读后续写：遇险类--A+rescue+doy讲义 高三英语写作专项读后续写.docx

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1、续写原文：Brady was a recently retired search and rescue dog. He was not happy and missed his owner Al because Al had gone out on a rescue mission without him. Al s nephew Steve took Brady along when he and his friend Zach went on an overnight hike. But suddenly Steve and Zach smelled something burning a

2、nd they realized that lightning had set the woods on fire. Wind-blown flame had leaped from the top of one tree to another. The long dry summer had turned the forest into a tindeibox（火绒箱）, and the thunderstorm wasnt helping much. It had more wind and lightning than rain. Zach pulled Steves arm. Lets

3、 go! We can make it back to the river we crossed today. Steve snapped Bradys leash to his collar, and their heads down against the strong fire-wind, they hurried down the trail they had followed earlier. The air was full of smoke, and pine branches snapped from burning trees with a cannon-like sound

4、. Steve kept his eyes fixed on the trail. All they had to do was to make it down to the river.Brady barked a sharp warning. Ahead of them lay a dense curtain of smoke across the trail. Theyd never make it through that一theyd have to find another escape route. The dog was pulling at his leash trying t

5、o draw them away from the smoke. This was what Brady was trained to do, and yet Steve was uneasy. It seemed to him they were moving away from the river.Brady lifted his head and smelled the smoke-laden wind. Next moment, the dog ran away and disappeared. The boys yelled and shouted for him, but he d

6、idnt come back.They had no choice but to leave him behind. Heartsick, Steve and Zach went up a slope（斜坡）. He couldn t blame Brady for panicking and escaping. He himself wanted to run even though he didnt have a clue which way. They hadnt gone far when there was a familiar bark, and Brady came runnin

7、g toward them.Para.1: “ Where ve you been?” Steve cried.Para.2: Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees.场景设置：Para.1:“Whereve you been?” Steve cried.场景一：温柔地摸着狗，并说不要害怕，”我们会找到出去的路。”但是狗狗朝着斜坡相反的方向喊叫。场景二：以为它是遇到这种情况很害怕，Steve蹲下来抱着它，但是它还是想朝那个方向跑去。场景三：突然Steve意识到原来狗狗是一条救援狗，刚刚它可能去探索一条安全的路，它是提醒他们跟着

8、它。Zach用半信半疑的眼光看着Steve和一直在喊叫的狗狗。最终他们决定放弃现在的这条路，跟着狗狗后面走。Para.2: Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees.场景一：火越来越大，但是狗狗很熟练地避开了烧落的树枝，在前面跑的同时还朝后面看他们是否跟上了。场景二：跑了好长时间，他们非常累，想坐下来休息一下，突然前面出现了岔口，狗狗停了下来，似乎在决定朝哪个方向走。场景三：但是这时他们只能跟着狗狗后面跑，他们发现树越来越来稀少，很快那条河进入了他们的视野，让他们深深缓了一口气。他们终于安全了。我的下水作文：“Whereve y

9、ou been?” Steve cried.“Dont be afraid, Brady. Well find a way out.” said Steve in a soothing voice,stroking it gently.However, the moment they proceeded to run on the slope with Steve pulling at the leash, Brady barked towards the opposite direction and struggled to free itself from the leash. It oc

10、curred to Steve that Brady used to be a excellent rescue dog which might have explored a safer escape route. Determined to follow Brady, Steve gave up the original path and undid the leash to let it lead the way instead.Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees.The fire was getting large

11、r and larger. The sound of branches snapping was everywhere, making them nervous and frightened. Brady ran ahead of Steve and Zach, expert at avoiding the danger of being hit by the falling branches and looking back to see whether the two boys caughtup now and then. After what seemed like a century,

12、 they came to a junction of three roads, and Brady looked around to decide which way to go. Without hesitation, they turned right and continued to run, which made them out of breath. All of a sudden, the river came into their eyes, leaving them in a great sense of relief.精彩范文Paragraph 1：“Whereveyoub

13、een？”Stevecried. He bent down and held tightly toBrady,_“Never will you leave me again！”He then checked the leash to ensure that Brady wouldnt escape again. The fiercefirekept burning, straight towards their slope under the control of wind. Despair surrounded Steve and Zach. What could they do now?

14、Surprisingly, Steve found Brady was struggling to pull him down the slope.“Wherere you heading？”“Steve，”Zach said,“you have told me that Brady was arescuedog, right? Why not give him a chance？”Steve gave it a second thought and agreed.Paragraph 2：Bradyledthembackdowntheinclineandintothetrees. The ai

15、r was full ofsmoke,_and to their huge astonishment, Brady was leading them to an alternativeescape_route,_exactly opposite to theriver. After some initial hesitation, Steve chose to trust Brady. Smoke getting thicker, sight growing weaker, they ran after Brady blindly. It seemed a century had passed

16、, a lake with a boat on its surface, came into sight.“Wow! Thank you, Brady! You saved us all！”So far, it taught us that animals are worth our trust!总评本篇范文在原文的基础上能够合理进行续写，通过提示句巧妙衔接所续写的下文，Paragraph 1描写了火势的严重性以及关键时刻选择相信Brady的决定，Paragraph 2描述了Brady如何帮人们脱险，全文一气呵成，续写自然。亮点呈现(1) “Never will you leave me again！”是“never”开头的否定倒装。(2)“smoke getting thicker, sight growing weaker”，这种独立主格并列，很有气场，渲染了当时的恶劣环境。(3)“It seemed a century had passed”，这个用“seem”描写心理活动的写法很实用。学科网（北京）股份有限公司