2022届高考英语题型读后续写好词好句积累进阶拔高二讲义.docx

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1、读后续写一拔高体验一、情绪描写（此部分的讲解老师可以通过让学生对例句进行翻译，去感知普通写法和高级写法所带来的 的感觉上的冲击，另外，在好词好句部分，最后强制要求学生背诵，才容易出效果）主人公情绪状态的描写是使得续写形象生动的关键所在。在续写过程中常见的情绪有：生气，害怕，悲伤、 羞愧，后悔，开心，感动，好奇，希望等（一）“感到悲伤”的细节描述【好词好句积累】好词：a strong sense of loss强烈的失落感fall into despair陷入绝望be down in spirits情绪低落好句:1. Upon hearing the bad news, she felt sei

2、zed by a burst of sadness and couldnt help crying bitterly.（被股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣）A ripple of sadness welled up inside him 涌起阵阵悲伤sobbed bitterly, tasting the salt from the tears that streamed down my face.我痛苦地抽泣着，品尝着从我脸上流下的咸咸的泪水。4.1 felt so sad that I found myself crying unconsciously, unable to hold back

3、my tears.我感至U彳艮伤心，我发 现自己不知不觉地哭了，无法抑制我的眼泪。（二）“感到害怕”的细节描述【好词好句积累】好词：with a pounding heart and cold 心砰砰直跳，浑身冰凉chew ones lip咬嘴唇toss and turn all night.彻夜难眠好句：1. At the sight ofI was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating（被7采采土也恐惧感所控制，手心出汗）At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I froz

4、e with terror, too scared to move an inch.（吓呆了，不敢动弹）（三）“感到生气”的细节描述【好词好句积累】好词：stamp ones foot in anger气得直跺脚run out of the room in a burst of anger 怒气冲冲be red with rage面红耳赤boil with rage怒火中烧be filled with fury （愤怒）怒气冲冲好句:The reply of the man again fueled the foolish officers anger（火上浇油、更加愤怒）.She threw

5、 the invitation on the table with annoyance, murmuring.My teacher 9s eyes were shining with anger.His friend, whose patience had worn thin（耐心被消磨光了）, phoned to complain.（四）“感到羞愧”的细节描述【好词好句积累】好词：feel the blood rush to her face 满脸涨红drop one飞eyes垂下眼好句：My throat was dry and my face was burning up.My face

6、 flushed radish red and I stared at my feet, hoping no one would notice how embarrassed I was. 我的脸涨得像萝卜一样红，盯着脚，希望没有人会注意到我有多尴尬。She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face biwning.（脸上滚烫）I froze. I could feel the heat rising into my cheeks, did I really just do that?我僵住了。我能感觉到热流到我的脸颊，我真的这么做了吗？（五）“

7、感到焦虑”的细节描述She was like an ant on hot bricks before her driving test.在她驾驶考试时，她像热锅上的蚂蚁。【好词好句积累】好词：go blank一片空白nervousness take hold of ones whole body.紧张占据 了 整个身体with palms sweating, heartbeat racing and blood rushing in her ears 手心出汗，心跳加速，耳朵的血在奔腾。好句：In her nervousness she stumbled over her words.她紧张得

8、说不出话来。She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.她全身发抖，感觉如坐针毡。I have butterflies in my stomach every time I speak in public.我每次在公众场合讲话都会感到紧张。She was like an ant on hot bricks before her driving test.在她驾驶考试时，她像热锅上的蚂蚁。（六）“感到开心”的细节描述例如：When his mother kissed him on the cheek, the baby

9、 was happy/delighted/full of joy.When his mother kissed him on the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were on top of the world.When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his face beamed and his bright smile lit up the room.（眉开眼笑;笑容照亮房间）【好词好句积累】好词：a mixture of excitement and happiness 既兴奋又开心in cheerf

10、ul spirits心情愉快keep up ones spirits振作精未申dance/jump for joy高兴地跳起来tears of happiness flowing down流下幸福的泪水eyes light up.精神振奋、高兴好句：When, her eyes danced with joy and sweetness.（欢欣雀跃）When, her eyes twinkled with excitement.（激动得两眼放光）When, her heart was thumping with excitement.（激动得心砰砰跳）When , a wide excitem

11、ent took hold of her.（兴奋不能自己）Bathed in sunshine, we all cheered and jumped with joy.（七）“其他情绪”的细节描述【震惊】shocked/startled/stunned/surprised 震惊Mother fainted away, with the shock of the bad news.坏消息带来的震惊让妈妈昏过去了。Hearing the bad news, Mary froze with shock, as if rooted on the ground.（僵住了，像扎根在地上一样）The car

12、 was gone in seconds, leaving Alice shaking her head in disbelief.难以置信士也摇头I sensed a flash of surprise in his eyes.我感觉到他眼里的一丝惊讶。【孤单】He felt a strong sense of loss after his divorce.I ended up feeling completely lost and abandoned.Ever since I lost him, I have been faced with a deep sense of loss（失落感

13、）一a feeling which is difficult for me to describe in words（难以用语言描述）.【好奇】Burning with curiosity, she ran across the field after it.【希望】At this dark and hopeless moment, a wonderful idea came to him.在这个黑暗而绝望的时刻，他想到了一个绝妙的主意。It filled his mind with a great, bright light.他的脑子里充满了明亮的光。二、背景描写要求学生背诵【早上】（部分描

14、写也可用于其它时间）（此部分的讲解老师带学生翻译佳句，生词讲解，语法结构剖析，帮助孩子记忆，最后强制,才容易出效果）The sweetness of the sun fills my lungs.甜美的阳光，沁人心月见。1. Snow blanketed every rooftop and weighed on the branches of old trees.雪覆盖了每一个屋顶，压在老树枝上。2. Kissed by the rain and shining, the wet ground is cold under foot. The birds busy themselves arou

15、nd me, not caring that Tm there.潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。鸟儿们在我周围忙碌着，不关心我在 那儿。3. A dense earthly sweet smell rose from the ground, enveloping everything within its soft embrace.月殳浓郁的泥 土般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。4. When I drew the curtains back, the sunlight flooded in.阳光倾斜而入.5. It was Saturday morning, a

16、nd all the summer world was bright and fresh, and filled with life. There was a song in every heart. There was cheer in every face and a spring in every step. The air was filled with the pleasant smell of flowers.【黄昏】（部分描写也可用于其它时间）As the sky gradually darkened and the light dimmed,（天空越来越黑，光线越来越暗）he

17、quickened his steps.1. The sun hid himself behind the mountains, making it hard to see anything in the thick darkness.2. The rain drummed on the window, bidding farewell to the last beam of sunlight.雨敲打在窗户上好像敲起了小鼓，向最后一缕阳光告别.3. The leaves crunched beneath my feet as I strolled down the street.我在街上漫步时

18、，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。4. The sunset was like orange paint on a blue canvas.日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料.5. The sun dropped through and laid on his head and shoulders.太阳下山，温和的光线落在肩头。6. The clear blue sky was dotted with fluttering larks.天气晴朗，碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩起舞。【晚上】（部分描写也可用于其它时间）From the distance, he saw some dim light （昏暗 的灯光）

19、in the village.从远处，他看到村子里有些昏暗的灯光。1. The dark, rainy evening, the wind, the thundering clouds held me entirely in their power.漆黑的雨夜，狂风大作，雷声隆隆，我完全被它们的力量控制住了。2. The sky is overcast, darkened with gloomy clouds, and the whole world seemed to be enveloped in a huge gray quilt.乌云密布、黑云压顶，整个世界仿佛都被一块巨大的灰色棉被笼

20、罩。【即学即练】As the sky gradually darkened and the light dimmed ,（天空越来越黑,光线越来越H音）he quickened his steps.1. The gentle breeze（微口I） stroked his head , as if comforting all his tiredness.3.1 closed my eyes in the speeding car. Winding rivers, lofty mountains, deep valleys （蜿蜒的小溪，高耸的山，深 深的 ill 谷）and sunny be

21、aches held me entirely in their fascination.过关检测2020年浙江卷One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world” the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but

22、also dangerous. Polar bears like all wild animals should be photographed from a safe distance. When Im face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner, a youn

23、g male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified, Elli and I tried al

24、l the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws（爪子）.I radioed the camp manager for

25、 help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter（相遇）,I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper

26、spray. The spray burns the bears eyes, but doesnt hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar（吼叫）,the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.注意：L所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Para 1:A few minutes later, the bear he

27、aded back to our camp. Para 2:At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.【解析】本文主要讲述了人与熊对抗，之后成功脱险的故事。主人公的感情线变化为：兴奋渴望一惊恐一放松。 剧情线以主人公如何与北极熊周旋并成功摆脱它展开。由第一段的段首提示句可知：几分钟后，熊又回到营地。接下来可通过场景渲染，描写当时令人颤栗 惊恐的画面，例如 “Roars and screams pierced the silence with needle-like shrillness.n这不仅合理地描写了熊 的反应，也描绘出让人战栗的场景。由第二

28、段的段首提示句可知：此时，直升机到了。如果想要进行续写两段的合理衔接，第一段的结尾 可描写成 “After thoroughly scrutinizing the area, the bear trotted forward a few steps.” 这样可以营造出危急的 场景。“我们”看到直升机的到来，感到绝处逢生的喜悦，可以以人物心理描写作为第二段的开头，重点描 写喜极而泣的状态，例如 “My heart leaped with joy as I knew we were likely to be saved.”最后，结尾部分需要迅速收束，并说明成功逃脱的结局。关于画线词：EHi作为女主

29、人公，是续写内容中应该出现的画线词，noises, pictures, fence, spray与熊有 关，也在两段续写内容中出现。最终，两人回归安全状态，因此画线词safe也可自然而然地出现在续写内 容中。由此划分画线词，可迅速锁定需使用的画线词范围，辅助构思。【范文】A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Roars and screams pierced the silence with needle-like shrillness. The noises turned Elli and I pale with hor

30、ror. I feared that the giant would destroy our whole fence. He roared repeatedly, shattering what was left of the silence. Elli seized this opportunity to take some pictures of the bear. The animaPs noises echoed all around us. We betrayed our feelings by huddling together, shivering with fear. Afte

31、r thoroughly scrutinizing the area, he trotted forward a few steps.At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. My heart leaped with joy as I knew we were likely to be saved. Elli used pepper spray again to buy us enough time. But this time the bear became more alert. He regarded us with the merciless necessity of hunger, so we throw all the food we have. He then turned away and started devouring. As we were climbing the rope ladder, Elli prayed like thousand times to show thankfulness of being safe and sound.