读后续写圣诞节的神秘礼物讲义-2023届高三英语写作专项.docx

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1、【原题重现】海安市202L2022届高三期中考试读后续写.圣 诞节的神秘礼物阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使 之构成一篇完整的短文。I was a single mother in my 30s who lived down and out with my daughter Peggy in a small apartment, struggling hard to make our needs meet.One day, I headed to the downtown for an interview. I sat down in the streetcar, and

2、there against the seat was a beautiful silk umbrella with a silver handle decorated with gold scrolls, among which there was a name carved.On impulse。中动）I determined to find the owner myself. I got off the streetcar in the heavy rain and thankfully opened the umbrella to protect myself. Then I searc

3、hed a telephone book for the name, I found it immediately and called it, waiting patiently, and then a lady answered.“Yes J she said in surprise, with extreme excitement. It was my umbrella which had been stolen a year ago.”So appealing was her pleasure that I forgot I was looking for a job and went

4、 directly to her small house. She took the umbrella, with teary eyes, explaining with choking voice that the umbrella was given by her parents, now dead. Her happiness at retrievinga big change since that day）. Every Christmas reminds me of the ladys generosity and my own kindness, telling me the es

5、sence of the saying One good turn deserves another.” 第一段，突然，门铃响了，Peggy急忙去开门，说一定是圣诞 老人。Peggy惊讶的叫喊声从门口传来，让我好奇谁来了。我 刚到门口，就看到门前堆积如山的包裹，没有人在那里。Peggy 兴奋地眨着眼睛，她帮我把这些礼物拿到客厅，并急切地想 马上打开。客厅里到处都是用漂亮的纸和缎带包着的礼物， 我完全搞不清这些礼物是从哪里来的，甚至担心它们是否是 错寄的。所以我叫Peggy不要马上打开它们，并帮我寻找礼 品盒上的任何线索。（122）第二段，突然，一个包裹上的便条吸引了我的目光。便条上 写着一行漂

6、亮的字：“圣诞快乐！这些礼物是因为你曾经还给 我一把特别的伞！”看着那些礼物和我的女儿，泪水模糊了我 的眼睛，因为这个意外的喜悦而哽咽起来，示意Peggy打开 这些礼物。一棵圣诞树、圣诞树上的装饰品、火鸡、布丁和 一些给Peggy的玩具出现在我眼前，这给整个家庭增添了节 日的气氛。我非常感激这位女士的仁慈和慷慨以及我对她的 善意。（当我正忙着准备圣诞大餐时，Peggy潜心装饰圣诞 树。）。那个平安夜将永远留在我的脑海和心中。（圣诞节 过后，我接到一家大公司的电话，该公司给我提供了一份优 厚的薪水并帮助我度过了难关。从那天起，我的命运似乎开始发生重大变化）。每个圣诞节都让我想起这位女士的慷慨和我

7、自己的善良，告诉我“善有善报”这句话的精髓。【官方范文】Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy rushed to answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus.My heart started thumping violently as Peggy opened the door, screaming with excitement. Lying on the groud were a pile of delicate packages,with a Christmas hat on top of it.Sh

8、ocked and Surprised, I rushed out of the door in a hurry. However, no one was in my sight as I looked around. I turned around, just in time to meet Peggys sparkling eyes. She ran to me in joy and threw her arms around me. The next five minutes saw us busy uncovering the packages, as I wondered if Sa

9、nta answered a prayer I hadnt even said.Suddenly, a note attached to one package caught my eyes. It said, “To a kind lady who found my umbrella/5 After reading the note, everything dawned on me. It was the appreciation of the lady who I helped a few months ago. A stream of warmth surged through my b

10、ody, and I thanked her for the presents in my heart. As I opened the package, I saw a special note. It read, “No matter how hard the life is, face it bravely as long as there is love in our hearts.”（找回）this special possession was such that to have accepted her reward would have spoiled something, so

11、 I refused her offer and left.The following months were hard. I can only obtain temporary employment, for a small salary. What was worse, I had just lost my last job before Christmas, with only fifteen dollars left. Unless a miracle happened, I would be homeless in January, foodless and jobless. I h

12、ad prayed steadily for weeks, and there had been no answer but this coldness and darkness.The air was full of Christmas merriment, with the bells ringing and children shouting in the bitter dusk of the evening. But there should be no Christmas for me, I knew, no gifts, no remembrance whatsoever.Thin

13、king of this, I couldnt control my tears on my way home, but I managed a smile so could greet my little daughter. She opened the door for me and threw herself in my arms, screaming joyously and demanding desirably for her Christmas gift. There I stood, frozen, overwhelmed by misery.Suddenly, the doo

14、rbell rang and Peggy rushed toit,calling that it must be Sarita Claus.Suddenly, a note attached to one package caught my eyes.【菲常视角】好词好句1.struggle hard to make our needs meet 努力使收支平衡2.lived down and out with sb和某人一起过着穷困潦倒的生活3. with a silver handle decorated with gold scrolls 伞把上装饰着 金色的画卷4. On impuls

15、e 冲动5. in surprise, with extreme excitement 很惊讶又极度兴奋6. explain with chokedvoice用沙哑的声音解释着7. Her happiness at retrieving （找 回）this special possession was such that to have accepted her reward wouldhave spoiled something她如此高兴找回这个特殊的物品以至 于她认为给她奖品会破坏掉一些东西8. pray steadily不断地持续地祈祷9. The air was full of Chr

16、istmas merriment, with the bells ringing and children shouting in the bitter dusk of the evening.空 气中充满圣诞节的快乐，铃铛响着，孩子们在这个寒冷的傍 晚尖叫着10. manage a smile 强颜欢笑11. She opened the door for me and threw herself in my arms, screaming joyously and demanding desirably for her Christmas gift. There I stood, froz

17、en, overwhelmed by misery.她为我打开 门，投入我的怀抱，高兴地叫起来，急切地想要圣诞礼物。 我僵在那里，充满了悲伤。梳理原文（参考答案）QI What did I see when I sat in the streetcar?There against the seat was a beautiful silk umbrella with a silver handle decorated with gold scrolls, among which there was a name carved.Q2 What did I deal with the umbrel

18、la?I returned it to the owner.Q3 How did the owner respond to her?She was surprised and happy.Q4 What was my life like?I was suffering poverty and would be homeless in January, foodless and jobless.Q5 What did my daughter need badly now?Christmas gifts which I could not afford.分析续写（参考答案）Para 1 QI Wh

19、o would be at the door?Santa Claus;The deliver man;nobody but a pile of packagesQ2 What were the packages like?They looked attractive and colorful in different sizes and were wrapped in beautiful paper in a very delicate and cautious way.Q3 How did I feel when seeing the package in front of me?I fel

20、t amazed and strange whose packages they were and was wondering whether they were sent to me by mistake.Q4 How did Peggy feel?She felt very excited and happy to open the gifts.Q5 What would I do next?I wanted to double check where the gift came from.Para 2QI What was on the note?A line of nice writi

21、ng on the note said: Merry Christmas!These are for your returning my special umbrella!Q2 How did I feel at that time?I choked with happiness and astonishment, realizing these gift were not sent by mistake but given to me specifically.Q3 What may be included in the gift packages?Some Christmas gifts

22、such as Christmas tree, turkey, puddings,cakes, toys and son on.Q4 What was Piggy doing and what was the family atmosphere? The bell ringing and the whole family taking on a cheerful atmosphere, Peggy was busy on her new gift.Q5 How did it make a difference to my life?My life began to make a change:

23、! received a call from certain company which offered me a fine salary and helped me out Q6 What was the real purpose/theme of writing the essay? To speak highly of a good deed and tell us a lesson that one good turn deserves another.” 【线索构思】Para 1【打开门所见-Peggy反应-尖叫，惊喜】Peggys astonished yell rang from

24、 the door, leaving me curious about who was coming.【包裹是来自SantaClaus ? 或快递员送包裹? 或无人, 很多 包裹放在门口1 ? ? ?At the door stood a Santa Claus who held several boxes of gifts, waving to Peggy and me and sending his best wishes to us.At the door stood a kind and young postman who warmly expressed his best wishe

25、s to us and handed boxes of delicate gifts to me. The young postman had left before I asked him who sent the gifts.Hardly had I reached the door when I saw a mountain of packages piling up in front of the door, with no one being there.【孩子的反应（动作，神态等：喜出望外）Jumping with joy and excitement/Her eyes twink

26、ling with great excitement,Peggy helped me take these gifts to the living room and was eager to open them instantly.【包裹的状态和内容-各色各样，大大小小，精心包装好的】 With the gifts wrapped in the beautiful paper and ribbons all around the living room,【我的反应（好奇想要知道是谁送的，或者疑惑是不是送错了 等,让女儿暂时不要打开包裹）】I was seized with a total co

27、nfusion about where the gifts came from and even concerned whether they were sent by mistake, I asked Peggy not to open them at once and helped me look for any clues on the gift boxes.Para 21纸条上内容】? ? ?A line of nice writing on the note said: Merry Christmas!These are for your returning my special u

28、mbrella!”【我的反应-感动流泪，示意孩子可以打开礼物】Looking at those gifts and my daughter, with tears blurring my eyes, I choked with unexpected joy and signalled Peggy to open these gifts.I felt very appreciative of her kindness and generosity from the lady with whom ever I shared my kindness.【礼物的内容,? ? ?家庭的氛围】A Chris

29、tmas tree, its decorations, turkey, puddings and some toys for Peggy rose before my eyes, which added to the whole family festival atmosphere.My daughters thrilling voice and laughterlingered around room.【孩子和我的状态，动作】Peggy dove into decorating the Christmas tree while I was busy in preparing for the

30、Christmas big dinner. That Christmas eve would remain in my mind and hearts forever.【我生活状态的改变】After the Christmas, I received a call from a big company which offered me a fine salary and helped me out. It seemed that my fate began to make a big change since that day.【我的所思所想】Every Christmas reminds m

31、e of the ladys generosity and my own kindness, telling me the essence of the saying One good turn deserves another/5【菲写不可】Miss Tang读后续写Para 1 Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy rushed to孔swe一 it, calling that it must be Santa Claus.Peggys astonished yellfrom the dooi, leaving mecurious about who

32、was coming. Hardly had I reached the door when I saw a mountain of packages piling up in front of the door, with no one being there.Her eyes twinkling with great excitement, Peggy helped me take these gifts to the living room and was eager to open them instantly. With the gifts wiapped in the beauti

33、ful paper and ribbons all over the living room, I was seized with a total confusion aboutwhere the gifts came from and evenconcernedwhether they were sent by mistake. So I asked Peggy not to open them at once and helped me look for any clues on the gift boxes. (122)Para 2 Suddenly, a note attached t

34、o one package caught my eyes. A line of nice writing on the note said: Merry Christmas!These are for your returning my special umbrella!” Looking at those gifts and my daughter, with tears bluirinq my eyes, I choked with unexpected joy and signalled Peggy to open these gifts. A Christmas tree, its d

35、ecorations, turkey, puddings and some toys for Pnqgyrnse before my eyes, which added to the whole family festival atmosphere. I feltvery appreciativeofher kindness and generosity from the lady with whom ever I shared my kindness. (Peggy dove intodecoratinq the Christmas tree while I was busy in preparing for the Christmas big dinner). That Christmas eve would remain in my mind and heartsforevei. (117)(After the Christmas, I received a call from a big company which offered me a fine salary and helped me out. It seemed that my fate began to make