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1、读后续写练习写作指导讲义读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Number 7, Jobie Nymble, takes the lead, cried the announcer. Just one more hurdle （跨栏）and Cheers erupted. “Jobie Nymble from Riverside Middle School takes first place in the girls 100-meter hurdles!”The crowd went wild as Jobies teammates

2、 screamed and yelled.Determined to go all the way to County Championships, Jobie patted her worn neon-green track spikes （钉鞋）.They were bursting at the seams （接缝处）,but she didn/t care. They were her lucky shoes and she loved them. Next Saturday, were taking home the gold/7 Jobie whispered to her spi

3、kes, excitedly retying them.Dont forget, guys, said one of her teammates cheerfully. My birthday party is next Friday at Hidden Park.”“Beep. Party recorded in calendar/7 joked Jobie in her best robot voice.Jobie brimmed with excitement all week long. At track practice, she leaped over those hurdles

4、faster than shed ever leaped before.The day of Marisols party, Jobie put on her favorite outfit: her fancy blue shorts, an old track T-shirt from her dad, and her lucky spikes.The party was in full swing when Jobie arrived at Hidden Park. Music and the smell of grilled food filled the air. Two of Jo

5、bies teammates rushed toward her, breathless and barefoot, asking her to try the slide. Jobie/s eyes darted toward the party area. Suddenly, she saw it. The BIGGEST inflatable （充气的） slide she had ever seen was on the far side of the park. Smiling kids zoomed down the slide at unspeakable speeds.With

6、out thinking twice, Jobie took off her spikes and rushed toward the slide. Its ladder stretched to the sky like Jacks magical beanstalk, but she reached the top in no time. She sat down, slipped to the edge, and closed her eyes as she let go. Jobie couldnt get enough, conquering the slide over and o

7、ver again. When it was finally time to go home, she reluctantly made her way back to the track where shed left her shoes.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As she eyed the area from a distance, panic set in.The next day, without her lucky spikes, Jobie was amongthe best track teams gathering for t

8、he championships.试题分析.人物（角色）：Jobie Nymble: from Riverside Middle School, a girl athlete in the girls 100-meter hurdles, determined to go all the way to County ChampionshipsMarisol: one of her teammates, birthday partyTwo of Jobies teammates: rushed toward her, breathless and barefoot, asking her to

9、try the slide.主题：人与自我Jobie赢得了女子100米跨栏的冠军，并准备在下周六举 行的县锦标赛上拿冠军。正好有朋友在下周五有生日聚会。就 是在这次聚会上，Jobie被巨大的好玩的充气滑滑梯所吸引， 等到快回家的时候，发现她心爱的幸运钉鞋不见了。.续写情节安排：V 第一段： As she eyed the area from a distance, panic set in.（与开头句衔接）发现那双心爱的I ucky spi kes不见了， Jobie有怎样的心理和情绪表现与队友一起找遍了整个公园（游乐场）也不见其踪影（与下文开头句衔接）只能灰溜溜地回家去。但为了第 二天的比赛

10、，Jobie翻箱倒柜找出了以前只在校运会上穿过一 次的钉鞋第 二 段： The next day, without her lucky spikes, Jobie wasamong the best track teams gathering for the championships.(与开头句衔接)虽然没了给她带来幸运的钉鞋，但取 胜的信念一直在脑中打转比赛正式开始，Jobie使出浑身解数，最终获得了 County Champion看着脚上的钉鞋，她悟出了一个道理：幸运不是鞋子带 来的，而是努力下水作文As she eyed the area from a distance, panic

11、set in. Where are my spikes? Are they stolen? Jobie shouted as she ran wildly towards where her lucky spikes once lay. When she reached the place, she felt as if her heart had stopped beating, out of breath. “They are GONE! she screamed madly. Does anyone see my lucky spikes? No response! Soon over

12、came her teammates. They helped her search the whole Hidden Park, but in vain. Jobie had to accept the fact that she might go without her lucky spikes and went back home with great sorrow. However, the gold always inspired her to go forward. Eventually, she got herself another pair which was once pu

13、t on in the school sports meet. (113 words)The next day, without her lucky spikes, Jobie was among the best track teams gathering for the championships. A pity without the luck spikes, she had the firm belief that she should be the champion. Warming herself up, Jobie waited for her turn. “Next comes

14、 the girls/ 100-meter hurdles! Jobie looked down at her new spikes. Set, Go!” She dashed forward like an arrow. Her teammates cheered her up, sparing no efforts. All went well. She cleared hurdles after hurdles. Heres our champion, Number 1, Jobie Nymble, from Riverside Middle School.Congratulations

15、! cried the announcer excitedly. Unable to contain herself, Jobie thanked all the people present, rushed over to her teammates and hugged them tightly. Looking at the new spikes, she had a better understanding of sports: Great efforts, lucky herself. (113 words)参考范文As she eyed the area from a distan

16、ce, panic set in. Jobie picked up the pace, her heart pounding louder the closer she got. When she reached the place she had left them, her heart almost stopped. They re gone!,z she screamed. My lucky spikes are gone. Fear crept over her as she anxiously circled the whole area and scanned for any sp

17、lash of neon-green. Jobies teammates helped her search the park, trying to find any trace of the spikes but in vain. No lucky spikes. By nightfall, the poor girl had no choice but to drag her bare feet home. So long, gold/7 Jobie groaned. (95 words)The next day, without her lucky spikes, Jobie was a

18、mong the best track teams gathering for the championships. In her brand-new shoes, she accepted the reality that this was not a game of chance. Teammates patted her back as she slowly walked down to the starting line, which also instilled great power in her. Starting buzzer going, Jobie was off in a

19、 flash. She set focus on the finishing line, leaving behind any self-doubt or worry until she finally breasted the tape earlier than anyone else. In the cheers and shouts, Jobie squatted to untie her spikes as usual, only to realize that there was no such thing as lucky spikes and that success was never a stroke of luck. (102 words)