是这次活动的时间安排和活动内容。奖者去北京参加一次英语夏令营活动，下表是这次活动的时间安排和活动内容。写作内容写作内容 电视台现就活动时间和活动内容征求你的意见。请按照以下要求以书信形式给予答复。电视台现就活动时间和活动内容征求你的意见。请按照以下要求以书信形式给予答复。1、选择适合你的时间并说明理由；、选择适合你的时间并说明理由；2、解释你只能参加其中的两项活动（听英语讲座和教外宾学中文），虽然你、解释你只能参加其中的两项活动（听英语讲座和教外宾学中文），虽然你 认为所有的活动都很有意义；认为所有的活动都很有意义；3、说明你选择的理由：听英语讲座了解英美文化的信息；教外宾学中文

8、因为、说明你选择的理由：听英语讲座了解英美文化的信息；教外宾学中文因为 2008北京奥运让越来越多的外宾想了解中国。北京奥运让越来越多的外宾想了解中国。写作要求写作要求1.必须使用必须使用5个句子表达全部的内容个句子表达全部的内容2.信的开头和结尾已给出。信的开头和结尾已给出。Dear Sir or Madame,Im glad to be invited to the English summer camp.活动时间活动时间 7月月15日日-22日或日或 8月月15日日-22日日 活动内容活动内容 参加英语角参加英语角 学唱英语歌曲学唱英语歌曲听英语讲座听英语讲座 表演英语短剧表演英语短剧看

9、英语电影看英语电影 教外宾学中文教外宾学中文 2007高考英语高考英语考试说明考试说明样题样题题型特点题型特点1、写作题材贴近学生的学习和生活。历年题材都非常贴近学生的学习和生活，可以预、写作题材贴近学生的学习和生活。历年题材都非常贴近学生的学习和生活，可以预 料料07年还会在这些范围之内。年还会在这些范围之内。2、写作的体裁主要是故事性描述和应用文写作两类。、写作的体裁主要是故事性描述和应用文写作两类。3、写作内容具有半封闭性。写作内容是被规定了的，学生必须将文章所规定的信息点、写作内容具有半封闭性。写作内容是被规定了的，学生必须将文章所规定的信息点 完整地表达出来，但对于语言表达的方式、信

10、息组织的先后秩序、需要补充哪些信完整地表达出来，但对于语言表达的方式、信息组织的先后秩序、需要补充哪些信 息等，学生又有一定的自主构思空间。息等，学生又有一定的自主构思空间。4、信息点多，但必须用、信息点多，但必须用5句话表达全部信息点。须使用复杂句来综合多个信息点，而句话表达全部信息点。须使用复杂句来综合多个信息点，而 且要兼顾句与句之间在语法上的衔接和语意上的连贯。且要兼顾句与句之间在语法上的衔接和语意上的连贯。5、满分、满分15分，参考时间为分，参考时间为10分钟。分钟。6、信息点呈现方式多样：、信息点呈现方式多样：能力要求能力要求1 1、审题能力、审题能力(包含全部信息）包含全部信息）

11、Ability to take in the information given2 2、信息组织能力：信息组合、排列。、信息组织能力：信息组合、排列。Ability to analyze what is involved in the topicAbility to build up the frame of the composition3 3、信息表达能力、信息表达能力 Ability to express yourself 用词的合理性用词的合理性 句子结构的复杂度（句子结构的复杂度（从句、分词短语等）语法运用的正确性语法运用的正确性 信息内容的完整性信息内容的完整性 句子之间的连贯性句

12、子之间的连贯性4 4、规范整洁的书写能力、规范整洁的书写能力:评分原则规定评分原则规定“如书写较差，以至影响如书写较差，以至影响 交际，将分数降低一个档次交际，将分数降低一个档次”（正确的拼写词汇和标点）基基础础写作写作评评分模板分模板语语言言 语语法和句子法和句子结结构准确性高，复构准确性高，复杂杂性。性。词汇词汇使用好，只有少使用好，只有少许错误许错误8、7、6、5、4、3、2、1、0内容内容信息内容完整（不加减信息）信息内容完整（不加减信息）5、4、3、2、1、0连贯连贯 内容内容连贯连贯，且，且结结构构紧紧凑凑2、1、0项项目目句子句子评评分板分板10 0.5 1 1.5 2 2.52

13、0 0.5 1 1.5 2 2.530 0.5 1 1.5 2 2.540 0.5 1 1.5 2 2.550 0.5 1 1.5 2 2.5连贯连贯0 0.5 1 1.5 2 2.52、分析法分析法（以句子为单位）（以句子为单位）【注】多一个少一个句子扣一分；文不对题给零分。1、印象法印象法 推荐步骤认真审题(Read the topic carefully)归纳排列信息点(Find out the key points organize the messages in 5 sentences)草拟短语(Translate the phrases)确定短语和句型Think of the wo

14、rds,phrases,sentence structures you may use in writing.连词成句(Make up sentences)Change the sentence structure where necessary;组句成篇（润色）Add some conjunctions if needed.检查修改(adding and revising)规范誊写写作步骤写作步骤1 1找准主题，以防找准主题，以防偏题偏题(what)(what)参加夏令营。参加夏令营。体裁格式体裁格式2 2明确目的，更有明确目的，更有针对性（针对性（why)why)电视台邀请参加夏令营，写信

15、回复。电视台邀请参加夏令营，写信回复。3 3时间时间(when)(when)夏令营还没有开始，用一般将来时。夏令营还没有开始，用一般将来时。人称人称时态时态、语态语态4 4找准找准信息点信息点1 1、所写文章有哪些信息点？、所写文章有哪些信息点？6 6项活动项活动2 2、怎样怎么组合、排列信息点？、怎样怎么组合、排列信息点？第第1步步 审题审题1、整合信息（按逻辑顺序整合成5个句子)很很高兴有机会参加活动高兴有机会参加活动(such activities as)选择选择7月月15日日-22日或日或8月月15日日-22日日并并说明理由说明理由 只参加两项听英语讲座和教外宾学中文，只参加两项听英语

16、讲座和教外宾学中文，虽然虽然所有活动都很有意义所有活动都很有意义 说明选择的理由：听英语讲座了解英美文化的信息；教外宾学中文因为说明选择的理由：听英语讲座了解英美文化的信息；教外宾学中文因为2008北京奥运让越来越多的外宾想了解中国。（整合）北京奥运让越来越多的外宾想了解中国。（整合）第第2步步 整合信息，整合信息，译成英语。译成英语。2、译成英文词语或句子、译成英文词语或句子(在上面基础上幻灯呈现在上面基础上幻灯呈现句子所需的词汇，短语和句型)第第3步步 连词成句。连词成句。考虑句子结构的复杂性和句子内容的连贯性连贯性 很高兴能有机会参加活动很高兴能有机会参加活动(such activiti

17、es as)Thank you very much for arranging so many activities,such as attending English corner,having English lectures,seeing English films,learning English songs,acting English plays and helping foreigners learn Chinese.选择一个时间选择一个时间并并说明理由；说明理由；7月月15日日-22日或日或8月月15日日-22日日 只能参加两项活动听英语讲座和教外宾学中文），只能参加两项活动听

18、英语讲座和教外宾学中文），同时同时表示所有的活动都很有意义；表示所有的活动都很有意义；I can only take part in two of them,because I will have to spend some time in doing my research project.I would like to listen to the lectures and help foreigners learn Chinese,（组合）组合）说明你选择的理由：了解英美文化的信息；让越来越多的外宾想了解中国。说明你选择的理由：了解英美文化的信息；让越来越多的外宾想了解中国。I will

19、learn more about western culture,as more and more foreigners want to know about China and the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.第4步 连句成篇Dear Sir or Madam,Dear Sir or Madam,Im glad to be invited to the English summer camp.Im glad to be invited to the English summer camp.Thank you very much forThank you very

20、 much for arranging so many activities,such as attending arranging so many activities,such as attending English corner,having English lectures,seeing English films,learning English English corner,having English lectures,seeing English films,learning English songs,acting English plays and helping for

21、eigners learn Chinese.songs,acting English plays and helping foreigners learn Chinese.I am sureI am sure all the activities will do a lot of good to us students.all the activities will do a lot of good to us students.But its a pity thatBut its a pity that I can I can only take part in two of them,on

22、ly take part in two of them,becausebecause I will have to spend some time in doing I will have to spend some time in doing my research project.my research project.I would like to listen to the lectures,I would like to listen to the lectures,in whichin which I will I will learn more about western cul

23、ture,learn more about western culture,andand help foreigners learn Chinese,help foreigners learn Chinese,asas more more and more foreigners want to know about China and the 2008 Beijing Olympic and more foreigners want to know about China and the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.Games.Due to the fact that

24、Due to the fact that I will see my grandparents in the country right I will see my grandparents in the country right after our school finishes in mid-July,I am going to attend the camp from after our school finishes in mid-July,I am going to attend the camp from August 15August 15thth to 22 to 22ndn

25、d.Thank you very much.Thank you very much.Yours truly,Yours truly,Li Ping Li PingDear Sir or Madam,Dear Sir or Madam,Im glad to be invited to the English summer camp.Im glad to be invited to the English summer camp.Thank you very much for arranging so many Thank you very much for arranging so many a

26、ctivities,such as attending English corner,having activities,such as attending English corner,having English lectures,seeing English films,learning English lectures,seeing English films,learning English songs,acting English plays and helping English songs,acting English plays and helping foreigners

27、learn Chinese.foreigners learn Chinese.I am sure all the I am sure all the activities will do a lot of good to us students.activities will do a lot of good to us students.But But its a pity that I can only take part in two of them,its a pity that I can only take part in two of them,because I will ha

28、ve to spend some time in doing mybecause I will have to spend some time in doing myresearch project.research project.I would like to listen to the I would like to listen to the lectures,in which I will learn more about western lectures,in which I will learn more about western culture,and help foreig

29、ners learn Chinese,as moreculture,and help foreigners learn Chinese,as more and more foreigners want to know about China and and more foreigners want to know about China and the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.Due to the fact that I will see my grandparents in Due to the fa

30、ct that I will see my grandparents in the country right after our school finishes in mid-the country right after our school finishes in mid-July,I am going to attend the camp from August 15July,I am going to attend the camp from August 15thth to 22to 22ndnd.Thank you very much.Thank you very much.Yo

31、urs truly,Yours truly,Li Ping Li Ping第第句顺应已给出的句中的句顺应已给出的句中的gladglad心心情，表示感谢安排这么多的活动，情，表示感谢安排这么多的活动，具有较好的连贯性。同时很自然地具有较好的连贯性。同时很自然地将活动内容做一介绍。将活动内容做一介绍。第第句用简单句表达活动的意义，句用简单句表达活动的意义，语意上连贯，句式上没有继续用语意上连贯，句式上没有继续用“长长”句，有变化。句，有变化。第第句用句用butbut转折并用转折并用its a pity its a pity 句型表示委婉的歉意，然后解释原句型表示委婉的歉意，然后解释原因。因。第第句

32、用一个长句子表达自己要参句用一个长句子表达自己要参加的两个项目，并解释原因，解释加的两个项目，并解释原因，解释原因的第一句用定语从句，第二句原因的第一句用定语从句，第二句用状语从句，使句子结构富于变化用状语从句，使句子结构富于变化。第第句解释参加的时间并给出解释句解释参加的时间并给出解释。之所以把时间放在后面，主要是。之所以把时间放在后面，主要是考虑它与题目已经给出的句子之间考虑它与题目已经给出的句子之间在语意上的连贯性不够。在语意上的连贯性不够。点评点评 Another possible version:Dear Sir or Madame,Im glad to be invited to

33、the English summer camp.Ive decided to go to Beijing for the English summer camp during the time from 1522,July because Ill have to stay with my parents for the rest of the summer vocation in America.I will choose two activities to take part in though all of them are meaningful and interesting,which

34、 are listening to English lectures and teaching foreigners Chinese.I think I can learn more about British and American literatures by attending the lectures and speeches.And the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing so many foreign friends will come to China at that time.I want to let more and

35、more foreigners know better about China.Thank you very much.Yours truly,Li Ping 课堂实践请根据情景说明，用5个规范的句子描述全部所给的信息内容。【写作内容】【写作内容】用英语写一封便函给你的同学Sam，邀请他参加同学聚会。聚会时间聚会时间：本周六（12月2日）下午6点30分。聚会地点聚会地点：张梅家（光明路25号）。聚会地点路线图聚会地点路线图：按下图所画路线告诉Sam怎样去张梅家。【写作要求】【写作要求】1、必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容2、将5个句子组织成连贯的短文。注意：便函的格式已给出。November

36、 27th,2006Dear Sam,Yours,Li Wen第第1步：审题步：审题1 1主题主题(what)(what)2 2目的（目的（why)why)3 3时间时间(when)(when)4 4任务任务用英语写一封便函给你的同学用英语写一封便函给你的同学Sam邀请邀请Sam参加同学聚会参加同学聚会本周六（本周六（12月月2日）下午日）下午6点点30分，用一般将来时。分，用一般将来时。告诉告诉Sam聚会的地点和路线图。聚会的地点和路线图。1 本周六（本周六（12月月2日）下午日）下午6点点30分在张梅家同学聚会分在张梅家同学聚会（将时间、地点、事情（将时间、地点、事情3信息组合）信息组合）

37、。2 张梅住光明路张梅住光明路25号。号。3 在学校门口坐第在学校门口坐第3路公共汽车，在第二个十字路口银路公共汽车，在第二个十字路口银行对面下车。行对面下车。4下车后，向右转，找到光明路。下车后，向右转，找到光明路。5 沿光明路直接往前走，张梅家就在电影院对面。沿光明路直接往前走，张梅家就在电影院对面。第第2步、整合信息、译成英语步、整合信息、译成英语将将怎怎样样去去张张梅梅家家信信息息拆拆散散 The students in our class are going to have a get-together in Zhang Meis home at 6:30 this Saturday

38、 afternoon.She lives at No.25 Guangming Road and it is not very difficult to find your way to her home.Take a No.3 Bus at the gate of our school and get off at the second crossing where you can see a bank across the street.Then turn right at the corner and you will find Guangming Road.Walk straight

39、along the road until you see a cinema on the other side of the road,which is opposite to Zhang Meis home.第第3步：连词成句步：连词成句第第4 4步步 连句成篇连句成篇 November 27th,2006Dear Sam,The students in our class are going to have a get-together in Zhang Meis home at 6:30 this Saturday afternoon.She lives at No.25 Guangmi

40、ng Road and it is not very difficult to find your way to her home.Take a No.3 Bus at the gate of our school and get off at the second crossing where you can see a bank across the street.Then turn right at the corner and you will find Guangming Road.Walk straight along the road until you see a cinema

41、 on the other side of the road,which is opposite to Zhang Meis home.Yours,Li Wen广州市高三诊断性测试评分样卷广州市高三诊断性测试评分样卷 (得2 分)In general,we satisfied with the service of the travel center.(内容1分)Expecialy,the guid treated us very kind-hearted and careful to take care of the old.(内容得0.5分)In addition,the guid tal

42、ked about the travel place was clear and livly,increased our knowledge.（内容得1分）However,the food of the restaurant provide was not fit to us,we have to buy something food ourselves.（2分）I think you should introduce more excellent shopping center for us.连贯：2.5分In general，Expecialy，In addition，However，I

43、think Total:9 points 努力方向努力方向：1、积累句型特别是复合句的积累 2、扩大词汇量 3、加强练习，同时提高练习的质量1.1.考纲词汇考纲词汇首字母首字母 A A 的单词；的单词；2.2.英语周报英语周报第第1414期基础写作；期基础写作；HOMEWORK 11.27.2004年广东卷年广东卷 假设你是下图的李华。请根据图画所提供的信息，写一篇英语作文，描述昨天晚上邻居看足球赛影响你学习的情况，并描写你随后与邻居交涉的过程(如：你向邻居提出要求，对方向你表示歉意等。)注意：1.词数：80120 2.可以编写对话或其它叙述方式描写你与邻居的交涉过程 2005年广东卷年广东卷

44、 MichaelMichael是一名美国中学生，在学校里选修汉语。他利用暑是一名美国中学生，在学校里选修汉语。他利用暑假到中国进修，希望进一步了解中国文化。有一天，他看到下面假到中国进修，希望进一步了解中国文化。有一天，他看到下面有关成语的漫画，不大明白其中的意思。请你用英语把漫画所表有关成语的漫画，不大明白其中的意思。请你用英语把漫画所表达的故事和寓意写成一段短文，向他解释。达的故事和寓意写成一段短文，向他解释。注意：注意：1 1词数：在词数：在8012080120词之间；词之间；2 2参考词汇：参考词汇：bump into(bump into(撞上撞上)，hoe(hoe(锄头锄头)2006

45、年广东卷年广东卷 根据以下图画，写一篇英语短文，描述今昔通讯方式的变化，根据以下图画，写一篇英语短文，描述今昔通讯方式的变化，以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响。以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响。注意：注意：1词数：词数：100左右左右 2生词：通讯：生词：通讯：communicate(with sb)munication n 互联网：互联网：the Internet n.常用的过渡表达法常用的过渡表达法（过渡（过渡词）1 表增加表增加 also,and,and then,too,in addition,furthermore,moreover,again2 表时间，顺序表时间，顺序 now,t

46、hen,before,after,afterwards,earlier,later,immediately,soon.next,in a few days,gradually,suddenly,finally3 表空间，顺序表空间，顺序 near,far from,in front of,behind,beside,beyond,above,below,to the right/left,aroundon one side,outside4.表示比较的：表示比较的：in the same way,just like(as)5.表示对照的：表示对照的：but,still,yet,however,

47、on the other hand,on the contrary,in spite of,even though6.表示目的的：表示目的的：for the reason,for this purpose,so that7.表示强调的：表示强调的：in fact,indeed,surely,certainly,without any doubt,above all,the most important8.表示解释说明的：表示解释说明的：for example,in fact,in this case，actually9.表示总结的：表示总结的：finally,at last,in conclusion,as I have shown,in other words,in brief,as have been stated