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1、主题：校园生活导读本单元的主题是学校生活，引导同学们围绕三年初中生活，用英语谈论校园人物或事物的进步、变化等. 这类作文通常是提示性作文，同时兼有开放性.此类话题源于实际生活，要注意从平时的学校生活中提炼素材 并写出自己的所感所想.适用 于本单元的关联主题有很多，如 My best friend, The person/ teacher that I want to thank most, A person I will never forget, An unforgettable day, A touching moment in my life 等.题目回放法国作家雨果曾说,“进步，才是人

2、应该有的现象；回首三年的初中时光，你在学习和生活中一定取得了不 少进步，比如学科知识、生活技能、人际交往、体育锻炼、良好习惯等方面.请自拟标题，结合自身的亲身经历, 用英语谈一谈自己的进步.写作要求：1 .选取至少两个方面；2 .结合亲身经历,谈一谈过去与现在的不同；3 .谈谈自己如何取得这些进步的；4 .书写工整,语句通顺连贯，词数90左右.注意事项：文中不得出现你的真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息.参考词7匚：used to, try sb/s best to do sth., make progress in审题指引1审题材：该写作任务要求回首三年的初中时光，结合自己的亲身经历谈一谈自己的进

3、步，属于记叙文.2审内容：在写记叙文时要交代清楚事情发生的时间、地点、人物、经历等.3 .审时态：讲述过去的事，用一般过去时、过去完成时等过去时态；表达现在的看法或观点，用一般现在时或 现在完成时等现在时态.4审人称：结合自身经历谈自己的进步，以第一人称为主.the man-made satellites, we can know more about the world.5) Everyone loves to read the book. Helen Jones wrote the book.(改为含定语从句的复合句)答案：1) achieve (fulfill, realize); dr

4、eams2) This app makes it possible for common people to play their parts in planting trees.3) rather; than4) Thanks; to5) Everyone loves to read the book that (which) Helen Jones wrote.实战练笔中学的生活经常是紧张忙碌的,同学们有时会感到较大压力.作为初三学生，你是如何排解压力的呢?请以 How to deal with the academic pressure为题,写一篇90词左右的英语短文,阐述自己的观点.写

5、作提示：1 ,你遇到的学习压力是什么(如作业较多，考试成绩不理想等)；2你如何减轻(reduce)压力(如听音乐、看电影、锻炼身体等).写作要求：1 .文章不能出现你的真实姓名和校名；2 .字体工整.范文:How to deal with the academic pressureAll people have pressure in their daily life. Likewise, junior high school students have their academic pressure.As a ninth-grader, I had to finish much homewo

6、rk. Besides, I had to attend after-school programs on weekends. Although I studied hard, I sometimes failed to improve my test performance, All this made me stressed out.Later, I tried to seek some ways to reduce my academic pressure. First of all, I joined in different kinds of after-class activiti

7、es. For example, I joined an art club. At times, I listened to music, watched movies with my friends, or chatted online to share my feelings. Also, I played football after supper.Now I find that these methods are effective. Hopefully ,they can help junior high school students reduce their academic p

8、ressure.框架设计开头：开篇点明主题，说明自己在初中三年学习过程中取得了较大进步.中间：主体段落详细叙述取得进步的经历.结尾：最后叙述对自己取得这些进步的感悟，再次突出主题.段落素描1 . First paragraph: How time flies! Over the past three years, I have made great progress.(How time flies!Looking back upon the past three years in the junior high school, I find that I have made great pro

9、gress.)2 .The body: When I was a first-grader, I was not good at .My English teacher encouraged me a lot . Now, my English has improved a lot. Besides,.! have become.(At first, I was poor at English . Thanks to .,I have made great progress in my English study. Moreover,.)(.)3 .Last paragraph: I will

10、 never forget my English teacher. The progress that I made was due to.(Without my English teachefs help, I would not have made such great progress. I will always remember her.) (.)范本淬炼AThe progress that I have madeHow time flies! Over the past three years, I have made great progress.When I was a fir

11、st-grader in the junior high school, I was not good at English, and was even afraid of answering questions in the English class. My English teacher encouraged me a lot, and gave me useful advice on how to learn English. With her help, I studied hard and spent much time learning English. Now, my Engl

12、ish has improved a lot. Besides, I used to be shy. My English teacher encouraged me to join a study group and learn to make speeches in public. I have become active and confident.The progress that I made was due to my English teachers help and encouragement. I will never forget her.a first-grader,一年

13、级学生.give me useful advice on,在方面给我有用的建议.spend much time doing sth.,花费大量时间做某事.encourage sb.to do sth.,鼓励某人做某事.make speeches,发表演讲.due to,由于.亮点点评1 .文章紧扣主题，内容完整，设段合理，主次分明.主体段落叙述较为生动，增强了文章的可读性.2 .文中时态运用得当，一般现在时、现在完成时、一般过去时、一般将来时等切换自如.3 .文中长短句错落有致，尤其是使用了状语从句、定语从句等，丰富了文章句式.4 .文中用词丰富，如使用 make great progress

14、, be afraid of, encourage sb. to do sth. , spend much time doing sth., make speeches in public, become active and confident, due to 等亮点短语,增强了文章的语言表现力.The progress that I have madeHow time flies!Looking back upon the past three years in the junior high school, I find that I have made great progress.A

15、t first, I was poor at English, and often felt bored in the English class because I could not understand what my English teacher was saying. Sometimes, I was even afraid of answering English questions. Thanks to my English teachefs help and encouragement, I have made great progress in my English stu

16、dy. Moreover, I was shy, but with the help of my English teacher, who encouraged me to practice making speeches in public, I have become self-confident,5 Without my English teachers help, I would not have made such great progress in the past three years. I will always remember her.look back upon,回顾.

17、feel bored in,对感到无聊.what引导宾语从句.encouragement,鼓励.who引导非限制性定语从句.become self-confident.变得自信.without sb/s help,若无某人的帮助.亮点点评1 .开篇点题，主体段落叙述自己取得的进步，尾段总结并简要发表感想.与上篇文章相比，本文内容更完整, 表达更流畅.2 .与上一篇文章相比，本文使用了更多句式,如现在分词充当伴随状语,because引导的原因状语从句,what 引导的宾语从句,who引导的定语从句，虚拟语气等亮点句式.3 .文中at first, thanks to, moreover等衔接语使

18、上下文更连贯自然.4本文用词考究，如felt bored, could not understand准确地表达出当初自己的心情,尾段的虚拟语气使文 章具有较强的感染力.佳作赏析AI will never forget my friendThanks to my friends help and encouragement, I have made great progress in my studies over the past three years in the junior high school.When I entered the junior high school, I did

19、 not adapt to the new environment at first. I was homesick, and could not focus attention on my studies. At this time, Lily, a girl whose home was not far away from our school, helped me out of trouble. She helped me to(D be familiar with the school environment, discussed how to study our lessons wi

20、th me, and invited me to visit her home on weekends. Soon, we became good friends, and I gradually adapted to the school environment. We helped each other, and both of us became top students in our class.Thanks to my friends help, I made great progress in my studies. Hopefully, we will be good frien

21、ds forever, wherever we are.thanks to,多亏. adapt to,适应.homesick,想家的.whose引导定语从句.be familiar with,熟悉.gradually,逐渐地.make great progress in sth.,在某方面取得很大进步.亮点点评L文章紧扣主题，内容完整，段落清晰,首段点题，主体段落具体说明朋友的帮助，尾段表达谢意和希望.2.文中运用了 when引导的状语从句、whose引导的定语从句等，丰富了文章句式3作者注意使用丰富词 汇、短语，如 thanks to, make great progress, enter,

22、 adapt to, homesick, focus attention on, out of trouble, be familiar with, gradually, wherever等，增强了文章的生动性.BThank you, my teacher!Looking back upon my life in the junior high school, I would like to express thanks to my English teacher, Miss Brown.Miss Brown was humorous, kindhearted and responsible.

23、 Before we began our English class, she would tell us a joke in English. When we were in trouble, she was glad to help us. In our English class, she was patient with us. If we found difficulty in learning English, she would lead us into a discussion of the ways to overcome the difficulty, or, if nec

24、essary, give us repeated explanations with great patience. With her help, we tackled a large number of difficult problems in our English study.Thanks to Miss Browns help, I have become more and more interested in English. I will always remember her for her kindness and responsibility.express thanks

25、to sb.,对某人表达谢意.humorous, kindhearted and responsible,幽默、善良、尽责.in trouble,有麻烦. discussion,讨论. with great patience,非常耐心地.tackle,处理（难题等）.more and more,越来越.亮点点评1 .本文描述了作者对老师的感恩之情，内容朴实、真切.首段直接点题表达谢意,主体段落叙述教师的帮助, 尾段总结并再次致谢恩师,文章层次分明，结构合理.2 .文中句式丰富，如使用了 before和when引导的时间状语从句以及if引导的条件状语从句，提升了文章的语言表现力.3 .文中用词有

26、出彩之处，如 humorous, responsible, be patient with, overcome the difficulty, tackle 等运用得 当、精准，增添了文章的亮点.CI have learned to value timeAs the proverb goes/ Time and tide wait for no man. Indeed, time is the most precious thing in the world.When I became a junior high school student, I could not understand t

27、he true meaning of this proverb at first. Every day, I hardly listened attentively in class, and seldom reviewed my lessons because I was absorbed in playing video games. As a result, I failed in most of the exams, and my parents and teachers were worried about my studies.Later, I found that some of

28、 my school mates who were poor at English gradually made great progress in it because they started to use the time effectively. I was determined to learn from them. I began to give up playing video games and concentrate on my studies. Soon, I improved a lot in my studies.Now I am fully aware that th

29、ose who value time will earn good returns. I will spend my time on meaningful things.proverb,谚语；格言.when引导时间状语从句.attentively,聚精会神地.be absorbed in,专注于.who引导定语从句.be determined to do sth.,下定决心做某事.concentrate on,专注于.earn,获得.亮点点评1 .本文描述了自己在学业成长过程中对珍惜时间这一主题的认识.文章感情真挚，思路清晰,富有感染力.2 .文中运用了大量从句，如when引导的时间状语从句、

30、because引导的原因状语从句、who引导的定语 从句等，彰显了作者较强的语言驾驭能力.3 .文中 the most precious thing, be absorbed in, concentrate on 等亮点短语丰富,尤其是 attentively,effectively等副词的使用，使文章表达富有感染力.素材宝库1 .好词妙语make our friendship stronger使我们的友谊更加牢固make progress in在方面取得进步be fully aware that.充分意识到make sb/s own choice做出某人自己的选择look back upon

31、 回顾thanks to my teachers help and encouragement 多亏我老师的帮助和鼓励become self-confident 变得自信adapt to the new environment 适应新环境focus attention on sb.*s studies 专注于某人的学习help me out of trouble帮我摆脱困境with great patience 非常耐心地tackle a large number of difficult problems 解决了很多难题be buried in playing computer games

32、埋头玩电脑游戏earn good returns获得好的回报2 .提分佳句He who laughs last laughs best.谁笑到最后谁笑得最好.The early bird catches the worm.早起的鸟儿有虫吃.I find it very important to grasp those words and expressions.我发现掌握那些词汇和短语非常重要.Graduation is not the end, but the beginning.毕业不是结束，而是开始.Thanks to your help, I have made great progr

33、ess.多亏你的帮助，我取得了很大进步.He took great pride in his childrens success.他为孩子们的成功感到非常骄傲.I want a friendship that never graduates from school.我想要一段永不毕业的友谊.The progress that I made was due to .我取得的进步是因为We have the ability to make our own choices.我们有能力做出自己的选择.Choose wisely and be responsible for your decisions

34、 and actions.明智地选择，并要对你的决定和行为负责.I hope that in a few years you will come back to visit your school.我希望几年后你们能回母校看看.The end of the life in the junior high school is the beginning of anew life.初中生活的结束是新生活的开始.You will make mistakes along the way, but the key is to draw lessons from your mistakes and nev

35、er give up.你们一路上将会犯错误,但关键是从错误中吸取教训和永不放弃.We will attend the graduation ceremony tomorrow; it is a special time for us.明天我们将参加毕业典礼,对我们而言它是一个特别的时刻.Your friendship with me will last forever!你与我的友谊地久天长！Even if we go our separate ways, in my heart you will be my friend forever.即使我们各奔东西,但在我的心里，你将永远是我的朋友.Al

36、ong with difficulties, there will be many exciting things waiting for you.除了困难，会有很多令人振奋的事情等着你们.My mother has done a lot for me, and I should do something for her in return.妈妈已经为我做了很多，我应当为她做些事情作为回报.As you set out on your new journey, you should not forget where you came from.在你们开启新的旅程之际，你们不应忘记自己来自何处.

37、When you look back upon the past, you will have no regrets over any time you wasted.当你回首往事的时候，你不会因为虚度年华而悔恨.In the future, we must keep in touch with each other so that our friendship will last forever.将来我们必须彼此保持联系，让我们的友谊天长地久.写作预热1 .句子改错1) I used to being a shy girl.2) I made so many friends since I

38、came to China.3) We have grown up and must be responsible to ourselves.4)1 am looking forward to enter a senior high school now.5) We were exciting to set out on a new journey to a senior high school.答案：1) being 改为 be2) made 前加 have3)to 改为 for4) enter 改为 entering5)exciting 改为 excited2 .句式变换1) We hop

39、e that our dreams will come true.(改为同 义句)We hope that we will our.2) Common people play their parts in planting trees. This app makes this possible.(用 it 充当形式宾语合并句子)3) I like to play outside, and I do not like to stay at home.(改为同义句)I prefer to play outside stay at home.4) We can know more about the world because of the man-made satellites.(改为同义句)