读后续写情绪描写讲义-2023届高三英语二轮复习写作专项.docx

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1、读后续写情绪描写 无灵主语+时间状语从句：情绪名词+动词+sb+as/when sb did sth.Uncontrollably, nervousness overwhelmed Peter as he stepped onto the stage. 非谓语：情绪形容词1+情绪形容词2, sb did sth, doing sth.Nervous and slightly scared, Peter managed to step onto the stage, starting to deliver his speech. 让步状语从句：情绪形容词+as sb+be动词,sb did st

2、h.Nervous as he was, David plucked up courage and made his way to the stage.独立主格：身体部位+非谓语动词，sb did sth.Hands trembling slightly, peter still managed to step onto the stage.我开心：I am happy.”（换主语）：“开心（的情绪）抓住了我”Delight seized me.（加介短）：“一股开心（的情绪）抓住了我”A wave of delight seized me.（加并列）：“开心与振奋（的情绪）抓住了我”Deli

3、ght ard excitement seized me.（加副词）：“即刻地，一股开心（的情绪）抓住了我”Instantly a strong sense of delight seized me.（加时间状从）：“听到那好消息，一股开心（的情绪）即亥U抓住了我”Instantly, a strong sense of delight seized me as I heard the good news.1）无灵主语：“情绪名词+固定动词+sb” +as/whensb did sth当某人做某事时，一股xx情绪涌上心头。彳列句：Uncontrollably, a wave of regret

4、 washed over me as I heard the bad news.听到这个坏消息时，一股悔恨的情绪无法控制地涌上我心头。情绪名词固定动词 happiness/joy/delight 开心 anger/rage/fury 狂怒 sadness/sorrow 悲伤 gratitude/appreciation 感激 admiration钦佩/赞赏 guilt/remorse 愧疚悔恨 fear/terror/fright/panic 害怕 astonishment/shock/surprise 震惊 Relief/comfort 练习2022全国1卷seize （抓住/控制）catc

5、h（caught 过去式）strike（struck 过去式）surround （围绕）take hold of（控制）wash/sweep（swept） over（冲刷）come over （突然感到）envelop （笼罩）overwhelm使难以承受1） 当意识到如果没有恰当和及时的说服和鼓励，大卫的情况可能会变得更糟，我感到担忧和焦虑。Worry and anxiety seized me as I realized Davids situation might get worse without proper and prompt persuasion and encourageme

6、nt.2） 当大卫终于下定决心继续赛跑时，我感到欣慰和开心。Relief and delight came over me when David finally became determined to continue the race.3） .非谓语：情绪形容词1+情绪形容词2, sb did sth, doing sth.例句：Nervous and scared, Peter managed to step onto the stage, starting to deliverhis speech.（感到）紧张和害怕，彼得勉力走上舞台，开始发表演讲。练习1：2022全国1卷感到坚定和受

7、到鼓舞，David抬起头，感激地看着我。Determined and inspired （encouraged）, David raised his head, looking at me with gratitude.练习2：（感到）放松的和快乐的，大卫在越过终点线后立刻向我挥手，表达他的快乐和感激。Relieved and delighted, David waved at me immediately after crossing the finish line, conveying his happiness and gratitude.4） .让步状语从句：情绪形容词+as sb+w

8、as, sb （still） did sth.尽管某人（感到）xx,某人仍做某事例句： Nervous as he was, Peter plucked up courage and made his way to the stage. 尽管很紧张，彼得仍鼓起勇气走上舞台。练习1：2022全国1卷尽管还有一丝紧张，David决心完成赛跑。Slightly nervous as he was, David became determined to finish the race.练习2： 2022广州一模尽管很着急和不情愿，我还是按照爸爸的要求去洗碗。Anxious and reluctant

9、as I was, I still did the dishes at Dad s request.5） .独立主格：身体部位+动词非谓语，sb did sth.Tears welling up in his eyes, he thanked the police with/in a trembling voice.Tears streaming down his cheeks, David thanked me for the timely encouragement.Eyes filled with regretful tears, sb do sth.（眼里满含着）Eyes glitte

10、ring with relief/joy, sb do sth.（眼里闪着）Face gleaming with delight, Peter failed to utter a word.（脸上洋溢着喜悦）Heart beating with happiness, sb.（某人的心因而怦怦直跳）其他部位：Arms/legs/muscles aching and knees shaking/trembling, I did sth.（胳膊/腿/肌肉酸痛，膝盖发抖/颤抖，我）（划横线的情绪词，可按需换掉）练习1：2022全国1卷大卫自信而坚定，继续奔跑，汗水顺着他的脸流下来。Confident

11、and determined, David kept on running, sweat streaming down his face.练习2：让我们欣喜若狂的是，大卫顺利越过终点线，脸上洋溢着满足的喜悦。To our ecstasy, David crossed the finish line smoothly, his face shining with satisfied delight.读后续写万能句子万能片段1:不知所措（茫然/紧张/害怕）基础版:心在狂跳，她不知道该怎么办。随着数秒后，她的脑海里出现了一个想法。Heart beating wildly, she had no id

12、ea what to do.As a few seconds passed, an idea came into her mind.升级版:（高分替换词+比喻+名从+时间独立主格句式）Heart beating wildly like a beast,she was at a loss what to do next.A couple of seconds slipping away, an idea struck her like独立主格句式：独立主语1+非谓语动词，句子主语2+谓语动词。提升训练练习L她的脸颊因尴尬而灼热，她不知道该怎么办。（前半句“五官”用：独立主格）Cheeks bur

13、ning with embarrassment/shame, she wondered what to do.练习2：顿时，她的大脑一片空白，不知道该怎么办。（前半句“大脑”用：独立主格）All of a sudden, her mind going blank, she had no idea /at a losswhat to do.练习3：被所发生的一切吓坏了，他站原地不动，不知道接下来怎么办（非谓语）。Terrified by what had happened, he was rooted to the spot, not knowing what to do next.万能片段2：

14、激动（开心/紧张/害怕）Overwhelmed by wild joy, I rose to my feet and punched my fist in the air, shouting out loud, “I made it! ” .被狂野的喜悦所淹没，我站起来，在空中挥拳，大喊道：“我做到了！”练习L惊慌失措，我跳了起来，尽可能大声地尖叫：“救命！ ”。Overcome by a sense of panic, I sprang to my feet, screaming as loud as I could, “ Help! ” .练习2：被一阵紧张所支配，我跳了起来，问自己说：“

15、我该怎么办？二Dominated by a flush of nervousness, I jumped to my feet, asking myself, “What should I do?”练习：2021 全国 1 卷 Mother? s Day Surprise“成功了！我们做到了！ Jeff大喊大叫，她在空中挥舞着拳头。一种温暖的感觉充满了她们的心，因为这对她们来说真的是一次难忘的经历。不管怎样，她们胜利完成了一个愉悦的惊喜。“It was a success! We made it!”Jeff shouted as she punched her fist in the air.

16、A sense of warmth filled their hearts in that it was truly a memorable experience for them. （in that 由于二because） Believe it or not, they pulled offa delightful surprise.万能片段3：紧张+成功Heart racing and palms sweating, he dragged his trembling legs forward. Taking a deep breath, he murmured to himself fir

17、mly, uEverything will be great. I , II make it!” .（成功后）Hearing the inspiring news, he leaped into the airwith iov.2022 深圳二模 Go Green心跳加速，手心出汗，他拖着颤抖的双腿向前走。深吸一口气，他坚定地喃喃自语道，“一切都会很好的。我能做到！、听到这个鼓舞人心的消息，他高兴地跳到了空中练习：2022 全国 1 卷 The forest run心跳加速，手心出汗，David拖着颤抖的双腿走回跑道。（跑道course）他什么也感觉不到，只有手在颤抖，心脏砰砰直跳，喉咙紧绷。

18、（独立主格）深吸了一口气，他坚定地喃喃自语，“一切都会很好的。我能做到！工终于完成了比赛，David高兴地跳到了空中。Heart racing and palms sweating, David dragged his trembling legs back to the course.He could feel nothing but his hands shaking, heart poundingand throat tightening.Taking a deep breath, he murmured to himself firmly, “ Everything will be g

19、reat. II make it! ” .Having finished the run, David leaped into the air with joy.万能片段4：复杂心情（震惊/害怕/迷茫）For a moment, within mv heart was a 8mpiex feeling, which made me rooted to the spot. 全部倒装的主句定语从句I should not have behaved in that way.虚拟语气有一瞬间，我心中有一种复杂的感觉，令我钉在原地（倒装+定从）我不应该那样做（虚拟语气） 练习一2016浙江卷:在她内心有

20、一种复杂的感觉，简维持一动也不动，疲惫和无法动弹。Within her heart was a complex feeling. Jane remained rooted to the spot, exhausted and unable to move.练习二2021八省联考续写:在我内心有巨大的惊讶和感激，我站着一动也不动，盯着那个即将从盒子里拿出午 餐的女孩。Within my heart were enormous surprise and gratitude. I stood rooted to the spot, staring at the girl who was about

21、to take out their lunch from a box.练习三2021全国1卷:爸爸难以置信地钉在原地，当他看着可怕的厨房，想象双胞胎做了啥Within his heart was a complex feeling. Dad remained rooted to the spot in disbelief, watching the terrible kitchen and imagining what they had done.万能片段5：感激（感激+感悟）提炼： Choked with overwhelming sbl.sb2, without whose help sb

22、l couldnt have done sth. It was this unique experience that reminded sbl of the value of sth, inspiring him to do sth.练习：2022 全国 1 卷 the forest run构思结尾：David完成跑步，明白勇气的重要（用以上模板）David因巨大的兴奋而哽咽，他紧紧地抱着我和他的教练，没有（我们的）指导，他就无法完成跑步，他坚持这 样说。 正是这次独特的经历让大卫想到了勇气和信心的价值，激励他从此勇敢地应对挑战。Choked with overwhelming excite

23、ment, David hugged me and his coach tightly, without whose guidance he couldnt have finished the run, as he insisted. It was this unique experience that had reminded David of the value of courage and faith, inspiring him to address challenges bravely ever since.万能片段6：成功+结尾练习：2016年浙江高考空气中弥漫着一阵热烈的兴奋，J

24、ane最终获救了。她非常激动，因为她成功地和丈夫团聚。她内心想到，她再也不会犯同样的错误了。流下了喜悦的泪水，夫妇两人都兴高采烈！（句首非谓语shedding tears）A buzz of excitement filled the air as Jane was eventually rescued.She was so thrilled in that she succeeded in reuniting with her husband.She thought to herself that never would she make the same mistake.Shedding

25、tears of joy, the couple were in high spirits!读后续写思维拓展训练之用动作细节描写表达感情佳句观摩1 他很困。概括描写：He is very sleepy.细节描述：He covered his mouth to hide his yawn （捂住嘴不让人看见他打哈欠）.2 .我们很惊讶。概括描写：We are very surprised.细节描述：Our mouths dropped open in surprise （惊奇地张大嘴巴）.3 .她非常生气。概括描写：She was very angry.细节描述：She folded her a

26、rms and glared at him （交叉双臂，怒视着他）.4 .她非常兴奋。概括描写：She was very excited.细节描述：She jumped to her feet with joy （高兴地跳起来）at the news.练习一1 .当主持人宣布她获奖的时候，她兴奋极啦！The host announced that he won the prize, his face gleaming with delight./his eyes glittering with joy/his eyes twinkling with excitement.On hearing

27、the good news that he won the prize, he was wild with delight.At the sight of.At the thought of.2 .当妈妈亲吻他时，小孩开心极了。When his mother kissed him on thecheekjt seemed as if the baby were on top of theworld （非常开心）.3 .他很激动（二他激动得心怦怦跳），心情久久不能平静。His heart thumping with excitement it was long before hecalmed d

28、own.4 .听到你成功的消息我非常高兴。细节描述：On hearing the news of your success,Idanced with joy and sweetness （我欢欣雀跃）.5 .谢尔登感到非常生气。（冲出房间；狠狠摔门）.细节描述：Sheldon felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind himSo angry did he feel that he.6 .尽管她什么也没说，可是她眼里充满了愤怒,几乎控制不住怒火。细节描述： Though sh

29、e said nothing, her eyes were full of anger and she could hardly contain her rageNothing as she said,her eyes filled with rage and fury, she failed to contain his rage.让我很生气（=使我充满愤怒；说不出话）。乡田节描述： His attitude made me filled with anger, unable to utter a single word.,depriving me of power of speech.8

30、.他看着凯瑟琳，充满了忧伤。（悲伤到木然；不能开口说话）.乡田节描述： He looked at Katherine,numbwith grief, having trouble speaking.9 .这个小姑娘默默地站着；眼泪顺着面颊流了下来.The little girl stood silently, tears rollingdown her cheeks10 .一听到那个坏消息、，她悲伤不已（心痛；眼泪直流）。Upon hearing the bad news,her heartached, tears streaming down her cheeks （11 .查理对这个消息感

31、到伤心（=感觉好像自己漂浮在悲伤的海洋里）。On hearing the news, Charlie felt like he was floating in an ocean of sadness.12 .看了这部恐怖片，她吓坏了（她吓坏了，根本睡不着）。After seeingthe horror film, she was too scared to go to sleep.（吓得心都提到嗓子眼了）细节描述：I was nervous and had my heart in my throat.升级版：Heart in throat, I was extremely nervous an

32、d frighted.14 .她害怕得动弹不得（吓得她魂不附体,站在那儿一动不动）.细节描述：She got so frightened that it scared her out of her wits and stood still there.升级版：So frightened was she that it scared her out of her wits and stood still there.15 .David颤抖着转向我，眼睛里闪烁着泪花，说他下定决心要去完成这个赛跑。David turned to me tremblingly with tears spilling

33、out of his eyes and expressed he had made a firm determination to finish the cross-country run.16 .（2021新高考1.读后续写）一想到他们正在为妈妈母亲节准备的惊喜，双胞胎就兴奋不已。妈妈会 非常高兴自豪的看到他们做的早餐。The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother sDay. How pleased and proud Mother wou

34、ld be when they brought her breakfast in bed.动作面练习1 .他们享受着美好时光，聊着天，吃着东西，开着玩笑。They were having a wonderful time, talking, eating and joking.2 .失望，无语，Tim站在那，不知道该怎么做。Disappointed and speechless, Tim stood there, not knowing what to do with it.3 .我在黑暗的过道里aisles跑来跑去，惊慌充斥着我的胸膛，让我无法呼吸。I ran up and down the aisles in the dark, panic filling my chest and making it difficult to breathe.4 .走进桌子，尽管双手颤抖，她还是把嘴唇完成了一道优雅的弧线an elegant arc,并且说到：“欢迎 来到我的饭店！”Approaching the table, in spite of her trembling hands, she managed to curve her lips into an elegant arc, and said, Welcome to my restaurant!