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1、精选江苏省2023高考英语第三 局部写作层级训练第二步通览 全局写作分类突破第二讲如何 写记叙文的主体讲解20 those exams.It is natural for parents to feel that way, but I believe the answer lies in balance. Sometimes, Western school children work long hours after school to make money, and so they become too tired to listen in class or have no time for

2、 homework. But Chinese students spend so much time on their studies that all else becomes less important until they want that new MP4 player.So, find a good and healthy balance! If you have a part-time job, you 11 be happy, and your parents will also be happy because you re spending your hard-earned

3、 money and not theirs!写作内容.概括短文的内容要点，该局部的字数大约30 词左右；1 .就“如何利用课余时间这个主题发表你的 看法，至少包含以下的内容要点，该局部的字数 大约120词左右：a.以自身为例，简述你平时是怎样打发课余时间的；b.你如何看待自己利用课余时间的方式；C.你的父母对你利用课余时间的态度及你的看 法。写作要求.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；1 .作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言标准，语篇连贯，词数适当。参考范文There is a great difference between the way high sch

4、ool students spend their free time, and the writer hopes to find a balance between studying and having fun.What worries the writer is just what we students are confused about: can our a spare time actually mean something “spare” ? Take me for example. Every day I have just 1 hour in the afternoon to

5、 do some sports. At weekends, I usually have lots of homework assigned by teachers to finish. Even if I want to do something else, I will often be stopped by my parents. Like many other parents, they just want me to study all the time until I am admitted to a famous university. As a result, I can t

6、control my spare time“ on my own! Looking around at my friends, I find I m not alone in such a situation. What a boring life for us students!I just don t agree with my parents about their way of controlling my spare time. Yes, for us students, studying is the most important thing to do. But we can t

7、 be separated from the outside world. Studying all the time, I m afraid what we are learning can t match the real world. I don t want to depress my parents, of course; but I do think that we need to find a way to settle this problem.能力提升练3请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。（2023 江苏姜堰中学高三模拟）Tchaikovsky, a

8、 famous Russian composer of the late-Romantic period, was born on 7 May 1840 in the mountains of western Russia. He was the first Russian composer whose music made a lasting impression internationally. Tchaikovsky, s training set him on a path to combine what he had learned with the native musical p

9、ractices to which he had been exposed from childhood. He first helped write a song in 1844, at an age when most children are still in kindergarten. At home, his mother sang folk songs, which helped develop his interest in music. Mozart was Tchaikovskys favourite composer and he influenced Tchaikovsk

10、ys life and work. For 11 years, beginning in 1866, Tchaikovsky taught at the Moscow School of Music. During his time there, he wrote music for the piano, along with ballets, operas and symphonies. He was famous for writing the music for the ballet Swan Lake in 1876. Because of his musical talent, Tc

11、haikovsky toured many countries as a conductor, including a voyage to the USA in 1891. He continued to write for the ballet until his death in Saint Petersburg in 1893.写作内容.用约30个单词概括故事的主要内容；1 .用约120个单词谈谈自己读完故事后的想法。 写作要求.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；1 .作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言标准，语篇连贯，词数适当。 参考范文Tchaikov

12、sky s talent in music is just the first step to success. His mother, idol, hard work also play an important part in the process of his success. He is even committed to music until death.After reading through Tchaikovsky, s life story, we can learn upwards of two lessons as follows. First, one should

13、 set a big goal and spare no effort in achieving it. Tchaikovskys life-long goal was to catch up with his idol Mozart, who influenced his life and work. Second, one should commit one s whole being to work. Tchaikovsky wrote music for ten years and finally created his masterpiece, Swan Lake.When it c

14、omes to commitment to work, I shall count it as a personal favour. I was once poor in math, but I swore to get it improved in my senior year, so I devoted myself to math in classroom, library and anywhere possible and made it eventually.第二讲如何写记叙文的主体李仕才一、题型特点读写任务型作文的主体局部一般要求写120词 左右，通常包括两局部：一是衔接过渡语；二

15、是 论证自己的观点或描述类似的事例。1 .衔接过渡语：写完摘要后要用一句过渡性的语 句引出自己的观点(赞成或反对)或类似的事例。2 .论证观点或描述事例：对文中的观点进行比照 论证，并提出自己的观点；描述事例时要紧扣文 章主题，所描述的事例能够与文章观点契合。二、写作技巧 出现在读写任务中的记叙文要求考生描述一件 与原阅读材料有关联的事件，并说出自己从事件 中得到的教训或对所描述现象发表自己的看法。1 .写作步骤衔接过渡描述事件发表看法2 .常用过渡语句(l)This reminds me of the similar experience.(2) This story brings me b

16、ack to an event many years ago.(3) I had a similar experience.【典例示范】请阅读下面的短文，并按照要求 用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。(2023 盐城高三二模)I was on my way to the Taiyetos Mountains. The sun was setting when my car broke down near a remote and poor village. Cursing my misfortune , I was wondering where I was going to spend the

17、 night when I realized that the villagers who had gathered around me were arguing as to who should have the honor of receiving me as a guest in their house. Finally, I accepted the offer of an old woman who lived alone in a little house. While she was getting me settled into a tiny but clean room, t

18、he head of the village was tying up his horse to my car to pull it to a small town some 20 kilometres away where there was a garage. I had noticed three hens running free in my hostess s courtyard and that night one of them ended up in a dish on my table.Some villagers brought me goat s cheese and h

19、oney. We drank together and talked merrily till far into the night.When the time came for me to say goodbye to my friends in the village, I wanted to reward the old woman for the trouble I had caused her.写作内容.用约30个单词写出上文概要；1 .用约120个词谈谈你的感受；可以是自己亲身 的经历，也可以用他人的事例。写作要求.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；1 .作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校

20、名称；.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言标准，语篇连贯，词数适当。 参考范文The story I read tells us that when the writer s car broke down near a faraway village, he got help from all the villagers and felt grateful for how he had been treated.I was moved by the story. Nothing is more impressive and unforgettable than being offered he

21、lp or helping others in trouble. Since we are living under the same roof, there s no doubt that we need to care about other people and support each other, especially when time is hard.In these two years, there have been many disasters striking different parts of our country, causing thousands of peo

22、ple suffering pains of losing homes. I remembered when Yiliang Earthquake took place, many of us donated money for people there. A beggar without legs, who was just able to earn his bread by begging for money, donated all his savings to help Yiliang people. Hearing the story and watching all about t

23、his on TV, we were moved to tears. Why not hold out your helping hand to those who are suffering?To give is to receive. What you give is the best gift for whoever are waiting for the help.能力提升练1请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。（2023 江苏无锡高三质量检测）As a man was passing the elephants, he suddenly stopped, co

24、nfused by the fact that these huge creatures were being held by only a small rope tied to their front legs. No chains, and no cages either. It was obvious that the elephants could, at any time, break away from their bonds but for some reason, they did not.He saw a trainer nearby and asked why these

25、animals just stood there and made no attempt to get away. Well, the trainer said, “when they are very young and much smaller we use the rope of the same size to tie them and, at that age, it s enough to hold them. As they grow up, they are conditioned to believe they cannot break away.The man was am

26、azed. These animals can break away from their bonds at any time, but because they believe they can t, they are stuck right where they are. 写作内容.以约30词概括上文的主要内容。1 .以约120词谈谈你的看法，内容包括： (1)这个故事有什么寓意？ (2)你如何解决这样的问题？ 写作要求.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；1 .作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言标准，语篇连贯，词数适当。 参考范文Some adult el

27、ephants, which could have easily broken away from the chains which confine them, chose to remain where they were. This is largely due to their conditioned thinking pattern, which were formed from their early age.The passage casts spotlight on the moral that once the fixed thinking pattern is deeply

28、rooted in one s mind, it becomes extremely challenging for one to make any positive changes to the circumstances. Ridiculous as it may sound, it is not uncommon for us to see some vivid examples around. For instance, some of us invariably blame our failure in exams on our poor genes inherited from o

29、ur parents, thus never adopting any effective approaches to polish up this subject.To eliminate this vicious thinking pattern, I should determinedly resort to my teachers or parents for help. I will talk my problems through and seek their suggestions. Once finding out the underlying reasons for my f

30、ixed thinking pattern, I will think out of the box and see things from a different angle.能力提升练2 请阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词 左右的英语短文。（2023 江苏扬州中学高三检测）Middle and high school days are both fun and busy. Students spend their days in class, listening to the interesting and sometimes boring words of the teache

31、r. They spend the short breaks running, playing, and shouting happily before going back to the classroom again. But how should students spend their free time outside school?In Western countries, it is common for students to have a part-time job after school and at weekends. Students can earn their o

32、wn money and learn more about the “real world ” They enjoy the extra independence and money, and parents enjoy the quiet house. However, it seems that, in China, parents worry so much about their children studies that they would prefer to see their children spending most of their free time studying and preparing for all