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1、压轴题06读后续写老何行师新高考最突出的特点是增加了读后续写题型，读后续写是对考生阅读和写作的综合能力考查形式，是 整个考卷中最难的题，它每年堪称是压轴题。读后续写总是以友爱互助、人和动物之间的和谐相处为主题。 2023年高考对于读后续写的考查，友爱仍将是主要话题。压轴题要颁壑臣整翌一友爱相助类：读后续写中给出的故事本身难度不大，其核心是考查学生的续写能力，如果考生连给出的故事都看不懂， 就无法展现考生的写作水平，这样的试题是失败的命题。读后续写和前面的故事构成一个完整的闭环的故 事，这样才能较好的考查考生的水平。2.实用解题方法：押题速练1.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完

2、整的故事。The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She

3、 spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them.One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took

4、care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy - his name was Bernard - had interested her very much.“I wish you could see she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I dont see what

5、 he can do.”local secondhand stores and our own closets, patching, taking in and letting out scams （缝合线）.“Wow! I said.Theyre lucky to get these/*“No, said Mom as she faced me. Were the lucky ones to be able to help them. But we need to make sure the Inglers dont have to pay a price fbr them. 4She th

6、en explained, 44I dont want these coats to cost them their pride or their dignity. 注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右;2 .请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。Paragraph I:Later that day, we went to the Inglers again.Paragraph 2:Mrs. Ingler gazed at the coat, and then glanced at Becky, who was eyeing it with interest.【参考范文】One possible

7、 version:Later that day, we went to the Inglers again. Taking a deep breath, I pressed their doorbell and the front door opened. 4tI hope we havent come at a bad time, “my mother said as vve entered the smoky, little room, Ubut we have some winter coats here that arc in decent condition from the don

8、ation boxes and I just wondered if you might know of any children who could use them. Maybe even your own children might like them. It was just a thought, so.” Then my mother lifted a blue girls coat out of the bag.Mrs. Ingler gazed at the coat, and then glanced at Becky, who was eyeing it with inte

9、rest. 4trd be happy to help. “Mrs. Ingler gave my mother a knowing look. uAnd I appreciate you thinking of me fbr this. Thank you.” Oh, please, dont mention it. Youre doing us a favor, “my mother laughed. As we left, I glanced at Becky, who was examining the coats. She smiled at me, and her face was

10、 transformed into a Becky I hadnt seen before. I realized I had never seen such a smile on Beckys face. I smiled back and felt very proud of what we had done. It was on that night that I finally realized why my Mom always helped people with her kind heart.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的妈妈注意到了 Ingler家的孩子在寒冷的天气

11、里没有保暖的衣 服穿，作者的妈妈前往Ingler家拜访，回到家后作者妈妈在缝纫机前忙了两天两夜，她从捐款箱、当地的二 手商店和我们自己的衣橱里收集大衣，修补、缝补、拆缝，作者妈妈说不想让这些外套让Ingler家失去自尊 或尊严。1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“那天晚些时候，我们又去了 Ingler家。”可知，第一段可描写在Ingler家 妈妈如何把外套交给Ingler家的人。由第二段首句内容“Ingler太太看了看外套，又看了看Becky, Becky正饶有兴趣地打最着。”可知，第二 段可描写Becky拿到衣服后的反应和作者的感悟。2 .续写线索：妈妈提出来意拿出衣服Becky接受衣服Bec

12、ky高兴作者感悟 押题速练6阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头请续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Once a man was driving down the road when he noticed an elderly lady stood on one of the most deserted sections of the read. Even though the light was not bright in the evening, the man saw that she needed some help. So, he parked his car in front o

13、f hers and approached her.The older woman became concerned because no one had stopped to help her in the past few hours, and saw this guy was approaching her with a smile. She became won ied that the man would hurt her because he appeared poor and hungry.The man could see she was scared and understo

14、od how she felt/im here to help you. My name is Bryan Anderson，he continued addressing bet. Despise her fear, the older woman told him that her cars tire was flat.“Maam, Its cold outdoors: why dont you want inside my warm car while I change the tires,M the man replied. Having said this, the man took

15、 his toolbox and began changing the flat tire of the Ladys car. The man quickly repulsed the tire. The older woman rolled down her car window and started talking to him as he finished.She introduced herself said she was from a far distant place and was passing through, and expressed her gratitude to

16、 him fbr helping her. After setting aside tools and a flat fire to her automobile, the man simply smiled as he shut the trunk（后备箱）.“How much should I pay you? asked the elderly lady.The man had reason fbr being paid because this was not his job He was assisting her in her time of need. Instead, he t

17、old her that if she genuinely wanted to repay him, she should help someone in need the next time she saw one“ And at that time, think of it as payment fbr this deed of minc the man added.On the way back to her destination, the old lady noticed a small cat a few miles down the road. She pulled over a

18、nd went in to relax and grab a bite before the final leg of her journey.注意：1 .续写的同数应为150左右：2 .请按如卜.格式在答题卡的相应位置作答，（pregnant怀孕的）After she was seated, a pregnant waitress brought a towel to wipe her wet hairWhile the waitress was wandering where the lady was. she found a note.【参考范文】A Possible Version:A

19、fter she was seated、a pregnarH waitress brought a lowel lo wipe her wet hair. The lady noticed that the waitress was in the later stage of her pregnancy but still smiling and working hard in the evening. The elderly lady wondered how someone with so little could be so kind and generous to a stranger

20、 until she remembered how Bryan, a stranger, had just helped her. After finishing her meal, the lady paid a hundred dollar bill much higher than her bill amount. The waitress went inside to get change, but when she returned, the old lady had left.While the waitress was wondering where the lady was,

21、she fbund a note. She read the note that was written by the old lady: Thank you fbr your amazing sen ices. You dont owe me anything. Someone once helped me without expecting anything in return. If you truly want to repay me, pass on your kindness, and do not let this chain of love end with you., The

22、re were four hundred dollar bills left under the napkin fbr the waitress. Her eyes were filled with tears. She was in desperate need of financial help with the baby coming soon. With the kindness from a stranger, she knew everything would be fine.【解析】本文是一篇记叙文。讲述的是一位女士的车胎爆胎，深夜中一个陌生人帮她更换轮胎的故事。这 位年长的女士

23、想要给他一定的报酬作为感谢，而陌生人说如果真想回报他的话，那就去帮助下一位需要帮 助的人，就在去往自己的目的地的途中，将善良传递下去。1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“她坐好后，一名怀孕的女服务员拿着毛巾擦湿头发。”可知，第一段可描写这位年长的 女士见到这位孕晚期的母亲的不容易，想到自己被帮助的场景而去帮助这位孕妈妈。由第二段首句内容“当女服务员想知道那位女士在哪里时，她找到了一张便条。”可知，第二段可描写这位 孕妈妈见到纸条上的内容以及这位孕妈妈收到别人帮助时的感想。2 .续写线索：车胎爆了陌生人帮忙替换轮胎表示感谢遇到孕妇服务员帮助孕妈妈孕妈 妈的感想After their mother

24、left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. 1 wish we could help him to earn money. said Clara, His family is suffering so much.“So do I,“ said Harry. ”We really should do something to assist them.”For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, UI ha

25、ve a great idea! I have a solution that wc can all help accomplish （完成）The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. I tell you what wc can do,“ said John. You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, wc can make popcorn （爆米花），and pu

26、t it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell il.”注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。When Mrs. Meredith heard of Johns idea, she thought it was a good one, too.With everylhing ready, Bernard started out on his new business.【思路点拨】1 .原文情节情感线精读原文材料，理清情节脉络,把握基本信息，抓住情感主线

27、。主题语境人与社会（社会服务与人际沟通）语篇话题本篇读后续写为记叙文，Meredith太太的三个孩子帮助贫困孩子Bernard的故事情节梳理What该材料讲述了在经济衰退的大环境下，小镇上很多人失业。善良的Meredith 太太热心帮助他人。其中有一家三口，丈夫卧病在床，妻子因要照顾他无法外出 挣钱。他们的儿子Bernard想帮助维持生活却不知该做什么。Meredith太太的三 个孩子Clara, Harry和John从母亲那得知此情况后，非常想帮助小男孩，John想 出一个好主意。他们决定把家里的那盒玉米做成爆米花，再让Bernard拿到社区 售卖。第一段介绍了故事背景，第二段描述了 Mer

28、edith太太的友善和关爱他人。第 三、四段讲述了小男孩Bernard 一家的困境，最后四段则是三个孩子的积极回应 去帮助BernardoWho（人物）：Mrs. Meredith, Bernard, Bernards parents, Clara, Harry, JohnWhere （地点）：a small communityWhat（事件）：Mrs. Merediths children want to assist the boy Bernard in need.Why（起因）：With Berbnards father sick in bed, his mother was unabl

29、e to go out to work. Bernard wanted to do something to support his family.Why该材料的价值取向是传播爱与友善。Ho、v作为故事类记叙文，该材料通过事件的起承转合不断推动情节发展。文本包含两条主线，明线是Meredith的3个孩子尽力帮助Bernard,暗线是两家人的心理 和情感线：Meredith一家助人的快乐，Bernard 一家受助的感激。2 .续文情节推理梳理原文情节时，刻意寻找文本中的有效伏笔和细节，以使续文与原文保持高度的融洽性和协同性。情节走向Meredith 一家人住在一个小社区，由于经济衰退，城里一些人

30、失业了。许多 家庭都在努力维持生计。人们试图互相帮助以应对困境。Mrs. Meredith是个善良 体贴的人，她拜访贫穷的人，给他们带食物和药品。在她拜访过一个家庭后（这 个家里丈夫卧病在床，妻子要照顾他而不能出去工作，还有一个叫伯纳德的小儿 子），她把这个家庭的情况告诉了孩子们，并希望他们去见见那个叫伯纳德的小男 孩。Mrs. Meredith看出伯纳德很想赚钱帮助他的妈妈，但是不知道他能做什么， 或许孩子们可以想出什么办法来帮他。后来孩子们想到了用玉米做爆米花，让伯 纳德在社区卖爆米花的主意。可续写线索：Mrs. Meredith会觉得孩子们的主意怎么样？他们接下来会怎么 做？伯纳德通过卖

31、爆米花赚钱了吗？第一段所给首句“When Mrs. Meredith heard of Johns idea, she thought it was a good one, too.“这一句是故事继续发展的关键点，可从Mrs. Meredith同意约翰的主 意后，孩子们是如何做的扩展开去，可以写孩子们是如何分工的，他们都做了什 么，Mrs. Meredith帮他们做了什么，无论从什么角度拓展，都要注意与续写第二 段首句呼应。第二段所给首句“With everything ready. Bernard started out on his new business.”这一句与前文 Bernard

32、 can take it around to the houses and sell it.呼应,可 以从伯纳德卖出爆米花后的感受，以及Mrs. Meredith的孩子们帮助伯纳德后的感 受拓展。【参考范文】Possible version1:When Mrs. Meredith heard of the idea, she thought it was a good one, too. Then Mrs. Meredith searched the internet and ordered a household popcorn machine. After that, Mrs. Mered

33、ith, together with her three children, paid another visit to the family and told them about the popcorn plan. Needless to say, they were deeply moved, especially Bernard who finally found a way to make money for his family. A few days later, the machine was delivered to Mrs. Merediths doorstep. And

34、it wasnt long before they got the hang of using the machine to make popcorn.With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. Although it was a hard time and things were tight fbr everybody, Bernards business worked out quite well. He carried the popcorn on his small bike, going from d

35、oor to door to sell it. People were suiprised to see such a little, poorly-dressed boy selling popcorn at their doors, but eventually almost all of them would buy a bag or two. It is love that makes the world go round and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.Possible version 2:When Mrs. Meredith

36、 heard of John s idea, she thought it was a good one, too. When the three siblings called on Bernard and shared the big project with the poorboy, Bernards face lit up but quickly his excitement faded. “Thank you fbr your big box of corn, but i dont have a single penny to buy popcorn and paper bags.

37、Bernard sighed heavily. Smiling slyly, John produced 50 dollars, which was contributed together by Clara and Harry. Excitement returned to Bernard,s face as he murmured a sincere thank you with a trembling voice.With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. With the big box hanging

38、 around his neck, Bernard become the No. 1 popcorn boy in the neighborhood. The three siblings would help him with filling and making changes. Together, they sold 500 portions in a single day as the neighbors still showed support despite their own poverty. By the end of the day, Bernards corn box wa

39、s emptied but his cash pot was full of notes and coins. Yet, he knew, from the bottom of his heart, that it was not just money, but also love, sacrifice and fraternity, that filled his pot. 押题速练2.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。I had stopped at the Swindon services （服务区）while on my way back to

40、London. As I drove up the slip road, I spotted a man with a backpack and his thumb （拇指）out. I pulled over and lowered the window.“Which way are you heading? I asked. Tm going back to London/“Ah, that would be grand/camc his immediate reply. He opened the door and lifted his backpack on to the back s

41、eat. Im Brendan,“ he said with an easy smile and a rich Irish （爱尔兰）tongue. was getting a bit desperate. Ive had my thumb out fbr a day and half. Nobody seems to stop these days.”“I havent eaten in days,“ said Brendan. Tm trying to get home.I,ve always enjoyed picking up hitchhikers. I used to be a m

42、otoring journalist and crossed the country in various test cars. Picking up a hiker always made me feel a little less guilty about all the miles I was doing.As we headed east along the motorway, Brendan told me how he came to be waiting fbr a lift on that particular evening, and also about the two r

43、ecent family tragedies （悲剧）that had mined him and pushed him out of his old life and on to the road.Brendan told me that he was 52. He laughed a lot and enjoyed his ofT-grid （不入网的）lifestyle. Until last week, that is, when hed been mugged （抢劫）.“Three young men in Birmingham took my other pack and it

44、had all my money in it. Ive been sleeping out since then. I havent eaten in days. Tm hoping to get some casual work in London, so I can then get myself home to Ireland”It must have been the concept of home that got me, and helping a man whod clearly had a tough time seemed like the right thing to do

45、.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As we were approaching the Ileathrow turn-off （希思罗机场岔道），I had an idea.Before he left to buy his air ticket, he gave me a huge hug.【参考范文】As we were approaching the Heathrow turn-off, I had an idea. Why dont 1 just drop you at the airport now?” I said. TH buy yo

46、u a ticket and you can fly home.” Thats so kind of you,“ he replied. Then, after a pause, And please dont worry. I,ll definitely wire you the money when i get home? I pulled onto the airport avenue and soon dropped him off outside the lenninal building. I went to a cash point, got out 10 shiny new 2

47、0 notes and handed them over. He took the money and thanked me again and again.Before he left to buy his air ticket, he gave me a huge hug. He took my phone number and said hed call as soon as he could to arrange the transfer. I bid farewell to him without any real idea whether I,d ever see the man

48、or the money again. As I drove the final miles to my own house in London, I felt happier thinking about Brendan. He asked for help, for a lift to get home, and in good faith I gave them to him. Thats got to be a good thing.【思路点拨】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述作者在回伦敦的路上遇到一个中年人示意要搭便车，作者让他 上了车。在和此人聊天的过程中了解到他的生活不易，更糟糕的是，他在上周还被三个年轻人抢劫了。他 已经好几天没吃东西，希望可以在伦敦找份工作，挣些回爱尔兰的路费。听了男人的故事，作者决定帮助 他。1 .段落续写：根据第一段首句“当我们快到希思罗机场的岔路口时，我有了一个主意。”可知，下文可描写作者的主意是 什么送男人去机场并给他买回家的机票，以及男人的反应。根据第二段首句“在他去买机票之前，他给了我个大大的拥抱。”可知，下文可描写男人留下联系方式承 诺还钱。但作者当时并不在乎会不会收到钱，因为帮助了一个需要帮助的人，作者非常感到非常快乐，这 是比金钱更难得的。2 .续写线索：想