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1、【2023山东省临沂市一模】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Palm trees seemed to speed by the car window. Eight-year-old Katrina began to get nervous, the way she always did in new surroundings. She felt a thin shine of sweat above her lip in spite of the cars cool air. “The aquarium wont be crowded, I bet,

2、and people are gonna notice me. I hate wearing this prosthesis leg (假肢).” She felt tears pinprick behind her eyes. “Not being normal is the worst.”Entering the Clearwater Marine Aquarium, around a comer of a tank, she noticed an animal that looked unusual. “Is that a dolphin with stump (假肢) instead

3、of a tail?” she asked an aquarium staff. He nodded. “Yes, thats Winter. Shes a very special dolphin.” “What happened to her?” “This girl dolphin was found off the coast of Florida, caught in a crab trap. The ropes from the trap cut off the blood circulation to her tail. So she lost her tail,” Katrin

4、a caught her breath. “Shes just like me. Shes just like me.” “But she struggled to survive. Now she wears a prosthetic tail part of the day to help her swim like a dolphins supposed to swim.” the staff continued, “Every day, Winter shows us anything is possible if we believe.”Katrina felt her heart

5、string was touched. She waved at Winter. Looking at Katrina, Winter raised her flipper (鳍), came to her and lifted her head. “Shes swimming right into my arms,” Katrina said tearfully. They made eye contact. She seemed to be speaking to Katrina: Were the same.Back home, all Katrina talked about was

6、Winter. For two weeks, she cried and begged her mother to take her back to Clearwater.Unfortunately, another blow hit Katrina. She fell on the hardwood floor at home and broke her other leg. Katrina was in constant leg nerve pain. After a through examination, the doctor explained bad news that she w

7、ould need another surgery on her leg. Years of a living hell came back to her.She started fearing surgery again and refused to take any.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Katrinas mom decided to take her back to Clearwater.Finally came the day when Katrina was in the hospital again.【解析】【大意】文章以故事情节

8、发展为线索展开，讲述了女孩Katrina因为装了一只假腿，感到害怕别人盯着自己看而容易紧张和不自信。有一次妈妈带她去了Clearwater海洋水族馆，见到了一头尾巴也是假肢的海豚，它看起来可爱活泼，这深深感染了女孩。工作人员告诉她，这只特别的海豚叫Winter，它被捕蟹器夹住，她失去了宝贵的尾巴。但是她没有气馁，仍然努力地像其他有尾巴的海豚一样游泳。Winter每天都在努力向人们证明“只要有信心，任何事都有可能”。Winter游到Katrina身边，抬起头，看向她，似乎在鼓励她说：“我们是一样的。”回家后的Katrina一直对Winter念念不忘，乞求妈妈再带她去看一次这只和自己同命相连的海豚

9、。但不幸的是，她又一次摔倒，不得不做手术。可是Katrina拒绝了。【情节走向】1.段落续写由第一段首句内容“Katrina的妈妈决定带她回Clearwater海洋水族馆。”可知，第一段描写Katrina的妈妈想要为了鼓励女儿，带她去海洋馆看看Winter。在海洋馆，Winter让女孩摸它的头和女孩友好互动，Katrina受到了极大的鼓舞，决定坚强地接受手术。由第二段首句内容“终于有一天Katrina又住进了医院。”可知，第二段描写Katrina勇敢的进了手术室。像往常一样，起床等待被推进手术室，没有表现出一丝慌张和害怕。在手术成功后，Katrina在家人的鼓励和Winter的启发下，勇敢自信

10、的面对生活中的挑战，发现世界变得更加美好了。2.续写线索妈妈带女儿去水族馆Winter的亲切和眼神交流鼓舞了KatrinaKatrina决定去医院接受手术出院后的Katrina开始积极面对生活Katrina发现世界很美好3.词汇积累face it bravely/face it courageouslyoptimistic/positive/upbeatfelt tears pinprick 点behind her eyes.struggle to surviveheart string be touchedmake eye contactbeg sb to do sth4. 伏笔She fe

11、lt a thin shine of sweat above her lip in spite of the cars cool air（开始容易紧张出汗，到后文续写中不会再出汗紧张，呼应开头）【点睛】高分句型1. On arriving at Clearwater, Katrina cant wait to see Winter, the lovely dolphin that comforted her and boosted her mood.（On doing结构；cant wait to do;运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）2. Katrina has no idea what

12、 the future holds but she will do anything to have a better look at this wonderful world.（运用了what引导的同位语从句）3.She felt a thin shine of sweat above her lip in spite of the cars cool air. （对比）4.Looking at Katrina, Winter raised her flipper (鳍), came to her and lifted her head.(非谓语动词做状语）5.Years of a livi

13、ng hell came back to her.(无灵主语）Unfortunately, another blow hit Katrina.(无灵主语）范文：Katrinas mom decidedto take her back to Clearwater. Mom wheeled Katrina intoClearwater. Bending over to the dolphin, Katrina touched her back gently.“Winter,” she half-whispered, “Did it hurt when they did the operation?

14、” Thedolphin swung her tail, making a beautiful curve in the water, as if to say,“Itwas not that bad.” In a flash, she glided around thepool gracefully, just like any other dolphin. Watching Winter weaving throughthe water, Katrina took hold of her mothers hand, saying, “Mom, Id like totry.”Finally

15、came the daywhen Katrina was in the hospital again. She woke up early in the morningand dressed up herself, waiting calmly for her turn to be pushed into thesurgery room. She looked at her palms they werent sweaty. Gonewere the days when she was afraid to try anything challenging. The surgery wentsmoothly as expected. Two months after a full recovery, she returned to Clearwater.She walked steadily towards the dolphin tank, knowing that she was the same asother normal girls. Patting her and rubbing her head, Katrina said softly“THANKYOU”.学科网（北京）股份有限公司