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1、主题：礼仪文化导读本单元的主题是用英语介绍不同国家的礼仪文化.同学们通过探讨初次见面交往礼仪、拜访朋友的礼仪 以及餐桌礼仪等，将会了解一些国家的文化习俗，学会尊重文化差异，培养文化自信.适用于本单元的关联主题有很多，如：Table manners in China, Manners in Western countries等等.题目回放学校下周要举办关于餐桌礼仪的英语演讲比赛.作为班里选出的代表,请你自拟标题，完成一篇英语演讲 稿.写作要求：1 .语句通顺，条理清楚；2 .文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名；3 .词数90左右.审题指引1审体裁：介绍说明餐桌礼仪，属于说明文，但可最后加一点议论.2

2、审内容：主体内容可写两三种餐桌礼仪，如吃饭时要尊重老人；不能把筷子插在碗里或有意指着他人；吃 饭时不能大声说话.3审时态：主体时态为一般现在时.4审人称：以第一人称为主.框架设计开头：演讲稿的开场白.中间：介绍餐桌礼仪.结尾：自己对餐桌礼仪的感受，段落素描1. First paragraph: Ladies and gentlemen, It is my great honor to give you a speech on table manners in China.Another point worth mentioning is that the Chinese people usua

3、lly greet each other by saying “Hello or shaking hands when they meet. Moreover, whenever someone is in trouble, most of them will give a hand.If foreign visitors know these social etiquette tips, they will have a nice stay in China.(.)2. The body: First of all, we are not supposed to stick our chop

4、sticks into the bowl because . Besides, we are not allowed to .Last but not least, it is impolite for young people to .(.)3. Last paragraph: To sum up, we are supposed to follow the table manners in China while eating. As the saying goes,. Thanks for your listening.(Anyway, table manners vary from c

5、ountry to country. Just remember/6 When in Rome, do as the Romans do.” Thanks for your listening.) (.)范本淬炼ATable manners in ChinaLadies and gentlemen,China is a great country with special table manners. Let me introduce some of them to you.First of all, we are not supposed to stick our chopsticks in

6、to the bowl because some people believe that it is a sacrificial rite for a persons late relative. Besides, we are not allowed to point at others with our chopsticks, (3) for that makes them feel uncomfortable. Last but not least, it is impolite of young people to eat first if there are elderly peop

7、le at table.To sum up, we are supposed to follow the table manners in China while eating. As the saying goes,“When in Rome, do as the Romans do. Thanks for your listening.with special table manners是介词短语充当后置定语.a sacrificial rite for a persons late relative,针对一个人的已故亲戚的献祭仪式.for,因为，并列连词.to sum up,总之.这句谚

8、语的意思是：入乡随俗.亮点点评1 .文章从不同角度描述了中国的餐桌礼仪，结构合理，要点完整，层次分明.2 .文中用词和句式丰富,使用了 be supposed to do sth., be allowed to do sth.,以及状语从句、宾语从句、it充当 形式主语等句式，提升了文章的可读性.3 .first of all, besides, last but not least, to sum up等衔接语运用贴切自然，使上下文连接更紧密.BTable manners in ChinaLadies and gentlemen,It is my great honor to give yo

9、u a speech on table manners in China.Table manners play an important role in traditional Chinese culture. While eating, most Chinese people use chopsticks instead of knives and forks. Children should know that they are not expected to eat first if there are elderly people at table to show respect to

10、 them. Besides, we must not stick chopsticks into the bowl, which is believed to bring bad luck. At last, we are not allowed to speak with our mouths full of food.Anyway, table manners vary from countiy to country. Just remember/ When in Rome, do as the Romans do. Thanks for your listening.to give,动

11、词不定式短语充当真正的主语,it是形式主语.traditional Chinese culture,中国传统文化. use chopsticks instead of knives and forks,用筷子而不是刀叉. stick chopsticks into the bowl,把筷子插到碗里.with+名词+形容词短语，构成独立主格结构，充当状语vary,不同.亮点点评1 .本文从不同角度谈论了餐桌礼仪中几个需要注意的问题，结构严谨，主题明确.2 .用besides, at last, anyway等衔接语,把整篇文章衔接起来，增强了文章的逻辑性.3 .开篇用演讲中的常用句式，后面用wh

12、ile doing结构、宾语从句、非限制性定语从句，加上结尾的谚语, 给文章增色不少.4 .灵活运用高级词汇、短语，如 play an important role in, while eating, be expected to do sth., show respect to 等，增强了文章的生动性.佳作赏析AHow to behave wellBehaving well is the secret to good communication with others. There are some rules that we should follow.In my mind, it is

13、very important to keep promises and never lie to others in our communication with others. Besides, we shouldbe polite to others and ready to help those in need. Moreover, we are not supposed to throw litter, spit or talk loudly in restaurants, on buses or in other public places. Finally, learn to wo

14、rk with others, for we need teamwork in our lifetime.If we can do these well, we will get along well with others.behaving well是动名词短语充当主语.keep promises,遵守诺言.be polite to.,对,有礼貌.be not supposed to do sth.,不应该做某事.teamwork,团队合作.亮点点评L文章分段合理，逻辑清晰.首段点题,主体段落围绕主题具体说明如何做守规矩、善交往的人，尾段简要总 结.2 .文中there be句式、定语从句、

15、it充当形式主语、条件状语从句等多种句式交替使用，使文章句式富于 变化,提升了文章的档次.3 .文中 in my mind, besides, moreover, finally 等衔接语运用得当.4 .文章用语丰富，使用 了 the secret to, keep promises, in need, in sb.*s lifetime, get along well with others 等 短语,为文章添彩.BHow to become well-behaved teenagersGood behavior, which plays a significant role in our

16、daily life, helps make our life colorful and our society harmonious. Then, how can we become well-behaved teenagers?First of all, we must obey our school rules. We are supposed to go to school on time, and focus attention on our studies; we must not smoke, drink, spit, litter, or fight at the school

17、. Another point worth mentioning is that we should respect our teachers, and get along well with other schoolmates. Additionally, we should be kind and friendly, and help those in need at the school.I believe that if all of us can do these well, we will create a peaceful and harmonious school enviro

18、nment.play a significant role,发挥重要作用.well-behaved,行为端正的.focus,集中,聚集.that引导表语从句.additionally,另夕卜.create a peaceful and harmonious school environment,营造宁静而和谐的学校环境.亮点点评1 .本文框架结构清晰，要点全面，详略得当.首段第二句用疑问句引出主题，激发读者阅读兴趣，较有新意.2 .通过 then, first of all, another point worth mentioning, additionally 等衔接语，顺畅衔接句子和段落

19、.3 .句式灵活多变,使用了非限制性定语从句、表语从句、宾语从句等从句；宾语从句中还带有条件状语 从句,彰显了作者较强的语言表达能力.CSocial etiquette in ChinaChina is a country with particular social etiquette, which helps those from other countries know about China.Firstly, the Chinese people usually greet each other by saying Hello J or simply asking such quest

20、ions as “Where are you going? and Are you busy?” to express their politeness. In fact, these questions need not be answered thoughtfully. Secondly, unlike Westerners, a great many Chinese people often reply You flattered to show modesty when they are praised by others. Thirdly,when receiving a gift,

21、 most Chinese people usually say “It is not necessary to give me the gift,“ and just put it away instead of opening it at once.If foreigners know these social etiquette tips in China, they can enjoy their stay in China, or get along well with the Chinese people.which引导非限制性定语从句.greet,问候.express,表达.fl

22、atter,奉承.when receiving=when they receive.to give，动词不定式短语充当真正的主语,It此处是形式主语.social etiquette tips,社交礼仪建议.亮点点评1 .本文层次分明，详略得当，内容充实,主体段落对社交礼仪的描写较为细致，增强了文章的可读性、生动 性.2 .用firstly, secondly, thirdly等衔接语，使文章过渡自然，语句流畅.3 .句式多变,非限制性定语从句、状语从句以及动词不定式充当目的状语等句式运用自如,展现出作者较 强的语言运用能力.4 .文中词汇丰富且运用准确，如使用 particular soci

23、al etiquette, express sb.s politeness, thoughtfully, modesty, put away等，增加了文章的生动性.素材宝库1 .好词妙语give a speech 做演讲share. .with与分享It is my honor to do sth.我很荣幸做某事be happy to do sth.很高兴做某事no doubt毫无疑问traditional Chinese culture 中国传统文化play an important part in在中扮演重要角色one important thing is that. 一个重要的事情是.p

24、ay attention to 注意be different from.与不同point at 指向make our society harmonious使我们的社会和谐focus attention on our studies 专注于我们的学习social etiquette tips 社交礼仪建议2 .提分佳句It is believed that it will bring us bad luck.大家认为这样将给我们带来霉运.It is impolite to point at others with chopsticks.用筷子指向他人不礼貌.Table manners vary

25、from country to country.餐桌礼仪因国而异.Different countries have different table manners.不同的国家有不同的餐桌礼仪.It is my honor to be here to share my ideas with you.我很荣幸在这里与你们分享我的看法.We are not allowed to speak with our mouths full of food.我们在嘴里塞满食物的时候不许说话.Respecting elderly persons is a virtue in our country.尊重老人是我

26、们国家的一种美德.Using chopsticks is quite different from using knives and forks.使用筷子与使用刀叉截然不同.The first thing we should pay attention to is that we are supposed to eat with chopsticks.我们首先要关注的是我们应使用筷子吃饭.There is no doubt that table manners play an important role in traditional Chinese culture.毫无疑问，餐桌礼仪在中国传

27、统文化中起很重要的作用.To sum up, we are supposed to follow the table manners while eating.总之，我们吃饭时应遵守餐桌礼义.写作预热1 .句子改错1) These rules play an important role in Chinese traditional culture.2) We are expect to arrive on time.3) I think it is not polite to keep others waiting.4) In that country, young people shoul

28、dnt start eat first.5) It is impolite of you using your chopsticks to beat the bowl.答案：1) Chinese traditional 改为 traditional Chinese2)expect 改为 expected3) I think it is not 改为 I do not think it is4) eat 改为 eating 或 to eat5)using 改为 to use5) .句子翻译1)他们尽力让我感到宾至如归.2)在那个国家,你应该把面包放在桌子上而不是盘子里.3)在大多数国家，人们第一

29、次见面应握手.4)另外一件事是你当众喧哗是不礼貌的.5)正如你能想象的，这里的情况与家里不同.答案：1) They tried their best to make me feel at home.2) In that country, you should put your bread on the table instead of on the plate.3) In most countries ,people are supposed to shake hands when they meet for the first time.4) Another thing is that it

30、 is impolite of you to talk loudly in public.5) As you can imagine, things here are different from those at home.实战练笔众所周知，中国作为礼仪之邦，在历史发展中留下了许多传统社交礼仪.请以The social etiquette in China 为题写一篇英语短文.内容提示：1 ,尊老爱幼；2 见面握手，有礼貌地打招呼；3 .当别人遇到困难时，要适时帮助.写作要求：L所写内容必须包含以上内容，可适当发挥；2 .语言流畅通顺；3 .文章中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名；4 .90词左右

31、.范文：The social etiquette in ChinaChina is famous for its good social etiquette. Here are some social etiquette tips.First of all, the Chinese people show respect to elderly persons and take care of young children. For example, it is good manners to give up the seat on the bus to an elderly person or a woman carrying a baby in her arms.