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1、一.写作课件制作步骤：第一步：给出评分标准，说明高分作文需要具备的要素（要点全面，逻辑清晰,语法错误较少）另外还有亮点隐性的要求就是书写（工整）和字数（100词左右）等级评分标准第 一 档（12-14分以上）同下表格内容第 二 档（9-11分）同下第 三 档（6-8分）同下第 四 档（5 分及一下）同下第四档 仅能写明少数要点，短文不完整，语言错误多5分 以 下，影响意思表达。等级要求第一档9-10 分短文要点齐全，通顺完整，表达清楚，语言基本无误。第二档7-8分短文要点基本齐全，较通顺完整，表达基本清楚，语言有少量错误。第三档5-6分能写明大部分要点，短文不够通顺完整，语言有较多错误，但尚能

2、达意。第二步：列出近五年话题类作文的考察情况4%H描述人毕业感言61书信类1安全健康感恩H假期安排介绍 地、物利弊描述第三步：分话题进行讲解1.先介绍该话题的总的写作思路，总分总或总分2.具体说明每一段所用到的单词短语，带领孩子把这些单词短语连成句子即连词成句，最后连句成篇。（下面给出了每个话题常用的一些句型结构）3.每个话题后面配上中考真题的练习。二.话题作文分类:1.书 信 类 2.毕业感言，难忘经历3.中学生安全、健康4.微笑、感恩5.游览、假期安排6.环境保护、节 约 7.利 弊 描 述 8.读书：出题特征（议论文特征）9.人、事、物的介绍和说明:出题特征（给出详细的文字提示）三.话

3、题范围分类：学校：生生关系（与同学关系）师生关系（最喜欢的老师）学习：（改善英语，学习情况，拒绝抄袭，做文明学生，家庭作业）家庭：与父母关系社会：环境，节日，如何做文明学生生活：健康，业余爱好，暑假安排济南近10年的中考作文分析：17年：压岁钱的分配 16年：我的老师14年：公交车让座 13年：帮盲人过马路11年：给小鸟安家 10年：我的春节0 8年：把奶奶给的钱捐给灾区捐钱07年：书信：给朋友介绍大明湖（地方）15年：母亲节赠送礼12年：小猫斗小偷09年：小鸟帮助小兔追回气球四.分类话题句型：书 信 类（包 括 三 种）：邀请信：（分 三 段 1.自我介绍2.活动信息3.表达期望）Dear

4、Terry,Hi,Im.monitor/student of Class 4,Grade 8.Tm writing,to.We are going to.时间、地点.Please call me a t.We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is OK for youand we do hope you can.We are all looking forward to your coming2017年安徽省假如你是李华，你们学校将举行“弘扬中华传统文化戏曲进校园”展演活动，你打算邀请你的美国朋友Mike参加。请你根据以下提示用英文

5、给他写一封电子邮件。1.时间：7 月 1 日下午2 点；2.地点：学校操场；3.内容：文化展览、节目表演等。提示词：戏曲opera n.表演performance n.注意：1.词数80 100；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Mike,I know you are interested in Chinese traditional culture.Yours,Li Hua建议信：（分三段：1.指出问题2.给出建议3.表达期望）I learn that you have difficulty/problem

6、in.I fully understand you and hope to give you someadvice on this problem.First,I would like to suggest that you should.Second,why not.andthen you will be able to.Third,you might as well.I hope these suggestions above can help you and things will work out well finally.申请书：（分三段：1.自我介绍2.资格3.贡献与愿望）I fe

7、el like running for the new president of the English club.Im a person who is outgoing,activeand easy to get on with.I believe I have the ability to.Im excellent in English,especiallyspoken English.I often learn English by watching English movies,listening to English songs andreading different kinds

8、of English books.I really hope to be the.of the.If you choose me,I will be active,creative and serveyou well.Please give me a chance!毕业感言:回顾：Its a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of（代表）the graduating classes.How time flies!Our junior high school lives will come to an end.感谢：First,Td li

9、ke to express my thanks to all our teachers.Through the past three years,youshowed your kindness,your patience and rich knowledge.With your help,we have developed ourinterest in learning and made rapid progress in it.Second,it is necessary for us to say“thank you”to our classmates.Weve helped each o

10、ther and learned how to solve problems in study together.Finally,without parents*support,we couldnt have such a chance to enjoy our happy school life.祝愿：Al last,we hope our school will become better,our teachers will be healthy for ever andall our dreams will come true.难忘经历：开头：I can never forget.and

11、 that day is deep in my mind because it has a greateffect on my life.结尾：On that day,/From that experience,I learned that.（2 0 1 5聊城）六、书 面 表 达（满 分2 0分）蹩 设 让 你 代 衣 今 年 的 初 中 毕 业 生 在 毕 业 典 礼 上 发 言，诸 根 据 所 给 提 示 用 英 语 写 一 篇 发回 顾 美 丽 的 校 园，师 生 友 好，生 动 有 趣 的 课 堂，三 年 来 的 收 获感 谢 老 师 的 培 养（training）,父 母 的 支

12、持（support）,同 学 的 帮 助祝 愿 考 生 自 拟注 意：1.词 数:不 少 于8 0闻。开 头 和 结 尾 部 分 己 给 出，不 计 入 总 诃 数，2.发 言 稿 褥 包 括 所 给 提 示 内 容，不 要 逐 词 翻 译，可 适 当 发 挥,使 短 文 连 贯、通 顺；3.文 中 不 得 出 现 真 实 的 人 名、校 名 等 相 关 信 息。Good morning,my dear teachers and schoolm ates,Its a great honor for m e to m ake a speech on b e h a l f g r a d u a

13、 t i n g classes.How tim e flies!O ur junior high school lives will com e to an end.N e w O rien tal E d u catio n&T*ch n o lo g y G roupThank you for listening.中学生安全、健康：句型 I：It is very important to keep/develop a healthy eating/living habit.句型 2.Unhealthy food puts our health in danger,while health

14、y food can keep us strong andhappy.句型 3.We should always remember that having a good living habit/eating habit and keepingaway from those bad ones are of great importance.句型 4.Exercise is so important that we must have enough daily exercise to keep healthy句型 5：The more healthy food and vegetables in

15、stead of junk food we eat,the healthier we willbe.句型 6：We should learn to relax ourselves，such as listening to some light music,chatting withfamilies or friends and having a good sleep.（并歹ij例子，延长句子）句型 7：If we dont eat breakfast on time,we probably will feel hungry in class and cantconcentrate on our

16、 study.14聊城七、书 面 表 达(满 分2 0分)条 理 的 同 学 健 续 伙 食 对，吓 个 人 邮 整 件 常 丽 耍 的 请 你 W M y health y food And d r i n k为照筱英 南 短 文.内 容 包 括,I.以 前 我 仃 小 好 的 饮 食 习 惯 M：木 吃 早 餐.好 吃 及 城 食W,等).后 来 学 习 广 健 审 饮 食 知坎 认 识 月 健 康 饮 食 的 垂 耍 性.2.现 在 我 持 健 联 饮 食.保 持 身 体 鲤 续搬 示 网”二fru it vegetable ham b urftcr cola ju n k food 垃

17、 圾 食SG)b r LH!KO rd unci d rin kT w o years M R O I o ften xo l up la ir and seldom had lrvHk(H*l.七、书面袅达 )ri!ago*I ofh n got up hte and seldom had breakfast.When I fell hungry Ialways Hie junk food.This was very bad for my health,so 1 WHS very weak.Lalcr.I karnrd something aboul hcwlthy food and dri

18、nk and 1 /1 lo know it wavery important to have n good life hbit.Unhealthy food and drink is had for everyone*while hrahhy(ool every day andhave lots o(Iruit and vcgctablrs for lunch and supper.I often drink water lea And milkbut xchioni ral luiinburgcrs or drink cola.Thi、niako me healthy and happy.

19、1 alwaysrcmcmlaTt cal the right food and keep healthy,微笑、感恩：例句 1 ：Smiling to yourself can bring back your confidence and beat the unhappy feelings.例句 2：Smile is a kind of language that can be understood by everyone no matter which country hecomes from.例句 3：Learn to smile to others,and it will help u

20、s to get closer to other people.2017江西微笑是人类最美的语言。某英文报以“Smiles”为题，举办中学生征文活动。请根据下面的图表信息，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：微笑的力量、你的微笑故事以及故事给予你的启示。提示：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯;2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数不少于8 0,开头已给出，不计人总词数。SmilesA smile is the most beautiful language of human beings.游览外出、假期安排：例句 1 ：I plan to spend more time in r

21、eading to get ready for the life of senior middle school o例句 2：I plan to travel abroad because I think it s a good chance for me to know more aboutdifferent countries all over the world.例句 3：I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but alsocan make me learn mo

22、re knowledge.例句 4：I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society.2017新疆维吾尔自治区书面表达（满分15分）去年暑假你是在那里度过的呢？是外出度假还是待在家里？都做了些什么呢？请以My Last Summer Vacation为题写一篇短文，描述你去年的暑假生活，80-100 词.要求：条理清楚，语言流畅，语法正确，内容充实.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息.Last year,I have spent a happy summer ho

23、liday.During the holiday,I went toDalian for a visit,there I saw the beautiful sea,it was really amazing.The sea water was as bule as the sky,and it was very clean as well.Also,the beachin Dalian was very nice,we built a small sand palace.When I was swimming in thesea,as if I was a little fish.I lik

24、e that feeling very much.Thafs my trip to Dalian,itsreally unforgettable.I had a great time.This year,I want to Guilin节约、保护环境：相关短语 With the help of high technology,life is getting more and more comfortable andconvenient,but at the same time,green land has become less and more pollution has been caus

25、ed.save water and energy recycle waste paper,bottles take leftover homeour homes will become more pleasant and beautiful turn off the lightsprotect our environment use plastic bags,cut down on reduce pollution2017呼 和 浩 特 中 考 英 语 写 作（满分15分）良好的文明素养应该从小抓起，作为青城的文明市民、文明中学生，我们应该做到哪些方面？短文要包括以下内容：1.保护环境，不乱扔

26、垃圾，不践踏草坪；2.文明出行，遵守交通规则；3.尊敬老师，努力学习，助人为乐；4.要求：1.80100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）2.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名；3.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；4.参考词汇：rubbish垃圾；spit吐痰；traffic rules交通规则;respect尊敬Our city is making effort to become a civilized city,As citizens of Green city,we shouldV I.初国百作，内 分 15分）M should ootOBlypcoteci our envuoomos but

27、also follow the traffic ralesFirst,mustnt step on the grass or dttnbtrees RubtuhtnumH be thrown evcrywteresbould also p i t mote frees Second,we mist cbev 伯 r Waffk nies Vhe aossmg the street*we sbould vnlk on the xebri aotnag Bendc we mustn t go icrou the street n te j thetraffic hgbls are red 袋M s

28、 more.we must respect oor teachers and be polte to olhers.andhelp those who ve n need nd be fhendh to the people Mound us In short,we should get ocurll wnh our teachers md classmatesAU tn ill we should have good minncrs Green Crty ts our hometown We sbould pcorctit We ail love our hometown介绍人：.is fr

29、iendly,outgoing and energetic.In the spare time,he/she takes great interest in.is of medium build with short hair.My father is not only a good father but also a good friend.Our teacher is very strict with us but she is always ready to help us when anyone of ushas trouble.She had many ways of making

30、her classes interesting and exciting.She helped us use English by doing interesting activities,such as,making surveys,playing games.2016年济南校团委准备在教师节举行征文活动，请根据提示，回想自己在学习生活中遇到的最喜欢的一位老师，以“My Favorite Teacher”为题，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。内容包括：1.对老师的相貌描写2,喜欢老师的原因：1.讲 课 很 好 2,与学生做朋友3.要求：1.所写内容应包括所提供的信息，可适当发挥。2.不得出现

31、真实的人名，校名，地名等相关信息。My favourite teacher.My favorite teacher is Zhang Shishun.He teaches us English and he has shorthair.Hes of medium build.He likes reading all kinds of books,writing notes andkeeping doing exercises every day.He dislikes smoking,drinking wine and talkingidly.Hes outgoing and energeti

32、c.He can make a speech for four hours.Hes verypatient and is never angry with his students.He has a positive way of looking at his students who have difficulties learning.He said,“Pm happy to have such students.Ifs these students that give,chance toshow my ability to educate them.Tm not good at lear

33、ning at the beginning.By and by,I make great progress because he keeps encouraging me and never say something badto me.2016东营书面表达（共I题，计20分）在你的成长过程中，父亲一定做了许多令你感动或印象深刻的事情。父亲节就要到了，Teen Times杂志正在组织感恩父亲征文活动，请以“Fatherand me为题写一篇英语短文，参加本次活动。内容包括：1.描述一件发生在父亲和你之间的事情；Z.你的感受或对你的影响；3.表达对父亲的爱和感激之情。要求：1.80-100词;2

34、.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。F a th e r a nd meA possib le ve rsion：1 use d to th ink F a th e r d id n t c a re f or me.B ut one th ing c h a ng e d m y mind.（）ne S und a y.I wns sa d b e c a use of a noth e r in E ng lish.A t th a t time F a th e rinvite d m e to c limb a mounta in.S c x n I f e lt tire d a nd

35、wa nte d to g ive up.F a th e re nc oura g e d m e a nd g a ve m e a h a nd wh e n ne c e ssa ry.A t la st we g ot to th e top.T h e n If ound th e wa y up wa sn t so h a rd.S ud d e nly.I und e rstood F a th e r：S tic k to your d re a ma nd you c a n d o it.F a th e r*s D a y is c oming.1 wa nt to

36、sa y.T h a nk you a nd b e st wish e s to you.1 loveyou.f a th e r.*（二）评分说明：评分时要从内容与结构、&达的遗辑性、层次性、连惯性和创造性、语法运用的恰当程度、单词拼写、标点符号的使用等方面综合考虑.本题共2 0分.分四档评分：L短文通完整我达清楚.讲：基本无误1 7 2 0分，2.短文较通顺完整.袅达范本清楚.语再存少址错误.1 2-1 6分；3.徙写明基本要点短文不够通展完整语彳彳J较多铺设但尚能达意.6-1 1分；4.仅能写明部分要点,短文不完整.语；i错误多.影晌意思表达0-5分.2017呼和浩特中考英语写作V I

37、.初级写作。（满分15分）良好的文明素养应该从小抓起，作为青城的文明市民、文明中学生，我们应该做到哪些方面？短文要包括以下内容：5.保护环境，不乱扔垃圾，不践踏草坪；6.文明出行，遵守交通规则；7.尊敬老师，努力学习，助人为乐；8要求：1.80100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）2.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名；3.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；4.参考词汇：rubbish垃圾；spit吐痰；traffic rules交通规则；respect尊敬Our city is making effort to become a civilized city,As citizens of Green

38、city,we shouldVI.gHh 债分 15 分)We should not only protect oar emirounm but also follow the trifle ralesFirs,w mustnt sup on the grass or chtnbtrees Rubbish mumt be ttaown everywhere 曲should also plan more tees Second,we mist obev ihr traffic Ee$When crossing tbr street*we should walk on the zebri aos喀

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40、rtown Uetboddprotctit We ail kn-e out hometown)介绍兴趣爱好：例句 1 ：As far as hobby is concerned,I prefer listening to English songs because it can give mepleasure when Im unhappy and make me relaxed after hard study.例句 2：I have been.for 6 years and I spend much spare time on it.例句 3：Ed like to start a.coll

41、ectors club and all my schoolmates are welcome to visit my clubfor free.1 7山东东营每个人都有各种各样的习惯，有些习惯能够助你成长，有些习惯会妨碍你进步。请结合个人实际情况，以“M y habits”为题，写一篇短文。内容包括：1.你有什么好习惯，请举例说明该习惯使你得到了哪些益处；2.你有什么不良习惯，该习惯对你有什么影响，你将如何改进。要求：1.100词左右；2.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。A.书面表达A posuUe version.、fy habirsHabits phy an nz9ortais role in

42、 ow he Everody has both good habtts and bod ones.Sodo1I have many good habits.Ooe of thm is readme II bangs me nin.cpan my mmd and helpsme osake foeods.Last yen.I jorned a reading chib Ue ofien shared ideas aboiE e books we read.Later xve became friends Uns makes me happy.As far bad habits.I don:Lik

43、e to udy my room.So it-s hard for me to find nry Thatme lots of trouble.Fm gcong to pur my m difiereu bexetHabits can g p or trouble m Whax will you do?(-)评分说明，评分时.安从内容与结构、友达的遗辑性、层次性、连慢忤和创造修、谓法运用的恰当书面表达。（1 0分）每个人都有自己的爱好，请以“M y H o b b y”为题，用英语写一篇1 0 0此左右的短文。内容包括：I.W h a t s y o u r h o b b y?2.W h e

44、 n d i d y o u s t a r t e d y o u r h o b b y?3.W h y d o y o u l i k e i t b e s t4 T e l l s o m e t h i n g m o r e a b o u t i t.要求：1.所写内容应包括所提供的信息，可是当发挥；2.不得出现真寰的人名工校名、岬刍等相关信息。17济南高新一模介绍地儿、物：彳 列 句 1 ：Let me tell you something more about our city.It lies in.and there are really manyplaces of in

45、terest to see.例句 2：It is famous for.例句 3：.enjoys great popularity all over the world.2017广州中考英语写作第三节：书面 表 达（满 分 15分）假如你发明的“飞行单车”在学校科技节中获奖，被推荐参加一个国际青少年科技展览。请用英语介绍你的发明，内容包括下图中1-4项.注意：（1）参考词汇：轮 子wheel太阳能solar power（2）词 数80左 右（文章的开头己给出，不计入词数）。（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。My invention is a flyingbike._2017

46、武汉七.书面表达（共I大题，满 分15分）假如你是班长李明，你将安排你班外教的 儿 子Tom来汉的活动。请用电子邮件告知。内容要点如下，1.参观城市博物馆。了解武汉文化；2.走进课堂，交流学习情况；3.去东湖划船，欣赏风景；4.在家举办朋友聚会，品尝美食；5.补充一至两点个人想法。注意：1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称2.词数：60-803.内容连贯，不要逐条翻译；4.邮件的开头已给出。不计入总词数。参考词汇：City Museum城市博物馆The East Lake东 湖 view n.景色Hi Tom,Im glad 10 hear youll come to Wuhan.Hi Tom,

47、Fm glad 10 hear youll come to Wuhan.Wuhan is a beautiful city full of culture andhistory,Visiting City Museum is a good way to learn about Wuhan,we can go boatingin the East Lake.Enjoying the fascinating views.Then.well invite you to our classand talk about school tife.My friends and I will have a p

48、arty for you at home.Andyou can taste our traditional food as well If possible.You may watch Han Show.Hopeyoull have fun here.L i Ming利弊描述：例句 1 ：Today many students are interested in going online.But it has advantages anddisadvantages.彳 列 句 2：As an old saying goes,every coin has its two sides.Since

49、we cant completely keep awayfrom.we had better make full use of its advantages.Although we cant.we can use it to open our field of vision and help with our study ofknowledge.2017山东省荷泽市VI、书面表达（本大题共1 小题，共 20.0分）随着网络的发展，如今“网购”也随之流行，越来越多的中学生也加入到网购的群体当中。某校的学生会就“网购”这一热点问题作了问卷调查，观点如下：优点：(1)不需要出门，节约时间，不会劳累;

50、(2)商品更多，可以选择更多类型的商品；(3)东西通常更便宜。缺点：(1)只看到图片，看不到商品；(2)容易购买到无用的或不良的东西。请根据以上的提示要点，以“ShoppingOnline”为题写一篇英语短文。(短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。)提示词语：without,save,choose,cheap,goods(商品),useless(无用的)写作要求：(1)短文必须包括所给的提示要点和提示词，语句通顺、意思连贯，可适当发挥。(2)不能出现真实的人名或校名。(3)词数在80至 90之间。Shopping OnlineWith the development(发展)of the In