江苏省苏州市相城区2020-2022年三年中考一模英语试题分类汇编：书面表达.docx

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1、江苏省苏州市相城区2020-2022年三年中考一模英语试题分类汇编书面表达江苏省苏州市相城区2022年中考一模英语试题第八部分 书面表达（共1题；满分25分）61.教育部（the Ministry of Education）要求加强中小学劳动教育，这一举措引发了人们 的热议。请你根据下面表格中的内容，写一篇新闻报道。学生的观点一部分学生：劳动教育有助于身体健康，全面发展。另一部分学生：劳动教育占用学习时间，影响成绩。你的观点你的做法和感受注意：1 .词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2 .包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；3 .文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。参考词汇

2、：劳动 labourThe Ministry of Education has issued a requirement that students should be given labour education. The students in our school had a heated debate.江苏省苏州市相城区2021年中考一模英语试题第八部分书面表达（共1题；满分20分）3月22日是世界水日。水在我们的生活中扮演着重要角色。我国及世界很多地区存在缺水内容包括以内容包括以现象。请以“Saving water”为题写一篇英语短文。 下要点：1 .水资源的重要性；2 .水资源现状

3、及原因；3 .节约用水的举措。注意：1 .词数90左右;2 .包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺;3 .文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。参考词汇:短缺be short of江苏省苏州市相城区2020年中考一模英语试题书面表达56.近期某英文报纸就“Snowplow Parents （扫雪机式父母）”这一话题展开讨论。”扫雪 机式父母”的特征是不惜一切代价为孩子扫除他们生活中遇到的一切障碍,解决一切困难，以 使他们可以轻松拥有成功的人生。请从下表的两种观点中选择一种观点，并结合此观点阐述 自己的看法，用英文写一篇短文投稿。观点理解不理解父母出于对孩子的爱才这么做父母控制一切，孩子

4、没有自由自己的看法要求：1、100词左右2、短文应包括所选观点中的要点,可适当发挥。3、短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。参考答案江苏省苏州市相城区2022年中考一模英语试题61.例文The Ministry of Education has issued a requirement that studens should be given labour education. The students in our school had a heated debate. They have different opinions.Some students think that labo

5、uring is good for health, helping them to be well developed. On the other hand, some studens hold the view that this kind of education will take up their time for study. And it will have a bad effect on their grades.In my view, its not good enough to just get good grades at school. Students arc give

6、n little chance of being labouring nowadays. Doing housework is a good way for students. I often do housework at home. Sharing housework can make our parents happy. It also helps me relax from the hard study.Lets take action to do housework.【详解】.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。在写作时应承接短文开头。根据题干要求，写一篇新闻 报道。1 .写作指导：本文应

7、以第三人称为主；时态采用一般现在时为主。注意按照表格内容提示的 三个方面进行写作。可采用分段的形式，使文章结构清晰。最后保证语言通顺，行文连贯; 注意语法正确，无标点和大小写错误。江苏省苏州市相城区2021年中考一模英语试题Saving waterAs we all know water plays an important part in peoples daily lives. More and more water is needed in the modern society. So we should try to save it.Now many places are short

8、of water. For example, a big drought hit the Southwest of China at the beginning of this year, especially Yunnan province, milions of people has not got enough water for common life. A lot of rivers and lakes are polluted. Whats worse, many people are wasting water seriously.In order to protect wate

9、r, lets do something to fight against all kinds of pollution and waste of waler.江苏省苏州市相城区2020年中考一模英语试题【答案】例文I really cant understand the snowplow parents. For these parents, they control everything. They clean all the obstacles in childrens lives. In this case, they think children have a successful

10、life easily. However, children have no freedom to do anything. It is the worst thing in their life. In my opinion, parents shouldnt do all the things for children. Because they also need the experiences in their lives. And these experiences play an important role in a successful life. In this way, t

11、hey know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they arc in trouble. Meanwhile, they sometimes can gain friendship and more love in their lives.【解析】【分析】【详解】I.题干分析：本文是篇话题作文，要求对表格中的两种观点选择其进行阐述。 动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点展开写作。根据所给材料内容，可知本文主要用第 三人称和一般现在时注意时态，人称，要将题目列举的要点列举出来，注

12、意可以适当运用 连词及短语，力求让是语言多样化。2 .例文点评：本例文采取“一段式”写法，首先列明了针对“扫雪机式父母出现了什么问题， 逐步引出作者的观点，表示不赞同“扫雪机式父母”的做法，然后就这一观点展开阐述，并最 终表达作者自己的观点。例文中主要运用第三人称和一般现在时，涵盖了题干中给出的所有 要点。文章结构紧凑，行文流畅连贯。多处使用In this case, However, In my opinion, Because, And, In this way, Meanwhile等短语上下衔接句子,为文章增色不少。3 .高分亮点: 短语：In this case, However, I

13、n myopinion, Because, And, In (his way, Meanwhile, by (hemselves句型：In this way, they know that they need to try (heir best to solve (he problems by themselves when they are in trouble.宾语从句及时间状语从句Because they also need the experiences in their lives.原因状语从句【点睛】英语作文写作六步骤：1 .审题：文体，时态，人称都要审。如本文为一篇话题作文，文体

14、要求对表中两种不同 观 点选择一种，并就此观点展开阐述。时态要以一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。2 .抓住要点：要点是否齐全，是否有适当补充。如本文写作前对给出的两种观点要选择， 整理组合并串联，务必不能丢失要点。可适当自由发挥，对文章补充说明。3 .美化全文：通过变化句式，增加状语、定语、连词和从句等，使句子含义和文章内容充 实饱满。如本文中运用各种从句和部分短语，使得文章语言多样化。4 .连句成文，合理使用连词和表示承接的短语串联全文。如本文中使用However, In my opinion, Because,等短语使文章语句衔接自然，符合英语表达习惯。5 .再审全文：避免出现拼写、用词、时态等错误。6 .誉写作文：注意书写工整，卷面整洁。