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1、应用文之求助信练习写作讲义题目假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：1. 剧情简介；2. 指导内容；3. 商定时间地点。全文呈现（137字）How is everything going with you? Recently, my classmates and I have adapted a short play according to the textbook. I am writing to ask you to do us a favor regarding the play we adapted.The

2、play is based on The Million Pound Banknote written by Mark Twain, which successfully depicted an unbelievable adventure of Henry Adams, a penniless American in London. However, the adaptation is quite challenging. As for the script, there must be some mistakes in grammar and inappropriate usage in

3、words and expressions, so could you help us with some corrections? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Monday to give you more details?Given your busy schedule, Id be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Looking forward to your early reply.逐句翻译1

4、.How is everything going with you?Recently, my classmates and I have adapted a short play according to the textbook.一切还好吗？最近，我和同学根据课本改编了一个短剧。（求助类应用文开头的背景描述）2.I am writing to ask you to do us a favor regardingthe play we adapted.我写信是因为我们改编的剧本需要您的帮助。（求助类应用文功能句，建议记忆）3. The play is based on The Million

5、Pound Banknote written by Mark Twain, which successfully depicted an unbelievable adventure of Henry Adams, a penniless American in London.这部短剧是根据马克吐温的百万英镑改编的，它成功地描述了亨利亚当斯，一个身无分文的美国人在伦敦经历的一次不可思议的冒险。（写作要点一：剧情简介）4.However, the adaptation is quite challenging.然而，改编相当有难度。（转入求助的环节，也就是描述问题的环节，肯定需要转折逻辑）5.

6、As for the script, there must be some mistakes in grammar and inappropriate usage in words and expressions,so could you help us withsome corrections?剧本里肯定有些语法错误，还有词汇短语的使用不当，所以您能帮我们做些修改吗？（从问题到求助的句式，建议记忆）6.If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Monday to give you more details?如

7、果您方便的话，我可以在下周一去您的办公室里找您细说吗？（求助类应用文功能句）7.Given your busy schedule, Id be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Looking forward to your early reply.我知道您的日程繁忙，所以如果您能提供一些专业建议，我会不胜感激。期待您的早日回复。（求助类应用文结尾功能句）不同版本（130字）Dear Miss Evans,How is it going? I am writing to seek your assi

8、stance regardinga short play that my classmates and I have adapted from our English course text.最近还好吗？我写信是想向您求助，我和同学根据英语课文改编的短剧需要您的帮助。The play is about a group of friends who set off on an adventurous journey to uncover a hidden treasure. Along the way, they encounter various challenges, develop str

9、ong bonds, and ultimately succeed in their quest.We have put in much efforts tocompose the dialogue,but we need your guidance tomake it more natural.Also,we would appreciate any suggestions forenhancing our overall stage performance.这部短剧讲述的是一群朋友踏上冒险之旅，去寻找隐藏的宝藏。一路上，他们遇到了各种挑战，建立了牢固的友谊，最终成功地完成了任务。我们已经投

10、入了很多努力去撰写对话，但是我们需要您的指导，让它更加自然。此外，我们还希望您能给我们提些建议，帮助我们提升整体舞台表现。We are excited to work with you and would like to know if you cancome to us at the school theater at 4:00 this Friday afternoon.Thank you in advance for considering our request.我们很期待能得到您的指导，不知道您本周五下午4点有没有时间来学校剧院指导我们。谢谢您考虑我们的请求。Best regards

11、,Li Hua题目假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职。你已经写好申请书和个人简历。给外教Ms. Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式。提示词：简历 resume、格式 format全文呈现（100字）Im Li Hua from your English writing class last term. Im writing to ask for your help. Im applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have j

12、ust completed my application letter and resume. However, I am not quite sure of the language and the format Ive used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but Id be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and resume

13、in the attachment.Thank you for your kindness!逐句翻译1. Im Li Hua from your English writing class last term.我是李华，上学期在您的英语写作班上。（如果和对方不熟悉，可能需要介绍自己。从题目描述来看，这句话并不是完全必要，可以略去）2.Im writing to ask for your help.我写信是想寻求您的帮助。（求助类应用文功能句式）3. Imapplying for a part-time jobat a foreign company in my city during the

14、summer vacation, and I have justcompleted my application letter and resume.我正在申请暑假期间去我所在城市的一家外国公司兼职，我刚刚完成了我的申请信和简历。（求助问题的背景）4.However,I am not quite sure ofthe language and the format Ive used.但是，我对自己的语言和使用的格式不太确定。（转折逻辑引出问题描述）5.I know you have a very busy schedule, but Id be very grateful if you cou

15、ld take some time togo through them and make necessary changes.我知道您的工作很忙，但是如果你能花些时间帮我看看有哪些需要修改的地方，我会非常感激。（求助类应用文功能句式）6.Please findmy application letter and resumein the attachment.我的申请信在附件里。（求助问题的补充内容）7.Thank you for your kindness!谢谢您的帮助！（求助类应用文结尾句式）不同版本（131字）Dear Ms. Jenkins,How is it going? I am w

16、riting to seek your assistance inreviewing my application materials.最近还好吗？我写信给您是希望您能帮忙看看我的申请材料。As the summer vacation approaches, I am eager togain some practical experienceby working part-timeat an international trading company. I havecrafted my application letter and resume.However,I understand th

17、e importance ofa native English speakers perspectivein ensuringthe clarity and accuracy in my writing.With your guidance, I believe I canimprove the expressions and formatof my application materials tomake them more professional and appealingto potential employers.暑假临近，我想在一家外贸公司做兼职，从而获得一些实践经验。我已经初步写

18、好了申请信和简历。但是，我知道英语母语的人的视角对于确保我的内容的清晰度和准确性至关重要。在您的指导下，相信我能提升申请材料的表达方式和格式，使其更加专业，对潜在的雇主更具吸引力。I genuinely appreciate your willingness to help mewith this important step in my career development. The documentsare attached to this email for your convenience.I would be grateful if you couldreview themat your earliest convenience.我真诚地感谢您愿意在我职业发展的重要阶段提供帮助。为方便起见，这封邮件附上了这些文件。如果您能在方便时尽早审阅，我将不胜感激。Sincerely,Li Hua学科网（北京）股份有限公司