新高考专用读后续写06人与动物类(故事构造三大套路)高考英语技巧与训练.docx
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1、读后续写06:人与动物类Parti:经典例文(小狗救人)01Part2:人与动物故事构造套路03套路一:可爱型动物故事情节03套路二:凶猛型动物故事情节05套路三、主题升华句06Part3:人与动物场景素材积累07Part4: 灵7舌应用10例1:人与麻雀10Part5:高考真题再现12真题1:小狗找到新的玩伴【2020年1月浙江卷1 12真题2:拍照北极熊遇险【2020年7月浙江卷】 15从历年高考的读后续写话题中可以看出人和动物的话题备受命题者青睐。试题文本一般从两个角 度展开,一个就是人和动物和谐相处,?要么是人类帮助动物解决问题,要么是动物帮助人类解决问题; 另外一个就是,人类与动物产
2、生冲突,尤其遇到勇猛高大的动物,遇到危险,首先沉着冷静与动物周旋, 后来向别人求助,之后成功脱险的故事。例如:人狼大战:骑车旅途遭遇狼wolf追赶,脱险经历(2017 年6月浙江高考);人熊大战:北极探险者给北极熊拍照,遭遇polar bear追赶的惊险经历(2020年 6?月浙江高考);人狗和谐:父母决定给Poppy买一条小狗作伴,帮助Poppy摆脱孤独和想念的故事(2020 年1月浙江高考);人猫和谐:作者的丈夫从讨厌猫到向猫求助,赶走土拨鼠的故事(2021年3月临 沂市一模)。Parti:经典例文(小狗救人)Just as many families do at a point, Cat
3、herine chose to add a new family member by adopting a pet. Shortly after her daughter Kate s birth, Catherine decided she wanted a close bond with a dog for Kate. Thus, Catherine called the dog shelter close by to inquire about adoption. After hearing about the available animals, she chose a Doberma
4、n Pinscher. Once they signed adoption papers, they named the dog Khan.aside, spun round and galloped towards the helicopter. The moment we were into the helicopter, we collapsed, gasping with relief. As it took off, we could see the bear was hungrily eating the?bread?we had made. What a hungry bear!
5、 After we returned home?safe?and sound, we realized that something should be done for bears.(07)Paragraph 1 :?Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck. ?A familiar figure leaped out, ?rushed?towards me and waded into the water. Thank goodness, it was?Joe?who came to my
6、rescue. However, the water was running so rapidly that he had to go back. ?Frightened?and a little angry, I could hardly help shedding tears. How I wished that my husband were like a superman who could save me from disaster. But, after a while, it turned out that Joe returned with one end of a rope
7、in his hand and the other end tied to the truck. He?struggled?to throw the rope to me and?shouted, “Catch! Open the door!”Paragraph 2:?I screamed that I couldn,t make it. ?At that moment, the sound of the raging water outside grew louder, and the car rocked more violently. Worse still, the water cam
8、e up to Joe s waist and he almost lost his footing in the water. After several vain attempts, Joe?realized?that there was no chance to make it. He put every ounce of strength into getting close to me and said soothingly, Dont panic, honey! Im here. With Joe,s help, I burst the door open, and Joe imm
9、ediately tied the rope around my waist. The moment we pulled ourselves out of the water, the car was washed away. What a narrow escape! I hugged Joe tightly, happiness and love welling up inside me.Part4:灵活应用 例1:人与麻雀 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Its getting hot. Its time to put on lighter cl
10、othes and open up the windows. I can,t wait to do so. Yesterday, an unforeseen visit to the kitchen happened during the brief time we were out. Two daring sparrows (麻雀)had risked landing on our territory to enjoy the freshness in our sink and some other breadcrumbs (面包屑)on our kitchen counter.Actual
11、ly, sparrows are everywhere. The tiny, gray -and brown birds are found on every continent except Antarctica, flying or jumping around cities, picking up leftover food on side-walks, and sometimes chasing with native bird species. These small creatures have adapted to living alongside humans- similar
12、 to pet dogs.When you come across such sudden callers, you are likely to sense it as an unwanted visitor into your comfort zone, or you might receive it as a lovely angel of life. I chose the second option, with 10/16no hesitation while my husband preferred driving them away. After all, Ive never co
13、me to stop to feel the relationship with sparrows.I recalled when I was a little girl living in the city, I lived in an apartment with a flat roof viewed from our kitchen window. Every day my mom and I would go out to feed the sparrows. She taught me how to call them with a clicking sound she made w
14、ith her tongue. I have loved sparrows ever since. So every day in my spare time, I can,t stop observing and celebrating their dance from our window. I stuffed them with the leftovers on our tablecloth after every meal. And I have provided them with every kind of bases and stands of our house.Undoubt
15、edly, they feel at ease in our backyard. And that has led them to gather up courage and slide into our kitchen, bedroom or even reading room. Perhaps because they have the feeling that we don, t consider them trouble makers, but friendly neighbors. But I am slightly worried about their droppings (粪便
16、). 注意:1 .续写词数应为150左右;.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。One day, they left some droppings in my husbands reading room.About two weeks later, I heard my husband calling Oh, my God!”【答案】One day, they left some droppings in my husband s reading room. They happened to dirty his important work reports on the desk. He wa
17、s so angry that he asked me to close the windows. I immediately did a thorough cleaning and promised that the doors and windows of the reading room will be closed tightly, and the sparrows cant break in again. My husband kept silent, and at last he calmed down. I know he is a caring person, who alwa
18、ys loves animals.About two weeks later, I heard my husband calling “Oh, my God !” Thinking something similar happened again, I ran over to have a look. He was looking out of the window and said excitedly, Look! What a surprise! There are three eggs in the sparrow,s nest! They re going to have babies
19、 of their own!” He was happy, like a child and unconsciously opened the closed window. After that, there are always breadcrumbs on the window platform of the reading room.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知,在作者生活之处有许多麻雀,作者欢迎它们的到来,在后 院为它们准备了食物和落脚处,作者将它们当成了友好的邻居,只是有点担心它们的粪便。【详解】续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:有一天,它们在我丈夫的书
20、房里留下了一些粪便,所以应该写粪 便落在书桌上给丈夫带来的尴尬和懊恼,要详细描述丈夫的动作和心理,与作者的反应及应对措施等。第二段 开头是:大约两周后,我听到我丈夫说:“哦,天哪!”本段应该写丈夫的感叹、作者的好奇,并描述事情的原 委,以及丈夫对于麻雀态度的转变等等。要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右,按要求完成写作任务。【点睛】本文描写详略得当,使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如:do a thorough cleaning, break in, run over, have a look 等高级词汇;结果状语从句,如 He was so angry that he asked me to cl
21、ose the windows;宾 语从句,如 I immediately did a thorough cleaning and promised that the doors and windows of the reading room will be closed tightly, and the sparrows cant break in again; 定语从句,如 I know he is a caring person, who always loves animals 等高级句式。Part5:高考真题再现真题1:小狗找到新的玩伴【2020年1月浙江卷】阅读下面短文,根据所给情
22、节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。T m going to miss you so much, Poppy, “ said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions (情 绪)get the better of him.His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. The
23、y had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. I gu
24、ess this is it. ” he said. T 11 see you back home in a month, okay?” His parents nodded, and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy s mother turned to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home. ”The house seemed quiet as a tomb without t
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