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1、三大法宝打造精彩结尾今天我们要分享的主题是: 如何打造读后续写的精彩结尾结尾句是全文的收尾处，需要起到点睛的作用，给读者留下深刻的印象。那么怎么做到呢? 今天老师就带着你灵活运用首尾呼应、引用名言、情感升华三大方法设计故事收尾，对故事主题进行深化，使人物情感得到升华，让你的文章的结尾更加出彩!三大修辞手法首尾呼应引用名言情感升华Call backQuotationSublimation01首尾呼应Call back首尾呼应2017年高考真题，讲述的是与健忘妈妈一块去旅游的故事。文章的开头，是这么写的:I had an interesting childhood. lt was filled w

2、ith surprise and amusements, all because of my mother-loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. 我有-个有趣的童年，充满了惊喜和娱乐，都是因为我的母亲一-可爱，却心不在焉，健忘那么续写结尾的时候可以回到文章的开头再次重申妈妈的性格，来深化主题。Absent-minded and forgetful as she was, she never forgot to express her love to us.虽然她心不在焉，爱忘事，但她从未忘记向我们表达她的爱。首尾呼应2016年浙江高考样

3、题是这样开头的:A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.一天，亚瑟在上班的路上发生了一件有趣的事情。我们同样可以用首尾呼应法来结尾:What a funny day, Arthur couldnt stop laughing whenever he looked back on this hilarious experience.多么有趣的一天啊，每当亚瑟回想起这次欢乐的经历，他就忍不住笑个不停。首尾呼应讲述的是爸爸带儿子去朋友家农场游玩迷路的故事。文章的开头是这么写的:2018年高考真题，

4、lt was summer and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.那是夏天，我爸爸想像以前一样邀请我去度假。他决定带我去西部荒野之旅。文章结尾也可以用首尾呼应的写作手法，请看这一句:Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to the Wild West was deeply engrave

5、d in my mind.我从来没有过这么刺激又危险的假期。那次去西部的特别旅行，深深地印在我的脑海里。02引用名言Quotation使用名言结尾往往能给文章增添文采，同时也能起到凝炼中心，深化主旨的作用，这样的结尾可以引出结论，即时抒情，凸显主旨渲染氛围等，合理使用名言可以为续写文章画龙点睛，因此在平时我们不仅要多加积累，也要明白名言蕴含的道理，以便使其用在合适的语境中。需要注意的是: 不可生搬硬套名言警句，一定要具体文本具体分析。引用名言Dont judge each day by the harvest you reap but by the seeds that you plant.不

6、要根据你每天的收获来判断每一天，而是根据你每天播种了多少这则名言采用了比喻的手法，将人的付出和回报比作耕种和收获。本质上，是过程和结果之间的比较，强调过程的重要性大于结果，可以用于习惯养成类和或者长期活动类叙事的结尾，提升思想境界。”引用名言lt is during our darkest moments that we must focus to see the light.越是在最黑暗的时刻，我们越要寻找光明这则名言采用了比喻的手法，将人的付出和回报比作耕种和收获。本质上，是过程和结果之间的比较，强调过程的重要性大于结果，可以用于习惯养成类和或者长期活动类叙事的结尾，提升思想境界。”引用名

7、言Tell me and I forget. Teach me and I remember. Involve me and I learn.告诉我，我会忘记。教给我，我会铭记。让我参与，我会掌握。这则名言通过排比和对比，揭示了学习的规律，阐明了实践出真知的道理，可以用于总结学习经历，反思技能掌握的过程等。引用名言In the end, its not the years in your life that count. lts the life in your years.最后，重要的不是你生命中的岁月，而是你如何度过这些岁月的。这则名言通过巧妙的词汇调换，改变句意，揭示了生活的真谛: 只有

8、认真对待生活，人生才不会留下遗憾，由于本句涉及的时间跨度较大，写作中最好有最好从长者的视角提出。引用名言我们来看下面的实战演练，故事里，主人公在柔道比赛中，通过向对手暴露自己的弱点，充分发挥自己的力量，最终赢得了比赛。故事结尾，借用教练对他的鼓励，完成了升华，其中就用到了名言警句。我们以前来看一下。lt is your biggest weakness that makes you win the match. As a proverb says,Every coin has two sides Making full use of your strength is your achievem

9、ent. Please remember that in no case will you give up especially in trouble. God is fair to2sllDol2reveryone.是你最大的弱点让你赢得了比赛。正如谚语所说，“每枚硬币都有两面性。”充分利用你的力量就是你的成就。请记住，无论如何你都不会放弃，尤其是在麻烦中。”上帝对每个人都是公平的。03 情感升华Sublimation引用名言第一个例子仍然是2017年高考真题，讲述的是与健忘妈妈一块去旅游的故事。刚才我们用“首尾呼应”法，现在我们试一试用“情感升华”法: 在结尾处，表达母爱对我的深远影响。E

10、veryone has one person they look up to as a role model. To me there is none other than my mom.She has beauty, brains, and one of the best hearts I know.Without her in my life, I would have no idea whether I can be a famous dancer.Someday, when I am older and have children of my own, I hope I can be

11、just as great a parent as my mom.每个人都有一个榜样。对我来说，不是别人，正是我妈妈。她很漂亮，很聪明，而且是我认识的最用心的人之一。如果没有她，我不知道我能不能成为一个著名的舞者。有一天，当我长大了，有了自己的孩子，我希望我能成为像我妈妈一样伟大的母亲。引用名言我们来看看第二个例子，主人公在故事的结尾处，表达自己对价值观，“幸福”的理解。来看看下面的表达:I am extremely unhappy about it. I think money doesn t equal happiness. And free life style also doesn t

12、 equal happiness. The real happiness is that everyone loves each other, and does everything useful for our society. Most of my classmates support me. But some of them think money is everything. In my opinion, money can t take the place of everything, such as your life, your time and your happiness.我

13、对此非常不高兴。我认为金钱不等于幸福。自由的生活方式也不等于幸福。真正的幸福是每个人都爱彼此，为我们的社会做一切有用的事情。我的大多数同学都支持我。但是有些人认为金钱就是一切。在我看来，金钱不能取代一切，比如你的生活，你的时间和你的幸福。主旨升华句三大类型助人型主人公帮助别人或受到帮助成长型主人公的“成长”和“改变脱险型主人公化险为夷助人型第一种句型(入门级): From then on,+行动From then on, I would try my best to help sb like sb.Only in this way, could more and more people hel

14、p each other in the future.从那时起，我会尽我最大的努力帮助某些人，就像某人一样。 只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。2020年山东卷中，讲述了主人公和孩子们想出在社区卖爆米花的主意，来帮助穷人的故事。我们可以借鉴这个写作公式，这么写:From then on, Bernard made up his mind to help someone who needs help.Only in this way, could more and more people help each other in the future.从那时起，伯纳德决定帮助需要帮助的人。只

15、有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。我们再来看八省联考的作文作者讲述一次吉普车爆胎和维修经历。先是路边标语求助无果，失望之际墨西哥人伸出援手。续写的第一段，主要要写帮助的细节。第二段就可以升华主题From then on, I placed a jack and some common tools in my car.When meeting people in need on the road ,l would try my best to help them like the family.Only in this way, could more and more people hel

16、p each other in the future.从那时起，我在我的车里放了一个千斤顶和一些常见的工具。当我在路上遇到需要帮助的人时我会尽力像家人一样帮助他们。只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。助人型第二种句型(提高级):动作+感动+感悟这个“动作”可以是: 看到了某情景，或者拿着一样东西。“感动”很好理解，别人帮助了自己，产生的情绪就是“感动”，最常见的就是“眼泪往下流”。“感悟”这一句，往往是“善行”“付出”等关键字的励志句。例如:爱”Sb. looked at sth / held sth, tears rolling down without control. It is

17、love that makes the world go around, which sb. felt deep in one s heart.某人看到了某物或者拿着某物，眼泪毫无控制地流了下来。 正是爱让世界转动，在某人的心里深深地感受到了这一点。首先看一下八省联考的试题。在续写第二段开头，文章提到那一家墨西哥人递给作者一个纸袋里面有食物。我们可以这么来写主旨升华句:i held the paper bag tightly, tears rolling down without control. lt is love that makes the world go around, which

18、 l felt deep in my heart.我紧紧地握着纸袋，眼泪毫无控制地流了下来。 正是爱让世界转动，在我心里里深深地感受到了这一点。我们再来看山东卷“卖爆米花帮助穷人”的故事，我们借鉴这个写作公式，可以这么写:He held the coins tightly, tears rolling down without control. t is love that makes the world go around, which Bernard felt deep in his heart.他紧紧地握着硬币，眼泪毫无控制地流了下来。 正是爱让世界转动，伯纳德在他的心里深深地感受到了这

19、一点。助人型其他表达lt dawned on me that a moment of kindness could mean so much to another,and that a simple act could make the world so much better.我恍然大悟，那一刻的善良对另一个人来说意义重大，而一个简单的行为可以使世界变得如此美好Whether rich or poor, we should be happy to do something for society. Thus we can.learn that giving is the source of

20、happiness.无论贫富，我们都应该为社会做点什么。 因此，我们会知道付出是幸福的源泉。Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference.有时候小小的善行，可能足以带来巨大的改变.成长型主人公的“成长”和“改变”成长型1.学习知识促“改变”Its never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.学习永远为时不晚。每个

21、人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试.2.发挥天赋促“改变”Actually, every individual possesses talent. Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end.事实上，每个人都有天赋，发现它的时候要勇敢，也要付出努力，最终你会创造奇迹.3.战胜恐惧促“改变Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear and accomplish your g

22、oal.战胜恐惧和实现目标，需要决心和乐观。4.追逐梦想促“改变”lts never too late to go for your dream. As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it, you will stand a chance to realize your dreams追梦永远不晚.只要你抓住机会，充分利用机会，你就有机会实现梦想。As long as we dare to dream and dont let difficulties get in our way, anything

23、 is possible.只要我们敢于梦想，不被困难所阻挡，一切皆有可能。5.克服困难促“改变” The journey to success is not smooth. lt is full of challenges and difficulties. We should be brave to face them. As long as we don t give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goal/success finally.

24、通往成功的路不会平坦，充满挑战和艰辛。我们要勇敢面对。只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服热有困难，我们最终会实现我们的目标/成功。6.战胜自卑促“改变”I smiled as I eventually realized the real source of confidence.Now, l am proud of what I Iook like and much happier, because I have realized it is your personality that decides who you truly are.我笑了，因为我最终意识到了自信的真正来源。现在，我为我的样子感

25、到骄傲，而且更快乐，因为我已经意识到，决定你真正是谁的是你的个性。7.战胜消极促“改变”I smiled as I eventually realized the real source of confidence.Now, I am proud of what look like and much happier, because I have realized it is your personality that decides who you truly are.我笑了，因为我最终意识到了自信的真正来源。现在，我为我的样子感到骄傲，而且更快乐，因为我已经意识到，决定你真正是谁的是你的个

26、性。脱险型主人公化险为夷脱险型句型一( 初级 )That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever.那天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆。句型二( 中级 )Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way.直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。句型三( 高级 )lt was this unique experience that made me under

27、stand whatever difficulty we are faced with (= we may face), we mustn t give up our hope.“正是这种独特的经历使我理解了我们所面临的任何困难，我们不能放弃我们的希望。组合公式:结果+难忘的经历+体悟即把前几种方式进行组合，我们可以记住这个组合公式: 结果+难忘的经历+体悟。“结果”指的是获救的结果，如走出森林，获救后见到家人等。“难忘的经历”就是我们刚刚学到的第一个主旨句。“体悟”在这种“脱险型”里，无非就是突出冷静，勇敢，不放弃希望等信念的重要性。Finally, we did sth. What an

28、unforgettable experience! lt turns out that there s always a way out as long as we stay calm.最后，我们做某事(结果) 。多么难忘的经历啊(万能句)! 事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。作者的体悟，可以把“保持冷静”，换成“不放弃希望”等。)组合公式:结果+难忘的经历+体悟例如2018年高考英语浙江卷的读后续写，爸爸带儿子去朋友家农场游玩迷路的故事。文章的最后我们可以用这句:Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us./Finall

29、y, we arrived home safely just in time for supper. What an unforgettable experience! lt turns out that there s always a way out as long as we stay calm.最后，我们走出了困住我们的森林/最后，我们安全回家，正好赶上吃晚饭。多么难忘的经历啊!事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。组合公式:结果+难忘的经历+体悟我们再看2016年10月高考英语浙江卷的读后续写，夫妻俩野外露营，因小事发生争执，女主人独D自走进森林迷路的故事。文章最后，我们也

30、可以用上这句:She hugged her husband as tightly as possible, too thrilled to say anything. What an unforgettable experience! lt turns out that there s always a way out as long as we never give up our hope.她把丈夫紧紧地搂在怀里，激动得说不出话来。多么难忘的经历啊! 事实证明，只要我们不放弃希望，就总有办法摆脱困境。组合公式:结果+难忘的经历+体悟2017年高考英语的读后续写，和朋友一起骑车游玩，途中遇狼的

31、故事。我们可以这样写:Finally, the wolf ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance . We are safe!” Mac said in a relieved tone. What an unforgettable experience! lt turns out that there s always a way out as long as we stay calm.最后，狼从路上跑开，消失在远处。“我们安全了!”麦克以如释重负的语气说。 多么难忘的经历啊! 事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。学科网（北京）股份有限公司