2021年中考英语书面表达---写作技巧专项讲解ppt课件.ppt

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1、Reading and Writingteacherteacherdoctordoctorengineer engineer scientist scientist grow upgrow upin the futurein the futureachieve ones dream achieve ones dream travel around the world travel around the world 工程师工程师实现梦实现梦想想科学家科学家在将来在将来教师教师长大长大周游周游世界世界医生医生Translate the Chinese into English.LetLets re

2、ad and writes read and writeA.A.信息归纳（信息归纳（5分）：请阅读下面文章，完成表格。分）：请阅读下面文章，完成表格。Your junior school years are coming to an end.After this Your junior school years are coming to an end.After this term,you will study in a senior school.What are your expecting term,you will study in a senior school.What are

3、your expecting from senior school?Letfrom senior school?Lets hear what some teen readers think the s hear what some teen readers think the future will be.future will be.Chen Gang,14,from Dongguan,Guangdong I hear that although Chen Gang,14,from Dongguan,Guangdong I hear that although Senior3 is a ha

4、rd year,Senior1 and Senior2 are less stressful.I Senior3 is a hard year,Senior1 and Senior2 are less stressful.I hope therehope therell be time then to enjoy sports.ll be time then to enjoy sports.Zhou Jie,16,from Harbin,Helongjiang I really enjoy science.I Zhou Jie,16,from Harbin,Helongjiang I real

5、ly enjoy science.I am also interested in UFOs.Iam also interested in UFOs.Im crazy about making model planes,m crazy about making model planes,although Ialthough Im not very good because I donm not very good because I dont really have the t really have the science knowledge.Iscience knowledge.Ill le

6、arn more science in senior school.ll learn more science in senior school.Anyway,sometime in the future IAnyway,sometime in the future Im going to build an amazing model m going to build an amazing model planes!planes!Wang Lin,15,from Xiamen,Fujian I hope I can be taller in Wang Lin,15,from Xiamen,Fu

7、jian I hope I can be taller in senior school.I am only 155cm.Many children grow faster in senior senior school.I am only 155cm.Many children grow faster in senior school and I hope also.I want to be 162cm.But I am not sure,school and I hope also.I want to be 162cm.But I am not sure,since most girls

8、in my family donsince most girls in my family dont grow any taller than 160cm.I t grow any taller than 160cm.I hope I am different.hope I am different.Zhang Chen,14,Puyan,Henan I expect that IZhang Chen,14,Puyan,Henan I expect that Ill make more ll make more friends in senior school.I study in a mid

9、dle school affilitiated friends in senior school.I study in a middle school affilitiated to(to(ll meet people from different areas.I can learn new things ll meet people from different areas.I can learn new things from them.from them.How old is Chen Gang?How old is Chen Gang?81.81._ _Where is Wang Li

10、n from?Where is Wang Lin from?82.82._ _What does Zhou Jie like?What does Zhou Jie like?83.83._ _WhatWhats the name of the s the name of the oldest kid?oldest kid?84.84._ _What does Zhang Chen hope to What does Zhang Chen hope to do?do?85.85._ _Information Card14 years old14 years oldXiamen.Xiamen.Sc

11、ience.Science.ZhouZhou Jie.Jie.To make more friends in senior To make more friends in senior school.school.B.B.书面表达（书面表达（15分）：分）：热门话题热门话题“中国梦中国梦”。最近，你们班召开了。最近，你们班召开了以以“我的中国梦我的中国梦”为主题的班会活动，每位同学都为主题的班会活动，每位同学都畅谈了自己对中国梦的理解。请写一篇畅谈了自己对中国梦的理解。请写一篇80字左右的字左右的短文，说说班会的情况及自己的感受。短文，说说班会的情况及自己的感受。内容要点：内容要点：1.谈谈自

12、己的梦想。谈谈自己的梦想。2.为什么有这为什么有这个梦想。个梦想。3.如何实现自己的梦想。如何实现自己的梦想。Everyone talked about his Everyone talked about his u understanding nderstanding of the Chinese Dream.We all believe that of the Chinese Dream.We all believe that this dream_this dream_写作方法指导写作方法指导 一、审题，找要点。一、审题，找要点。1对中国梦的理解对中国梦的理解 2.自己的梦想自己的梦想

13、3.为什么有为什么有这这个梦想个梦想 4.如何实现这个梦想如何实现这个梦想 最少要写到上述四点！最少要写到上述四点！二、二、怎怎样写？样写？第一点：第一点：Everyone talked about his understanding of the ChineseDream.We all believe that this dream will come true in the future.第二点：第二点：I also talked about my own dream.（过渡句子）（过渡句子）My dream is to be_.第三点：第三点：Let me tell you why I

14、have this dream?（过渡句子）（过渡句子）_.（可以多些几个原因来拓展字数，可以写（可以多些几个原因来拓展字数，可以写一两件事来说明原因。）一两件事来说明原因。）第四点：第四点：How will I make my dream come true?（过渡句子）（过渡句子）I will_.（可以多写几条来拓展字数。）（可以多写几条来拓展字数。）结尾：结尾：I believe Ill be a goodin the future.范范 文文 Everyone talked about his understanding of the Chinese Dream.We all beli

15、eve that this dream will come true in the future.I also talked about my own dream.My dream is to be a doctor.Let me tell you why I have this dream?When I was in Grade Seven,I was sick and often to see doctors.The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up.With the help of them,I w

16、as getting better.Now Im very healthy.Since then I have hoped to become a doctor.How will I make my dream come true?I will study hard to get good grades.Ill read more books about medicine.I believe Ill be a good doctor in the future.LetLets read and writes read and writeA.A.信息归纳信息归纳(5(5分分)：阅读下面短文，完成

17、表格。：阅读下面短文，完成表格。Although the world develops much faster and better,the Although the world develops much faster and better,the resources(resources(资源资源 )on the earth get fewer and fewer.In order to)on the earth get fewer and fewer.In order to protect them,something must be done.protect them,something

18、 must be done.Save water.Water is the source Save water.Water is the source（源泉（源泉)of life.No water,no)of life.No water,no life.So itlife.So its very important for us to do so.Not only should we s very important for us to do so.Not only should we protect drinking water and stop polluting it,but also

19、make full use protect drinking water and stop polluting it,but also make full use of it.of it.Save electricity:It is very important.We can Save electricity:It is very important.We cant imagine what t imagine what the life will be like without it.Everyone should do his best to the life will be like w

20、ithout it.Everyone should do his best to save electricity.Donsave electricity.Dont forget to turn off the lights or other t forget to turn off the lights or other electric machines when we finish working.electric machines when we finish working.Save forests:They are useful.Please stop cutting them d

21、own Save forests:They are useful.Please stop cutting them down and use recycled paper instead.Make our world a green one to live and use recycled paper instead.Make our world a green one to live in.in.Recycle useful rubbish.Plenty of rubbish can be recycled like Recycle useful rubbish.Plenty of rubb

22、ish can be recycled like cans,paper,bottles,and so on.We can save resources in this way.cans,paper,bottles,and so on.We can save resources in this way.Information CardHow about the resources on the How about the resources on the earth?earth?81._.81._.How to save electricity when How to save electric

23、ity when we finish working?we finish working?Turn off the Turn off the 82._.82._.How to save water?How to save water?Protect drinking water,stop Protect drinking water,stop polluting,and also polluting,and also 83._.83._.How to deal with useful How to deal with useful rubbish?rubbish?84.84._._.How m

24、any things must be done?How many things must be done?85._.85._.Get fewer and fewerGet fewer and fewerlights and machineslights and machinesmake full use of it make full use of it Recycle Recycle FourFour B B书面表达（书面表达（15分）分）2013 2013年年1月上旬，全国中东部地区月上旬，全国中东部地区17省市持续雾霾，陷入大范围省市持续雾霾，陷入大范围的重度和严重的污染。造成这一现象的

25、主要的原因是工厂排出的废气的重度和严重的污染。造成这一现象的主要的原因是工厂排出的废气和汽车尾气等。绿色低碳，保护环境。从我们身边做起。现请你根据和汽车尾气等。绿色低碳，保护环境。从我们身边做起。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示，以以下三个方面的提示，以 “LetLets Do Something to Save Our s Do Something to Save Our EnvironmentEnvironment”为题写一篇为题写一篇80词左右的短文。词左右的短文。内容包括：内容包括：1.重要性：只有一个地球。重要性：只有一个地球。2.主要问题：污染、致病、主要问题：污染、致病、灾难。灾难。

26、3.措施：停止污染、保护大自然。措施：停止污染、保护大自然。LetLets Do Something to Save Our Environments Do Something to Save Our Environment_范范 文文Lets Do Something to Save Our Environment We all live on the earth.The earth is our home.We have only one earth.We must take care of it.It gives us the best environment.If we harm it

27、,it will be angry.And then we have a terrible end.There are three problems in our earth.,they are pollution,disaster and illness.Its our duty to protect our environment.So we must plant more trees,protect the flowers and trees,save energy,reduce the pollution.We should ask our government to control

28、the pollution from the factories.Protect the nature is very important.Its our duty to keep environment clean and tidy.If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment,the earth will become much more beautiful.写 作 方 法 指 导 一、一、审题，找要点。审题，找要点。1 只有一个地球。（只有一个地球。（1）2 主要问题：污染、病、灾难。（主要问题：污染、病、灾

29、难。（2）3 停止污染，保护大自然的措施。（停止污染，保护大自然的措施。（3）最少要写到这三点！最少要写到这三点！二、二、怎怎 样写？样写？开头：开头：We all live on the earth.The earth is our home.第一点：第一点：We have only one home._.第二点：第二点：There are three problems on the earth,they are_.第三点：第三点：Its our duty to protect our s our duty to protect our environment.（过渡句子）（过渡句子）So

30、we must_.(可以多写几条措施来拓展字数。可以多写几条措施来拓展字数。)结尾：结尾：If everyone make a contribution to protecting the environment,the earth will become much more beautiful.1.读写综合要求先读后写。同学们要解答好读写综合要求先读后写。同学们要解答好A部分部分的的Information Card，首先要阅读当中的问题，然后，首先要阅读当中的问题，然后带着问题读材料，最后进行回答。填写时要注意写的带着问题读材料，最后进行回答。填写时要注意写的格式、字母的大小写、词数的限定等

31、。格式、字母的大小写、词数的限定等。2.中考的书面表达评分一般以点为主，同学们要中考的书面表达评分一般以点为主，同学们要想在书面表达中取得高分，在下笔之前，一定要明确想在书面表达中取得高分，在下笔之前，一定要明确当中需要包含几个点，然后选择用于表达这些内容的当中需要包含几个点，然后选择用于表达这些内容的语言，切忌漏点，也不能随意发挥，加进无关的内容。语言，切忌漏点，也不能随意发挥，加进无关的内容。3.要注意找出书面表达的要求和材料的不同点，要注意找出书面表达的要求和材料的不同点，要适当的提炼材料中的信息及要点，但不是原封不动要适当的提炼材料中的信息及要点，但不是原封不动地照搬抄材料。而是要地照

32、搬抄材料。而是要“聪明聪明”地地“抄抄”。SummaryHomeworkRead and write.Read and write.A.A.信息归纳（信息归纳（5分）：请阅读下面短文，完成表格。分）：请阅读下面短文，完成表格。Sydney is on the eastern seaboard of Australia,near Sydney is on the eastern seaboard of Australia,near the Pacific Ocean.Sydney is the most crowed city in the Pacific Ocean.Sydney is the

33、 most crowed city in Australia.It is often known as the host of the year 2000 Australia.It is often known as the host of the year 2000 Olympic Games.Since Sydney beat Beijing in 1993 for the Olympic Games.Since Sydney beat Beijing in 1993 for the right to the host the Millenniumright to the host the

34、 Millennium（千年）（千年）Olympic,millions of dollars have been spent on the 110,000-sea Olympic stadium known as the Stadium Australia.The three outstanding aspects of Sydney are its excellent sandy beaches,friendly and multicultural residents sandy beaches,friendly and multicultural residents and atmosph

35、ere.The particular tourist attractionsand atmosphere.The particular tourist attractions（旅游名（旅游名胜）胜）in Sydney are Sydney Opera House,Sydney Harbor Bridge and Bondi beach.Sydney Opera House which is for both the poor and the rich looks like a ship sailing.Sydney Harbor Bridge which is known as“the coa

36、t hangerthe coat hanger（衣架）（衣架）”is the largest single arch is the largest single arch（拱（拱形）形）bridge in the world.Information CardInformation CardThe locationThe location81.81._The money spent on the Stadium The money spent on the Stadium AustraliaAustralia82.82._The three aspects of SydneyThe three

37、aspects of Sydney83.83._The particular tourist The particular tourist attraction in Sydneyattraction in Sydney84._84._The largest single arch bridge The largest single arch bridge in the worldin the world85._85._B B书面表达（书面表达（15分）分）现代人的生活压力都很大，所以人们喜欢通过旅游来缓解压力，请现代人的生活压力都很大，所以人们喜欢通过旅游来缓解压力，请围绕下列内容写一篇不少于围绕下列内容写一篇不少于80字的短文。字的短文。1 有的人喜欢独自旅行，有的人喜欢与别人结伴而行；有的人喜欢独自旅行，有的人喜欢与别人结伴而行；2 两种旅行方式的好处；两种旅行方式的好处；3 你更喜欢哪种旅行方式，为什么？你更喜欢哪种旅行方式，为什么？.Thanks and have a good time!