2023年四级高分作文是这样练成的-四级写作造句应避免的七大问题.pdf

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1、四级写作造句应避免的七大问题词性不分词性不分是英语造句中的忌讳。英语注重形态，词性和用法是相对应的，例如名词是绝对不可以充当谓语的，而充当谓语的绝对不允许由形容词单独承担。所以如果词性错了就意味着其用法也可能出错，这样的句子一定对文章的准确表达有所影响。造句过程中我们要特别注意以下几点：第一，动词要分清及物与否，不及物动词不直接跟宾语，不用于被动语态。第二，分清楚形容词和动词，形容词不能做谓语，动词的谓语形式不能做表语。第三，动词的谓语形式(有时、体、态、气的形态表示)和动词的非谓语形式(动名词、不定式、分词)要区别开来。第四，要分清现在分词和过去分词的使用场合。第五，意义相同但词性不同的词要

2、特别注意。第六，拼写相同但意义不同、词性不同的词也要特别注意。巩固练习：改正句子。1.China has occurred the great changes in recent years.2.He very excellent in many aspects.3.I can sure that you will see a better film.4.In this chaotic society,we are more likely to become depress.5.Human being is a kind of animal fulling of different feeli

3、ngs.6.Nowadays it is surprised that many students care theirappearance and clothes but rare pay great attention to theirstudy.7.If you are easily to get frustrated,you will give up.8.Since you have been keeping a good mood,your teacherswould be more like you.解析：1.occur是不及物动词，它的主语应该是事物或结果，原句应改写为:Grea

4、t changes have occurred in recent years in China.2.excellent是形容词，不能充当谓语，它应该与be动词搭配，构成系表结构，原句可以改写为：He is very excellentin many aspects.3.sure是形容词，应该和be动词搭配，构成系表结构，原句可以改为：I am sure that you will see a better film.4.depress是动词，不能与become等连系动词搭配构成系表结构，原句可以改为：In this chaotic society,we are morelikely to b

5、ecome depressed.5.full是形容词，不能构成分词形式，原句可以改为：Human being is a kind of animal full of different feelings.6.surprised为过去分词演变的形容词，不能修饰物，只能修饰人，原句可以改为：Nowadays it is surprising that manystudents care their appearance and clothes but rarely pay great出错这样的句子一定对文章的准确表达有所影响造句过程中我们要特别注意以下几点第一动词要分清及物与否不及物词的谓语形式有

6、时体态气的形态表示和动词的非谓语形式动名词不定式分词要区别开来第四要分清现在分词和过去分习改正句子解析是不及物动词它的主语应该是事物或结果原句应改写为是形容词不能充当谓语它应该与动词搭配构成attention to their study.7.easily是副词，一般不能与系动词连用，应该用形容词与系动词搭配，构成系表结构，原句可以改为：If you are easyto get frustrated,you will give up.8.like既是动词又是介词，但是含义不同，like(v.喜欢)不能与be动词搭配，more作为副词，修饰动词的位置最好放在动词后面，原句可以改为：Since

7、you have been keeping agood mood,your teachers would like you better.人称不一致人称一致不仅指在一句话中主语应该保持一致，而且在一篇文章中，前后的称谓也应当保持一致，不能出现混乱的情况。巩固练习：改正句子。1.They have the right of discussing with her husband.2.One serious problem that influence a childs healthydevelopment is that they do not have enough psychological

8、space.3.Admittedly,there are merit to both arguments.But I dobelieve that game do good to children.4.I often buy clothes on sale because we can save a lot ofmoney that way.5.Students often focus on vocabulary,but you need to realize出错这样的句子一定对文章的准确表达有所影响造句过程中我们要特别注意以下几点第一动词要分清及物与否不及物词的谓语形式有时体态气的形态表示和

9、动词的非谓语形式动名词不定式分词要区别开来第四要分清现在分词和过去分习改正句子解析是不及物动词它的主语应该是事物或结果原句应改写为是形容词不能充当谓语它应该与动词搭配构成that vocabulary is only one part of a language.6.The committee debated whether to allow its families to attendthe dinner.7.The question that interest us is how we should protectenvironment from being polluted furthe

10、r.8.In other words,ones actions are decided by their moodindirectly.9.If people have a good mood,he will face everythinghappened calmly.正确句子：1.They have the right of discussing with their husbands.2.One serious problem that influences a childs healthydevelopment is that they do not have enough psych

11、ologicalspace.3.Admittedly,there are merits to both arguments.But I dobelieve that game do good to children.4.I often buy clothes on sale because I can save a lot of moneythat way.5.Students often focus on vocabulary,but they need to realizethat vocabulary is only one part of a language.出错这样的句子一定对文章

12、的准确表达有所影响造句过程中我们要特别注意以下几点第一动词要分清及物与否不及物词的谓语形式有时体态气的形态表示和动词的非谓语形式动名词不定式分词要区别开来第四要分清现在分词和过去分习改正句子解析是不及物动词它的主语应该是事物或结果原句应改写为是形容词不能充当谓语它应该与动词搭配构成6.The committee debated whether to allow their families toattend the dinner.7.The question that interests us is how we should protectenvironment from being pol

13、luted further.8.In other words,ones actions are decided by his moodindirectly.9.If people have a good mood,they will face everythinghappened calmly.主谓不一致在四、六级写作中，考生经常出现主谓不一致问题。所谓主谓一致指的是英语句子的主语和谓语在人称和数上应保持一致。它可分为三种情况:(1)语法一致，即主语为单数形式，谓语动词也采取单数形式；主语为复数形式，谓语动词亦采用复数形式。(2)意念一致，即从意义着眼处理主谓一致问题。有时，主语形式为单数，但

14、意义为复数，谓语动词依据意义而定，也采取复数形式。(3)比邻一致，即就近原则也就是说谓语动词的人称和数往往应与其最近的主语保持一致。巩固练习：改正句子。出错这样的句子一定对文章的准确表达有所影响造句过程中我们要特别注意以下几点第一动词要分清及物与否不及物词的谓语形式有时体态气的形态表示和动词的非谓语形式动名词不定式分词要区别开来第四要分清现在分词和过去分习改正句子解析是不及物动词它的主语应该是事物或结果原句应改写为是形容词不能充当谓语它应该与动词搭配构成1.Some women are not secretary in the office,instead,theybecome manager

15、 of the company.2.Misconceptions about apes has turned a relatively peacefulanimal into a terrifying monster.3.The rising cost of necessities like food and shelter force manyelderly people to live in poverty.4.In the distance are a billow of black smoke.5.Heres the books you want.6.Neither the union

16、 leaders nor the negotiator want the strike tocontinue.7.In eighteenth-century France,makeup and high heels wasworn by men.8.Each of the childs thirty-four stuffed animals have a nameand an entire life history.解析：1.Some women are not secretaries in the office;instead,theybecome managers of the compa

17、ny.2.Misconceptions about the ape have turned a relativelypeaceful animal into a terrifying monster.出错这样的句子一定对文章的准确表达有所影响造句过程中我们要特别注意以下几点第一动词要分清及物与否不及物词的谓语形式有时体态气的形态表示和动词的非谓语形式动名词不定式分词要区别开来第四要分清现在分词和过去分习改正句子解析是不及物动词它的主语应该是事物或结果原句应改写为是形容词不能充当谓语它应该与动词搭配构成3.The rising cost of necessities like food and

18、shelter forcesmany elderly people to live in poverty.4.In the distance is a billow of black smoke.5.Herere the books you want.6.Neither the union leaders nor the negotiator wants the striketo continue.7.In eighteenth-century France,makeup and high heels wereworn by men.8.Each of the childs thirty-fo

19、ur stuffed animals has a name andan entire life history.时态不一致在造句时要注意时态也应该保持一致。巩固练习：改正句子。1.The motorbike was red,and there are two persons on themotorbike.2.He told me he will be a good tennis player the next year whenwe met on a train.3.If I failed to achieve my desire,I will think it comes from afa

20、te beyond my power.4.However,if the goals are obtained,my endless efforts bring出错这样的句子一定对文章的准确表达有所影响造句过程中我们要特别注意以下几点第一动词要分清及物与否不及物词的谓语形式有时体态气的形态表示和动词的非谓语形式动名词不定式分词要区别开来第四要分清现在分词和过去分习改正句子解析是不及物动词它的主语应该是事物或结果原句应改写为是形容词不能充当谓语它应该与动词搭配构成them to me.5.No one could deny that computers have made our lifeconv

21、enient and make our work efficient.6.Depending on computer,many problems can be easilysolved,which is not possible 20 years ago.解析：1.The motorbike was red,and there were two persons on themotorbike.2.He told me he would be a good tennis player the next yearwhen we met on a train.3.If I failed to ach

22、ieve my desire,I would think it comes from afate beyond my power.4.However,if the goals are obtained,my endless efforts willbring them to me.5.No one could deny that computers have made our lifeconvenient and made our work efficient.6.Depending on computer,many problems can be easilysolved,which was

23、 not possible 20 years ago.指代不清出错这样的句子一定对文章的准确表达有所影响造句过程中我们要特别注意以下几点第一动词要分清及物与否不及物词的谓语形式有时体态气的形态表示和动词的非谓语形式动名词不定式分词要区别开来第四要分清现在分词和过去分习改正句子解析是不及物动词它的主语应该是事物或结果原句应改写为是形容词不能充当谓语它应该与动词搭配构成在使用代词如 it,he,she,this,that,which,one 等的时候，前面的句子中应该出现明确的先行词。如果指代不清，就会造成意思上的混乱。巩固练习：改正句子。1.The worlds energy demand st

24、ill continues to rise.How willthat ever be possible for us to get through?2.Peter told Alan that his wife was unhappy.3.Marsha attributed her success to her husbands support,whichwas generous.4.Susans mother wondered if she was tall enough to be amodel.解析：1.The worlds energy demand still continues t

25、o rise.How willthe situation ever be possible for us to get through?2.Peter told Alan,Your wife is unhappy.3.Marsha attributed her success to her husbands generoussupport.4.Susans mother wondered if Susan was tall enough to be amodel.出错这样的句子一定对文章的准确表达有所影响造句过程中我们要特别注意以下几点第一动词要分清及物与否不及物词的谓语形式有时体态气的形态表

26、示和动词的非谓语形式动名词不定式分词要区别开来第四要分清现在分词和过去分习改正句子解析是不及物动词它的主语应该是事物或结果原句应改写为是形容词不能充当谓语它应该与动词搭配构成断句错误英语的句子要求主从句直接要由恰当的衔接词连接，并列句也要求用衔接词或分号连接。由于汉语中没有这些要求，句子之间可以用逗号连接，因此，在四、六级作文中，很多同学的英语句子用逗号连接两个各自完整的句子；或将两个句子连接，但是没有使用标点符号或衔接词，以致于造成病句。巩固练习：改正句子。1.They read different books just to meet their different needs.Becau

27、se different people have different needs to read thedifferent kinds of books.2.Students and teacher heard Liming went to hospital,all ofthem went to visit him.解析：1.They read different books just to meet their different needs,because different people have different needs.2.When students and teacher h

28、eard Liming went to hospital,allof them went to visit him.成分残缺英语的句子虽然结构多样，但都是由基本的句子结构演化扩展而来。如果句子不符合基本的句子结构要求，缺少必要成分或者将从句或短语误当作句子，就不能表达一个完出错这样的句子一定对文章的准确表达有所影响造句过程中我们要特别注意以下几点第一动词要分清及物与否不及物词的谓语形式有时体态气的形态表示和动词的非谓语形式动名词不定式分词要区别开来第四要分清现在分词和过去分习改正句子解析是不及物动词它的主语应该是事物或结果原句应改写为是形容词不能充当谓语它应该与动词搭配构成整的意思。由于英语和

29、汉语的表达方法和习惯不同，成分残缺是中国学生在英文写作中容易出现的问题。巩固练习：改正句子。1.Is honesty out of date?many people asked.In my opinion,the answer should be no.Because honesty is not a simplesocial phenomenon,but a kind of humanity which is rooted inour mind.2.And then there is no need to worry whether youll be lost in astrange pla

30、ce,if you have a cellphone.Especially,in someurgent situations.3.There are other functions about cellphone.For example,time-schedule.4.First,as we all know that cosmetics always contain complexchemical elements.Which many people will be allergic.5.First of all,cellphone serves as a convenient way of

31、communication.Since it allows you to chat with others on thephone whenever you like.6.First,people deal with wastes carelessly.They pay littleattention to the result of the wastes.Second,the development ofindustries.7.In my opinion,honesty becomes more and more important inrecent society.Though the

32、society competition becomes moreand more fierce.出错这样的句子一定对文章的准确表达有所影响造句过程中我们要特别注意以下几点第一动词要分清及物与否不及物词的谓语形式有时体态气的形态表示和动词的非谓语形式动名词不定式分词要区别开来第四要分清现在分词和过去分习改正句子解析是不及物动词它的主语应该是事物或结果原句应改写为是形容词不能充当谓语它应该与动词搭配构成8.We can do a lot of things to entertain ourselves in spare time.Like reading,and listening to musi

33、c.9.Personally speaking,friendship is an in-depth relationshipcombining trust,support,communication,understanding,empathy,and intimacy.Aspects of life that all of us crave.10.Thus,could I make a piece of advice to you that reducingthe price of food?解析：1.Is honesty out of date?many people asked.In my

34、 opinion,the answer should beno because honesty is not a simple socialphenomenon,but a kind of humanity which is rooted in ourmind.2.And then there is no need to worry whether youll be lost in astrange place,if you have a cellphone,especially,in someurgent situations.3.There are other functions abou

35、t cellphone,for example,time-schedule.4.First,we all know that cosmetics always contain complexchemical elements to which many people will be allergic.5.First of all,cellphone serves as a convenient way ofcommunication,since it allows you to chat with others on the出错这样的句子一定对文章的准确表达有所影响造句过程中我们要特别注意以下

36、几点第一动词要分清及物与否不及物词的谓语形式有时体态气的形态表示和动词的非谓语形式动名词不定式分词要区别开来第四要分清现在分词和过去分习改正句子解析是不及物动词它的主语应该是事物或结果原句应改写为是形容词不能充当谓语它应该与动词搭配构成phone whenever you like.6.First,people deal with wastes carelessly.They pay littleattention to the result of the wastes.Second,it is due to thedevelopment of industries.7.In my opini

37、on,honesty becomes more and more important inrecent society.At the same time the society competitionbecomes more and more fierce.8.We can do a lot of things to entertain ourselves in spare time,like reading,and listening to music.9.Personally speaking,friendship is an in-depth relationshipcombining

38、trust,support,communication,understanding,empathy,and intimacy,including aspects of life that all of uscrave.10.Thus,could I make a piece of advice to you that the price offood be reduced?英语的句子虽然结构多样，但都是由基本的句子结构演化扩展而来。如果句子不符合基本的句子结构要求，缺少必要成分或者将从句或短语误当作句子，就不能表达一个完整的意思。由于英语和汉语的表达方法和习惯不同，成分残缺是中国学生在英文写作

39、中容易出现的问题。巩固练习：改正句子。11.It will please the eyes and mind of others so that produce anexcellent impression.出错这样的句子一定对文章的准确表达有所影响造句过程中我们要特别注意以下几点第一动词要分清及物与否不及物词的谓语形式有时体态气的形态表示和动词的非谓语形式动名词不定式分词要区别开来第四要分清现在分词和过去分习改正句子解析是不及物动词它的主语应该是事物或结果原句应改写为是形容词不能充当谓语它应该与动词搭配构成12.There is still something that not so sat

40、isfactory.13.The wicked always panicky,while the good always facesthe reality with a smile.14.Always,I dream about the childhood which includinghappiness and sadness.15.I drove slowly past the old brick house.The place where Igrew up.16.Before I turn on the microwave oven.I have to turn off theoverh

41、ead light in the kitchen.Otherwise the fuse blows.17.My mother likes watching daytime television shows.Especially old movies and soap operas.18.I wonder now why I have to learn certain subjects.Such asGeometry.19.Every other day,Kara runs two miles.Then does fiftysit-ups.She hasnt lost weight,but sh

42、e looks slimmer and moremuscular.20.I like all kinds of fresh pizza.But refuse to eat frozen pizza.The sauce is always dried out,and the crust tastes like leather.解析：11.It will please the eyes and mind of others so that it may出错这样的句子一定对文章的准确表达有所影响造句过程中我们要特别注意以下几点第一动词要分清及物与否不及物词的谓语形式有时体态气的形态表示和动词的非谓语

43、形式动名词不定式分词要区别开来第四要分清现在分词和过去分习改正句子解析是不及物动词它的主语应该是事物或结果原句应改写为是形容词不能充当谓语它应该与动词搭配构成produce an excellent impression.12.There is still something that is not so satisfactory.13.The wicked always panic,while the good always face thereality with smiles.14.Always,I dream about the childhood with happiness and

44、sadness.15.I drove slowly past the old brick house where I grew up.16.Before I turn on the microwave oven,I have to turn off theoverhead light in the kitchen.Otherwise the fuse blows.17.My mother likes watching daytime television shows,especially old movies and soap operas.18.I wonder now why I have

45、 to learn certain subjects,such asGeometry.19.Every other day,Kara runs two miles.Then she does fiftysit-ups.She hasnt lost weight,but she looks slimmer and moremuscular.20.I like all kinds of fresh pizza,but I refuse to eat frozen pizza.The sauce is always dried out,and the crust tastes like leather.出错这样的句子一定对文章的准确表达有所影响造句过程中我们要特别注意以下几点第一动词要分清及物与否不及物词的谓语形式有时体态气的形态表示和动词的非谓语形式动名词不定式分词要区别开来第四要分清现在分词和过去分习改正句子解析是不及物动词它的主语应该是事物或结果原句应改写为是形容词不能充当谓语它应该与动词搭配构成